读后续写资料库——说

读后续写——说
一：内功——动词的替换
{fi:shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, p red ic t, repeat, guess, imply, murmur
:refuse, agree, admit, complain, urge, apologize, sigh, beg, explain, promise, comfort, warn
:ask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply
一般的说
say fl saying
1.By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find
a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
2.Then the man would laugh and say, “But to me, you’ll always be my little girl.”
3.Then he gave him two extra ribbons, saying, “we’re doing a class project on recognition, and
we’d like you to find somebody else to honor, give him a blue ribbon and an extra blue ribbon so he can acknowledge a third person to keep this acknowledgement ceremony going. Then report back and tell me what happened.”
4.With his whole body shaking, he looked up at his father, saying, “I was planning on
committing suicide tomorrow, Dad, because I didn’t think you loved me. Now I don’t need
to.”
tell
5.And we all knew where they were going to end up, because our parents always told us about
them again and again.
6.I want very much to put my arm around my father to comfort him, telling him what he always
tells me, “Don’t worry about my future, Dad; tomorrow will be a better day.”
speak fl talk
7.One day an expert was speaking to a group of business students.
8.Suddenly, totally unexpectedly, he turned directly to me and engaged in a spirited,
knowledgeable and focused discussion on a specific local event that I had been talking to him about a few seconds before.
add
9.The father added, “my days are really busy an d when I came home I don’t pay a lot of
attention to you.
10.After a slight pause, she added, “Thank you.”
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11.Lily repeated the list.
12.He sounded like this, “There will be a pandemic(3 ) that kills millions, a devastating
energy crisis, a horrible worldwide depression and a nuclear explosion set off in anger.”
正式的说
13.The e-mail informed us how to look after ourselves in summer including a demanding warning
not to eat cold food.
14.One afternoon, my mother was informed to attend a parent teacher conference.
15.He informed us that at most auditions all dancers under 5 feet 6 inches are automatically
eliminated or simply overlooked.
16.To her joy, the old man, who was very familiar with the geographical characteristics, informed
her of the way to the lake.
17.My mother stated in her speech that life is learning to deal with Plan B.
18.A knock at the front door announced a visitor.
19.“Do you mind my asking you a question? What’s your relationship with Scout?”“It’s my
grandmother.” Eliza exclaimed.
20.I actually voiced my doubt to my father one day while we were driving down the New Jersey
Highway through those awful chemical factories , and flaming towers.
21.Now, I do take these chances, with steps every day, voicing my opinions in class discussions.
22.“It's OK. Mr Radcliffe, "he insisted.
23.All of his families were there and welcomed him. They cheered. And the last king lived
happily ever after.
24.He could no longer comfort her.
25.“Yes,” she agreed.
26.Phil comforted him, "Philip, please don’t worry about your mother.
27.“Of course,” Phil promised.
28.The owner of the farm came out to greet us
29.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
30.Phil cast a kind look at the boy, placed a comforting hand on his shoulder, and assured him,
“Don’t worry.
消极的说
31.“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
32.“ Don't be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “ and keep to the track so that you don't get
lost!” “ OK!” my dad cried back.
33.And she was comforted and cried out, “I love you, Daddy, with all my heart.”
34.Sometimes I shouldn’t have shouted at you for not getting good grades in school.
35."No!" the class shouted.
36.He shouted. “ Nothing is done. It will take time!”
37.Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from
hurting the little creature.
38.So frightened was he that he hardly said a whole sentence, but stammered, “the wolf……,
please let me in.”
39.she screamed. “It’s just what I wanted!”
40.Lily signed. “Almost,”
41.he begged his sister to keep it secret.
42.The villagers and relations advised the mother to drop it, but she refused, saying, "Since God
knows why he has given me such a child, I will support it.''
43.Once a friend of mine complained to me that she was feeling a bit unwell because she had some
cold water.
44.“Sorry, Mr Radcliffe, ” he sobbed, “My dad’s just left home.
45.His brothers asked what he had sown, he told them, “Rice.”
46."Mom,where is my birthday gift?"I asked
47.Then he looked up at the class and asked, "What is the point of this example?"
48."I'm sorry, dear, but you remind me of my best friend," the old woman replied.
49.The son replied, “It is a crow.”
50.“I’ll collect firewood and come back with you.” They replied, “ If you start working now,
we’ll get back too late.”
建议
51.Once the boy seemed more settled, Phil proposed, “Perhaps you should call your mum and tell
her where you are, so that she doesn't worry.”
52.Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and
nothing seemed better than that.
53.The next week another expert will suggest that you should stay away from tomatoes and eat
more pork belly.
二：外功——修饰的替换
1.介词的修饰
in:in great surprise/excitement/ shock/ sorrow/in a low voice/in a soft voice
with:with delight/ excitement/ embarrassment/pride/ respect/ alarm/ satisfaction/ caution/ patience/ certainty
54.“Just a minute,” answered a weak, elderly voice.
55.Within seconds he had her chatting like they were old friends.
56.At this time some expression of irritation C 3was felt in the son’s tone when he said to
his father with a rebuff CR ¼‰3. “It’s a crow, a crow.”
57.This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again
and again.
58.She said with authority.
59.Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.
60.And we all knew where they were going to end up, because our parents always told us about
them again and again.
61.On an instinct I told him, “ Sir, you please have your tea. I am not in a hurry.”
2.副词的修饰
firmly/ excitedly/ seriously/ jokingly/ sincerely/regretfully/ pityingly
62.His father would patiently answer the same question 23 times
63.I argued immediately that smoking, drinking and driving fast in the heavy traffic were bad for
her and that cold food and water were fine.
64.She read out loudly, “A Pet, Moon Sand and Aquadoodle.”
65.As the first hint of the sun was creasing the horizon, she suddenly said, “I’m tired. Let’s go
now.”。