雅思：大作文审题解析

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雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)

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• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.

峰哥雅思托福雅思写作机经解析

峰哥：2014年11月1日雅思写作大作文解析Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.本次考察的是社会话题（幸福和工作）。

从工作切入的题目出现的概率较小。

难度系数一如前几次，依然较大，对熊孩子们来说有一定的挑战。

在审题的时候依然要抓住“一个中心（job），两个基本点（satisfaction or survival)”。

但是就话题本身而言，城镇的孩纸并不陌生。

就是一个关于“工作幸福感”和“工作稳定性”哪个更重要的问题。

写的时候要注意文章结构，我在这里采用经典4段式折中方案，采用“情况分析法”，找到“人”这一个突破口进行切入。

（276字）Employment has been a big concern among the public since nobody can survive without salary. However, in order to make a living, someone prefer to sacrifice their happiness and reluctantly work in an unpleasant environment. Then, the dispute on job security and job satisfaction arose.As we know, having a permanent job would definitely bring people many benefits, especially for the homeless and the migrant workers. In their minds, food is always on the top agenda and followed by satisfaction or happiness or even the basic living condition that they ought to have. So in the lower class’ point to view, having a permanent job means getting a promise of endless living materials. That’s why so many people prefer to stay in an unsatisfying company rather than leave for a much enjoyable one.However, for the workers who are able to support himself or herself, they usually do not stop at the pursuit for making a living, but continue striving for living in a high-quality life. This is mostly for meeting the spiritual needs of which including the job satisfaction. For them, dissatisfaction in one place means a would-be job hopping. In this sense, job satisfaction is much more important than a permanent but not satisfying job.To sum up, the extent of the importance of job security and job satisfaction are various for different groups of people. If I stand with the lower class, I would say that having a permanent job is more practicable and necessary than pursuing the job satisfaction. But if I am with the upper and middle class, I would hold quite an opposite view.。

2023年9月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文

2023年9月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文一、2023年9月9日雅思大作文题目Some people suggest that young adults should be encouraged to do some unpaid work for a period of time for the community to help people. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?(2023/09/09)二、2023年9月9日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionYoung adults, as responsible citizens of a progressive society, are highly suggested to be engaged in unpaid community service. In spite of some valid concerns to such involvements, I find myself in staunch agreement with the statement with some of the reasons elucidated in this essay.解析：本次考题跟剑桥雅思9 Test 2的大作文很像，但是限定词有所不同，审题注意针对young adults 和community;剑桥雅思9 Test2：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?staunch adj.坚定的;elucidate v.阐明，解释;Body 1Indisputably, charitable activities in community organisations will proffer young adults a profound life experience. With daily lives being awash with electronic gadgets, we are living in an age when the young, after work and study, mostly go home and are glued to browsing the Internet or playing computer games. A healthy life balance, by this token, is increasingly hard to follow. Sparing time in charity work, therefore, will prevent them from sitting and squandering their time. Meanwhile, skills gained through these compulsory work, be it working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, will be an asset on their CV and bring tangible boons in increasing their employability.解析：(1) 社区组织活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验，帮助年轻人获得实践性技能，有助于他们将来的就业;be awash with v.被…所淹没;are glued to v.盯着;紧贴着;粘到…上;by this token 按照这个逻辑;由此推断;squander v.浪费，挥霍(金钱、时间等);asset n.有利条件，有价值的人或物;tangible adj.明确的，真实的;boon n.裨益，优势;毫无疑问，社区组织的慈善活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验。

雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析

雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。

此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；play midwife to v.促成;帮助；ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；avert v.防止，避免；bleak adj.不乐观的；Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes：(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；minister to v.照顾；援助；be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；be indisposed to v.不愿意；tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；amenity n.便利设施；vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；dampen v.减弱，抑制；Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions：(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；proffer v.递上；提供，提出；disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；tangible adj.明确的，真实的；boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息；重申观点。

11月1日雅思大作文范文解析

11月1日雅思大作文范文解析11月初第一场雅思考试的大作文题目，给各位考生带来了点小麻烦。

题干中赫然在列一个因果关系。

对于备考经验不是那么丰富的考生而言，这是个不小的麻烦。

通常的同意与否类的题目中会有“并列关系〞，“目的关系〞和“因果关系〞。

相对于表达比拟普通的题干而言，这些类题目都不算常见。

今天我们就剖析一下这个因果关系。

11月01日考题如下：Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11011.有明显的背景Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore，children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 0318上题中的第一句明显是个背景的介绍，因此这道题的讨论重点自然就是题干中的第二句。

类似的题目还有：The news media has become more influential in people’s lives. Some people, therefore, think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 023Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 0525Nowadays more and more people are using cell phones and computers to communicate with others. Therefore, they are losing the ability of face-to-face communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1126在仔细读题之后，考生们很容易就能区分开题干中的背景信息，进而就可以明确知道该题目的讨论重点是什么。

雅思大作文真题范文解析

雅思大作文真题范文解析今天小编和大家分享雅思大作文真题范文解析，希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

2018年9月28日雅思大作文真题范文解析：团队精神范文解析这道题属于议论文，主要讨论相比于个体活动，是否团队活动能教给人们更加重要的技能。

在回答时可以两边都涉及到，这样既降低写作难度，又显得观点更加合理。

雅思写作大作文范文In this highly competitive world, acquiring a variety of skills has become far more important than ever before. It is argued that people gain more necessary abilities through participating in a variety of group work, compared with the individual one. From my perspective, skills gained from both types of activities are equally essential.在这个竞争激烈的世界里，获得各种技能已经变得比以往任何时候都重要得多。

有人认为，与个体相比，人们通过参与各种群体工作获得了更多必要的能力。

从我的角度来看，从这两种活动中获得的技能都是同等重要的。

On the one hand, what people are able to learn by teamwork is meaningful. Firstly, by cooperating and working together with other participators, people are able to gain a better understanding of how to collaborate with others, an important quality that can facilitate to achieve career success. Another essential ability people can develop from group activities is communication skill. Whatever the group work is, playing football, basketball or doing a scientific research, it requires participants to communicate and socialize with others from diverse backgrounds especially when they hold different perspectives. People with strong social skills can adapt to a new environment more quickly and are more likely to access good resources from their friends wherever they are.一方面，人们能够通过团队合作学习是有意义的。

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题：社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目：Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。

政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转，比如建设和维护基础设施，提供各种公共服务。

此外，税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制，高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。

政府将用税收资助弱势群体，建立社会保障体系，促进了社会的稳定和发展。

所以，除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体，大部分人都需要缴税。

雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文》介绍。

雅思大作文观点与思路

写作部分题目观点与思路A 类1.政府是否应该资助理科生，因为科学家为社会贡献大。

For:1.The social development is based on science, as any high technological product derives from scientific theories.2.The payment for those who are engaged in science is still at a low level, which should be changed. Therefore, the support from the government is indispensable.3.Emphasis from the government will ignite the passion of citizens so that science will be promoted to a higher level.Against:Science and arts should be placed equally1.Itcannot b e deniedthatthe m odernmaterial aspect o f civilizationis createdby the modern technology. It is scientists’ hard work that prospers the material life.2.Our life is greatly enriched by the works of arts, such as literature, painting and mu1233.Without the contribution from the workers of the arts, such as social workers, litterateurs and legist, the society cannot remain healthy, peaceful and stable, and people cannot engage in the scientific work in a good environment. Therefore, it is necessary to put equal emphasis on the science and arts.2、衡量政府成功是否以经济繁荣为标志？For:1.The economy is the criterion of a country or government’s success.2.The economy is the fundamental of everything.3.Without economic prosperity, happiness is just the castle in the air.4.The economic situation is the most objective criterion.5.A powerful economy is the cornerstone of social development. With a strong economy, we can have a comprehensive welfare system accessible to all citizens.6.With a sound economy, our people will have sufficient access to free medical care and education.7.Alongwith e co n o m ic prosperity, our national defensesystemwill be g reatly enhanced.Against:1.The criter ion of a country or government’s success should be citizens’ satisfaction to the country or the g overnment.2.The criterion of a country or government’s success should be the country’s comprehensive strength.3.With money while devoid of sense of security, life will become dull and monotonous.4.M o n e y is o m n ip o t e n t,so t h at e co n o m ic le ve l isn’t e ve ryt h in go f a co u nt ry.5.Without a sense of security, a democratic atmosphere, economic prosperity doesn't mean everything.6.It is not uncommon that in some countries that boast so-called economic prosperity, corruption and discrimination are prevalent.3、强迫退休制度For:1.Every one is human with limited energy and vigor; therefore, after an exhaustingworkinglife, one tends to beincreasingly slow bothinmindand action. Remaining in one’s post would undoubtedly impair one’s physical and emotional health.2.When one reaches an old age, he/she tends to be more conservative and reluctant to accept new ideas and innovations. They are likely to adhere to past practices and old ways. One’s originality and creativity will dry out. They always hesitate to strive forward.3.Too many old people remaining in high positions will hinder the developmentof society.4.Offer more employment opportunities and promotion to the young so that they will be able to give full play to their talent.5.If one never stops working, what’s the point of life?Against:1.Different occupations have their diverse traits and distinguishing features. Some jobs call for special psychological requirements. For example, professors, doctors and research fellows are always required to work into their seventies for their richexperience and a cademic achievements, while professional athletes, suchas gymnasts, retire even at the age of twenty.2.Some people think working gives them the mentalsatis fa ct io n/co nte n t me n t anda role in society. If they areobligedtowithdraw from work to complete domesticity, they will feel that they are abandoned by the society and useless. Work brings social and personal esteem.3.It is regarded as a breadwinning process. Retirement will bring about some financial troubles.4.It is unfair to some people who have studied for years to obtain a higher degree. If they are required to retire at the same age as those who receive shorter schooling, the y ca n n o t e njoy thesame l engthof working. It i s also a great waste of talents.5.Thanks to the improvement in medical science, people enjoy a much life sp an/e xp e cta n cy.W e sh ou ld r e d e fin e t h e t e rm“o ld a g e”.6.Chronological age is not always a true indicator of one’s capabilities.7.It would be more economical to some employers to retain the old hands than to spend more time and money training greenhands.8.Older workers usually are more stable, skilled and experienced than younger ones. It is deemed as an economic asset.Conclusion/suggestion:1.One’s retirement age should be decided according to one’s own conditions and willingness. We shall adopt aflexible andrational retirement age sothat different age can have a chance to give play to their talents and wisdom.2.We should implement the policy of mandatory retirement, because it really brings us a good many benefits. The policy is not only good to the old, but also beneficial to the young.4、体罚是否为好的教育方式FOR:1.We should teach children to respect discipline.2.Discipline is the basis of all achievement.3.Children are hardy creatures.4.It moulds strong a n d r eal character.5.It helps to reinforce the authority of teachers and parents.6.Sometimes children will test the patience of their parents and teacher; teachers and parents should not be too permissive; otherwise they will spoil the children.7.Permissiveness results in undisciplined children.8.Parental laxity leads to the spread of juvenile delinquency.Against:1.Children shouldn’t be exposed to parental abuse (emotionally and physically).2.It seriously violates the legal rights and interests of children.3.It is tremendously cold-blooded and unhealthy, resulting in life-long adverse/negative repercussions/rebellious reaction.4.It endangers children’ physical and mental development.5.N o t“yo usp aret h e ro d”b u t“sp are”t h e“re act io nan d a t t e n t io n”an dyou spoil the child. We should employ moderate and appropriate discipline.6.It i s a kind o f brutality and c ruelty whichmay lead t o i njury or evendeathofthe student.7.Achieve the reverse r esult.8.Researchreveals that s t u d e n t s who s uffer fromcorporal p u n i s h m e n t t endtoresort to violence in their future life.5、小孩是学会竞争还是合作For Competition:petition is inevitable; it’s human nature.petition builds character; it strengthens our self-esteem.petition is regarded a s anopenand f air race where success goes to t he swiftest people regardless of their social status.petition is required to help us reach our fullest potential.5.Natural selection and survival of the fittest.For Cooperation:1.Cooperation offers us a break from the pressure and stress of competition.2.A win-win approach tends to fosters exploration of the root causes of the conflict and leads to constructive, sustainable solutions with positive expectation for future encounters.3.Cooperative g r o u p s display more coordinatedefforts, more divisionof labor, more acceptance of other ideas, and fewer communication difficulties than competitive groups.4.Two heads are better than one.5.Cooperation is marvelously successful at helping children to communicate effectively, to trust in others and to accept those who are different from themselves.6、广泛使用机器人是好事还是坏事For:1.The employment of robots on assembly lines saves a lots of labor forces.2.This trend not only improves the work efficiency, but also enhances accuracy.3.Robots can take the place of human beings and work in the dangerous environment or the places not accessible for us.4.Robots can work around the clock, never knowing tiredness.Against:1.As robots are designed by human beings, what they do is just to follow the instruction and preset programming by human being.2.Once there is something wrong with the electric or programms, robot willbecome a good-to-nothing machine.3.Robots cannot work creatively when confronted with complicated situations.4.With the excessive dependence on robots, human beings will degenerate into a kind of animals that only to take food.7、明星高薪是否合理？For:1.The stars are talented p eople.2.Their brilliant performances enrich people’s cultural/spiritual life, which partly contributes to the spiritual c ivilization.3.They bring great pleasure and happiness to ordinary people. They make money by means of their skills and they deserve it. No one forces you to pay for his/her performance. Both are willing.4.Some of the stars also have undergone painstaking training and practice. No pains, nogains. The road t o s uccess m a y not be easy for m ost p op s tars, whichmay set examples for the youngsters.5.Different occupations or professions can command a different amount ofmoney.6.They sacrifice a lot for what they gain including privacy.7.They bring benefits to the tertiary industry and prosper some professions like entertainment and related ventures.8.It is an inevitable outcome of the market economy. We should not make a fuss of it. It is decided by the market.Against:1.We should value the talents who promote the welfare of the society as a whole rather than these pop s tars.2.We c anlive without p opstars, but c ann ot w ithout a doctor or a teacher. Our society can proceed well without these stars.3.The value of knowledge is depreciating.4.Discourage /strike the initiative and zeal of people in other fields.5.Impose an adverse influence on the development of the next generation, which may easily become m oney-oriented.6.This phenomenon, to some extent, even contaminates the order of theday/general mood.7.What they pay cannot equal their gain.8.They make little contribution to the development of the society compared with the scientists.9.Withthe quick- earned money the pop star’s vanity may quickly expand and their souls may be distorted.Conclusion:It is essential that effective measures should be taken to redress such inequality and disparity. The government should levy heavier income tax on these stars in order to narrow the gap between the income of so-called pop stars and that of the ordinary professions such as doctors and teachers.G 类1. 妇女犯罪1.Th e rap idd e ve lo p m e n t o f so cie t y an dt h ech an g e s o f p e o p le’s va lu e o f t h eworld account mainly for the i ssue.2.With the eye-catching development of economy, many young women go out to find a job, which renders them more opportunities to contact the outsideworld.3.Women’s quality attributes partly to the rise of criminal rate.4.The prosperity and luxury in some metropolises are very attractive to some young women.5.Some of women leave the countryside in the hope that they can make a good fortune in the cities, where they often find themselves disappointed for lack of good education or skills.6.The over-description of violence on the media leads young women astray.Suggestion:1.The government should pay more attention to the problem and issue relevant laws to crack down young women crimes.2.We should strengthen education and raise the quality of people, helping them set up a correct outlook of the world.2. 家庭和睦问题Causes:1.Mobility. Nowadays many jobs require workers who are ready and able tomove off the land and to move again whenever necessary.2.Changes in customs and habits have a significant impact on people’s concept of and attitude towards familial life.3.Fierce competition. One has to work and study hard tomeet the d e m a n d of society and face the challenge. Both husband and wife have to go out workfull-t im e t o s u p p o rtt h e fam ily.To o o ccu p ie d t osp are t im e fo r o n e’s fam ily.4.In t his busy modernworld i nwhichmaterial thi ng s are muchvalued, peopleare attaching less importance to emotion and therefore are growing more and more isolated and i ndifferent.5.While fast urban development enables people to enjoy better living conditions, people have to spend more on commuting every day.Suggestion:1.Keep this line of communication open. Frank exchanges are of great importance.2.Eat a s a family. Dinner is a valuable o pportuni ty for the f amily to s pend t imet o g e t h e r.3.Never bring your office work home, and always keep in mind that home is home.4.Share the same p astimes.5.A loving atmosphere. Do what you can to create a tranquil harmonious home.6.When you are out, make sure that you call home regularly.3. 新生总是会由不适应的问题，为什么，如何解决Causes:1.Part of the difficulties they face over this period is due to a changed academic environment.2.When proceeding to a university or a new school overseas, a student may face a different set of academic norms and expectations.3.Challenges also come from their peers. To ensure that their study performance is equal to or better than their fellow students, they need to work very hard, under great psychological pressure.4.For many students, this may be their first foray beyond the borders of the family home, perhaps living in another city or country.5.These new students are likely to find it hard to get used to and blend into the local culture, especially in the case of overseas students.Suggestion:1.School authorities may play an important role in helping students to settlein.2.The orientation program could last long enough to enable students to feelat home.3.Such programs should be on a more individual basis so that new studentscan get a clearer picture of school rules and facilities.4.It would be a good idea for schools to organize some excursions andoutings during the first days.4.私立学校Public School1、 Public education is the fundamental way to prepare children from diverse ethnic，religious ，and class backgrounds to live as responsible citizens in ademocracy 。

如何写雅思大作文

如何写雅思大作文一、理解题目。

1. 仔细审题。

当你拿到雅思大作文题目时，就像接到一个神秘任务。

你得把题目里的每个字都看清楚，可不能走马观花。

比如说题目是关于“现代科技对人际关系的影响”，你得明确它说的是现代科技，不是古代科技，而且是对人际关系，不是对别的什么关系。

这就好比你要去一个地方，首先得知道目的地到底是哪儿，不能走错路。

2. 确定任务类型。

雅思大作文题目有不同的类型，像讨论双方观点（discuss both views）、给出自己的观点（give your own opinion）或者解决问题（suggest solutions）等。

如果是讨论双方观点，那你就像是一个裁判，得公平地看待两方的说法。

要是给出自己的观点，那你就可以更“任性”一点，大胆说出自己的想法，但也要有道理。

就像你在和朋友争论是看电影好还是逛街好，你得根据不同的任务类型来组织你的话。

二、构思内容。

1. 头脑风暴。

一旦确定了题目要求，就开始头脑风暴吧。

这时候你可以把自己当成一个创意无限的发明家。

对于刚才那个科技和人际关系的题目，你就开始想各种点子。

比如说科技让我们可以随时随地和远方的朋友视频聊天，这是好的方面；但也可能因为大家都在玩手机，一家人坐在一起却不怎么交流，这是不好的方面。

把这些想法像收集宝贝一样，都写在一张纸上或者记在脑子里。

2. 组织思路。

有了一堆想法后，得把它们整理一下。

你可以用一种简单的结构，比如“总分总”。

开头先总的说说这个话题很重要或者很有趣。

中间部分就分别阐述你的观点或者不同的方面。

还是拿科技和人际关系来说，中间可以先写科技的积极影响，再写消极影响。

最后结尾再总结一下，就像给这个话题画上一个圆满的句号。

可以说“虽然科技给人际关系带来了一些挑战，但总体上它的积极作用还是不可忽视的”之类的话。

三、撰写正文。

1. 开头。

开头要吸引人，就像你要讲一个故事，得先有个精彩的开头才能把听众吸引住。

你可以用一个有趣的例子或者一个惊人的统计数据。

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析当拿到一道大作文题目去分析时，我们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思，同时还得了解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题，它所考察的是一个什么能力，题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。

本文中，文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：题目翻译：作为教育的一部分，学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查：这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令，考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。

一般来讲，碰到这种指令，理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的，但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法，即部分同意部分反对。

这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答，另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造：Partly agree1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景，并且表明自己的态度)2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3. 但是，反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点，并且可以给出自己的建议)Sample answer:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析：Introduction:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后，用一句话表明出自己的观点)Body 1:主题句：Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化，为了避免重复，改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点部分：Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法，强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处，使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助，使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任01大作文题目Some people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为他们通过纳税为社会做出了足够的贡献，而另一些人则认为他们的责任比纳税更多。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

02思路解析这是一道双边类的大作文，聊的是人们除了纳税之外是否还需承担更多责任。

审题时需要注意关键词“paying taxes”和“more responsibilities”，也就是除了纳税，公民还应该履行哪些责任，可以促进社会的良性发展。

首先，来看公民纳税的意义。

政府的财政资金很大一部分来自于税收，而有了充足资金，政府才能投资科技、医疗、教育等领域的开发，进行基础设施建设，改善居民的生活质量。

然后再来看除了纳税其他的责任。

公民还应当遵纪守法、积极参与社区建设、尊老爱幼、保护环境等，每个人都应该为社会的有序健康发展出一份力。

03高分范文Tax is the main source of revenue for the government. Therefore, some people feel that paying taxes is the biggestresponsibility that citizens have towards their country. However, others disagree with this view. In their opinion, citizens have several other responsibilities too. I totally agree with them.It is important to pay taxes because governments need moneyto fund various social and infrastructural projects. Therefore, by paying taxes each citizen is making a significantcontribution to the development of their country. However, in my opinion, this is not enough. Just because someone pays taxes it does not necessarily mean that they are good citizens. It isalso wrong to assume that all those poor people who do not pay taxes are not contributing anything to their country. There are lots of criminals who pay taxes. Their financial contribution to the economy is negligible when we consider the amount of damage they cause.Tax is just one of the many contributions that a citizen can make. It is equally important for citizens to abide by the law, respect the social norms and help fellow citizens in need. When people obey the rules, respect others and do volunteer worksthey help create a harmonious society where everyone feels happy and safe.To conclude, paying taxes is just one way of contributing to the society. Being a law abiding citizen who volunteers to help whenever they can is even more important.04相关表达responsibility 责任pay taxes 纳税infrastructural projects 基础设施建设项目making a significant contribution to 对……做出重要的贡献criminals 罪犯negligible 可忽略的, 无足轻重的equally important 同等重要abide by the law 守法do volunteer works 做志愿工作harmonious 和谐的surroundings 周边的环境responsibly 负责地;有责任感地。

《剑桥雅思13》写作大作文分析

剑桥雅思写作大作文题型分析在题目类型方面，剑13的四篇大作文中2篇同意与否大作文，1篇双边观点讨论大作文以及1篇报告类大作文（原因和解决办法）。

从题型数量上来看，同意与否类型无疑是剑13的贴心小棉袄，然鹅剑13却未曾出现利弊分析（Advantages and Disadvantages）和利弊分析姊妹版（Positive or Negative）的题目，这需要引起“烤鸭们”的注意。

纵观2018年上半年的雅思写作考试，同意与否（Agree or Disagree）类型的大作文占比较高，而其他题型的占比相对处于弱势状态。

并且剑13再次强调了同意与否类型大作文的重视，“烤鸭们”需要在备考阶段注意强化同意与否类型大作文的审清题目、寻找立场、提出分论点、展开思路和深入论证等。

剑桥雅思写作大作文话题分析从话题大类上来看，Test 1、2、4均为社会问题，Test 3为学校教育问题，并未出现极其冷门或偏门的话题类型，这也是2018年雅思官方已经举办的考试同样突显出来的趋势和特点，社会类问题和教育类话题依旧是大作文考察的主要方向。

从题目审题难度上来看，雅思官方逐渐加大对题目本身审题题眼的设置与限定，进一步考察“烤鸭们”的逻辑论证和思辨能力，除了Test 3学校教育问题题目中的广大“烤鸭们”较为熟悉的绝对化表达（比如：one of the most important），还增设了have to， as well as， too many， in spite of等单词的修饰，这从一个侧面反应了雅思写作考试的审题难度日渐加大，如何准确找准立场并深入展开论证是今后备考的重中之重。

剑桥雅思写作大作文逐题分析Test1从内容归类上来看，Test 1主要围绕语言及其可能导致的社会问题和实际问题，其实，在剑桥雅思真题中对语言话题的考察频率还不算低，比如剑9中两次提到了对语言的考察，一篇大作文询问的是语言逐渐消亡与生活难易程度的关系，一篇大作文落脚点是在小学比在中学学外语更好。

雅思高分作文：产品应该更便宜还是更耐用

雅思高分作文：产品应该更便宜还是更耐用雅思大作文题目：Some people think products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为产品应该尽可能的耐用，而有些人认为使产品便宜更重要。

讨论一下双方观点并给出自己的看法。

【思路解析】这是一道双边类大作文，聊的是产品应该更便宜还是更耐用。

双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。

审题时注意两点，一是“last”在这里意为持久/耐用，如果理解错了基本上整个文章也就跑偏了。

二是“more important”有一个比较关系存在，论证中要体现为什么比另一方更加重要。

今天给大家分享一篇8分的范文，同学们可以重点学习下作者的行文思路和表达。

【参考范文】According to some people, companies should focus on producing goods that are durable. Others insist that the emphasis should be on manufacturing cheap/affordable products. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and give my own opinion on the topic.解析：首段使用同义转换的方式改写作文题目，比如last=durable, ...is more important=the emphasis should be on..., cheap=affordable等。

雅思大作文真题分析1

写作Task 2Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策？确定观点：进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......应该不应该1.（社会方面）：有利于贫困，农村地区的经济发展1.(学生个人方面)：学业，同学竞争的压力2.（社会方面）：不利于社会和科学持续发展“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论，“应该”一方只有一个，因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。

（有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论）文章结构提纲I.开头段（背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点）II.立论1段：peer pressure, academic challengeIII.立论2段：depress social and scientific developmentIV.驳论段：boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areasV.结尾：重申观点，概括驳论立论段例文：立论1段To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.驳论段例文Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.。

雅思写作审题中的十字交叉法

雅思写作审题中的十字交叉法最近看视频发现一个很有趣的方法，并且个人觉得非常实用有效的写作方法，所以今天想跟大家一起来分享一下写作中的这种方法。

在数学、化学中都有十字交叉法，举个例子：这个方法在理科教学中用的非常多，那么在写作中该如何运用这种方法呢？首先我们来看一下十字交叉法的公式：下面我们来用这个公式来分析一下2017年1月14日雅思大作文。

TASK2：Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, others think people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.按照十字交叉法，我们在审题的时候应该首先找到公式当中所包含的四个要素：第一个观点、第二个观点、背景及关键字。

第一个观点：job satisfaction is more important than job security第二个观点：job securityis more important than job satisfaction背景词：无关键字：job satisfaction/ job security在写作中这四点应该是写作始终围绕的点，这样可以避免跑题。

比如，在第一段：背景+两个观点+个人观点。

第二段：第一个观点。

第三段：第二个观点。

第四段：个人观点在写作中要紧扣job satisfaction/ job security这两个关键字，这样写出来的文章就会切题合理。

如果同学们能够提升一下自己的语言和语法，这篇文章就完美了。

这就是十字交叉法在大作文审题中的应用，希望能够对大家有帮助。

雅思作文之现象类题目解析

雅思作文之现象类题目解析
雅思作文中的现象类题目通常会要求考生就某一社会现象或趋势进行探讨。

1.确定主题和观点
首先需要明确题目所描述的现象是什么，并确定自己的观点和立场。

可以根据题目所给的信息，或者结合自己的背景和经验来选择。

2.收集相关数据和信息
为了支持自己的观点，需要收集相关的数据和信息。

可以通过查阅相关研究报告、统计数据、新闻报道等途径来获取。

3.分析现象的原因
在分析现象时，不要仅仅停留在表面，还要探讨现象的原因。

可以从历史、文化、经济、政治等方面进行分析，使自己的论述更有深度。

4.对比不同观点
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在论述过程中，可以引用不同的观点来进行对比。

这可以帮助考官更好地理解考生的论述，并展示考生的批判性思维能力。

5.提出解决方案
在讨论现象时，不要只指出问题所在，还要提出解决方案。

可以从政府、社会和个人三个层面来提出建议，使解决方案更有说服力。

总之，在雅思作文中遇到现象类题目时，要注意全面地了解题目所描述的现象，并从多个角度进行分析。

同时，要掌握好论证结构和语言运用，以便更好地表达自己的观点和思路。

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2023年4月22日雅思大作文参考范文

2023年4月22日雅思大作文参考范文经济发展带来的好与坏一、2023年4月22日雅思大作文题目Many countries aim to improve people’s living standards through economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh thedisadvantages?(2023/04/22)二、2023年4月22日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionIn some parts of the world, owing to the economic boom, people’s living standard has been largely improved, while such a development also leads to the loss of some significant social values. Personally, the demerits of economic blossom can be offset by its merits.解析本题本质讨论经济发展带来的好与坏，看似简单，但是审题需要注意题目信息中出现了两个限定信息improve people’s living standards 和social values are lost;这两个信息点必须要在讨论优缺利弊的过程中提及并同时注意对于social values 的正确理解;boom n.繁荣;offset v.补偿，抵销;Body 1Generally，the prosperity of economy contributes positively not only to people’s material in daily lives but the spiritual enrichment. Materially, economic development serves as an indispensable catalyst for creating jobs, mitigating poverty. Accordingly, people can afford better clothing and footwear, enjoy a rich feast of all delicacies, live in spacious houses as well as get the latest electronic gadgets. Meanwhile,thanks to fatter tax collections as the economy recovers, strides can be made by the government in perfecting social welfare system and enhancing infrastructure. Mentally, when citizens get satisfaction in matter life, highly civilized spiritual life has become what people pursue. In the past, never would the general public imagine going to a movie, a concert or a museum, but now, with abundant materials benefited from economic growth, such cultural consumption can be easily accessible.解析经济发展提升人们的整体生活水平：(1) 物质上：经济发展创造工作机会，解决贫困问题，人们能穿更好的衣物，吃更丰富的食物，住更大的房子，享有新潮电子产品;同时享受更好的社会福利，基础设施建设;(2) 精神上：物质生活得到满足，追求精神生活，可以看电影听演唱会;indispensable adj.不可或缺的，必需的;catalyst n.诱因，诱导者;mitigate v.减轻，缓和;a feast of 丰盛的;delicacy n.美味，佳肴;electronic gadget 数码产品;电子产品;stride n.大步，进展，进步;perfect v.完善，使完美;Body 2Undeniably, accelerated economic development is a chief culprit for the erosion of some important social values. Primarily, economic development render people more rapacious financially , which occasions excessive exploitation of natural resources with a view to satiating the infinite needs of industrial production. Sadly, many people, when lured by colossal economic incentive, would turn a blind eye to the environmental deterioration. Worse still, economic accumulation would tempt people to seek other irrational excuses to obtain materialistic satisfaction which includesluxuries like fancy handbags and limousines with whopping price. In this case, the weight on economic prosperity and consumerism , a devastating blow to traditional values such as frugality, is bound to shape a money-oriented society .解析也不可否认，经济发展确实带来了一定的问题：(1) 为了发展经济，大肆消耗自然资源，没有环保意识;(2) 当人们一味追求物质，物质社会便会产生，人们也会越来越不看重珍贵的社会价值例如勤俭节约;accelerate v.(使)加快，促进;culprit n.诱因，诱导者;罪魁祸首;infinite adj.无限的，无穷尽的;colossal adj.巨大的deterioration n.恶化accumulation n.积累，堆积;whopping adj.巨大的;天大的;异常的;limousine n. 豪华轿车devastating adj.毁灭性的，极具破坏力的;blow n.大风，强风;frugality n.节约be bound to 势必会ConclusionTo recapitulate, notwithstanding the disadvantage economic development gives rise to in disintegrating certain social values, by apportioning resources , the government can strike a balance between economic development and the retention of the cultural identities.解析disintegrate v.崩溃，瓦解;破裂，粉碎;apportion vt.分配，分派;strike a balance 公平处理retention n.保持，保留;保存，总结前文信息;重申观点。

雅思高分作文：孩子看电视的利弊讨论

雅思高分作文：孩子看电视的利弊讨论雅思大作文题目：Some people think watching TV everyday is bad for children. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为每天看电视对孩子不好，其他人则认为这对孩子的成长有好处。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

【思路解析】这是一道双边类的大作文，聊的是看电视对于孩子的利弊问题。

审题时注意限定对象“children”，论证时要考虑孩子的特点。

看电视对孩子有利有弊，重点看家长引导孩子看什么样的电视节目。

如果是看一些科教类的节目，孩子可以通过电视拓宽自己的视野和知识面。

但如果孩子喜欢看一些偏暴力类的节目，孩子容易经不住诱惑，走上歧途。

今天的这篇范文作者给出了自己的观点，并通过举例方式给了充分的论证，同学们可以学习作者的观点和思路。

【高分范文】Some people believe that watching television is not good for children while there are many others who believe that television is informative and educational for children. I firmly agree with the latter statement but in my opinion parents should decide which shows their children should watch.On the one hand, several lines of evidence suggest that television is informative and educational for children. To begin with, shows like world discovery broadcasted ontelevision help children to learn about new inventions. Furthermore, watching programs is an informative way of entertainment for children. For example, my son absolutely loves watching programmes on National Geographic/Discovery/BBC Earth. Many of these programmes have even helped him with his school assignments. He is not really into reading, but these shows give him the knowledge and information he needs.However, television can be informative and educational only when parents decide which shows their children should watch. There are many shows broadcasted on television which can be unsuitable for children. Firstly, there are some shows which are related to violence, drugs and sex. These shows spoil the mindset of children. Secondly, young children blindly follow some characters and learn violent attitude from them. For instance, in the recent past there were many reports about crimes committed by teenagers. Investigations revealed that many of them had the habit of watching violent shows on television. Inspired by these programmes they plotted crimes. This is a good example of the harmful impact of television programmes on children. Thus it goes without saying that parents can make television either destructive or constructive for children.To conclude, although television programmes can be informative for children, parents should help them choose the right programmes. If children are allowed to watch whatever they want, they may unwittingly choose shows that have a detrimental impact on them.【亮点词汇及短语】informative adj. 提供有用信息的；教育性的educational adj. 有教育意义的world discovery 世界探索new inventions 新发明National Geographic 国家地理school assignments 学校的作业unsuitable for 对……不合适violence 暴力spoil the mindset 摧毁精神状态blindly follow some characters 盲目模仿一些角色had the habit of 有……的习惯plotted crimes 密谋犯罪unwittingly adv. 不知不觉地；不知情地；不经意地detrimental impact 有害的影响。