超实用高考英语专题复习：读后续写——人与动物类(故事构造“三大套路”)

4、常见动物：马
1. At the pen, Gina saw the horse. It was of medium size. It had a fine, soft blackcoat and one white foot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑纹)that ran down the center of its face. Gina fell in love with it at first sight.“Wow! What a horse.” （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现） that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）当我们安全地坐上直升机飞向空中时，我惊讶地发现熊终于拆掉助与获救
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口） and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照 顾狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）Brian把庞大的尸体从树桩里拉出来后，清洗了伤 口，然后仔细地给他治疗。Becky跪下来，和 Brian一起照料狼。
2、动作
① wag the tail 摇尾巴 ② smell/sniff 嗅 ③ bark/yap/yelp 狗吠 ④ lick 舔 ⑤ put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来 ⑥ shake the whole body 抖动全身 ⑦ bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角 ⑧ rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里 ⑨ keep its fore legs doubled up 保持前腿弯曲
3、高兴
1. They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）他们 很高兴看到波比恢复了往常的样子，每天带着小狗散步，甚至向它介绍她最喜欢的玩具。
2. Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）他笑得那么灿烂，大声叫着他的父母，他们拉着他，给了他一个长长的拥抱。
3. Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷） 她的父母看着他们在周围玩耍，欣慰地笑了——波比又回到了她以前快乐的 样子！
1、害怕
4. A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校） 突然一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我。
5. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死）. （2017年6月高考浙江卷） 想到狼那血淋淋的嘴， Mac几乎被吓死。
2. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧 吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷） 看到北极熊的逼近，我吓得呆住了，吓得寸步难行
3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲 吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷） 我的妻子Elli抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，用力咽了口唾沫
在围栏边，吉娜看到了马。它是中等大小的。它有一件精致柔软的黑色外套和一只白色的脚。有 一个宽阔的白色斑块，沿着它的脸的中心。吉娜第一眼就爱上了它。“哇哦！好一匹马。”
2. The horse seemed to feel her kindness, sniffing her（闻了闻她）. （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
马似乎感受到了她的好意，嗅着她的。
4、常见动物：狗
1.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往 常那么快乐）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） 他们给了狗一些她最喜欢的花生酱点心。他们甚至让她坐在沙发上，但这个老姑娘就是 不像往常那样兴高采烈
6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考） 我被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制，手心冒汗。
2、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）看到它，Elli 疯狂地挥动双手，尖叫着：“救命啊！”
套路二： 凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁， 所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
1、害怕
1. Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷） 我和Elli吓坏了，尝试了所有我们知道的熊防御动作。
2. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷） 她把鼻子贴在上面。她的尾巴摇得很慢，当她闻到气味时，摇得更快了。
3、动作
① rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部 ② hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住 ③ fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天 ④ run around me 围着我跑 ⑤ keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你 ⑥ raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身 ⑦ leap to its feet 跳起来
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山东模拟）我走近那只无辜的小狗，把它握在手里，擦了擦小狗 直到他变 干。
高考英语读后续写
人与动物类 （故事构造“三大套路”）
教学课件
套路一： 可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、 忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是 狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
1、外貌
① a pair of large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛 ② two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛 ③ beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛 ④ a nose like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子 ⑤ long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的 腿 ⑥ fur is as white as snow 皮毛像雪一样洁白 ⑦ a long little tail 一条长长的小尾巴
4、常见动物：狗
3. Poppy approached with caution, trying not to scare the puppy. Sure enough, it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box（把它的头伸出盒子） to peek at its new home and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） 波比小心翼翼地走近，尽量不吓到小狗。果不其然，过了一会儿，毛球才从盒子里抬起头来，窥视它的新家 和新朋友。
4、常见动物：鹿
1. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns （有一对大的鹿角）appeared in front of him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying on the dry ground. （202103宁波十校）一只母鹿带着一对巨大的鹿角出现在他面前，一只小鹿 躺在干燥的地面上。 2. The poor creature, apparently in desperate need of water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tongue （很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）这个可怜的家伙显然非常需要水，用它那贝壳般粉红色的舌 头很快地把水舔干净了。 3. The mother deer lowered her head and licked my boy’s cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下 头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）. （202103宁波十校）鹿妈妈低下头，轻轻地舔了舔我孩子的脸颊，好像在 表达感谢
4. Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway, Poppy’s ears pricked up（竖起耳朵） and suddenly she was on all fours（四脚着地）. The boy was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the front door popped open and Poppy darted to his embrace, followed by the little one who licked his fingers fondly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷） 听到他的行李卸在车道上，波比竖起耳朵，突然她四肢着地。迎接这个男孩的是一声欢快的尖声狂吠。然后 前门砰的一声打开了，波比冲过来拥抱他，后面跟着那个可爱地舔着他手指的小家伙。