外研 高中英语必修4Module 1 writing(共32张PPT)
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高中英语外研版必修4课件：Module+1+Section+Ⅴ+Writing—+想象类作文
to get rid of wastes more scientifically.
4．人们重视保护环境。(stress the importance of) People stress the importance of protecting the environment. 5．每个渴求知识的人都可以受到高等教育，无论他们年轻还是 年老。(whether ... or ...)
二、增分佳句 1．文章开头常用句式： ①Sometimes I dream about life in the future. ②I imagine life in the future from time to time. ③I am curious about future life. ④It is fascinating to image life in the future. 2．表达预测的常用句式： ①Maybe in the future we can ... ②There is a possibility that human beings will ... ③Perhaps some people will ... ④We will be living ... in the future.
With the development of science and technology, our life has changed a lot. As a result, I think there are likely to be great achievements in every area. People will be working less with the help of computers, robots and other hitech products. The living environment will be cleaner, because people, stressing the importance of protecting the environment, begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically. Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge
2019年秋外研版高中英语必修一课件：M4 Introduction(共18张PPT)
live in
in the south… of…
in the suburb/ countryside
apartment
on the…floor of…
five-storey/five storeys
apartment block
…miles away from… be made of
local
stone
house on the water
tile-roofed house (瓦房)
Read about the homes of the two students. Do the match according to
the description.
P31 2
Now try to describe the homes of
Homework
Preview the new words and expressions on Page 32&33.
Useful patterns： I live in the city/ countryside of… I live with… We live… on the… floor of a… building. It is made of… about… miles away from…
Work in pairs and compare your homes.
thWehtiwchoosntuediesnmtsowreitshimthielahr etolpyoofurs? key words.
in the south of China live with… suburb a small apartment a five-storey apartment block
外研版-高中英语-B4M1-必修四-Module1-Life-in-the-Future-单词讲解-
computers for help / to help us . 2) 我指望你早来。 I relied on your coming early. 3) 你别指望她能说真话。 She cannot be relied on to tell the truth . 4)你可以放心，这项工作将提前完成 You can rely on it that the work will be
She was complaining that the doctor was
________ too much for the treatment he was
giving her.
A．expending
B．offering
C．costing
D．charging
【解析】 句意为：她一直报怨医生收费(shōu
out
第五页，共31页。
------Have we
food?
------Yes,
. We 'd better buy
some.
A.run out of ; we have run it out
B.run out of ; our food has run out
C.run out; our food has been run out
be sure/ certain to do …
第二页，共31页。
(1)表示“确定” “确信”
of /about sth./ doing sth.
be sure
that clause
to do
of /about sth. that clause
ma(2k)ebesu/freeel sure of oneself 对自己(zìjǐ)有信心
She was complaining that the doctor was
________ too much for the treatment he was
giving her.
A．expending
B．offering
C．costing
D．charging
【解析】 句意为：她一直报怨医生收费(shōu
out
第五页，共31页。
------Have we
food?
------Yes,
. We 'd better buy
some.
A.run out of ; we have run it out
B.run out of ; our food has run out
C.run out; our food has been run out
be sure/ certain to do …
第二页，共31页。
(1)表示“确定” “确信”
of /about sth./ doing sth.
be sure
that clause
to do
of /about sth. that clause
ma(2k)ebesu/freeel sure of oneself 对自己(zìjǐ)有信心
外研版高中英语必修一【教学课件】Module 1 (共47张PPT)
√a. I will find the class interesting!
b. I will find the class difficult!
3. Lines 31-32: Some students were embΒιβλιοθήκη rrassed at first …
a√. The students stopped being shy eventually.
这类词常见的有：
interesting 有趣的；interested 感兴趣的 disappointing 令人失望的；disappointed 失望的 exciting 令人兴奋的；excited 激动的 surprising 令人惊奇的；surprised 惊奇的 astonishing 惊人的；astonished 感到惊奇的 discouraging 令人泄气的；discouraged 泄气的 puzzling 令人迷惑的；puzzled 迷惑的 tiring 令人厌倦的；tired 疲劳的
His new teacheidr eaandofEenagchlisphacrlta. ss
⑥
His new classmates
Read carefully and finish the following chart.
Self
Name Li Kang
introduction Place Shijiazhuang
10. by ourselves = on one’s own 11. do sth. in a fun way 12. in other words 13. three times as many girls as 14. look forward to (doing) sth.
b. I will find the class difficult!
3. Lines 31-32: Some students were embΒιβλιοθήκη rrassed at first …
a√. The students stopped being shy eventually.
这类词常见的有：
interesting 有趣的；interested 感兴趣的 disappointing 令人失望的；disappointed 失望的 exciting 令人兴奋的；excited 激动的 surprising 令人惊奇的；surprised 惊奇的 astonishing 惊人的；astonished 感到惊奇的 discouraging 令人泄气的；discouraged 泄气的 puzzling 令人迷惑的；puzzled 迷惑的 tiring 令人厌倦的；tired 疲劳的
His new teacheidr eaandofEenagchlisphacrlta. ss
⑥
His new classmates
Read carefully and finish the following chart.
Self
Name Li Kang
introduction Place Shijiazhuang
10. by ourselves = on one’s own 11. do sth. in a fun way 12. in other words 13. three times as many girls as 14. look forward to (doing) sth.
英语：Module1《Life in the Future》Grammar and function课件(1)(外研版必修4)
She will be coming soon. 她会很快来的。 她会很快来的。 I’ll be meeting him sometime in the future. 将来我一定去见他。 将来我一定去见他。 3) 将来进行时常用的时间状语有 将来进行时常用的时间状语有soon, tomorrow, this evening, on Sunday, by this time tomorrow, in two days, tomorrow evening等。 等
在英语中, 在英语中,表达将要发生的动作或事 有不同的表达方式。如一般将来时、 有不同的表达方式。如一般将来时、一 般现在时、现在进行时等。 般现在时、现在进行时等。它们所表达 的意思有所不同。具体用法如下: 的意思有所不同。具体用法如下:
1>“will + 动词原形”结构表示在将来某 动词原形” 个时间要发生的动作或存在的状态， 个时间要发生的动作或存在的状态， 常与表示将来的时间状语连用。 常与表示将来的时间状语连用。 e.g. They will come back next week. The project will be completed in a month.
4. Humans will be living (live) on another ___________ planet five billion years from now. 5. I hope scientists ________ (find) a will find cure for cancer. 6. A Chinese astronaut _________ (reach) will reach Mars by 2050. 注意： 注意：用于将来进行时的谓语动词必 须是可延续性动词， 须是可延续性动词，短暂性动词则不 如上面5,6题 可,如上面 题。
外研 高中英语必修4Module1Writing(共17张PPT)
Analysis of the composition
• Find out the good • Correct the mistakes • Polish the composition
Outline • INTRODUCTION: eye-catching • BODY : well-organized • CONCLUSION: brief but impressive
POLISH
• use different and advanced
sentences
• word
phrase
• simple phrase
anced
phrase
• proverbs
• handwriting
One possible version:
• Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It's my great honor to have the chance to give a speech today. My topic today is transportation in the future.
• In the future, vehicles will not only fly in the sky but also run in the sea. Besides, some alternative energy will power the vehicles, such as solar or wind energy, which makes the environment cleaner. Moreover, it is possible for us to change the color of cars at the flick of a switch. More importantly, robots are likely to drive the cars so that most car accidents can be avoided.
• Find out the good • Correct the mistakes • Polish the composition
Outline • INTRODUCTION: eye-catching • BODY : well-organized • CONCLUSION: brief but impressive
POLISH
• use different and advanced
sentences
• word
phrase
• simple phrase
anced
phrase
• proverbs
• handwriting
One possible version:
• Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It's my great honor to have the chance to give a speech today. My topic today is transportation in the future.
• In the future, vehicles will not only fly in the sky but also run in the sea. Besides, some alternative energy will power the vehicles, such as solar or wind energy, which makes the environment cleaner. Moreover, it is possible for us to change the color of cars at the flick of a switch. More importantly, robots are likely to drive the cars so that most car accidents can be avoided.
外研版高中英语Book1 Module 1 writing 教学课件(共44张PPT).
Task 2 Discuss the following questions
Q1 What's your first memory of school?
Q2 What was your favorite activity when you were in first grade?
Q3 What can you remember about your first teacher?
What makes a good essay?
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
The paragraph
What makes a good paragraph?
_________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply. Ending
Yours,
Li Hua
Task 3: divide topics into several parts
para1：introduction of the main topic: memory of “firsts”
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bees. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make
Q1 What's your first memory of school?
Q2 What was your favorite activity when you were in first grade?
Q3 What can you remember about your first teacher?
What makes a good essay?
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
The paragraph
What makes a good paragraph?
_________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply. Ending
Yours,
Li Hua
Task 3: divide topics into several parts
para1：introduction of the main topic: memory of “firsts”
A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.
There are different kinds of bees. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make
外研 高中英语必修4Module1Writing(共28张PPT)
In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
Activity 7 Writing
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的 我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭： 2. 工作： 3.业余生活。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头语已为你写好。
…
Activity 4 Look to the future: a survey
Think about your life in 10 years.
job
Career
further education
unsure
Personal life
Free time activities
married
have kids
decide the structure of the article
know as many useful words, expressions and sentence patterns as possible
One student’s prediction for his life in 10 years.
4. Conjunctions & associated words
2 points
(使用连词和关联词)
5. Correct spelling 2 points (拼写正确)
6. Good handwriting 2 points (书写优美)
one sentence describing your life
Useful expressions and sentence patterns
Activity 7 Writing
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的 我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭： 2. 工作： 3.业余生活。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头语已为你写好。
…
Activity 4 Look to the future: a survey
Think about your life in 10 years.
job
Career
further education
unsure
Personal life
Free time activities
married
have kids
decide the structure of the article
know as many useful words, expressions and sentence patterns as possible
One student’s prediction for his life in 10 years.
4. Conjunctions & associated words
2 points
(使用连词和关联词)
5. Correct spelling 2 points (拼写正确)
6. Good handwriting 2 points (书写优美)
one sentence describing your life
Useful expressions and sentence patterns
英语：Module4《Great Scientists》Grammar(1)(外研版必修4)
短语动词的被动语态： 短语动词的被动语态： That old man was often laughed at. The doctor has been sent for. 结论: 结论 短语动词在主动结构中是一个不可分 割的词组, 在被动结构中也是如此,不 割的词组 在被动结构中也是如此 不 可去掉后面的介词或副词。 可去掉后面的介词或副词。
5. The construction of the two new railway lines _______ by now. [2006 陕西卷 陕西卷] A. had completed B. have completed C. have been completed D. has been completed
We elected him our monitor. He was elected our monitor by us. We saw him sitting there without doing anything. He was seen sitting there without doing anything. 结论:带有宾语补足语的动词的被动 结论 带有宾语补足语的动词的被动 语态原来的宾语补足语变为主语补 语态原来的宾语补足语变为主语补 足语。 足语。
9. — Do you have any problems if you _____ this job? — Well, I’m thinking about the salary ... A. offer C. are offered (湖南 湖南2008) 湖南 B. will offer D. will be offered
1. He must be prevented from going. 2. The plan ought to be put into practice as soon as possible. 结论: 结论 含有情态动词的被动语态的结 构为: 情态动词 情态动词+be+动词过去分词” 动词过去分词” 构为 “情态动词 动词过去分词
外研版高中英语必修一module1课件Writing
4. My favorite activity in first grade was drawing pictures. drawing pictures在句中作表语，说 明主语的内容。 5. She had the biggest smile in the world. have the biggest smile笑容满面，灿 烂的笑容
3. at the start of the the year在本学年初 start为名词， 意为“（工作等的）开 始，着手，最初，最初部分 ”。如： I have to be home before the start of the school. 我必须在开学之前回到家。 Everything went well from the start. 从一开始一切都顺利。
3. What does she remember? The smell of wall paint; Molly, her friend; Miss Sharp’s smile; her favorite activity: drawing pictures.
Hello, my name is Martha, I’m ___ 16 years old and live in New _________. York I’m in _____ tenth grade in Senior High school. My favorite subjects are______ history and _______. Spanish I’m also studying Chinese _______ in the evening class. Main idea of the passage: Martha’s self-introduction.
高中英语外研版必修4Module3 课件 (共72张PPT)
1. Guns and knives are two different types owf e_a_p_o_n. s 2. Someone who has a(n) __a_g_g_re_s_s_iv_e_ attitude may
be violent. 3. You can _g_r_e_e_t_ someone by saying “hello” 4. Your _p_o_si_t_io_nis the way you are sitting or standing.
b) I point to the way and say, “go this way please.”
c) I wave my hand and say “hello” d) I give him the gift and say,
“happy birthday to you”. e) I nod my head. f) I shake my hands and my head. g) I open my eyes wide pointing
You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
Introduction – 3. Speaking What will you do when…?
1. meet a friend 2. show someone
2. Can you give reasons for your choice?
Reading – 1. Pre-reading What words come to you when seeing the picture?
外研英语九年级上册 Module 4 Unit1 (共43张PPT)
4. Listen and read Mum: Now, what’s our train number? Dad: T27 to Lhasa. It’s leaving from platform 2. Mum: The meeting in Lhasa is very important for us, but I’m sorry you can’t come with us, Betty. Betty: So am I, but I can’t miss two weeks of school. Mum: Will you remember everything I’ve told you? Be especially careful with the door. Shut it when you’re in and lock it when you go out. Betty: Yes, Mum. I can look after myself, although it won’t be easy for me. Well, make sure you eat plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables. And I’ve left lots of your favourite biscuits.
和某人道别
帮助某人做某事 及时
27.see sb. off
送别某人
28.be pleased to do sth
乐于做某事
29.get ready to do sth. = get ready for sth.
为……做好准备
30.fight with sb.
与某人争吵/ 打架
31.in a hurry
v. 鸣响；发出铃声
外研 高中英语必修4Module 1 Writing (共16张PPT)
/draw…
free time activities
read books
colorful/wonderfu l
Ken
Mary
Read what four students predict for the future:
Sentence structures:
Family/ personal
life
Travel around the world
husband/wife/child/kid
live with
life in ten years
work in…as… colleagues
job
get along well with
busy/meaningful/well-paid…
Post-writing： Who is the best writer?
全 班 展 示
Post-writing：
One Possible Version
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years.
I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
free time activities
read books
colorful/wonderfu l
Ken
Mary
Read what four students predict for the future:
Sentence structures:
Family/ personal
life
Travel around the world
husband/wife/child/kid
live with
life in ten years
work in…as… colleagues
job
get along well with
busy/meaningful/well-paid…
Post-writing： Who is the best writer?
全 班 展 示
Post-writing：
One Possible Version
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years.
I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
外研版高中英语必修一课件Module 4 A Social Survey—My Neighbourhood Period 1
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( )4.Important things you should remember to keep your neighbourhood safe. ( )5.Keep a list of important phone numbers by the phone.
英语 外研必修1
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Ⅱ.While-reading
1.Fast reading:Fill in the blanks with proper words.
Parts
Subject of their conversation
Part 1 (line 1~line 6) Greetings
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式)
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It’s exhibition.
that John
an art
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【答案】1.It has been / is; since 2.the second time; has held
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Ⅰ.Pre-reading: Watch the pictures and try to fill in the blanks.
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经典美句 1.It’s been six years since we last saw each other, you know. 2.And this is the first time I’ve visited your hometown.
英语 外研必修1
3.You know, I’ve seen quite a lot of China and I’ve visited some beautiful cities, but this is one of the most attractive places I’ve been to.
外研(新标准)版九年级上Module4 Unit1课件(共16张PPT)
Guess：Is Betty travelling with her parents?
通过谈论图片激活学生已有知识，为下 面听说活动的开展做好铺垫，同时解决 部分新词，并进行听前预测活动。
2 Listen and answer the question. (1) Where are Betty and her parents?
5 Choose the correct answer. 1. “I haven’t given you our address in Lhasa!” This means you do not know where we are staying / what we are doing.
2.You see passengers travelling by train / staying at home. 3. When your clock rings, it is quiet / 词汇运用。在语境中巩固词汇。 makes a loud noise.
Module 4 Home Alone Unit 1 I can look after myself, although it won’t be easy for me.
以本模块话题为契机，导入单元内容，同时观看 Let’s enjoy a piece of video about it.
视频激发学生学习英语的兴趣，活跃课堂气氛
Discussion What are the advantages and
disadvantages of being at home alone?
围绕话题， 引入although 引导的让步状语从句， 培养学生学会从正反两方面论述问题的学习策略。
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traffic rules
Task ：A letter giving
suggestions
针对本市目前的交通阻塞问题， 向市长写一封倡议书，提出自己 的建议。
Task ：A letter giving suggestions
假如你是李华请针对本市目前的交通阻塞问题 ， 根据以下要点向市长写一封倡议书，提出自 己的建议。 原因：1. 私家车增多，车道不够，在建道路多
Discuss the ways to solve the traffic problems
Solutions to the traffic problems
1. build more underground lines or overpasses 天 桥
2. increase the number of parking lots 3. limit the number of private cars entering the
Tip: When reading, pay attention to the key words.
__cl_os_e_t_h_e _ci_ty_c_e_n_te_r_t_o_.._.. _ex_c_e_pt... Solutions _b_u_il_d_c_a_r _pa_r_k_s_o_u_ts_id_e_t_he__to_w_n
）/switch lanes unexpectedly/cut in line 5. A huge increase in private cars and new drivers 6.too many roadworks in progress/ too many roads
under construction 7. imperfect transport facilities 8. narrow roads (no room for the lane)
the solutions
1. 2. 3. 4. ……
1. 2. 3. 4. ……
A lot of roadworks are in progress/lots of roads are under construction
lane 车道
Overtake on the wrong side of the road/ switch lanes unexpectedly/cut in line
III. Useful expressions Part 1 : I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve… Part 2:…All this often results in… Part 3 :As far as I’m concerned, measures should
⑶措施三：______________（注意：提建议时要 使用过渡词）
Part4（结尾）希望…/期待…I’m looking forward to your reply.
Dear Mayor, I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve our city’s transportation. At present, traffic jams have become a major problem faced by most people of our city everyday. The number of private cars has been increasing. What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, and pedestrians as well as cyclists run the red light, causing traffic chaos. All this often results in traffic jams.
be taken to …; why not…; we’d better…; it’s a good idea to…; I’d like to suggest/ advise that…;we are supposed to… Part4: 1.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration 2. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
city centre by asking for a congestion charge 4. call on people to take public transport or ride
the shared bikes and avoid rush hour 5. get tough with （严厉打击）those breaking
pedestrian 行人
break the traffic rules/ run the red light/ jaywalk (乱穿马路)
the causes
Group work Conclution
1. pedestrian 2. driver 3. traffic facility 4. private car 5. awareness ……
Reading for information
t_o_o_m_a_n_y_c_a_rs___ Causes _th_e_o_ld__to_w_n____
t_h_e_n_a_rr_o_w_s_tr_e_e_ts
As a result
Problems
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的现象和原因 Part3. Solutions to the problems 提出合理化建议 Part4. Your expectation 期望 II. 时态（Tenses）: the simple present tense; the
future tense
How to write a letter giving suggestions
Causes of traffic jams in the city center
1.disobeying/violating traffic rules 2.people’s lack of awareness of traffic rules 3. running the red light/ jaywalking 4. overtaking on the wrong side of the road（站错道
What about the developed countries?
Traffic Jam –Writing
Learning aims:
1 To know the causes of traffic jams
2 2 To come up with the solutions to traffic jams 3 To write a passage about traffic jams
Ⅴ：由词扩句现雏形
Part1: 1. 我市人民面临着______现象；(traffic jams) 2. 交通拥堵成为我市的_________； (traffic jams) 3. 交通拥堵在我市___________； (traffic jams) Part 2 （causes）: 首先，(什么原因)，私家车越来 越多；（private cars） 其次，车道不够，简单介绍原因；（lane） 再次，很多道路正在建设之中（ under construction/in progress ） 除此之外，司机不遵守交通规则，行人闯红灯 （ disobey/ violate traffic rules ）( run the red light) _____________________________（引起下文的过渡 句）
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二.How to write a letter giving suggestions
I. 构思（structure）: Part1. The purpose of writing the letter 写信的目的 Part2. The current problems and causes交通拥堵
_t_a_k__e__a__b__u_s__i_n_t_o__t_h__e__c_i_t_y__c_e_n__t_e_r_…_
The structure
Para 1 Para 2
……
Problems and causes
……
…… ……
Solutions
…… ……
the causes
Conclution
2. 行人闯红灯 3. 司机不遵守交规,随意超车、便道 解决措施：自拟2-3点 注意1. 100词左右；混乱 chaos;车道 lane; 停 车场 parking lot.
Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve our city’s transportation.
1．traffic jam 交通阻塞 Ⅳ.核心词汇
2．be/get stuck in 遇上/困住 3．lead to /contribute to导致 4. to start with /for one thing首先 besides/what’s more/for another 其次 the last but not least 最后同样重要的是 5．take measures to do 采取措施做某事 6．respect/obey/observe traffic rules/regulations 遵守交通规则 7．deal with 处理，对付 8．insist on /suggest 建议 9．pedestrian 行人；步行者 10. improve traffic safety awareness提高交通安全意识 11. hold up 耽搁，推迟 12. public transport 公共交通工具 13. traffic signal/ light 交通信号灯 14. run the red light /jaywalking (闯红灯)
Task ：A letter giving
suggestions
针对本市目前的交通阻塞问题， 向市长写一封倡议书，提出自己 的建议。
Task ：A letter giving suggestions
假如你是李华请针对本市目前的交通阻塞问题 ， 根据以下要点向市长写一封倡议书，提出自 己的建议。 原因：1. 私家车增多，车道不够，在建道路多
Discuss the ways to solve the traffic problems
Solutions to the traffic problems
1. build more underground lines or overpasses 天 桥
2. increase the number of parking lots 3. limit the number of private cars entering the
Tip: When reading, pay attention to the key words.
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）/switch lanes unexpectedly/cut in line 5. A huge increase in private cars and new drivers 6.too many roadworks in progress/ too many roads
under construction 7. imperfect transport facilities 8. narrow roads (no room for the lane)
the solutions
1. 2. 3. 4. ……
1. 2. 3. 4. ……
A lot of roadworks are in progress/lots of roads are under construction
lane 车道
Overtake on the wrong side of the road/ switch lanes unexpectedly/cut in line
III. Useful expressions Part 1 : I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve… Part 2:…All this often results in… Part 3 :As far as I’m concerned, measures should
⑶措施三：______________（注意：提建议时要 使用过渡词）
Part4（结尾）希望…/期待…I’m looking forward to your reply.
Dear Mayor, I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve our city’s transportation. At present, traffic jams have become a major problem faced by most people of our city everyday. The number of private cars has been increasing. What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, and pedestrians as well as cyclists run the red light, causing traffic chaos. All this often results in traffic jams.
be taken to …; why not…; we’d better…; it’s a good idea to…; I’d like to suggest/ advise that…;we are supposed to… Part4: 1.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration 2. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
city centre by asking for a congestion charge 4. call on people to take public transport or ride
the shared bikes and avoid rush hour 5. get tough with （严厉打击）those breaking
pedestrian 行人
break the traffic rules/ run the red light/ jaywalk (乱穿马路)
the causes
Group work Conclution
1. pedestrian 2. driver 3. traffic facility 4. private car 5. awareness ……
Reading for information
t_o_o_m_a_n_y_c_a_rs___ Causes _th_e_o_ld__to_w_n____
t_h_e_n_a_rr_o_w_s_tr_e_e_ts
As a result
Problems
_lo_ts_o_f_t_ra_f_fi_c _ja_m_s _te_r_ri_b_le_a_ir_____ b_u_s_e_s _ge_t_ti_ng__st_u_ck a_c_ci_d_en_t_s_w_it_h_c_y_clists
的现象和原因 Part3. Solutions to the problems 提出合理化建议 Part4. Your expectation 期望 II. 时态（Tenses）: the simple present tense; the
future tense
How to write a letter giving suggestions
Causes of traffic jams in the city center
1.disobeying/violating traffic rules 2.people’s lack of awareness of traffic rules 3. running the red light/ jaywalking 4. overtaking on the wrong side of the road（站错道
What about the developed countries?
Traffic Jam –Writing
Learning aims:
1 To know the causes of traffic jams
2 2 To come up with the solutions to traffic jams 3 To write a passage about traffic jams
Ⅴ：由词扩句现雏形
Part1: 1. 我市人民面临着______现象；(traffic jams) 2. 交通拥堵成为我市的_________； (traffic jams) 3. 交通拥堵在我市___________； (traffic jams) Part 2 （causes）: 首先，(什么原因)，私家车越来 越多；（private cars） 其次，车道不够，简单介绍原因；（lane） 再次，很多道路正在建设之中（ under construction/in progress ） 除此之外，司机不遵守交通规则，行人闯红灯 （ disobey/ violate traffic rules ）( run the red light) _____________________________（引起下文的过渡 句）
你 离 高 分 作 文 还 有 多 远 结构 ？
Tips: 如何打造亮点
书法
过渡 词
措辞
句式
二.How to write a letter giving suggestions
I. 构思（structure）: Part1. The purpose of writing the letter 写信的目的 Part2. The current problems and causes交通拥堵
_t_a_k__e__a__b__u_s__i_n_t_o__t_h__e__c_i_t_y__c_e_n__t_e_r_…_
The structure
Para 1 Para 2
……
Problems and causes
……
…… ……
Solutions
…… ……
the causes
Conclution
2. 行人闯红灯 3. 司机不遵守交规,随意超车、便道 解决措施：自拟2-3点 注意1. 100词左右；混乱 chaos;车道 lane; 停 车场 parking lot.
Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to
improve our city’s transportation.
1．traffic jam 交通阻塞 Ⅳ.核心词汇
2．be/get stuck in 遇上/困住 3．lead to /contribute to导致 4. to start with /for one thing首先 besides/what’s more/for another 其次 the last but not least 最后同样重要的是 5．take measures to do 采取措施做某事 6．respect/obey/observe traffic rules/regulations 遵守交通规则 7．deal with 处理，对付 8．insist on /suggest 建议 9．pedestrian 行人；步行者 10. improve traffic safety awareness提高交通安全意识 11. hold up 耽搁，推迟 12. public transport 公共交通工具 13. traffic signal/ light 交通信号灯 14. run the red light /jaywalking (闯红灯)