【课件】读后续写“三部曲”课件-2023-2024学年高中英语作文复习写作专项

4、烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frowned. 看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。
5、伤心
当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻） Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.
3.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模） Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.
4、感激
1.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。 Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
2.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。 Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book, my face turned red.
3.Glancing at the chocolates with hesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the boy timidly raised his head before his mother.
二： 冲突化解 （解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）
1、道歉
1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） “I’m so sorry.”he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.
2、原谅
1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。 （动作链）（2021 广一模） His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.
4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模） It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
2、后悔
1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。 I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help.
3、内疚
3、开心
1. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构） “I wanted to surprise you!” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming.
2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（doing非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a surge of happiness.
亲情类场景描写（七大关系）
一、母子关系
1. Do you mean that eve flower has its own beauty asked my mother thoughtfully.I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of thei life."The same to you," she added, her voice soft""Not everyone can be a rose,and it is also an honor to be a dandelion." Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly.Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something. “你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。 我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费 就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。 “你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一 种荣誉。” 我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不 安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。
5、回忆
1. 在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。 （无灵主语句；doing非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） At that moment, unexpectedly, the memory of the sight of Billy crying on the ground occurred to Carter, hovering in his mind and reminding him something . 2.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn’t help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car. 3. “我只希望我知道如何帮助她，”阿曼达自言自语，想起李惊恐的眼睛（2020.11温州一模） “I just wish I knew how to help her,” Amanda said to herself, thinking of Li’s frightened eyes（想到 Li害怕的双眼）.
1.But for Henry’s help, I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly. 如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了（2021年南通市二模）。
2. I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主 格结构)我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼中涌起。（2021年沈阳市一模）
6、犯错
1.To cover his terrible action（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.
2.Fearing punishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.
3. Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends, bowing(bow) to them several times. （定语从句，非谓语）之后，轮到我做一个小型讲座，在会上我向妈妈和朋友表达了真诚的 感谢，多次向他们鞠躬
英语读后续写
亲情类（故事构造“三部曲”）
一： 冲突构造（误会、犯错等）
只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原 因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、 误会等。
1、生气
1. 我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才 对。”（本可以，虚拟语气） My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. “You could have picked it up. ” she said. “That would have been the kind thing to do.”
"But you will be a beautiful narrator." Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home.It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me.What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.
三： 亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）
1. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest提醒他要诚实(非谓语). （2021 广一模）
2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） He put down his hand, glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.
3.To her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness （为她 忽略我的孤独道歉）as well as my difficulty with English communication.（2021年沈阳市一模）的微笑 渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）
2.他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。 He folded his fist angrily, but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
3.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张） Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word .
2. I noddedindness and friendship began to blossom（善良和友谊之花开放） in both of our hearts.（2021年南通市二模）
3.This experience transformed my attitude towards Henry and our relationship has also been harmonious（我们的关系变得和谐） since then.（2021年南通市二模）