2018版高考英语二轮专题限时集训：27短文改错（Ⅱ）含解析

2018版高考英语二轮专题限时集训：27短文改错（Ⅱ）含解
析
专题限时集训(二十七)短文改错(Ⅱ)
(对应学生用书第142页)
A
(2017·湖北省八校联考)It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom，the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates，two of which arrived later.I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye”to my father，but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.
【答案】
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I
walk
walked into my new high school. After
registered
registering in the classroom，the
a volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five
roommates，two of which
whom arrived later.I got to know my new
roommate
roommates immediately. Although I
was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father，but
yet/﹨
but he had to leave
to
for home. I suddenly
realized I had grown up and that I had to look after
me
myself and live independently.Not until then
∧
did
I know my senior high school life had
real
really begun.
第一处：walk→walked。

考查动词时态。

根据“It was on a warm autumn day”可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。

第二处：registered→registering。

考查动名词。

after是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故用动名词形式。

第三处：the→a。

考查冠词。

volunteer是可数名词，且第一次在文中出现，故用不定冠词修饰。

第四处：which→whom。

考查定语从句。

分析句子结构可知，应用whom引导非限定性定语从句，在从句中作介词of的宾语，修饰先行词five roommates。

第五处：roommate→roommates。

考查名词复数。

由上文的“I had five roommates”可知，室友不
止一个，故用复数形式。

第六处：删除but或将but改为yet。

考查连词。

在英语中，although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中，故删除but。

也可将but改为yet。

补充：此处也可将Although删掉，但是语意上没有修改but好。

第七处：leave后的to改为for。

考查介词。

leave for意为“前往”，为固定词组，符合语境。

第八处：me→myself。

考查代词。

与句子主语I呼应，应用反身代词，意为“照顾好自己”。

第九处：then 后加did。

考查倒装句。

not until置于句首时，常采用部分倒装，即把助动词放在主语之前。

由时间状语then和下文的时态可知，此处用一般过去时，故用did。

第十处：real→really。

考查副词。

修饰动词应用副词，故将real 改为really。

B【导学号：52384089】
(2017·洛阳市第一次统一考试)My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be，however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened.I could only tell him a truth.Instead of scold，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father!
【答案】
My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be，﹨
however he never fails to show her
his care
and consideration.Once I broke a
neighbor
neighbor's window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away
immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has
had happened.I
could only tell him
a
the truth.Instead of
scold
scolding，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to
apologize ∧
to our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health
and
but he also teaches me what
how to be a good citizen.How
luckily
lucky I am to have such a good father!
第一处：删除however。

考查连词。

在as引导的让步状语从句中，表语放句首时，从句倒装，。