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SAT OG essay sample score 6

I admit with pride, that I am a perfectionist. I see it as the force which motivates me to achieve high goal; I owe my good grades, my success as a dancer as well as my organized room to my drive to be perfect. However, others view my perfectionism as a flaw. Others see me crying over the “B+” I received on the math test and blame my “emotional instability”, as they call it, on my perfectionism. Whether one considers it is a vice or a virtue depends on his or her point of view.May is AP test season and for me that means severely high levels of stress. I could be spotted walking down the halls of the school with my Barron’s AP World History book under my right arm and a highlighter in my pocket. It was imperative that I study hard enough to receive a grade of “5” on the test. All my stress and constant studying gave me dark circles under my eyes and a bad cold. One day, shortly before the test, my French teacher approached me and asked me if I was all right. I explained that I was just tired and stressed from studying for APs. She paused when I finished speaking. Then she stared me straight in the eye and said, “everyone chooses their own position.” I was dumbfounded. What did she mean? Then it dawned on me; she sees my drive for perfectionism in the spring that feeds my ultimate downfall. My perfectionism is my vice, according to her and yet all this time I thought it was my greatest virtue.Now I understand that my perfectionism is not “all good; it was after all responsible for the lack of plenty of sleep as well as being responsible for my head cold. However, I maintain that it is not “all bad” either. I continued to study for the AP World History test and although the scores are not back yet, I have a hunch I did well on it. So is perfectionism a vice or a virtue? It depends on whom you are talking to.There is always a “however.”Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks. In the field of market finance, we find a compelling example that supports this thesis.The Roaring Twenties was a decade during which the American economy saw a rapid boom. In fact, America’s bull markets, such as the New York Stock Exchange had become so financially inviting by 1927 that even America’s middle class poured its money into America’s financial forums. Unfortunately, on October 4, 1929 the Booming Twenties came to an abrupt halt when the New York Stock Exchange crashed.The crash had many consequences. Most notably, the stock market crash of 1929 launched America into the Great Depression, a time of starvation and unemployment for millions of American citizens. The widespread optimism of the 1920s quickly turned into an almost suicidal pessimism. Indeed, the Great Depression represents a crippling consequence of the stock market crash of 1929.However, Franklin Delano Roosevelt established institutions and regulations to prevent future economic catastrophes. Cognizant of the crash’s causes, such as pool corruption, over-priced stock values, and margin buying, Roosevelt implemented the Social Security Act, the FDIC, andstricter rules monitoring credit. His aggressive policies not only ameliorated the uncomfortable climate of the Great Depression, but also laid the groundwork for a safer, more successful economy.The American public also realized the many positive results of the stock market crash of 1929. In particular, American citizens now have an entirely different fiscal outlook from the one they had before the crash. Speculators have proven to be more prudent and insightful, as they often research market trends before investing. Perhaps most importantly, American investors are not as easily swayed by popular optimism and eager advertisement.While the stock market crash of 1929 was the embryo of the Great Depression, the crash also set the foundation for a sounder economy. If we recognize the good and the bad of the crash, we are destined to make fewer economic mistakes.Sample Essay - Score of 6What motivates people to change is a relentless and innate desire for self-improvement. Rarely ever has history seen a man or society kick back, relax, and say “Well that about does it. Not much else to do here!” Within every person is the potential to achieve greatness in some form; be it athletically, mentally, spiritually. This inherent potential demands that people continue to explore and change both their environments and themselves throughout their life's course. Never should a man be idle for too long. After acknowledging the changes a man has already made to his environment, the pursuit of self-improvement will once again stir within his soul and call him to action. This internal desire, this pursuit of challenge and perfection, does not prohibit man from being happy with his status and achievements. On the contrary, the device serves more to allow the man to constantly strive for greater change, newer innovation. What motivates people to change is the ongoing need to redefine people's lives and identities –to elevate them to higher levels of eminence and sucess.A good example of this can be seen in clinical psychology. When patients seek therapy for difficulties that have encumbered their daily functioning, they most often arrive for treatment voluntarily and willingly- they consciously accept the necessity of therapy and so participate without any duress. During the course of clinical therapy, the patient's concerns, anxieties, ideas, emotions, and fears are brought to light. However, the clinician does not try to alter the beliefs, feeling, and sentiments of his client; rather, he simply illuminates them in order to provide the patient with an accurate view of himself. The process, of raising concerns and ideas to the surface of conscious awareness, is known as clarification. Modern psychology is a far throw from the psychoanalysis of Freud's time, in which psychologists attempted to “interpret” pre-and unconscious feelings that had been repressed by the patient. Because clinicians only clarify, and not dissect, alter, or interpret a client's inner desires and emotions, the client himself is responsible for instituting change. If he is to change, he must dictate the course of therapy, and make the conscious choice to improve himself. This widely used approach is called “client centered therapy.” If the client's ennui or ill feelings are due to situational factors or internal designs （as oppose to biological changes that wouldqualify for a diagnosis of psychopathology （mental disorder））, he must change them on his own accord to precipitate change within himself. The therapist will not “cure” him in any way. He alone must answer the call within himself to refine and redefine his identity and place in society. This need, of self-improvement, also initially brought him to the therapist. He was able to recognize the disorder of his environment and acknowledge his own negative feelings. This in turn brought him to therapy, where he was guided through a process of introspection that ultimately enabled him to improve himself, assuage his anxieties, and rightfully continue on his lifelong pursuit of even greater achievements.。

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[原创]解读IBT－OG高分作文中国学生写应试作文大多有一个坏习惯，那就是样式死板，就算不是套模板也是呆板的五段体-开头+2 or 3论点+结尾，这似乎在IBT的评分标准里并不是高分作文的样式。

下面我试着来逐一解读OG的高分作文的标准：1．Development, “well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details.” 也就是作者要用清楚恰当的解释、例证还有细节描述来阐述自己的观点。

这里涉及到三个很关键的原则：A. 不要采用千篇一律的冗长段子来作开头介绍和结尾结论，这样凑出来的字数并不讨好。

这其实表明的ETS的立场，不欢迎死板的模板式文章。

B. 不要言之无物。

我们写这篇essay的目的是要develop一个topic，说明我们的观点，言简意赅比废话连篇要讨好得多，不要一味单纯地计较字数的多寡。

C. 不要一味只将话题集中在“这个事实的存在”上，要用比较具体的方式来阐述观点。

这表明了ETS是希望作者运用适当的事例和细节描述来推出观点，而不是用不同的表达方式重复一个事实。

从这个标准来看，一味地死套模板显然已经不能满足IBT评分者越来越高的要求了。

那种传统的“首段提出观点，然后分2~3段分别论述几个论点，再来结尾总结”的呆板格式似乎受到了挑战。

事实上，从ETS列出的高分作文范例可以看出，散文式的文章更受推崇。

其实如何定义这个“散文式”真不容易，我自己个人看法是，开头亮出观点还是必要的，尽量用一些比较贴近生活的事例(例如OG-practice中的5分范文“when young adults should l eave their parents”中的首段)或者是为大众所接受的常识式标准(例如OG中的5分范文“D ishonesty kills reliability”中的首段)来引入观点，这样会自然而然吸引读者的兴趣。

SAT 新版OG 解析6(整理版)

Book Test #6:Section 1Sample Essay - Score of 6The power of success can be disastrous when placed in the wrong hands. Naturally, there are those who will always choose to manipulate conditions to succeed in their own endeavors, not taking into consideration the lives of those around them. On the other hand, there may be those who do not necessarily pursue selfish ends, but simply do not know where to take success once it has been achieved, thus resulting in their ownself-sabotage.Throughout history, we have seen success used wrongfully in the hands of the unworthy. Powerful leaders of nations, kingdoms, and empires, having succeeded in gaining leadership, have then used their influence wrongfully in achieving their own selfish (and sometimes twisted) goals. Nero, the Roman emperor who beat his pregnant wife to death and has been suspected of instigating the great fire of Rome in an attempt to boost his own political influence. Henry VIII of England, for whom women were beheaded for not bearing him a son, and who is rumored to have eaten eight chickens a night while English peasants starved. The notorious Ferdinand and Isabella of Spain, who carried out the Spanish Inquisition. The list is endless. Even in literature, we see the corruption and downfall of society and mankind as a whole as a result of the abuse of success in the possession of those who do not deserve it, as seen in William Shakespeare’s tragedy of King Lear. In the story, societal order is replaced with chaos when there is a power shift from Lear to his evil daughters, Regan and Goneril. This order only returns to a slight degree when virtue (in the form of Lear’s good daughter, Cordelia) returns to England. Success is hazardous when awarded to the unvirtuous.However, there may be those who are not necessarily evil of greedy in their pursuits, but merely do not know how to handle success. This proves to be just more disastrous to the individual than to anyone else, since it is the individual who will then sabotage his own success to return to his former comfort zone. Success is meant to be grown upon, not exploited or feared.Success, when achieved by the unworthy or inexperienced, is a most disastrous element. Success is not about being happy at the expense of those about you –it is about u sing one’s newly gained happiness to improve the lives of others. If one reflects on the wise words of Ralph Waldo Emerson, one will never go astray: “To know that one person has breathed easier because you have lived -this is to have succeeded.”Section 31ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer D :Choice (D) is correct. A "symbol" stands for or suggests something else by reason of association. Often an invisible idea is represented by a visible person or artifact. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "The rebels saw the huge statue of the dictator as a symbol of the totalitarian regime and swiftly toppled the monument." Statues or monuments frequently symbolize the governance of the political figures or regimes they depict. Such symbolization in the minds of the rebels would explain their impulse to destroy it.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. An "indictment" is an expression of strong disapproval. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "The rebels saw the huge statue of the dictator as an indictment of the totalitarian regime and swiftly toppled the monument." If the rebels thought the statue represented a disapproval of the regime they would be more likely to preserve than destroy it.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. An "illusion" is a misleading image. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "The rebels saw the huge statue of the dictator as an illusion of the totalitarian regime andswiftly toppled the monument." It could be possible that the rebels saw the statue as a misleading image of the regime, but the sentence does not clearly support or explain such an interpretation.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. A "copy" is an imitation. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "The rebels saw the huge statue of the dictator as a copy of the totalitarian regime and swiftly toppled the monument." It is illogical to say that a statue of a dictator is an imitation of a regime.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. A "mockery" is an insulting action or speech. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "The rebels saw the huge statue of the dictator as a mockery of the totalitarian regime and swiftly toppled the monument." If the rebels thought the statue was insulting the regime, they would be more likely to preserve than destroy it.2ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. "Adept" means highly skillful. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "Residents of the isolated island were forced to master the art of navigation, becoming the ocean's most adept sailors." It makes sense to say that those who had mastered the art of navigation became adept, or highly skilled, sailors.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. "Temperamental" means unpredictable in behavior. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "Residents of the isolated island were forced to master the art of navigation, becoming the ocean's most temperamental sailors." That the islanders were masters of navigation would probably mean that they did not behave unpredictably.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. "Congeniality" means friendliness. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "Residents of the isolated island were forced to master the art of navigation, becoming the ocean's most congenial sailors." Masters of navigation are not necessarily friendly sailors.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. "Vulnerable" means open to attack or injury. If this term were inserted into text, the sentence would read "Residents of the isolated island were forced to master the art of navigation, becoming the ocean's most vulnerable sailors." Master navigators would likely be less open to injury or attack than other, less experienced sailors.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. "Reclusive" means withdrawn or preferring solitude. If one were to insert this term into the text, the sentence would read "Residents of the isolated island were forced to master the art of navigation, becoming the ocean's most reclusive sailors." While living on an isolated island might cause the sailors to prefer solitude, reclusivity does not describe their mastery of sea travel.3ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer B :Choice (B) is correct. "Penchant" means an inclination, and "to pilfer" means to steal. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "The spotted bowerbird has a penchant for amassing the bright shiny objects it needs for decorating its bower: it will enter houses to pilfer cutlery, coins, thimbles, nails, screws, even car keys." In this sentence, the statement following the colon expands on what precedes it. Describing how bowerbirds steal objects from homes expands on the idea that they tend to amass bright shiny objects for their bower.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. "Knack" means a skillful ability, and "to assess" means to evaluate. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "The spotted bowerbird has a knack for amassing the bright shiny objects it needs for decorating its bower: it will enter houses to assess cutlery, coins, thimbles, nails, screws, even car keys." Although a bowerbird may be skillful at gathering shiny objects, it is unlikely that the bird would enter a house simply to assess, or evaluate, the objects found in a house, without then stealing them.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. "Purpose" means a reason, and "to dispense" means to distribute or get rid of. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "The spotted bowerbird has a purpose for amassing the bright shiny objects it needs for decorating its bower: it will enter houses to dispense cutlery, coins, thimbles, nails, screws, even car keys." Although a bowerbird may have a reason for amassing shiny objects, it would enter a house to find objects, not get rid of them.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. A "predilection" is a preference, and "to disturb" means to disrupt or unsettle. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "The spotted bowerbird has a predilection for amassing the bright shiny objects it needs for decorating its bower: it will enter houses to disturb cutlery, coins, thimbles, nails, screws, even car keys." If a bowerbird had a predilection, or preference, for gathering shiny objects, the bird wouldn’t enter a house simply to disturb the objects found there; it would want to gather them.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. A "remedy" is a cure, and "to raid" means to loot or plunder. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "The spotted bowerbird has a remedy for amassing the bright shiny objects it needs for decorating its bower: it will enter houses to raid cutlery, coins, thimbles, nails, screws, even car keys." Although a bowerbird may enter a house to raid shiny objects, it doesn’t make sense to say that the bird has a remedy, or cure, for amassing shiny objects.4ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. "Inseparable from" means incapable of being separated, and "legitimacy" means conforming to socially accepted standards. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Not only was the science of Hildegard of Bingen inseparable from her theology, but her religious visions helped give her scientific works legitimacy by winning her the support of medieval church authorities." The "Not only. . . but" construction indicates that the second clause of the sentence will be consistent with, and may extend the meaning of, the first clause. It makes sense that the support of the influential medieval church for theologically based scientific works would provide her works with legitimacy.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. "Unconcerned with" means not related to, and "prestige" means high social respect or regard. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Not only was the science ofHildegard of Bingen unconcerned with her theology, but her religious visions helped give her scientific works prestige by winning her the support of medieval church authorities." If the support of the church won her scientific work high social regard, then it would likely be related to theology.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. "Derived from" means to come from another place of origin, and "profundity" means depth of meaning. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Not only was the science of Hildegard of Bingen derived from her theology, but her religious visions helped give her scientific works profundity by winning her the support of medieval church authorities." Although her science may have been derived from her theology, it doesn't follow that the church's support would make her work more profound.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. "Related to" means connected with, and "accuracy" means correctness. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Not only was the science of Hildegard of Bingen related to her theology, but her religious visions helped give her scientific works accuracy by winning her the support of medieval church authorities." Although her science may have been related to her theology, it doesn't follow that the church's support would make her work more accurate.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. "Diminished by" means lessened by or weakened, and "detachment" means objectivity. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Not only was the science of Hildegard of Bingen diminished by her theology, but her religious visions helped give her scientific works detachment by winning her the support of medieval church authorities." Although her scientific work could have been weakened by her theology, it doesn't make sense to say that her visions or the church's support gave her scientific works objectivity. It is more likely that such support would weaken her work's objectivity.5ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. "Elitist" means favoring a small, high-status group, and "perquisites" are privileges. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Opponents of the research institute label it an elitist anachronism; its scholars, they allege, have perquisites rivaling those of pre-Revolutionary French nobility." A research institute that provides perquisites, or privileges, that are so excessive that they rival those of pre-Revolutionary French nobility can appropriately be called elitist, or favoring a small, high-status group.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. "Monarchical" means pertaining to a king, and "tribulations" are sufferings. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Opponents of the research institute label it a monarchical anachronism; its scholars, they allege, have tribulations rivaling those of pre-Revolutionary French nobility." The pre-Revolutionary French nobility were not known for their suffering, and it is unlikely that the opponents of the research institute would criticize the institute's scholars for having tribulations, or sufferings.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. "Irreproachable" means faultless, and "luxuries" are extravagant comforts. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Opponents of the research institute label it an irreproachable anachronism; its scholars, they allege, have luxuries rivaling those of pre-Revolutionary French nobility." Opponents of an institution would not call it faultless and would criticize the institution for lavishing luxuries on its scholars.Choice (D) is incorrect. "Reprehensible" means deserving blame, and "afflictions" are sufferings. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Opponents of the research institute label it a reprehensible anachronism; its scholars, they allege, have afflictions rivaling those of pre-Revolutionary French nobility." Although opponents might label the institute reprehensible, or blameworthy, they would not be likely to criticize the institute's scholars for having afflictions, or sufferings. Furthermore, thepre-Revolutionary nobility were not known for their suffering.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. "Commendable" means praiseworthy, and "privileges" are deserved rights or luxuries. If one were to insert these terms into the text, the sentence would read "Opponents of the research institute label it a commendable anachronism; its scholars, they allege, have privileges rivaling those ofpre-Revolutionary French nobility." Opponents who accuse the institute of providing excessive privileges would not characterize it as commendable, or praiseworthy.6ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer C :Choice (C) is correct. While the author of Passage 2 is critical of Linnaeus’ legacy, the autho r of Passage 1 expresses appreciation of his contribution to natural history, describing it as "enormous and essential." Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. The author of Passage 1 does not regard Linnaeus with "cynicism," or scornful distrust. On the contrary, the passage expresses great respect for his significant contribution to science. Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. Neither author expresses any "bafflement," or confusion, regarding Linnaeus or the historical role he played in the field of science.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. The author of Passage 1 does not express "nostalgia," or bittersweet longing, for Linnaeus or for the era in which he lived.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. While Passage 1 asserts that scientists misused the system of classification, there is no suggestion that the author feels "resentful" of, or personally wronged by, Linnaeus.7ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer D :Choice (D) is correct. Unlike Passage 1, Passage 2 uses a first-person narrative voice that openly expresses the author’s "wariness" regarding Linnaeus' contribution to natural science.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Specific scientific facts do not appear in either passage.Choice (B) is incorrect. Neither writer uses "literary allusion," or an indirect reference to a work of literature. Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. It is Passage 1, not Passage 2, that includes historical background information on Linnaeus and on the role that classificatory systems have played in science.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. Neither passage uses "direct citations."8ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. Although the two authors judge Linnaeus’ work differently, they agree that his classificatory system has had a great influence on the field of natural science.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. The author of Passage 2 claims that Linnaeus’ system limits modern human understanding of the natural world, but the author of Passage 1 does not mention science after the nineteenth century.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. Neither passage implies that interest in biology was declining or that Linnaeus’ work renewed curiosity in the field.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. These passages do not discuss the classification system’s ability to resolve disagreements within the scientific community. On the contrary, the author of Passage 2 writes about Linnaeus' work to raise, not settle, questions regarding the validity of classification.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. Neither passage refers to scientific discoveries that may have laid the foundation for Linnaeus' famous system.9ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer D :Choice (D) is correct. The author of Passage 1 argues that unlike his followers, Linnaeus probably saw his system of classification as a tool, not the goal, of science. The author of Passage 2 does not make this distinction.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Neither author implies that Linnaeus has not received enough recognition as a scientist. Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. Lines 12-17 intimate that the impact of Linnaeus' system was not entirely advantageous, but this section of Passage 2 does not dismiss the contributions of scientists who have integrated his work into their own.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. The author of Passage 2 does "not dispute the value of" classification, but argues that Linnaeus' system has had a negative impact on "humans' relationship to the world."Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. Both authors agree th at Linnaeus’ most notable contribution to natural history was his system of classifying plant and animal life.10ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer B :Choice (B) is correct. It makes sense to say that the residents of Macondo needed "time and effort" to grow accustomed to a "persistent," or insistently continuous, noise.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. It would be illogical to call a noise emanating from a light bulb "enthusiastic." Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. "Obvious" does not describe a noise that requires time and effort to get used to hearing. Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. In this context, "obsessive" is not used to indicate infatuation, or short-lived passion. Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. An electric generator plant may be called "hardworking." Such a term, however, does not describe a noise that takes time and effort to become used to hearing.11ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer C :Choice (C) is correct. After paying to "share the difficulties" of the on-screen characters, the citizens felt cheated to discover that they were only actors, not real people deserving of their sympathy.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Although each person paid two cents for admission, nothing in the passage indicates that this charge was either excessive or the cause of their anger.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. The audience was not angered by the on-screen adventures themselves, but rather by the fact that those events had not actually occurred.Choice (D) is incorrect. The public seemed to enjoy commiserating with characters who had fallen on hard times. The citizens were only upset to discover that they had felt real emotion on behalf of actors who were only pretending.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The public was not angered because the plots were "implausible," or unlikely, but rather because they were untrue.12ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. The phonograph, an early record player, intially intrigued the citizens of Macondo.They were eventually disappointed to learn, however, that the device was mechanical, not magical, and therefore lacking in the "moving" and "human" qualities of a live musicians.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. Nothing in the passage indicates that phonographs required any special skill to operate. Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. The passage implies that the machines were, in fact, frequently and closely observed by curious citizens on the street where they were sold.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. Although the phonograph dampened citizens' enthusiasm for live music "for a time," they did not abandon the invention because musicians were suffering. Rather, they tired of the machines because they eventually concluded that recorded music was inferior to live music.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The passage is clear that it was only after the adults of Macondo had rejected the foreign record players that children were permitted to amuse themselves by dismantling them.13ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer D :Choice (D) is correct. The citizens found the telephone disturbing because of all the new machines that strained people's ability to discern "the limits of reality"; the telephone ran most counter to what they had always thought about the natural world.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. The citizens were not upset by the origin of the telephone, but by how it forced them to reevaluate their ideas about the world.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect.The passage does not discuss the social implications of the telephone.Choice (C) is incorrect. The citizens’ anxiety about the telephone was not related to their fears concerning the village’s daily life, but to their overall understanding of reality.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The passage does not address the telephone’s potential effect on the job market in Macondo.14ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer C :Choice (C) is correct. The passage suggests that the citizens of Maconda are stuck in a cycle of "disappointment, doubt and revelation." They welcome new inventions with wonder and awe before rejecting them for being less "marvelous" and "enchanted" than they seemed.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Both the telephone and phonograph were operated with a crank, or turning handle, but that feature is not related to the citizens’ disappointment.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. At no point in the passage does the educational value of these inventions come into play.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. The townspeople are not concerned by the fact that the film projector and phonograph were created to entertain, and it can be argued that the light bulb and telephone are not meant for entertainment at all.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The machines were not necessarily hard to operate, and the passage suggests that the people were disappointed with them for other reasons.15ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer D :Choice (D) is correct. The passage mainly deals with the "influx," or arrival, of technological inventions in Macondo and the citizen's mixed reactions to them.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Although the passage implies that the "respectable" citizens of Maconda did not typically mingle with members of the working class, the main purpose of the passage is not to make a statement about class relations within the town.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. Although the passage describes new inventions, it does so in order to make a larger point about the way they were received among the people of Macondo.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. The main purpose of the passage is not to show how different people had a common reaction to something "magical," but to illustrate how they responded to new technologies.Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The passage’s purpose is not to "delineate," or describe, ideas about nature triumphing over technology. Rather, its purpose is to explain how the people of Macondo responded to new technologies. 16ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer A :Choice (A) is correct. An admission of a lack of expertise is a disclaimer; a statement is an assertion. In the first sentence, the author admits to a lack of certain kinds of expertise; in the second sentence, the author states an opinion about Martha Graham's work.Explanation for Incorrect Answer B :Choice (B) is incorrect. No one is invoked, or appealed to, in the first sentence, and the second sentence does not define anything.Explanation for Incorrect Answer C :Choice (C) is incorrect. In the first sentence the author admits to a lack of expertise but not in an apologetic way; the second sentence is an assertion but not a confession.Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :Choice (D) is incorrect. To say that the first sentence is a statement of authority doesn't make any sense, and the second sentence is a statement of opinion but not a hypothesis, or a basis for experimental investigation. Explanation for Incorrect Answer E :Choice (E) is incorrect. The first sentence does not rebut, or challenge, anyone else's argument, and while the second sentence is an introduction to the analysis that follows in the passage, it is not itself an analysis.17ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONSExplanation for Correct Answer B :Choice (B) is correct. The author uses the statement in discussing Graham's "instincts of a mathematician or physicist" in her approach to choreography. The quoted phrase is part of a statement that expands on an earlier point about Graham's approach to line and direction in dance, which the author of the passage believes is both mathematical and emotional.Explanation for Incorrect Answer A :Choice (A) is incorrect. Although the author does suggest that Graham sought to produce emotional effects through the use of line, there is no indication that those effects were intended to be spectacular.。

雅思满分范文赏析

邀请信B8GAYou have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letterExplain why you have movedDescribe the new houseInvite your friend to come and visit范文Dear Dave,I am writing to let you know that at last we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldn’t go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. So we started looking—and one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.I’m sure you’ll like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside .But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesn’t need to do much decorating.Why don’t you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.Lots of love,Francoise问候信B7GAYou should recently start work in a new company.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letterExplain why you changed jobsDescribe your new jobTell him/her your other newsWrite at least 150 wordsYou do NOT need to write any addressesBegin your letter as follows:Dear…,范文Dear Jenny,I hope this finds you and your families well, and I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch recently. I’m writing now to let you know about my new job.You remember that I was working for that construction company a few miles outside the city? Well, I just got so fed up with it –I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay wasn’t great. So basically I applied for a job at a new international company that was looking for admin staff for a new branch in the city center.I was a bit nervous in the interview, but in the end I got a job as one of the senior administrators. I am so happy! The pay is better, the working conditions are great and I don’t have to drive to work anymore.Anyway, I have to stop now because my sister is staying with me and has brought my baby nephew to meet me. She sends you lots of love and is asking when we can all meet up. Soon, Ihope.With love,Tina抱怨信B6GAYou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to the landlord. In your letterIntroduce yourselfExplain what is wrong with the furnitureSay what action you would like the Landlord to take范文Dear Mr. Smith,I am your tenant from Flat 3 on Riverside Street. We met each other when I signed the rental agreement in your office.I have lived here for 6 months now and I am writing to complain about some of the furniture. As you may remember, the dining table is in very poor condition and has uneven legs. It also does not match the dining chairs as these are too low to be comfortable for a table of that height. When I first pointed this out to you, you agreed to provide a brand new dining set. However, you have not done so and I would really like to resolve this matter as soon as possible.If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could simply replace the table by finding one of a suitable height for the chairs. This would solve the problems without too much cost. So I hope you agree to this proposed solution.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,M.M. Egil道歉信B5GAYour neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letterExplain the reasons for the noiseApologizeDescribe what action you will take范文Dear James,I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies.As you may have suggested, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all taking longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant a lot of banging and hammering.As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He’ll work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise.Sorry to have caused these problems.Bill推销信B4GBYou want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letterExplain why you are sellingDescribe the furnitureSuggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture范文Dear Jan,As you know, we’ll be moving to a new house soon and there are a few things that I won’t be able to take with me. The new house is a bit smaller so I have to sell some furniture and I was wondering if(表请求) you might be interested.In particular I want to sell my big dining table. Do you remember it—the one in the living room? It has wooden legs and a grey glass top and it’s big enough for six people. There are six matching chairs to go with it.I know you’ve always liked this furniture so I could let you have it at a good price. I’d rather sell it to you than to a stranger!Why don’t you come around and take another look at them on Saturday? We’ll be here all day, so maybe we could have some lunch together.Give me a ring and let me know.Love,Shanda解释信B3GAYou are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letterExplain your situationDescribe your problemsTell him/her when you think you can start范文Dear Ms Barnes,I am writing concerning the position of Assistance Office Manager that I am due to begin next Monday. However, a problem has arisen.As you know, I currently work for my uncle’s food-packing business, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go into hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of both the home and the business. She has asked me, as this is a particularly busy time of year, to stay on and help her with the running of the office.I realize this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given(介词，考虑到某事物) the circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned.I would like to emphasize that I remain very keen to work with you, and that I will be gaining further useful experience during this time.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,John Forbes教育篇B9T1Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you knowledge or experience.范文Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.The obvious argument in its favor(有利证据为) is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers. Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness.The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach, thus maintaining learners’enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.There are, however, some disadvantages. Primary school teachers are generalists, and may not have the necessary language skills themselves. If specialists have to be brought in to deliver these sessions, the flexibility referred to above is diminished. If primary language teaching is not standardized, secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains. There is no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated as soon as they change schools. However, these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted.Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically, and early exposure to language learning contributes to this. Young children’s innate abilities should be harnessed to make these benefits more achievable.有序变量+多分类变量（B9T4）The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.范文The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030.Petrol and oil are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period, with 35 quadrillion (35q) units used in 1980, rising to 42q in 2012.Despite some initial fluctuation, from 1995 there was a steady increase. This is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030.Consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31q in 2030, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q.In 1980, energy from nuclear, hydro- and solar/wind power was equal at only 4q. Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. After slight increases, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to maintain this level until 2030, while the others should rise slightly after 2025.Overall, the US will continue to rely on fossil fuels, with sustainable and nuclear energy sources remaining relatively insignificant.。

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新sat作文范文og新版satog作文有范文SAT写作真题：Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority?SAT写作范文：Every person has his or her own idea of ethics and morality, regardless of objective truth. Authority figures, whether teachers, heads of nations, or other positions of power, may not always be in line with that morality. In order to determine whether an authority figure is doing what is just, individuals must speak out when they perceive injustice. Oftentimes, that means questioning authority.Despotic novels often portray systems of national leadership in which questioning governmental authority is explicitly forbidden. George Orwell’s novel 1984 is such a story. The government is known collectively as "Big Brother," who is a symbolic entity continually watching over every citizen. The language, Newspeak, is constantlybeing updated to control people’s expression and thereby control their thoughts. Anyone caught even thinking something other than Big Brother would want them to think are arrested by the Thought Police. Under this regime, there are virtually no independent thinkers. Every piece of information given to the people es through the government, which has the power to change facts and history with utter impunity. The main character, Winston, manages to catch on, but in the end, he is finally brainwashed by torture. In this society of obedient drones, truth is irrelevant because there are no lies.When a student goes through formal education, he must be on his guard when it es to what he absorbs. In the midst of objective facts, all too often a teacher may attempt to indoctrinate him with the teacher’s own ideology. One need only look at the majority of United States universities. There are thousands of easily-aessed articles exposing documented incidences of teachers boldly instilling intheir students the liberal ideology. Universities are cesspools of leftist professors who punish students who express differences of opinion. Yet without those fewquestioning students, the rest of the student body would be subjected to unadulterated liberal lectures, with nary an opposing view in earshot. In order to form proper opinions, students must be exposed to both sides of an issue, and both sides must be questioned so as to ascertain the truth of each.Leaders of other countries must also be questioned by nonresidents so as to discover precisely what is happening under their authority.哈, 我教过这篇. 楼主说的那篇文章是难借鉴, 但是它的优点还有可以学的, 如词汇的多样话, 句型等, 当然还有organization.楼主自己说的对, 如果没法从interest写到 change, 那就得换个理由, 嗯? 再说一个理由一般也不够. 其实那个interest可以扩展一下, 从interest写到desire and drive, 就可以联系到change. 可以举一些个人生活中的例子.我是美籍华人英语老师, 这里没法细说, 有问题的话在线找我, ___也可以, 但是百度留言我有可能看不到...But是连词，最好不这么用。

雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析

智课网IELTS备考资料雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析摘要：雅思OG写作提供详尽的写作思路，让考生明确如何合理的构建框架。

并且对范文进行完整的分解，点出范文亮点，供考生学习模仿。

一起看看小编带来的雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析。

小马过河为考生做了雅思 OG写作Test6 Task1的解析：雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus)这篇小作文是一张线形图(line chart),显示了2003-2012 年,发生在纽波特中心城区三种犯罪事件发生率的变化。

考生需要提取并总结主要信息,同时做出相关对比。

从图表信息我们可以看到,纵轴显示了事件的数量(number of incidents),横轴表示从 2003-2012 的时间发展。

三个犯罪事件分别是入室盗窃 (burglary)、车辆盗窃(car theft)和人身抢劫(robbery)。

雅思OG写作写作思路(Thinking before writing)考生需要在 150 字之内对图表里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。

我们要特别注意这张线形图中突出的以及变化的信息。

比较突出的信息是:在 2003 年,入室盗窃的犯罪率最高, 其次是车辆盗窃,人身抢劫的比率最低。

但是到了 2012 年,车辆盗窃成了发生率最高的犯罪事件,人身抢劫的发生率仍然最低。

变化最明显的信息是:从 2003 到 2012 年,变化最大的是入室盗窃率,总体呈大幅下降的趋势。

变化最小的是人身抢劫,其犯罪率一直处在比较低的范围。

根据所获得的信息,推荐的写法是将主体段分为三段,分别描写三种犯罪形式的变化情况,这是比较理想的行文方式,结构清晰,且便于进行内容之间的比较。

雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)Model ResponseThis graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period2003-2012. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidentsof theft remained low but steady.In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3,400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3,700 in 2004, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point the figure stood at justover 1,000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period.In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2,800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. Atthis point the number rose, standing at around 2,200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards.Finally, robbery has always been a fairly minor problem for Newport. The number of offences committed changed little over nine years. It is interesting to note that the figure of approximately 700 in 2003 is the same figure for 2012. (187 words)雅思OG写作范文亮点(Sample highlights)第 1 段:改写原题第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼。

沐浴姐姐评OG5分作文

托福写作之官方满分作文昨天早晨起来，我强忍着即将搬家的剧痛，没脸没皮得开始上网。

（此处自打耳光，并消音～），发现一夜没我的互联网运行一切正常之后，偶发现有人对OG中给的官方满分作文提出质疑。

恩，共鸣了（嗡～～～），我也对这篇文章有诸多不满，也要一吐为快。

搬家搬家搬家，一天内负重位移30公里，于是～我就睡着了，并且梦到电脑丢了。

于是～我预感我要红了。

醒来之后发现电脑还在，于是～带着些许无奈的开始背后说道说道OG的满分作文。

先说结构这篇文章的结构同我们倡导的五段式不同，或者说有很大不同。

这一点，在官方给出的点评里也提及的。

没有完美的结构并不影响你得高分，甚至满分。

但是，我们的作文也仍然希望遵循这个结构，作个听话的孩子。

这，是为什么呢？因为结构既是是学步车，又是背背佳。

一个严谨的结构能够让我们更快地入门。

刚开始写作文，费了半天劲才琢磨明白题目是啥，可是却又不知道从何下手。

从小没少写作文，但是那些中文写作的套路到这通通九霄云外了。

不知道从哪里开始，哪里结束。

这时候，如果我们按着结构走，第一段抛出观点，第五段来个综述，中间三段分别用分论点支撑。

有了这个学步车，迈出第一步还难吗？同时，一个严谨的结构能够规范我们的思路。

我们写中文作文，思路就很爱飞（年轻人嘛，嚎～），要是用英文，写完自己也不太懂，那么飞得就更高、更快、更远了～有了结构规范这，老实多了。

即便有段写嗨了，一看太长，赶紧收了，走下一步。

这时，结构就像背背佳一样，规范了作文的身形，也抓住了我们跑得飞快的思路。

再说内容有了结构之后，姆们就脚着作文算是完美了，看着一篇又一篇的五段式作文，觉得ETS死定了。

再一看官方的满分作文，觉得：满分就这个熊样啊！！！跑偏了，跑偏了。

结构只是外化的东西，而作文更多的是“内容为王”的。

所以，几乎每个老师都会强调：这样的格式不是必须的。

ETS也用它的行动告诉大家：内容为王。

朋友，你完美的外表掩饰不了你空洞地灵魂！！！帮我把这句话转告给你写的作文。

6月英语六级作文解析及满分作文(优秀12篇)

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”那麼确实是由于情况下不早了，因此你便要太早的从我人生道路中撤出？我还记得某日早晨，从睡梦中醒来。

寻你，你在阳台，于那纷繁的花海中一件事轻笑。

这一精彩片段一直停留在脑子里，以致于学xxx的《卜算子·咏梅》时也禁不住开怀大笑。

这个“他”但是身高八尺的大汉呢！却不知为什么你被这些娇羞的.花簇拥着，看上去也不感觉生硬。

你你是否还记得那一年除夕，你和我的承诺吗？大家企业机构的出行，使你一拖再拖不可以回归。

于麦克风当中，大家承诺好啦，我一定等着你回来，肯定不可以入睡。

却在次日早晨从睡梦中醒来，看见你又朝我笑。

我怪你没要我。

你无可奈何地笑着：“打都打过去了，你没醒，是我炔么方法。

”一面又塞帮我一把大白兔。

你走后，她们都不许我吃糖了。

说成糖令我长胖。

但是她们不知道，你给的糖，基本上甜了我的童年。

五年级的那一年，也是很早以前，早到天边只漏出一丝光来。

我迷迷糊糊的被大大家推醒，一路牵着，踏过无人的街头，踏过细细长长大马路，来到雪白的大厦。

谁都没预料到的事。

大家都觉得过早了，过早了，总该再一起过个年啊！我迷惘地看见被裹在全透明塑料薄膜里的你。

容貌有一些看不清楚，颈部则是向往后仰着垫片嘴也是张着的。

我也不知道在那一刻你是有多么的的不甘心墟片不情愿地吐出来最终的一口气啊！你的孩子，你的两个女儿，还有我，大家都没在你的身边呢！你看你，也是那样，谁也没有通告一声。

一大清早垫片就兀自离开了。

就在我的睡梦中，走得没有了踪迹。

之前早晨夹带着一股风便冲入了你家门口。

看着你案上，新摘的茉烙爆抬头看了眼那樽极大的观音像带上慈悲的眼光，把新摘的花所有倒入你白酒坛子里说成要让你泡酒。

吃完几颗你刚从葡萄架上剪来的红提。

从你的袋子里掘金一般翻找到大白兔，一直到腻得想吐才不要吃。

这种都没了。

就好像一朝一夕间，江山就换了代。

沒有谁可以使你那盆茉莉开得香盈满室了，那葡萄架没多久也拆了，乃至连你住的地区也被拆了复建，现如今房子屹立，再也不会那一片宽阔。

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I got a perfect score on my essay! I was so stoked!So, if you ever have to write an essay for your English exam, just remember to have fun with it, use your imagination, and write from your heart. You got this, guys!篇2Oh my goodness, have you heard about the 2022 National Grade A English exam? It was totally awesome! I'm going to tell you all about it!First of all, the reading part was super fun. We read a story about a boy named Tom who went on a magical adventure to a faraway land. It was so exciting to follow along with his journey and answer questions about what happened. I made sure to read carefully and think about each answer before circling it on my paper.Next, the listening section was really cool. We got to hear different people talking about their hobbies, like playing soccer or painting. I had to listen carefully and choose the correct answer based on what they said. It was a little tricky, but I managed to get through it by paying close attention.The writing part was probably my favorite. I got to write a story about a superhero who saves the day. I made sure to use lots of descriptive words and make my story really exciting. I even included a funny joke at the end to make the examiner smile.Overall, I had a blast taking the 2022 National Grade A English exam. I worked hard and did my best on every section. I can't wait to see my score and show my friends how well I did. English is so much fun, and I can't wait to keep learning and improving. Bring on the next exam, I'm ready for it!篇3Oh my gosh, guys! Have you heard about the 2022 National Grade A English Exam? I just got my hands on the full score essay analysis, and let me tell you, it's amazing!So, first things first, the essay prompt was about the importance of friendship. You know, like how friends can help you when you're feeling down, or how they can make you laugh when you're feeling sad. Super cute, right? Anyway, the key to acing this essay was to talk about personal experiences and use lots of examples to support your ideas.The essay structure was also really important. You had to start with an introduction where you introduce the topic and your main idea. Then, in the body paragraphs, you had to give examples and explain why they were important. And finally, in the conclusion, you had to wrap everything up and restate your main points.Oh, and can we talk about vocabulary? The examiners were really looking for students to use a variety of words and phrases to make their writing more interesting. So make sure to spice up your essay with some cool vocab!Overall, the 2022 National Grade A English Exam was all about expressing yourself and showing off your writing skills. Remember to keep it fun and engaging, and you'll be sure to get that full score! Good luck, everyone!篇4Oh my gosh, guys! I am so excited to talk about the full marks essay in the 2022 National Grade A English exam!First of all, let me tell you about the topic of the essay. It was all about the importance of helping others. The essay was asking us to share our thoughts on why it is important to lend a helping hand to those in need. Such an important topic, right?In my essay, I talked about how helping others can make us feel happy and fulfilled. I also mentioned how showing kindness and compassion can make the world a better place. It's like when you share your toys with a friend or help a classmate with their homework - it just feels good to help out!I also included some examples from real life to support my points. Like how I helped my neighbor carry her groceries up the stairs, or how my class came together to raise money for a charity. These examples really helped to strengthen my argument and make my essay more convincing.And let me tell you, guys, I made sure to use lots of fancy words and phrases to make my essay sound super smart! I used words like "compassion" and "altruism" to show off my vocabulary skills. I even threw in a quote from a famous person to make my essay sound even more impressive!Overall, I am super happy with how my essay turned out. I think I really nailed the topic and put together a well-structured and convincing argument. I can't wait to see my score when the results come out!So, remember guys, always be kind and lend a helping hand to those in need. It's not just good for them, it's good for you too!Let's make the world a better place, one good deed at a time. Go team kindness!篇5Hey guys, have you ever wondered how to get full marks in the 2022 National Grade A English exam? Today, let's break it down together!First of all, make sure to read the instructions carefully and understand what the question is asking for. Don't rush into writing without a clear plan in mind. Take your time to brainstorm ideas and make a rough outline before starting your essay.Next, focus on your introduction. Start with a catchy hook to grab the reader's attention and then clearly state your thesis. Your thesis should summarize the main point of your essay and give the reader an idea of what to expect.In the body paragraphs, make sure to provide specific examples and evidence to support your points. Use transition words to connect your ideas and make your essay flow smoothly. Remember to stay on topic and avoid going off on tangents.For the conclusion, restate your thesis and summarize your main points. 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Bye-bye!篇7Hi guys, I'm gonna analyze the full marks essay in the English test of the national primary school exam 2022. The essay was super awesome and I'll break it down for you.First of all, the essay had a great introduction where the writer introduced the topic in a clear and interesting way. They grabbed the reader's attention right away!Then, the body paragraphs were amazing! Each paragraph had a main idea and supporting details that explained it really well. The writer used examples and personal experiences to make their points even stronger.The conclusion was also on point. The writer summed up their main points and restated their opinion in a creative way. It left a lasting impression on the reader.In terms of language, the essay had a good mix of simple and complex sentences. The vocabulary was impressive and the grammar was spot on. It was clear that the writer had a strong grasp of the English language.Overall, this essay was a solid example of how to write a top-notch piece. It had a clear structure, well-developed ideas, and excellent language skills. I hope this analysis helps you guyswith your own writing! Keep practicing and you'll ace your English exams too!篇8Yo, guys! Today I'm gonna share with you the analysis of the full marks essay in the 2022 National Grade A English test. So buckle up and let's dive into it!The essay topic was about "My Favorite Book" and the writer chose to talk about their love for Harry Potter. They started off by introducing the book and its author, J.K. Rowling. Then they went on to explain why they love the book so much, talking about the magical world, the interesting characters, and the exciting adventures.The writer also mentioned how the book has inspired them to be brave, to stand up for what they believe in, and to never give up. They shared some of their favorite quotes from the book and talked about the life lessons they have learned from reading it.The essay was well-organized, with clear paragraphs and good transitions between them. The writer used a variety of vocabulary and sentence structures, showing off their Englishskills. They also included some examples and personal anecdotes to make their essay more engaging.Overall, this essay was a great example of how to write a strong and engaging piece of writing. It had a clear focus, good structure, and interesting content. It's no wonder it got full marks!So there you have it, folks! If you want to score big in your English tests, take a page out of this writer's book and pour your heart into your writing. Good luck!篇9Well, hello everyone! Today I’m gonna talk about the 2022 National Grade A English test and how to get a perfect score. Are you ready? Let’s go!First of all, make sure you understand all the vocabulary and grammar in the test. 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滥觞于家庭与社会传统的期望正失去它们的借鉴意义。

但面对看似无垠的未来天空，我想循卡尔维诺“树上的男爵”的生活好过过早地振翮。

我们怀揣热忱的灵魂天然被赋予对超越性的追求，不屑于古旧坐标的约束，钟情于在别处的芬芳。

但当这种期望流于对过去观念不假思索的批判，乃至走向虚无与达达主义时，便值得警惕了。

与秩序的落差、错位向来不能为越矩的行为张本。

而纵然我们已有翔实的蓝图，仍不能自持已在浪潮之巅立下了自己的沉锚。

“我的生活故事始终内嵌在那些我由之获得自身身份共同体的故事之中。

”麦金太尔之言可谓切中了肯綮。

人的社会性是不可祓除的，而我们欲上青云也无时无刻不在因风借力。

社会与家庭暂且被我们把握为一个薄脊的符号客体，一定程度上是因为我们尚缺乏体验与阅历去支撑自己的认知。

而这种偏见的傲慢更远在知性的傲慢之上。

在孜孜矻矻以求生活意义的道路上，对自己的期望本就是在与家庭与社会对接中塑型的动态过程。

而我们的底料便是对不同生活方式、不同角色的觉感与体认。

生活在树上的柯希莫为强盗送书，兴修水利，又维系自己的爱情。

他的生活观念是厚实的，也是实践的。

倘若我们在对过往借韦伯之言“祓魅”后，又对不断膨胀的自我进行“赋魅”，那么在丢失外界预期的同时，未尝也不是丢了自我。

蓝图上的落差终归只是理念上的区分，在实践场域的分野也未必明晰。

譬如当我们追寻心之所向时，在途中涉足权力的玉墀，这究竟是伴随着期望的泯灭还是期望的达成？在我们塑造生活的同时，生活也在浇铸我们。

既不可否认原生的家庭性与社会性，又承认自己的图景有轻狂的失真，不妨让体验走在言语之前。

用不被禁锢的头脑去体味切斯瓦夫·米沃什的大海与风帆，并效维特根斯坦之言，对无法言说之事保持沉默。

用在树上的生活方式体现个体的超越性，保持婞直却又不拘泥于所谓“遗世独立”的单向度形象。

2021年上半年英语六级考试作文赏析

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【篇一】垃圾分类The resources of the earth are limited. We should cherish and cherish these resources. So we're going to do garbage sorting, and reuse the available resources again.At home, remind everybody garbage classification, water bottles, cans, such as waste paper packed together to sell, resources recycling, and made money, the waste batteries, cartridges, etc in the recycling bins. In school, you can reuse and reuse garbage, put in two different trash cans, one is recyclable and one is unrecyclable. Learn from your classmates and discuss ways to classify rubbish. In the suburbs, we will use two bags to classify garbage, pick up the garbage that we see and classify it, so that it is the best young pioneers. This allows you to easily categorize.Everyone is sorting garbage, and the earth is beautiful. We will see the thick wood, the clear water, the blue sky and the blue sea, everyone has a sweet smile.地球的资源是有限的，我们要好好地爱护和珍惜这些资源。

优秀作文及赏析

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新OG作文范文赏析(六)
以下是小编整理的新OG作文范文赏析，希望对大家有帮助!
(六)Can success be disastrous?
Success can be disastrous when people are kept in ignorance by the favorable outcome. Who would have guessed that Industrial Revolution can not only improve the productivity, but also lead to series of environmental problems? Someone even asserts that Industrial Revolution is mentioned in the same breath with the Meteorites Impact which wiped out a large fraction of life. We can exemplify this through history.
Throughout history, people paid a heavy price for the nuclear power which is considered as the most efficient and powerful energy. The Chernobyl disaster was a nuclear reactor accident that occurred on 26, April, 1986 at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in Ukraine. It is considered to be the worst nuclear power plant disaster in history and only level 7 event on the International Nuclear Event Scale. It resulted in a severe release of radioactivity following a massive power excursion that destroyed the reactor. Some people died in the initial steam explosion, but most deaths form the accidents were caused by radiation poisoning. The 2005 reports prepared by Chernobyl Forum, led by the International Atomic Agency and World Health Organization, said that it attributed 56 direct deaths and estimated that there may be 4000 extra cancer deaths among the approximately 60000 most highly exposed people. When first atom bomb was set off over Hiroshima, nuclear power, innovation in clean energy, brought us disaster even though it is only used in the power plants.
In 1929, America showed a strong indication of economy recovery by domestic consumer credit which is the primary impetus behind the rapid economic development. People in America made blind investment and irrational construction for the reason that bull market set in, leading a disproportions in the economy. Merchants were deceived by the prevailing prosperity, enlarging manufacturing need and setting forward by the increased capital. Unfortunately, Great Depression was coming. The crash triggered the unemployment even suicides. The stocks slumped, extensively affecting all the USA even the whole Capital World. The Great Depression had a devastating effect in virtually every country, rich and poor. Personal income, tax revenue, profit and prices dropped, while trade plunged by 1/2 to 2/3. Unemployment in US rose to 25% and in some countries rose as high as 33%. There exists crisis in the future development of economy under the surface of its success. Economy recovery in US, considered as a huge success, brought infinite harm to the nation even the world.
Success, only a result of the process, may invoke a disaster suffering thousands of people when we are hoodwinked by the immediate and present success.
案例二：
Achieving a success should be in a altruistic and pure way. Otherwise, it will cause an unexpected consequence. In the Iraq war, for instance, the US army has overthrown the Iraq government quickly, which is an enormous success, but the result of it is immeasurable. We can see local arms attack the US army itself endlessly, making the casualty rising everyday. In addition, the Iraq people have landed in great misery suffering a great trauma both mentally and physically. So many bloody fats tell us a success can be a disaster if the original purpose is evil.
Moreover, though sometimes our design is good, the people with malicious intent high likely utilize our achievement, Which may make it a curse.。