【英语】初三英语书面表达专项训练及答案含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·河北中考模拟）为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上进行了一项安全问题调查。

以下是100名学生伤亡的原因，请根据表格内容用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈你的看法。

要求：80词左右。

题目自拟，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

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【答案】A Report on Children’s I njury and Death
Recently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.
Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.
So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out.
After all, life is not a small matter.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上对100名学生的伤亡原
因进行了一项安全问题调查。

要求根据表格中的内容提示用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈自己的看法。

本文时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

2．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。

”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。

作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。

请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；
2.遵守交通规则；
3.公共场合不大声喧哗；
4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）
参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守
【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.
Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。

而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all,
we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语
的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容
经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构
以便得到较高的分数。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
76. 连云港开展了“真阅读”工程，为了让阅读进校园，为了营造一种“多读书，读好书”的良
好氛围，你班将举行一次主题班会，要求以“A good book that influenced me a lot ” 为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并谈谈自己的感悟。

注意：1. 字数：100个词左右，讲稿的开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。

2. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。

A good book that influenced me a lot
Boys and girls,
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【答案】Boys and girls,
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way
or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.
From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable an d meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“A good book that influenced me a lot ” 为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句
式的应用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，
we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，
注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我读过的一本好书的名字，接下来介绍我读
这本书的时间，所读的内容以及阅读这本书的原因，最后鼓励大家多读好书。

此处by doing
sth, come across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达。

现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗．请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的．作为学生，你又该怎么办？
要求：1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；
4、词数：80词左右．短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（医生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科学家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦，农民，医生，警察和科学家怎样做贡献的。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应
用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了为了实现中国梦，中国人正在努力做贡献，接下来介绍农民、医生、警察和科学家如何做贡献的，最后表示我们作为学生应该做的事。

此处make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．（·北京中考模拟）现在，某英文报纸正在开展以＂遇见美＂为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历，主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美，经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。

提示词语：visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory
提示问题：
1. When and where did it happen?
2. What did you experience?
3. Why was it beautiful?
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【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.
From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.
【解析】
试题分析：本文以＂遇见美＂为主题的短文，谈谈生活中遇见美的一次经历，所以句子的主语是第一人称单数，句子的谓语动词用一般过去时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，用自己熟悉的短语和句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give sb.sth给某人某物；用了that引导的定语从句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII.用了as和as if引导的从句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.增加了文章的亮点。

6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（B）图示作文：根据图画内容，展开想象，写一篇小短文。

小安是一名初三的学生，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。

请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。

要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

（2）词数在80〜100词之间。

（3）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Sport makes a difference
Xiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.
He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.
Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于图画作文，表达运动让小安的生活发生了巨大的变化。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容词原级+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

7．（·河北中考模拟）请以“Never Give Up”为题,写一篇短文,简要描述图中的三个画面,并谈谈自己的想法｡
要求:
1. 文中不得涉及真实的人名,校名和地名｡
2. 可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺｡
3. 词数:80个词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数｡
提示词:the long - distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practice
Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day.
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【答案】Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do long-distance running. After school they run on the playground together. They compete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.
Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the P.E. exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，题目中有三张图片，展示了九年级的学生们在为体育测试做准备，我们应根据图片，以Never give up为题，写一篇文章，简要描述三个画面，并谈一谈自己的想法。

写作之前，应仔细观察图片，看清楚图片展示的内容，三张图片展示了三个体育项目，跑步、铅球和跳远，写作时，应使用形象、直观的语言，详细介绍图片中的内容，然后组织语言，串联成文。

文章可以分两段，第一段介绍图片内容，第二段谈论自己的想法。

题目中有词汇的提示，写作时应注意使用。

通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，根据表达的需要确定应使用的时态。

注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文的描述符合图片中的内容，叙述非常详细，并对图片展开了合理的想象，使文章的内容更加丰富。

第二段中发表了自己的感想，升华了文章的主题。

其次短文中句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范，语言得体。

短文以一般现在时为主，正确使用了谓语动词的形式。

句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，提升了文章档次和水平，整篇文章表达流畅。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They compete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before.等等。

8．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达
我们在生活中总是面对着各种各样的压力，这会严重妨碍我们的学习和生活。

某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。

假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。

1.与他人交流；
2.参加体育运动；
3.参加娱乐活动；
4.其它减压方式。

参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的
注意：
1.词数80-120左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.As for me.when I feel stressed,I usually communicate with my friends,parents or teachers.Sometimes I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so on.I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,too.What's more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live.We will be healthy and learn better .
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己面对着各种各样的压力是如何做的。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

9．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步入高中的青少年。

在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。

请你以
“_______ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。

要点提示:
1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；
2. 它使你快乐的理由。

要求:
1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

_______ makes me happy
【答案】One possible version:
Reading makes me happy
During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy.
Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore.
Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“_______ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了读书让我感到快乐，接下来介绍读书的好处，最后指出我会一生保持读书的习惯。

此处like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。

你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。

（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。

他们希望你们实现自己的理想。

他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
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How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间
+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·杭州市清河中学中考模拟）小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。

要求不少于80个字。

Hi, Xiao Ming!
【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!
In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school.
On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.
Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。

而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that
you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve yo ur dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

12．（·北京中考模拟）题目①
假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。

学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。

你想成为志愿者。

请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。

提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes
提示问题：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?
2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li Hiua
【答案】Dear SiraMadam.
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it's easy for me to get along well with them.
I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.
I'll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li lHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。

【详解】
1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。

2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工作；
第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。

文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。

3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。

如：用不定式would like to be
a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、It's easy for me to get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，短语丰富，句型多样。

13．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假,
你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。

请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：
1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文Dear peter ,
Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.
Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as。