高考英语二轮复习 考前三个月 专题六 书面表达 分类突破(一)提纲作文

分类突破(一) 提纲作文
解题指导
提纲作文是高考试题中最为常见的书面表达命题方式之一，通常会以中文、英文、中文＋英文、文字＋表格、文字＋图片等不同的形式给出要点，并要求考生根据所列要点组织语言，将所列要点完整、清晰地表达出来。

需要注意以下几点：
1．仔细研读题目。

确定所写文章的主题、人称、时态及写作内容等。

2．分析整合要点。

对所给要点进行分析并重新整合，适当进行细节扩展。

重新整合信息是为了根据要点间的逻辑关系和相似性等将信息分为若干部分。

3．确定文章体裁。

根据题目要求及要点的特征来进一步确定文章的体裁，根据要点的逻辑关系来确定文章的整体框架和具体段落，并根据重新整合的信息来确定每个段落的具体内容。

4．斟酌具体表达。

根据要点的关键词来确定所用的具体词汇及搭配。

根据要点的内容及确立的文体特点来选择使用何种句型。

根据文体信息选择合适的句型、适时地交叉使用不同的句型。

实战演练
(2016·湖南岳阳十四中高三二模)
假设你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。

请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1．乐观的人生态度；
2．努力学习；
3．参加体育锻炼。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things.
构思要点请写出要点提纲
范文赏析欣赏并背诵满分作文
We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly，we should develop a good attitude to life.Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard time.We should be brave in face of various difficulties.Secondly，we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do these things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
作文升级依据括号内提示改写满分作文
We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly，we should develop a good attitude to life.
①
(生活中不仅有阳光，还有困难；用倒装句)②
(面对各种困难时，我们应该勇敢；用过去分词短语作状语)Secondly，③
(毫无疑问，知识就是力量；用固定句型)，so we must study hard.If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.④
(此外，而且)，in order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do these things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
答案
①Not only does life cons ist of sunshine but also hard time.
②Faced with various difficulties，we should be brave.
③there is no doubt that knowledge is power
④Furthermore/In addition/What’s more
对点训练
(2016·河北衡水中学高三猜题卷)
假定你是李华，你校下个月将举行“旧书捐赠”活动，所捐图书将送给西部贫困山区的学校。

请给你的英国朋友查理写封信，向他介绍此次活动的有关情况，要点如下：
1．活动目的；
2．活动内容；
3．活动意义。

参考词汇：旧书捐赠：Used Books Donation Campaign
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Charlie，
How is everything going with you these days?
Do you have similar campaigns in your school？If so，could you please let me know how they are conducted?
Yours，
Li Hua 参考范文
Dear Charlie，
How is everything going with you these days?
In order to fuel our efforts to save the planet and raise public awareness of environmental issues，a “Used Books Donation Campaign” will be carried out in our school next month.Any used books that we no longer need can be donated and all the collected books will be donated to schools in poor mountainous areas of West China.
I’m sure this campaign will have a great effect on everyone involved.On one hand，we can play a part in recycling resources for the protection of the environment.On the other hand，children in poor areas will benefit from these used books because it’s difficult for them to have access to such extra­curricular books.
Do you have similar campaigns in your school？If so，could you please let me know how they are conducted?
Yours，
Li Hua。