【英语备考】译林版中考英语书面表达题型的解题技巧及训练(答案解析)精品资料

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟）书面表达
同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。

假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。

内容提示：
注意：
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数90左右。

开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
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I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a
better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I'd like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。

而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛，请你根据表格中的提示内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
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【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．
【解析】
试题分析：本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。

在题目中给出了一张表格，需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。

分析表格可以看到，这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面，第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的；第二个是过多的压力对我们有害；最后发表自己的看法，如何来应对压力。

因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写，这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。

在每一段中加上具体的内容，使段落更加充实。

最后还要补充两点自己的观点。

全文需要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。

注意多使用一些好的句式、短语，增强文章的表现力。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的范文。

作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来，并加上了自己的看法。

作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分，首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。

这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides，还用到了一些复合句，如条件状语从句等；接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处，段首先用however来进行转折，然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然很短，但是意思很完整；最后作者发表了自己的观点，用了短语in my opinion，还用到了提建议时经常用的had better 和should。

整篇作文意思连贯，语言流畅，层次分明。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
保护环境是每一个人的责任。

假设下面是你阅读了有关环保的书之后的变化，请根据表格内所给内容写一篇短文。

要求：1.短文必须包含所给信息，并适当发挥.要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.表格中最后一栏用2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右.文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总同数。

It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot.
【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.
In the past, I went to sch ool in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket. However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.
I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我阅读了关于环保的书后的很大变化。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了保护环境是我们的职责，我阅读了关于环保的书后有很大变化，接下来介绍我过去和现在在环保方面有什么样的变化，最后作为中学生我们应如何保护环境。

此处in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。

请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。

要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。

2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.
Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。

因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。

通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。

写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。

还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。

在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。

作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。

整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。

文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。

语法规范、准确。

短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是第一中学的一名学生，5月21日是学校开放日，学校邀请家长来校听课参观。

你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动。

请你以“The School Open Day”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文报道。

内容提示如下：
1．家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能；
2．王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐；
3．张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生地呈现到课堂上，讲述了八十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗；
4．家长们都感到……并希望……
（参考词汇：抗日战争the Anti-Japanese War）
注意事项：
1．文章须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第4个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右．倡议书的开头已在答题卡上给出。

不计入总词数；
4．文章内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to your school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．
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【答案】The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to our school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．Parents listened to many lessons．They spoke very highly of teachers' excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the Anti-Japanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers' hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．
【解析】这篇作文以学校开放日为题，邀请家长来校听课参观，你作为志愿者参与了学校开放日活动。

根据材料写一篇短文。

内容包括：1. 你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。

2. 家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。

3. 王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。

4. 张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。

5. 家长们都感到……并希望……最后要点的内容须用2到3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行合理的整理与安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。

当然要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文连贯自然合理。

6．（·北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。

当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。

假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。

提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear
提示问题：·How many ways do you know to communicate with others?
How do you usually communicate with your friends?
Which is the best way and why?
【答案】There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.
I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118）
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如communicate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most welcome and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。

而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。

7．（·河北中考模拟）请以“Never Give Up”为题,写一篇短文,简要描述图中的三个画面,并谈谈自己的想法｡
要求:
1. 文中不得涉及真实的人名,校名和地名｡
2. 可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺｡
3. 词数:80个词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数｡
提示词:the long - distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practice
Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day.
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【答案】Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do long-distance running. After school they run on the playground together. They compete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.
Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the P.E. exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，题目中有三张图片，展示了九年级的学生们在为体育测试做准备，我们应根据图片，以Never give up为题，写一篇文章，简要描述三个画面，并谈一谈自己的想法。

写作之前，应仔细观察图片，看清楚图片展示的内容，三张图片展示了三个体育项目，跑步、铅球和跳远，写作时，应使用形象、直观的语言，详细介绍图片中的内容，然后组织语言，串联成文。

文章可以分两段，第一段介绍图片内容，第二段谈论自己的想法。

题目中有词汇的提示，写作时应注意使用。

通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，根据表达的需要确定应使用的时态。

注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文的描述符合图片中的内容，叙述非常详细，并对图片展开了合理的想象，使文章的内容更加丰富。

第二段中发表了自己的感想，升华了文章的主题。

其次短文中句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范，语言得体。

短文以一般
现在时为主，正确使用了谓语动词的形式。

句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，提升了文章档次和水平，整篇文章表达流畅。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They compete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before.等等。

8．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。

西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。

在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。

提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an en vironmental project….
要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。

Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we
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【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be b etter
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect ot hers. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。

题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。

需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。

写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。

审题可知，短文应以
一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。

写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。

为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。

同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。

文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。

层次清晰，结构合理。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。

句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。

短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。

9．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。

6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。

要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。

3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________
Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【答案】Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.
Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can
exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and h ealthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【解析】
【详解】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。

因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。

时态为一般现在时态。

要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

要求语句通顺、意思连贯。

文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

10．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语：forgive原谅
提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?
Why did you decide to forgive him/her?
How did you feel after forgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between ...
【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.
I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提
纲。

短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。

字数应在80词左右。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。

两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。

我准时到达那里。

我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。

我打电话问他发生了什么事。

他把
音乐会的一切都忘了。

那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。

我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。

迈克也意识到了他的错误。

他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。

他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。

最后我原谅了他。

原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。

【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

11．（·广东中考模拟）假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。

你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。

请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours。