2019高考英语写作涨分手册教师讲义(答案)

第一讲审题准，要点全，抓住阅卷老师第一眼......保基本分

五、(一)、审题

1．本文为申请信，体裁属于应用文。

2．时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。

3．人称为第一人称。

(二)、拟点(用汉语列出本文的写作要点)

1．介绍家庭成员及居住、交通条件。

2 说明英语交流沟通水平。

3．安排美国朋友参加的家庭活动。

4 表达愿望。

六、1．补写下面缺少的两个要点

(1)说明英语交流沟通水平。My good command of English makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.

(2)表达愿望。In a word ,I’m eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign visitors. Hope you can take my application into consideration.

2．将下列表达错误给以改正

(1)时态错误：①句应改为：I live with my parents who are caring and friendly.

(2)语法错误：②句应改为：Our home is next to the city center, where easy shopping access and convenient transportation are available.

(3)人称错误：③句应改为：What's more, we can have a tour around the city, getting the students to know more about real life and culture in China.

第二讲表达明、错误少，不给阅卷老师添烦恼......少丢分

一、考场作文10大错误

1．主谓一致错误

误：Qianmen Street, a famous one in Beijing, have a history of 600 years.

正：Qianmen Street, a famous one in Beijing, has a history of 600 years.

误：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on.

正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on.

误：Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.

正：Dr. Smith, together with his wife, is to arrive on the evening flight.

2．时态、语态错误

误：In the morning, we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.

正：In the morning, we bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.

误：It is high time that we do something to reduce pollution.

正：It is high time that we did something to reduce pollution.

误：One day I told Mr. Wang, my maths teacher, was ill.

正：One day I was told Mr. Wang, my maths teacher, was ill.

误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.

正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.

3．句子成分残缺

误：If no self-confidence, all our dreams would merely daydreams.

正：If we had no self-confidence, all our dreams would be merely daydreams.

误：Our library in the center of the school.

正：Our library is in the center of the school.

误：There are many students don't support the project.

正：There are many students who don't support the project.

4．用词不当

误：Doing a part-time job always effects study.

正：Doing a part-time job always affects study.

误：During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.

正：During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happily. 误：As a matter of fact, we all against all forms of terrorist activities.

正：As a matter of fact, we a re all against all forms of terrorist activities.

5．句子粘连：指两个或两个以上的独立分句没有适当的标点符号或连接词连接的句子。误：The two tourists are sightseeing in a boat, they are littering into the water.

正：While they are sightseeing in a boat, the two tourists are littering into the water.

误：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.

正：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun.

误：There were so many people waiting to get a ticket the hall was increasingly crowded.

正：There were so many people waiting to get a ticket that the hall was increasingly crowded.

6．汉式英语

误：There are two boys are waiting for you.

正：There are two boys waiting for you.

误：At this school studying, I really very happy.

正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.

误：All the students had started reading English before I didn't get up.

正：All the students had started reading English before I got up.

7．平行错误：两个或两个以上的并列成分(并列单词、短语或分句)必须用等同的语法形式表达出来，否则平行结构会受到破坏。

误：Crawling down a mountain is sometimes harder than we climb up.

正：Crawling down a mountain is sometimes harder than climbing up.

误：You'll get a good score if you study hard and by using good method.

正：You'll get a good score if you study hard and use good methods.

误：Then I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer.

正：Then I put my book under my desk, opened it and started looking for the answer.

8．悬垂错误：指充当状语(往往在句首)的分词、不定式或介词短语与句子的主语不能形成逻辑上的主谓或动宾关系。

误：To win the game, many risks must be taken.

正：To win the game, you must take many risks.

误：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.

正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes

误：In order to improve English, Jenny's father bought her a lot of tapes.

正：In order to improve English, Jenny asked her father to buy her a lot of tapes.

9．赘词错误：像汉语可以说“再重复一遍”，但相对应的英语却不能说repeat again，again 就是赘词，此类错误在考生写作中也是比比皆是。

误：At last, the lost boy returned back.

正：At last, the lost boy returned.

误：On one day, he went to the cinema.

正：One day, he went to the cinema.

误：I went for fishing with my father last Sunday.

正：I went fishing with my father last Sunday.

10．单词拼写和词形变化错误

误：Our English teacher is friendly but very strick with us students.

正：Our English teacher is friendly but very strict with us students.

误：The car hitted the old man and drived away.

正：The car hit the old man and drove away.

误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.

正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.