中考英语作文汇总讲解学习
中考英语作文(建议类)写作讲解
中考英语作文(建议类)写作讲解(名师精讲写作技巧，值得下载背诵)Writing （作文）Write a passage o f at least 60 words on the topic “A s uggestion t o my dear(以“给学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符school!” 号不占格。
)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
）Questions for reference only(以下问题仅供参考)What aren’t you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?What is your suggestion?Would you give your possible solution(s)?写作思路：1.审题：此篇作文是观点类作文，“给学校的一个建议”。
第一步，首先要说明自己对学校的什么感到不满意。
与此同时说明自己对这些方面感到不满意的原因，原因至少给出2至3条。
第二步，针对提出的不满或不足之处给出自己的建议，建议至少给出2至3条。
第三步，总结全文，给出针对这些问题的解决方案。
2.一、 beginning：毫无疑问，每个学校都有自己的问题，例如。
There is no doubt that each school has his own problems, such as ...就如我所说的，我提出这些问题的原因如下：As far as I am concerned, I am not satisfied with these problems because o f thefollowing reasons.二、opinions在我看来，要做到以下几点。
As far as I am concerned, we should do as following tips.首先，。
精心整理中考英语作文范文带解析共50篇
中考英语作文范文及详解50篇1．假如你是李华，你收到了好友Tom的一封来信。
他在信中向你倾诉了在新学校没有朋友的烦恼。
请你用英语给Tom写封回信，给他提供一些交友建议，并表达美好祝愿。
2.回信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________All the best,Li 【答案】例文Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other. We should keep secrets.I hope these suggestions can help you.All the best,Li 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。
初三作文之初中英语作文讲解
初中英语作文解说【篇一：中考英语作文解说完好版】中考英语作文解说中考作文评分标准：构造 +重点 +逻辑 +语法 +亮点“看法——重点——总结”第一段：简单了然，直截了当，不超出 2 句话第二段：分 2-3 点说为何第三段：经过第二段的论证，能够得出结论。
但请注意，不可以完好照抄第一段，要有升华。
也能够提出希望和建议等2.般会给出几个重点，要求一定在文章中有所表现。
文章写的再好，只需缺乏重点就会扣分。
因此重点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，环绕中心。
3. 的，总结的逻辑词等。
递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还能够使用高级点的，如first of all(第一)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是此外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。
转折： but, yet, however 等。
真实有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连结词，由于这些词表现了这个文章的思路。
4.其余几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不可以说是错，只好说是不好，可是语法倒是硬性的。
如，单词的使用，时态等要想获得一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。
大家假想假如我们是阅卷老师。
有两篇写人漂亮的作文摆在我们眼前，都是构造清楚的三段式，重点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是 a 篇只用了 beautiful,good-looking,b篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我深信正常人都会给 b 篇高分的。
这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型即是我们获得一等文的最有力的绝招。
因此，此后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
中考作文常出错误：句子中只好出现以下谓语构造1、行为动词（表示动作和状态的词）原形单三过去式2、系动词 +表语（形容词为主）feel/taste/smell/look/sound+ 形be+ 形/名/介短 /数get/turn/become+形（名）keep+ 形3、神态动词 +行为动词原形can/may/must/need(not)+v4、助动词 +行为动词be+vingdo not/does not/did not/+vhave/has/had+过去分词be+ 过去分词（被动语态）will/would/be going to+v原在句中真实理解五种简单名构造1、主语 +不及物动词2、主语 +及物动词 +宾语3、主语 +系动词 +表语4、主语 +及物动词 +间接宾语（人） +直接宾语（物）5、主语 +及物动词 +宾语 +宾语的补足语中考作文全能首句1.对于人们有不一样的看法。
2023年中考英语作文话题Myidealschoollife(讲解与练习)
中考英语作文专题：My ideal school lifePart1 知识讲解一、关于校园环境My school is a beautiful school with some tall buildings and a lot of green trees.【先整体再具体：.......adj......with结构】二、关于校园老师、同学●规模：My school is a big school with 60 teachers and more than 700 students. There are at most 15 students in each class.●校服：All the students must wear school uniforms but we don’t need wear ties.【先整体再具体：.......adj......with结构】●性格，品质：Eg:The teachers and students are not only friendly but also helpful.For example,they often help me with my problems.（友好，乐于助人）Eg:The teachers and students are not only friendly but also humorous.For example,they often tell funny stories to make me laugh.（友好，幽默）【not only....but also....For example,举例】三、关于校园课程及课程安排●上学和放学时间：Eg:My school day is from 8:00am to 5:00pm every day.Eg:My school starts at 8:00am and ends at 5:00pm.●课程：There are four classes in the morning and five classes in the afternoon.四、关于校园日常活动中午吃午餐：have lunch at the dining hall中午和朋友闲聊/听音乐：chat and listen to music with friends.中午饭后休息：have a break/rest放学后去图书馆或参加俱乐部或做运动：At noon,students have lunch at the dining hall.After that,some students chat and listen to music with friends.Others have a rest.After school,students can choose to the library, join clubs or do sports on the playground.SPart2 作文练习练习1:介绍学校生活假如你是阳光国际中学八年级学生李华，为帮助七年级新生更好地了解学校，校学1.文中应包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展;2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范;3.词数:80词左右。
2023年北京市中考英语作文之范文与讲解
北京中考英语作文示例与讲解方法论就两句话，第一句是“主题句直切主题，一详一略横向展开”；第二句是“问什么答什么，句式字眼要直接”。
请看例题：上周六，你去图书馆遇到了不开心的事情，请简单描述一下过程。
什么叫“主题句直切主题”？Last Saturday, I had a bad time when I was in library. 这就叫“主题句直切主题”，看上去太简单了，谁不会啊？但其实，很多同学的开头都是：Last Saturday, I went to the library to borrow Harry Potter.什么叫“一详一略”？就是围绕着主题句，你应该展开两点，一点详细一些，一点简略一些。
详细的那一点，最好用上从句、非谓语等稍难一点的句式，写成一个“亮点句”；简略的那一点，要言简意赅，短促有力。
好的作文不能是“小短句大排队”，这样就太低阶了；也不能是“堆砌长句”和“乱用大词”，这样就太浮夸了。
什么叫“横向展开”？如果你想写“我去图书馆借书，找了半天没找到，废了九牛二虎之力后才终于找到。
但到了服务台，发现自己居然没带图书卡，于是乎跟图书管理员这一通儿解释啊……”如果以这样的思路写，就不是“横向展开”，而是“纵向展开”——你脑海中的事件过程是时间轴的、单线条的、碎片化的。
如果是这样的话，不要说用英文写，就是用中文写，你也写不好；不要说你来写，就是让老师来写，也是很不容易写好。
那什么是“横向展开”呢？就是——Last Saturday, I had a bad time when I was in library. First, the air-conditioner went out of order and it was really hot in the library so that searching for books or reading becomes uncomfortable. We all know how it feels in a temperature like 33℃, don’t we? Second, some librarians were so rude that they did not give a hand when you asked for help.你看，一点写的是空调，另一点写的是管理员，两者是并列的关系，是“横向”的，这多容易写。
2024年中考英语作文讲解课件
Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of (支持A的理由一).What is more, (理由二).Moreover,
(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly, (支持B的理由一)- Secondly (Besides)，
阐述缺点并论证
我的看法)Therefore,I would like to
(理由).because
总结自己的观点及理由
三、经典句式
1、It is obvious/apparent that...plays a vital part/role in...很显 然，……在……中有着/扮演着很重要的作用/角色。 2、has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects,……既有优 点也有缺点。 3、Their opinions of...vary from person to person.关于……的观 点不一。 4、From my point ofview,every coin has two sides.在我看来，任 何事物都有两面性。 5、In spite of...,the advantages greatly outweighthe disadvantages. 尽管……,好处远远超过不好之处。
(理由二) . Thirdly (Finally),
(理由三).
说明两方的观点及理由
From my point of view,I think
中考英语作文50篇带翻译
中考英语作文50篇（带翻译）1、ThePersonILikeBest我最喜欢的人Ihavemanyfriends，butIlikeLiLeibest.Heisagoodstudent.Healwayshelpsothers.Helikesreadingboo ks,soheknowsmanythings.Heisveryhelpfultous.Heoftenhelpsmewithmystudy.Wea2、Tom文。
我们每个星期日都去踢足球。
当我们聚在一起的时候，我们总是感到快乐。
3、MyDay我的一天Onweekdays,Igetupat6:30.Ihavebreakfastatseveno’clock.AndthenIgotoschool .UsuallyIgotoschoolbybikeandgettoschoolatabout7:30.Idon’tliketobelate.W ebeginourclassesat8:00.Ihavelunchatschool.Intheafternoonwehavetwoclasses.Weoftenplaygamesafterschool.Igethomeataboutsixo’clock.Wehavesupperatse veno’clock.IntheeveningIdomyhomework.SometimesIwatchTV.Igotobedataboutt eno’clock.平日(周一至周五)，我6:30起床。
我七点吃早饭。
然后我去学校。
我通常骑自行车去上学，到7:30上学。
我不喜欢迟到。
我们八点开始我们的课程。
我在学校吃午饭。
4、后我们出去散步。
我们经常谈论太阳、月亮和许多人在散步的事情。
我们回来后，我的父亲经常做一些阅读，我母亲看电视，还有我做我的家庭作业。
当我们聚在一起的时候，我感到非常高兴。
我爱我家。
我爱我的父母。
5、MyEnglishTeacher我的英语老师Mr.HuisourEnglishteacher.Hehastaughtusforthreeyears.Heisatallman.Ithinkh eisthirtyyearsold.Helikeswearingawhiteshirtandblacktrousers.Heisoneofthe mostpopularteachersinourschool.Heworksveryhard.Healwayscomestoschoolearl yandgoeshomelate.Weenjoyhislessons.Heisstrictwithus,butwelovehimverymuch.胡老师是我们的英语老师。
中考英语作文高频考点学习高分范文5篇
中考英语作文高频考点学习高分范文5篇题目：假如你是李华，请你写一封信给你的英国笔友Tom，谈谈你的学习经历。
作文一Dear Tom,I hope this letter finds you well. I’m Li Hua, your new pen pal from China. I’d like to share my learning experiences with you. I’ve been studying English for five years, and it has been both challenging and rewarding.At first, I found English grammar quite difficult. However, with the help of my teachers and lots of practice, I started to improve. I often listen to English songs and watch English movies, which makes learning more enjoyable. Now, I can communicate more confidently in English. I’ve also made some foreign friends online, which helps me practice. I believe that consistent effort and a positive attitude are key to learning any language. I look forward to hearing about your learning experiences too.Best regards,Li Hua作文二Dear Tom,How are you? I am Li Hua from China. I want to tell you about my learning journey. English has been a part of my life for many years now, and it’s been quite an adventure. Initially, I struggled with vocabulary and pronunciation. My teachers encouraged me to read English books andpractice speaking with my classmates. Gradually, I began to enjoy learning English more and more.Now, I am able to understand English news and even write essays in English. My confidence has grown a lot. I believe that perseverance and passion are essential for mastering a new language. I’m eager to know about your learning journey as well.Yours sincerely,Li Hua作文三Dear Tom,I hope you are doing great. My name is Li Hua, and I am excited to share my learning experiences with you. Studying English has been a significant part of my life.When I first started, I found it hard to keep up with the new words and grammar rules. But my parents and teachers always encouraged me. They suggested watching English cartoons and reading simple stories, which made learning fun.Today, I can confidently speak and write in English. I participate in English debates and have won a few competitions. This journey has taught me that patience and consistent effort are the keys to success. I would love to hear about your experiences too.Warm regards,Li Hua作文四Dear Tom,Greetings from China! I am Li Hua. I’m delighted to share my learning experiences with you. Learning English has been an incredible journey for me.In the beginning, I faced many challenges, especially with grammar and listening skills. My teachers were very supportive, providing extra help and resources. I also joined an English club at school, where we practiced speaking and listening through various activities.Now, my English has improved significantly. I enjoy reading English novels and watching English films without subtitles. This has greatly improved my comprehension and vocabulary. I’ve learned that practice and exposu re are crucial in mastering a language. I can’t wait to hear your story.Best wishes,Li Hua作文五Dear Tom,I hope you are well. My name is Li Hua, and I would like to share my learning experiences with you. Studying English has been a rewarding part of my education.At first, I struggled a lot with English grammar and writing. However, with the help of my dedicated teachers and continuous practice, I started to get better. I found that writing daily diaries and essays in English was very helpful.Currently, I am able to communicate effectively in English.I participate in English-speaking contests and enjoy watching English TV shows. This journey has taught me the importance of hard work and perseverance. I look forward to learning about your experiences.Sincerely,Li Hua。
中考英语作文50篇带翻译
中考英语作文50篇（带翻译）1、The Person I Like Best 我最喜欢的人I have many friends，but I like Li Lei best. He is a good student. He always helps others. He likes reading books, so he knows many things. He is very helpful to us. He often helps me with my study. We are good friends. We often play games and do sports together. We enjoy ourselves every day. Li Lei is the person I like best. 我有很多朋友, 但我最喜欢李磊。
他是个好学生。
他总是帮助别人，他喜欢读书，所以他知道很多东西。
他很乐于帮助我们。
他经常帮助我学习。
我们很好朋友们。
我们经常一起玩游戏，一起做运动。
我们每天都玩得开心。
李磊是我最喜欢的人。
2、My Good Friend 我的好朋友Tom is my good friend. He is 16 years old. He comes from America. He lives with his parents in China. He likes playing football, singing and drawing. He is good at English, but his Chinese isn’t good. He often helps me with my English, and I help him with his Chinese. We go to play football every Sunday. We always feel happy when we get together.Tom是我的好朋友。
2023年中考英语作文话题：假期总结与计划(讲解与练习)
初中英语作文专题：假期总结或计划/新学期计划Part1 知识讲解开头：The summer vacation/holiday is coming.Today I would like to share you how I will spend my summer vacation/holiday.(1) 关于学习I will spend a lot of time reading different kinds of books,such as novels,fairy tales补充读书的意义:There is no doubt that they not only open up my eyes but also enrich my knowledge.(2) 关于劳动(做家务)After finishing my summer homework,I will help my parents do a lot of housework in my free time.补充做家务的意义:Doing housework can not only improve my life skills but also make me become more confident/independent.（独立的）/help my parents(3) 关于运动写法1：As we all know,doing exercise is very important for everyone,so I will run with my father after dinner 3 times a week.写法2：I will get into a good habit of do morning exercise for at least 30 minutes after getting up every day.补充运动的意义:Doing exercise can not only make me full of energy(in class) but also keep my body healthy/build up my body.(4) 关于活动I will take an active part in some volunteer activities to help others,such as giving out gifts to children,cleaning rooms for the old.(5) 关于旅游/出行计划：I will have a trip to the Great Wall in Beijing with my parents.The Great Wall is very famous and popular with a number of visitors around the world.总结：II had a great trip to the Great Wall in Beijing with my parents.The Great Wall was so wonderful that I want to go there again.We took a lot of beautiful photos and tasted different kinds of delicious food in local restaurants结尾：计划：All in all,I believe I will have a good time and spend a meaningful summer holiday.I am looking forward to it.总结：All in all,I am so happy to have such a meaningful summer holiday.I am looking forward to the next holiday.Part2 作文练习练习1：如何度过这个暑假？暑假即将来临，很多同学都已经开始计划如何度过初中阶段的最后一个假期。
2024年中考英语真题作文含解析
2024·湖北武汉·中考真题本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。
请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面，写一篇英语作文，描绘25年后你的生活。
1.Where do you want to live and work?2.What will your family be like?3.How are you going to spend your free time?4.Something more about your future life.注意：1.文中不得透露个人真实信息；2.词数100词左右；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】例文My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I’ll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don’t like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.I’ll work hard to achieve my dream. I’m sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
中考英语作文常见类型解析及范文示例：语言学习
中考英语作文常见类型解析及范文示例：语言学习审核：张宁这是中考中的老话题，近几年常考，形式多样。
典型例句：1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。
3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful.5. So English is very important and I like English very much。
6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad（出国）one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。
9. I like English and try my best to learn it。
例文：中考学习小组更多超值精华资料等着你！（浙江丽水）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。
为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。
请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。
九年级中考英语作文讲座
2 .Population problems
Saving the earth
节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。作为一名学 生，我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活？请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文，简述自己对“低 碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。 提示 1.步行或骑自行车上学； 2.节约用水； 3.不用塑料袋； 4.节约用电； 5.充分使用纸张。
要 求：1.参照提示适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.词数80个左右（开头部分已给出，不计入总词数）。 A Speech on the Graduation Ceremony Hello, everyone! I feel so excited and so happy. ________出约20个词，内容不具体，
语句不完整；
第五档(1―3分)： 能写出少量相关句子或词组。
中等以上学生写作存在的问题
1.审题不清：要点缺失、时态错误、人称不一
2.中文的思维，直接翻译句子，句式单一。
3.词数不足或偏长和书写不规范。 4. 书写不规范、卷面不整洁。
方向指导
1.Correct the mistakes. 注意词汇、语法、句法的准确性 e the conjunctions. 3.Different sentence patterns e the sayings if necessary. 5.层次分明，有主题句
连词专项练习:用方框内所给连词选词填空 because,and, if, when
If 1._________ you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. 为别人点一盏灯，也照亮了自己。 and 2.Helping others can make us happy,____________ we also need help at times. When 3.____________we share roses, we get fun. 赠人玫瑰，手留余香。 because 4. We should give out something good_____________ it will come back to us. 我们应做善事因它终会回馈我们。
中考英语作文专题讲解.ppt
思路点拨： 本篇书面表达比较简单，同学主要应注意以下几 点： 1．因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情，所以全 文一定要注意时态统一，用过去时态。有的同学 在句中有表示过去时间的词语时，能注意运用正 确时态，而其他情况下容易混淆。 2．一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序，所以在叙 述时一定要注意事情发展的条理，注意前后语句 的连贯性。 3．要注意词的运用，如walk，home，Jinshi bikes，made，in Changzhou．
② 主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 ③
注意人称代词的宾格形式。
④ 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.
中的 an 不能写成 a。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如：
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。
.
B. 省略号 ……
…
C. 顿号 、
无
４、描写人物时，要生动具体 ① 外表特征： （tall, short, fat, thin,
怎么样，会了吗？做 几个中考题练练吧！
1．（2003年福州市）根据中文提示和英文提示 词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给 英文提示词语必须都用上。词数60－70左右。 （1）昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。（2）在路上 我们遇见了一个外国人。（3）他向我询问如何 去温泉饭店。（4）我告诉他沿路往前走，在第 三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。（5）他非常 感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk，on the road，the way to，walk along，on the left，thank for，be happy that．
laugh, cry, smile, shout 等） ⑤ 动作描写： （come, go, get, have,
中考英语作文讲解(共18张PPT)
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
中考英语作文写作技巧讲解
中考英语作文写作技巧讲解一、知识框架二、知识点梳理（一）考点分析：在中考中，写作占20分，分值所占比例大，而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力，因此非常关键。
【中考英语作文的评分标准】比较为学生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”结构，即：1.内容：7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。
5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。
2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。
0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。
2.语言：➢词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。
只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
➢拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
➢语法：同②➢标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。
3.组织结构：➢内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。
➢内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。
➢一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
➢内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
➢通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。
（二）写作中常见问题：➢内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思维。
➢议论过多，描写不足。
大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。
➢句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。
➢结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。
➢连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。
➢文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。
（三）写作技巧分析：【高分作文的必备元素】1. 书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。
2. 不出现语法，拼写，标点，大小写等错误。
3. 文章字数最好控制在80-100字之间，切记过长或者过短，8-10句即可。
中考英语作文范文怎样学习英语
中考英语作文怎样学习英语中考英语作文范文怎样学习英语在平日的学习、工作和生活里，大家或多或少都会接触过作文吧，作文是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织，通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。
怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？以下是小编精心整理的中考英语作文范文怎样学习英语，欢迎阅读，希望大家能够喜欢。
How to study English?Study English,You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isn’t easy, since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership (where English is in use at least some of the time) is, for many people, even better. If nothing like this is accessible, you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.活用英文乐趣多活用英文乐趣多你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。
这当然很不容易，因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时，彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。
亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的.俱乐部（至少有时使用英语沟通），这样对很多人而言更有益。
如果没有合适的社团可加入，也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。
中考热点英语作文范文：学习生涯_中考英语作文
中考热点英语作文范文：学习生涯范文1：MY SCHOOL LIFEWhen I was six years old, I began to go to school. The first school (which) I attended was a primary school. There were many subjects (which were taught in the school, such as Chinese, arithmetic, history, geography, drawing and so forth. Since I was (became) a student, I studied very hard. My parents were quite proud of me.我六岁的时候，就开始上学了。
我第一个上的学校是一所国小。
学校里教的课目有许多，诸如国文，算术，史地，画图等等。
既然我是一个学生，我就用功读书。
我父母深以我为荣。
After I had studied there for three years, I entered a junior high school. When I was twelve years old, I became a student of a senior high school. I still studied very hard. Except on sick leave I was never absent from class. Everybody looked upon me as a model student.我在那边读了三年后，就进入初中。
我十二岁的时候，就成为一个高中的物理学。
我依旧用功读书。
除病假外，我永不缺课。
人人都把我看作是一个模范生。
范文2：学习生涯Student LifeSpeaking of my student life, it's very interesting. Besides studying, we have many parties at our school for special festivals. Of course, we must study many subjects at school and do homework every day. I receive instructions from my teachers and discuss problems with them.Although sometimes we have many exams in our student life, it can be good for us. Everyone hates exams, but it helps us realize how much we've learned from school. Just enjoy your student life. It goes by fast.。
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中考英语作文汇总人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人物…….最佳你市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动，Spud Webb 深深地影响着你，请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。
基本情况 1. 个头矮小，梦想进入 NBA2. 一直为梦想而奋斗3. 1985年成为NBA球员成功原因1……. 2…….对我的影响……要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very small, but he had a big dream---to play in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes. “Where there is a will, there is a way.” In 1985, he became an NBA player.What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn t lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because o f his height. Second, he was able to take every chance.Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new某学校英语节正举行关于“small acts of kindness”的征文活动。
请根据下面提示, 用英语写一篇短文投稿，记述上周一英语课上张老师鼓励你的一件事，并谈谈你自己的感悟。
What happened ●I felt down in my English class because I failed myEnglish test.●Mrs Zhang performed some small acts ofkindness(eg. a word of encouragement, a warmsmile)●……Yourtoughts●……Small acts of kindness can often make a difference. What Mrs Zhangdid is agood case.人物类：内容要点（6个要点）1. 个头矮小，梦想进入 NB; 一直为梦想而奋斗; 1985年成为NBA球员2. 原因一（不灰心）; 原因二（不放弃或抓住机遇……）3. 对我的影响Para1Para2 Introduction（过去时）（使用连词与复合句）was shortdreamt to do…kept fighting for…practice doing…tried one’s best…a professional basketballplayera member of the NBAalthough,when,finally,but,because,because of ….Para3 The reasonwhy hesucceeded….（过去时）What led Spud Webb tosuccess?1) didn’t loseheart/confidence,never gave up2) take every chancefirst,second….On the onehand, on theother handPara4 Influence（一般现在时）his spirit encourages me (todo…)be brave to facedifficulty…Not only…butalso….叙事议事收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除Para1过渡句:What Mrs Zhang did is agood case.Para2Event过去时felt downfailed my English testwas so upset that……encouraged me/ said a word of encouragementsmiled at me/ gave me a warmsmilebecausefrom time totimeso …that…andLast Monday, I I felt down in my English class because I failed my English test, although I worked hard. I was so upset that I hid my head behind the textbook without saying a word. Seeing this, Mrs Zhangshe said. From time to time, she smiled at me. I was deeply touched, and felt much better for the rest of the day.I was really thankful to her.Actually, a word of encourangement or a warm smile not only does good to others but also makes a nice person. In other words, no act of kindness, however small, is ever wasted.最近，学校就空中俱乐部的英语学习内容设置做了意向调查（结果见下面图表）。
请你帮俱乐部用英语写一篇报告，并谈谈你自己的想法或建议．．．．．。
注意：（1）文中应包含图表所提供的要点，可适当发挥；（2）想法和建议至少两条；文中不能出现真实姓名和校名Recently we’ve made a survey of school sky English club. Here are the results. We find that fifty-one percent of the students want to practice their spoken English by using Internet. Twenty-five percent like watching English movies, which can make their holiday life better. Eighteen percent would like to read more English classics because they are interested in them. Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as good manners and western festivals.As far as I know, it’s very helpful to improve English by learning English songs. Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn songs. I’m sure all of us will have fun in the sky English club. Para2 was deeply touched/ movedfelt much betterwas thankful to sb.Para3 Thoughts一般现在时do good to sbmake a nice personNot only…but also….陈述调查信息并发表想法或建议Para1 Survey一般现在时Here are the results.(引出调查信息)We find that…..51% of the students wantto/would like to do…/like todo…/ doing…… hope that …because…meanwhile(与此同时)however，so that…in order todo…收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除by doing …, be interested in …in orderthat…(为了…)on the one hand,on the other hand …Para2 Thoughts and advice 一般现在时 as far as I know,…I think …./ In my opinion, ….. It ’s +adj. for sb. to do … v-ing 作主语的句子有关学英语话题的短语：Listening listen to tapes, watch videos/ movies,do lots of listening practiceSpeaking join an English club, practice conversations with …, readaloud to practice pronunciation, have a partner to practice English withReading read some English stories/magazines, try to guess a word ’s meaning, don ’t read word by word, read wordgroupsWritingkeep an English diary ，make up sentences , find a pen palOthers take notes, learn from mistakes, develop study skills,look up new words in the dictionary, make word cards …假设你班社会实践活动开展了一次有关“作业帮”解题软件(Homework Help APP) 的学生调查。