大学英语专业英语写作课件
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大学英语写作课讲义(一)
大学英语写作课讲义（一）中国地质大学（武汉）外语学院许峰Step One Writing Correct Sentences1.The Simple Sentence (简单句)A simple sentence contains but one subject and one predicate. (一个简单句仅有一个主语和一个谓语。
)e.g. John loves Mary.The subject may consist of two or more nouns, and the predicate may consist of two or more verbs. The former is called a compound subject; the latter is called a compound predicate, Thus, a simple sentence may have many nouns or many verbs; or it may have many words or phrases modifying the subject or predicate; but it has only one subject and one predicate.(主语可包含两个或更多的名词，谓语可包含两个或多个动词，分别称为复合主语和复合谓语。
这样，一个简单名子中可有多个名词或动词，也可有修饰语，但它仅有一个主语和一个谓语。
) e.g.John and Henry love Mary.John and Henry love Mary and her sister.John and Henry love Mary and her sister and give them money.2.The Compound Sentence (并列复合句)A Compound sentence is made up of two or more independent clauses connected by a coordinating conjunction, such as and , or ,nor ,but , for, yet. Each clause in a compound sentence must have a subject and a verb, is of equal importance, and can stand alone. (并列复合句是由两个或两个以上的独立分句组成，由并列连接词如and, or ,nor ,but , for ,yet等连接。
四级英语写作应用文写作(图表-漫画)公开课获奖课件百校联赛一等奖课件
2) 描述详细数据变化
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increase/decrease by...
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increase from ... to...
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increase steadily from...
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There was a marked increase
in ...
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There has been a rapid
increase in ...
hand, ...On the other hand, ...
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The rapid growth of ... owes much to...
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lie in
• (2) In recent years, the time students using computers has increased greatly. (2023.6 CET-4)
• 第二段分析引起变化旳原因,主题句一般表达引起这种变化旳 原因有几点.例如:
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(1) There are many factors that have stimulated this huge
place in ...
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From the above table it can be seen that...
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As it is shown in the table,...
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According to the graph, ...
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It is clear from the table that ...
increased 4%.
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总之,挑选有说服力旳数据,主要是首尾两端数字或其增减值.
3. 强调数据间旳关系,突出变化
• 发觉数据旳变化规律,引用了经典数据,还须进一 步强调突出这种变化,使论证更有力.以 "Student Use of Computer"为例,有学生写到:But in 2023, students spent nearly 20 hours per week on the computer. This number was ten times that of 1990 and five times that of 1995. 像这么用倍数或百分 比更能阐明问题,给人留下深刻印象.
英语四级作文写作技巧 精品 PPT课件
2. good的替换词: positive, favorable, rosy (美好 的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding
3. bad的替换词: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的) 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 代替
21. have的替换词: enjoy, possess
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24个经典替换词
22. communication的替换词: interaction
23. be against, disagree with sth 的替换词： frown on sth
24. for example 的替换词： to name only a few, as an example
➢ 如果再提升一步，我们还学过一个常用的词组“play an important role in---”。
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句型多样
➢ 简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句 子结构如：插入语，倒装句，强调句，非谓语动词， 疑问句等。
➢ 若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和 句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的 背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。
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24个经典替换词
4. many的替换词: an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many… if not most.
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….
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3. bad的替换词: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的) 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 代替
21. have的替换词: enjoy, possess
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24个经典替换词
22. communication的替换词: interaction
23. be against, disagree with sth 的替换词： frown on sth
24. for example 的替换词： to name only a few, as an example
➢ 如果再提升一步，我们还学过一个常用的词组“play an important role in---”。
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句型多样
➢ 简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句 子结构如：插入语，倒装句，强调句，非谓语动词， 疑问句等。
➢ 若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和 句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的 背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。
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24个经典替换词
4. many的替换词: an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many… if not most.
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….
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大学英语写作课件1 chapter 1
1. Some Requirements on This Course
• 1) Attend every writing lesson; • 2) Devote your efforts to meeting the requirements of this course; • 3) Be active in class (Volunteers are always welcome & will be given more); • 4) Finish assignments in time; • 5) Prepare two exercise books, one for in-class exercises; the other for afterclass exercises;
具体的学习内容
第一章 文稿格式和标点符号 (Manuscript Form and Punctuation) 第二章 用词(Using Proper Words) 第三章 造句 (Making Correct and Effective Sentences) 第四章 段落(Developing Paragraphs) 第五章 摘要(Summarizing) 第六章 完整的作文(Composing Essays) 第七章 应用文(Writing for Practical Purposes) 第八章 学术论文写作(Preparing Research Papers)
• 5) Your teacher will not correct your compositions word by word, but judge them as a whole.
• 6) You can know how to write good articles not through your teacher‟s correcting the grammar mistakes in your exercises, but through your daily practice. • 7) Writing cannot be simplified to a set of rules or guideline, and people can never learn to write once and for all, because works change according to the people, purposes, and places involved.
(本科)新编大学英语写作课件(全)
other small issues will be talked of in Chapter 1 and 2.
Handwrite
• See Rule 1,2,3,9,11,12, and 30. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following handwriting.
• 2. King George walked and talked an hour after his head was cut off.
Contract and number
• See Rule 13,14,15 and 16. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following sentences.
Eats, Shoots, and Leaves A panda walks into a bar and orders lunch….
Supplementary Reading
• In order to have a better knowledge of the basic rules for writing , please read the passages after class. supplementary Reading for basic rules.doc mainly adapted from An Intermediate Course in Writing, Li Mei, Higher Education Press, 2006
• 2.Different Views On Jane Eyre
• 3. Interpretations of Robert Frost’s Fire and Ice
Handwrite
• See Rule 1,2,3,9,11,12, and 30. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following handwriting.
• 2. King George walked and talked an hour after his head was cut off.
Contract and number
• See Rule 13,14,15 and 16. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following sentences.
Eats, Shoots, and Leaves A panda walks into a bar and orders lunch….
Supplementary Reading
• In order to have a better knowledge of the basic rules for writing , please read the passages after class. supplementary Reading for basic rules.doc mainly adapted from An Intermediate Course in Writing, Li Mei, Higher Education Press, 2006
• 2.Different Views On Jane Eyre
• 3. Interpretations of Robert Frost’s Fire and Ice
大学英语四级写作完整ppt课件
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如何结尾？——你的看法和打算
• 我的看法和打算 (结论)
基本结构： Your thought + The meaning of your choice 例：我认为应该举办英语口试 + 这么做的意义何在
In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.
• 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 • 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，内容丰富，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本
上无语言错误。
• 另外，字数不足，也酌情扣分，如累计字数为110－119扣1分，100－ 109扣2分，90—99扣3分，70－79扣5分，50－59扣7分，少于49扣9分。 累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。
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具体评分标准如下：
• 0分 —— 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法 表达。
• 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误， 且多为严重错误。
大学英语专业英语写作PPT课件
composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate
tomorrow’s money today than saving money, while in my opinion, I think it’s right. For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrow’s money to buy a new house—as he has to pay money to the bank every months—while B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank. At the end, if we have the abilile to pay the list, why we don’t use tomorrow’s money to let our life more wonderful? So, that’s what I think.
tomorrow’s money today than saving money, while in my opinion, I think it’s right. For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrow’s money to buy a new house—as he has to pay money to the bank every months—while B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank. At the end, if we have the abilile to pay the list, why we don’t use tomorrow’s money to let our life more wonderful? So, that’s what I think.
英语写作Narration课件PPT
Narration and Description
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Part I. Narration
Concept and Basic Structure Five Aspects of Narration How to Write a Narration Narration in CET6
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Ⅰ. Concept and Basic Structure
c. 合理使用文章发展的方法，将事件有逻辑地组织起来。一 般来说按开端、发展、高潮、结尾的顺序进行的。常用的 表达时间顺序的词和短语有：first, second, third, after that, next, meanwhile, while, afterward, later, whenever, finally, from then on, soon after, during等。
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3. 一篇好的记叙文必须具备以下几点要求：
a. 交代清楚与事件有关的六要素：人物、时间、地点和事情 的起因、经过、结尾（who/when/where/why/what/how）
b. 选取恰当的叙事角度。在记叙某件事情时，即可采用第一 人称，也可采用第三人称。第一人称可以使记叙显得逼真， 让读者有一种身临其境的感觉，也便于表达作者的思想感 情，这种形式常用在写自传、本人经历或记叙耳闻目睹的 事件；第三人称可不受时间、空间的限制，可以更加客观 地反映内容，常用在对重大事件的客观报导以及记叙他人 的经历或事迹。
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In this world, we should think more of other people than ourselves. By doing so, our world will be full of happiness. This, of course, in my personal view. But it is a lesson I have drawn from one of my own experience. So now, I would like to share this experience with you, my dear reader.
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Part I. Narration
Concept and Basic Structure Five Aspects of Narration How to Write a Narration Narration in CET6
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Ⅰ. Concept and Basic Structure
c. 合理使用文章发展的方法，将事件有逻辑地组织起来。一 般来说按开端、发展、高潮、结尾的顺序进行的。常用的 表达时间顺序的词和短语有：first, second, third, after that, next, meanwhile, while, afterward, later, whenever, finally, from then on, soon after, during等。
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3. 一篇好的记叙文必须具备以下几点要求：
a. 交代清楚与事件有关的六要素：人物、时间、地点和事情 的起因、经过、结尾（who/when/where/why/what/how）
b. 选取恰当的叙事角度。在记叙某件事情时，即可采用第一 人称，也可采用第三人称。第一人称可以使记叙显得逼真， 让读者有一种身临其境的感觉，也便于表达作者的思想感 情，这种形式常用在写自传、本人经历或记叙耳闻目睹的 事件；第三人称可不受时间、空间的限制，可以更加客观 地反映内容，常用在对重大事件的客观报导以及记叙他人 的经历或事迹。
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In this world, we should think more of other people than ourselves. By doing so, our world will be full of happiness. This, of course, in my personal view. But it is a lesson I have drawn from one of my own experience. So now, I would like to share this experience with you, my dear reader.
东南大学第二学期学术英语写作课件2 initiating research
Selecting a topic specific, unique and significant
Step 2
Formulating a thesis statement
Step 3
Constructing a title
Step 4
Creating an outline
answer to the research question the purpose of research specific
P12
Three Ps to describe the whole process of research?
Purpose
(Questions/ Problems)
Process
(Systematic Approach)
Product
(Answers/ Solutions)
Discussion Types of research
Research is a process of steps used to collect and analyze information to increase our understanding of a topic or issue. It consists of three steps: pose a question, collect data to answer the question, and present an answer to the question. (John W. Creswell, 2008).
Region-specific neuronal degeneration after okadaic acid administration MAP kinase-dependent neuronal degeneration after okadaic acid administration
大学英语四级写作专题讲解ppt课件
Cultivate students' critical thinking
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
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Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
01
Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
英语专业现代大学英语3课件2.ThroughtheTunnel
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➢ a series of verbs to depict the boy especially the hard training for preparing his adventure and the procedure where he swim through the tunnel, which both reveal the boy’s courage as well as determination and express his expect to ripe
• In 2008, The Times ranked her fifth on a list of "The 50 greatest British writers
since 1945".
• main novels include The Grass is Singing 1950, The Golden Notebook 1962, and five novels collectively known as Canopus in Argos.
• By the end of the story, how has Jerry changed? How does Lessing describe the boy's behavior in the beginning of the story in comparison to his behavior at the end?
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• Jerry’s mother is a rational, thoughtful and responsible woman. She is a widow and Jerry is her only child. But instead of being too protective and doting, she decides to be neither possessive nor lacking in devotion to her son. She is struggling to be a reasonable mother to a teenage boy.
大学英语四级作文精品PPT课件
教育与娱乐
recreation, relax, entertainment; cultivate, foster, enlighten, give inspiration to ,motivate, expand one’s horizon
促进学生身心展
promote the student’s physical, intellectual and emotional development (well-rounded/ versatile) mould one’s character;team spirit —2009.06(博物馆免费开放的目的）-2008.06（娱 乐使人们受益）/2007.12(学生选课不同原因 )/2007.06( 参加社团的好处)/2006.12( 看春晚)
社会热点话题
社会热点话题与普通百姓社会生活紧密相关的 话题，如：环境话题、交通话题、休闲娱乐、疾病 与健康等话题。
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12) Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12) How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010） An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident（2003, 6） It Pays to Be Honest （2003, 1） Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”（1999, 1） Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck？ （1998, 6）
最新CET-4专题讲解：
四级写作题材－常考话题
大学英语专业英语写作课件(英文版)
3. Society is trying many different ways to discourage people from smoking.
CONTROLLING IDEA: different ways of discouraging smoking
OUTLINE: 1) No smoking in public places 2) To reduce the production of cigarettes 3) To tell the people the danger of smoking
controlling idea?
• Students have different ideas about the best atmosphere for studying. Some students prefer one kind of lighting, one kind of table or desk, and one kind of chair. Other students prefer a different kind of lighting and furniture. Some students listen to music or study in groups. Other students need to be alone in a quiet room. In other words, there is not one best atmosphere for studying: There is a “best” atmosphere for each individual student.
Example:
TOPIC SENTENCE: There are several reasons why I decided to come to college. CONTROLLING IDEA: several reasons OUTLINE: 1. To get a college degree 2. To make friends of my age
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Instructions
Write a composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate
TEM 4 Composi将写作分成两个部分： Section A: Composition 测试目的：检查学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能
力。 测试要求：根据所给的题目及具体要求，写一篇
200字左右的短文。 测试时间：35分钟 测试短文类别：说明文、议论文或记叙文。 评阅标准：内容切题完整，条理清楚，意思明确，
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英语专业四级考试委员会要求阅卷人员评分时综合 考虑以下四个问题:
1. 作文是否体现主题思想; 即是要求作文文章切题,全文统一,无不相关细节内
容. 2. 组织结构是否合理; 主要体现在全文条理清楚,组织连贯和谐,善于使用
衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性. 3. 语言文字是否有重大错误; 4. 卷面布局是否整洁.
文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。
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Composition Marking Criteria
15 points: 文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，行文通顺流畅，论证严密，论据充分，基本上无
语言错误。 14-12 points: 文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，语言比较通顺、连贯、只有极少量语法错误。 11-9 points: 文章内容基本切题，尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好，有
appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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Sample 1
The Good Habit Nowadays, more and more young people think that it is better that using
少量语法错误。 8-6 points: 基本切题，思想表达不够清楚，连贯性差，语言错误多。 5-3 points: 文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅，但完全偏题
。 [注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0
分。]
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1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数
tomorrow’s money today than saving money, while in my opinion, I think it’s right. For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrow’s money to buy a new house—as he has to pay money to the bank every months—while B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank. At the end, if we have the abilile to pay the list, why we don’t use tomorrow’s money to let our life more wonderful? So, that’s what I think.
2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文）
长度计分标准:
170～150词: 扣1分
130～150词: 扣2分
110～130词: 扣3分
90～110词: 扣4分
90词以下: 至多给5分
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经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月 份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家 对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考 生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作 不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导 成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分 。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之 间的差额部分。
details. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural
conclusion or a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your composition. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and
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2006年TEM-4作文试题及样卷评分
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Topic
Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi’an, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shengyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money today is better. What do you think?
Instructions
Write a composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate
TEM 4 Composi将写作分成两个部分： Section A: Composition 测试目的：检查学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能
力。 测试要求：根据所给的题目及具体要求，写一篇
200字左右的短文。 测试时间：35分钟 测试短文类别：说明文、议论文或记叙文。 评阅标准：内容切题完整，条理清楚，意思明确，
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英语专业四级考试委员会要求阅卷人员评分时综合 考虑以下四个问题:
1. 作文是否体现主题思想; 即是要求作文文章切题,全文统一,无不相关细节内
容. 2. 组织结构是否合理; 主要体现在全文条理清楚,组织连贯和谐,善于使用
衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性. 3. 语言文字是否有重大错误; 4. 卷面布局是否整洁.
文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。
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Composition Marking Criteria
15 points: 文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，行文通顺流畅，论证严密，论据充分，基本上无
语言错误。 14-12 points: 文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，语言比较通顺、连贯、只有极少量语法错误。 11-9 points: 文章内容基本切题，尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好，有
appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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Sample 1
The Good Habit Nowadays, more and more young people think that it is better that using
少量语法错误。 8-6 points: 基本切题，思想表达不够清楚，连贯性差，语言错误多。 5-3 points: 文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅，但完全偏题
。 [注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0
分。]
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1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数
tomorrow’s money today than saving money, while in my opinion, I think it’s right. For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrow’s money to buy a new house—as he has to pay money to the bank every months—while B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank. At the end, if we have the abilile to pay the list, why we don’t use tomorrow’s money to let our life more wonderful? So, that’s what I think.
2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文）
长度计分标准:
170～150词: 扣1分
130～150词: 扣2分
110～130词: 扣3分
90～110词: 扣4分
90词以下: 至多给5分
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经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月 份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家 对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考 生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作 不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导 成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分 。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之 间的差额部分。
details. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural
conclusion or a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your composition. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and
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2006年TEM-4作文试题及样卷评分
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Topic
Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi’an, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shengyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money today is better. What do you think?