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托福口语12个经典例子
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下面店铺就为大家整理了一些托福口语万能例子，希望能够帮助到同学们。
万能例子一：环保There’s no trees, no grass in my community. It's very bare. So I have decided to give several hours each month to plant trees and grass in my community. After several years, there will be a lot of trees and grass in my community. It's very charming environment. You can imagine how comfortable it can be, just relax yourself on the grass, when sun is setting down and birds in the trees are singing. Second, Air pollution and noisy pollution are serious in my community. Planting trees and grass can reduce pollution.万能例子二：运动Doing exercise every day is helpful to students' health. I think health will go with us for a long life if we insist on exercising everyday. It is helpful for us to focus the energy on study and work. Second, doing exercise is the best way to relax. It helps us to reduce stress and release tension.万能例子三：听音乐Music is also the best way to help me escape stress and trouble. You know, stress is the biggest enemy of the health. Music can bring me lots of pleasure and turn my blue mood to a bright one. When I am listening music, I can forget all the difficulties of stress life.万能例子四：合作与交流To succeed in the world, we should cooperate with others. The ability and the knowledge of one person are limited. How to cooperate with others is important to our success.万能例子五：增长知识和扩大视野It may be helpful to increase our knowledge and widen our views.万能例子六：减少压力The games can also reduce the stress and pressure of the adults. Great pressure may cause lots of illness, for example, high blood pressure, physiological problem, and so on.Through the game, the adults can feel easy and happy.万能例子七：发展能力Playing games can be helpful to develop some skills, such as how to cooperate with partners, how to get along with others and so on. All of the skills are the key qualities needed in our daily lives.万能例子八：难忘的事Well, one very important event in my life is a camping trip to countryside. If I could go back there, I really appreciate it.万能例子九：互相帮助We can help each other. We I fall in trouble, I can get help from my companion in time. The most important is that my companion can provide me some useful advice to avoid some accidents.万能例子十：重要人物If I could create a new holiday to honor a person, I would honor Edison. He is one of the greatest inventors that I respect. He is very brilliant. You know, he invented thousands of useful products, such as light bulb, phonograph, storage battery, telegraph system and so on. Without light bulb, we maybe live ina dark world at night. He has done great contribution to human.If I could meet a famous athlete, I would choose to meet Yao Ming. Firstly, he is an excellent angel for china. In a sense, he brings the beautiful aspects of China into the world. Second, he is very nice and funny. in interviews you can see his good characteristics. He is always good temper. He seldom was angry for little thing. Furthermore, recently, he subscribes amount of money for SARS research. He has set a perfect example for all young people, both in china and the rest of the world.万能例子十一：计算机First, while traveling, It's necessary to communicate with my friends, my parents and my lover. You know, telephone bills are more expensive than internet communication. Taking my notebook computer can save me a lot of telephone bills. Second, I can save my pictures in my notebook computer after taking a picture. When I'm back home, I can share them with my family and friends. Third, a year is a long time. I need to spend part time on work and study. Without my notebook computer, I don’t know how I kill my time.万能例子十二：旅游地方I think, he should go Su Zhou Park. It has very beautiful environment. There are lots of trees, grass and fresh air. You can imagine how comfortable it can be, just relax yourself on the grass, when you are tired. Around the park, there are many famous restaurants that offer the best food in the China. The most important, is that the people in city are very nice and friendly. When the foreigner needs help, they would like to help him. Thus, I strongly recommend that foreign visitors should visit Su Zhou Park.【托福口语12个经典例子】。
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七夕，古今诗人惯咏星月与悲情。
吾生虽晚，世态炎凉却已看透矣。
情也成空，且作“挥手袖底风”罢。
是夜，窗外风雨如晦，吾独坐陋室，听一曲《尘缘》，合成诗韵一首，觉放诸古今，亦独有风韵也。
乃书于纸上。
毕而卧。
凄然入梦。
乙酉年七月初七。
-----啸之记。
第一篇2009.09.19Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgroundsI strongly disagree that it is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than do build recreational facilities. I think such recreational facilities as swimming pool, playground, are crucial to people as mass consumption. Therefore they are more important than art museums and music performance.Although art museums and music performance provide us one opportunity to escape the daily pressure, art museums and music performance generally need certain appreciative ability to enjoy. For example, when you see the painting, Mona Lisa, you probably just consider the woman as a beauty rather than knowing how she is beautiful and why the painting is quite well-known. In contrast, everyone can enjoy in playground and most people can go to swimming pool. Hence, the government should satis fy most people’s wish.I think recreational facilities are also fine means of relaxation and decompression. They are more closely linked to our daily life. For example, when I feel depressed, I usually like to walk on the playground instead of appreciating masterpieces; when I want to do entertainment, I probably prefer seeing a movie rather than watching a music performance. So the mass consumption for relaxation and decompression is recreational facilities. Art museums and music performance center are less important.In addition, we have the opportunity to play sports by a recreational facility, further helping us keep healthy. For instance, Swimming pools are essential in summer. People usually do not prefer playing sports such as running, playing basketball in a hot day. Therefore, they generally like to stay at home and open air-conditions. If things go onlike this, they will inevitably get sick. But a swimming pool offers us a good facility to take exercise. Hence the government should spend money on such a recreational facility first.As far as I am concerned, although there is no denying that art museums and art performance are beneficial to people to some extent, I think spending money on recreational facilities is more important. 第二篇Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching?Many people nowadays are crazy about cartoon films and fantasy movies while some people are only fond of movies that can teach us something about real life. In my opinion, although movies teaching something in reality are worth watching, it is unfair to say that they are the only meaningful movies. Cartoon films and fantasy movies are another two kinds of movies that worth watching.Admittedly, people really benefit from movies that teach us something about real life. For instance, a boy overwhelmed by a sense of despair may turn to be positive about his life after watching the movie Forrest Gump, since he may be deeply moved by the plot that no matter how hard the life is, Gump just keeps running forward. However, it is inappropriate to assert that those movies are the only ones worth watching.Cartoon films are worth watching, for they give us a good way to relax. For one thing, the appearances of cartoon images are always quite funny. For example, a bunny may have two extremely long ears and its teeth are often amazingly big; a bird may be soaring with two tiny wings and a huge mouth. These animated images can easily make people laugh. For another, the fancy frames in animation are also enjoyable. Commonly, children are attracted and cheered by an exquisite 3-dimensional wedding room or a palace in animated movies. So, I am convinced that people really relax by watching cartoon films.Fantasy movies are also worth watching, for they allow us to think of new ideas. Take the famous fantasy movie Alice's Adventures in Wonderland for example. In this movie, cats can fly in the air and the suddenly disappear; a girl can become a giant in a second after drinking a special potion; poker cards can become trained soldiers with wizard's spells. Fantasy movies help progress our thinking and inspire people to solve problems with new method in daily life, so theyare also worthy of watching.As far as I am concerned, it is absurd to believe that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. As another two important art forms, cartoons and fantasy movies are equally important to our lives and should be given adequate respect. 第三篇People should buy things made in their own country, even if the price is higher than same things made somewhere elseAlong with the thriving boost in technology , every country has been developing their native economic in a ever-increasing speed. Living within this situation, what should we do? To buy things made in own country or to buy products somewhere else. To my personal preference, I decide my choice based on the quality of this product I buy.Some people may contend that buying commodity made in one’s own country could be more likely to promote economic boost. Especially in developing countries, with such amount of financial income from both purchasing products from indigenous people and exporting goods to foreign countries, they must have a flying development . We can not deny the fact that some products made in other countries are of higher quality than native manufacture, so we should make wise decision to make our choice not merely concerned with whether this behavior is patriotic.On the other hand, we must predict the result of what if we bought a poor quality product. Supposing that if the commodity we bought just for few days is broken, how will we feel? Even though it is produced in one’s own country, who encountered this situation will definitely avoid buying the outputs from the same manufacturer. Hence what happened in the end is that people will buy the commodity with higher quality.Based on the analysis above, we should take into more factors into consideration when we select commodity, ranging from its price to quality. Rather than just sightless to buy native products out of patriotism regardless of its price.第四篇People would be happier if they had fewer possessionsI really want to say, this topic is little confuse to me and after seeing few samples, I feel no direction, so please help me correct and offer some advices! Thanks!Nowadays, people might think that if they had fewer properties, they would be more happier, it probably right in such a material, greed and complex world. However, Personally speaking, I do not agree with the over-statement, there are several necessary things we can not lose, which including the relationship with family and friends, our life companion as well as money, we can not feel happy if these matters get fewer. I will concrete my view as following.The first plain truth is that the relationship with family members and friends is necessary for each of us. The most valueble emotion we have since borned is the love in family, they always suportive and giving without asking pay back, their careness anytime and anywhere. Our best friends, those who would share joy and sorrow with us, encouraging us when we fall. Their exsistence give us the biggest happiness in the world, I can not say what I can be with fewer relation with them. For instance, during the time Spring Festival, our family would reunion and having meal togerther, the happy atmosphere would make us excited, we are all appreciate the time being together. Another evidence I would explain is the one who company us for life, we can not happy if we lost him or her. He or she is the most close person besides our family, no matter what misery happens, our lovers is always keep stiking with us together. There is a couple of youngs, Lee and Caro, they came from different countries, but they love each other. One day, the unfortunate accident happened on Caro, she disabled since then, and life difficult and pain fill with her life. However, Lee is there, fully taking care of Caro since the accident, although Lee has to earn for live and caring of Caro, he is still happy with doing so. In this inspire case, I can not say what Caro would be if she without Lee.Moreover, money is still important to everyone of us. Under such a sociaty polarized towards gaining money, we can not do anything without or having little money, which reminds me during my childhood,I can spent only 0.05$ for an ice cream, but it costs 0.5$ today, almost10 times more than before！The speedy increase on general price force us to make more money to pay for living, education, and rent of house. Thus, money is the fundamantal need.In conclusion, the statement of people would happier if they hadfewer possession is obviously wrong. I still need relationship with family and friends, the companion in our life, and certainly amount of money, only we possess these things, can we enjoy our life and get more happier.第五篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children’s education rather than on universities.Throughout the history of human civilization, education have played, and will continue to play, an indispensible role in society. However, a seemingly plausible standpoint that the authorities should give higher priority to young children's education than to universities - is by no means absolutely right. As a matter of fact, colleges or universities acts as a far more significant role in the success of countries. Probably the most important reason is that universities can create cutting-edge technology. Currently, technology is one of effective, if not the most effective, guarantee for the comprehensive development of countries. If our government provides adequate funds to universities, sophisticated innovations, like HEV or solar cell, could be created. Rather, these innovations could immediately bring about numerous economic prosperity for countries, when they are traded as commodities. In sharp contrast, it is hard to imagine that children could conceive any realistic and feasible equipment, no matter how many budget you give. In view of the promotion to technology, the authorities should focus its budgets on universities primarily. Another supporting rationale is that investing universities is more economical. Granted, superb children's education will pay off eventually, but university education can work immediately and efficiently. Survey results have consistently shown that even though a child can gain desirous education, we have to wait for more than ten years till he/she could practically benefit the society who have cultivated him/she. Besides, we have to take the risk that some children would spoil our society when they are grown up, rather than doing what we anticipate before. In contrast, undergraduates can reward the country just after their graduation, and the risk is relatively low.Yet another reason why our government should invest more on universities comes from employment. It is well accepted that the good university education tend to help graduates hunt their desirous jobreadily, which not only can benefit individuals and countries, but can substantially enhance the solidarity and harmony of society as well. However, you may fail to find a lesson directly concerning employable skills in young children's classes.Therefore, the promotion for technology, the immediate rewards, and the assistance for employment are all compelling reason to explain why our government should focus its budgets more on universities, rather than on young children's education.第六篇Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.The topic of people’s view on whether movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad guys are being punished can be approached from several different angles due to its complexity. Some people assert that it’s boring to see movies which have similar plot, while others have negative attitudes toward this idea. Despite many diversified opinions aired by different people based on their own favorite, there can be no doubt that movies and televisions which have a conventional plot isn’t my first choice. The first reason that I want to put forward is that many people watch movies and TV programs just for fun and relaxation. Therefore, they don’t like movies with happy endings and predictable stories all the time. Taking my own experience as an example, I like to see movies with my friends every month and we always have a lot of fun when we discuss the interesting plots together. During that period of time, I felt relaxed and forgot all the stresses and strains of my job. As you can see, seeing entertaining movies is really a valuable way for me to release stresses. That’s why I am greatly convinced that movies and televisions shouldn’t always show audience that good people would have reward and bad people would be punished in the end.In the second place, movies and TV programs can have an invisible influence on viewing children’s thinking. Therefore, if movies and televisions always show children that good people would have reward, they will believe that no matter how small a good thing they have done should have equal return. Otherwise, they will not have a motive to do some public service. On the contrary, children not take existing movies and TV programs too seriously today just because they have seen a variety of movies. Thus, they have learned how to distinguish between unrealistic stories and realistic world.Admittedly, movies and TV programs which always show that being a good people would gain more benefits than being a bad guy may teach moral values to the public. In this way, we can live in a peaceful society and people would be more friendly. However, I insist that movies and TV program should show different topics to the audience due to the numerous advantages it would bring about.Taking all the aspects into account, I believe that all sorts of programs are worth watching and peo ple can benefit from various topics. That’s not to say, of course, others points of view are without merit. However, I hold that the reasons I have provided in favor of my standpoints are stronger.第七篇Dear all, please correct my essay. many thanks in advance.It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the loss of old friends.With the rapid development and progress of society and technology, there are increasing numbers of people who concern about whether it’s good to move to a new country but lose contact with old friends. Some people assert that people can gain many benefits when they move to a new environment, while others have negative attitude toward this idea. Despite many diversified opinions aired by different people based on their own experience, there can be no doubt that moving to a new country can bring many advantages and people can still maintain friendship with old friends.The first thing I want to put forward is that people nowadays have many chances to move to a new city for various reasons. However, people wouldn’t lose touch with their friends due to the convenient public transportation and the ubiquitous internet. Take my own experience as an example, I moved to a big city in order to find more well-paid jobs. During this period of time, I can chat or have a video call with my intimate friends on the internet. What’s more, it’s an easy task for me to take a high-speed rail to visit my old friends on the weekend. That’s why I am greatly convinced that people wouldn’t lose their friendship while they move to a new city.The other thing worth mentioning is that many aspects of our life will benefit from moving to a new place. Moving can help individual to explore a suitable place for him and interact with diverse people around the world. What’s more, learning distinctive cultures and interesting histories from different countries not only broaden our globe horizons, it also provide opportunities for us to make newfriends. There is no gainsaying that moving to a new environment can bring more advantages to us than living in the same place. Admittedly, sometimes it’s good to live in the same place where people may have many close friends and they can have many chances to chat face to face. Since people familiar with surrounding area, they can have a stable life than others who moving out of their hometown. However, I insist that people who moving to a new place wouldn’t regret later due to the numerous benefits it would bring about. Taking all aspects into account, I believe that people would gain many advantages after moving to a new city. That’s not to say, of course, others points of view are without merit. However, I hold that the reasons I have provided in favor of my standpoints are stronger.第八篇 A lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more vacation time is better than a high-paying job with long hours that would give you less vacation timePerhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as jobs, because they affect everybody in their daily lives. They have caused wide concern all over the world. There are various responses people have on this issue. Some people hold the opinion that a job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time. However, other people disagree with this statement. From my point of view, I tend to think that we should pay more attention to the vacation time, but not concentrate ourselves on the salaries too much.In other words, a low-paying job with more vacation time is better than a high-paying job with less spare time. There are various reasons why I maintain this viewpoint, and among those reasons are two important ones.The first and foremost reason is that people can have more time to pursue their own interests. With the development of science and technology ,an increasing number of people, especially young people, have come to realize that life is colorful and they should use the finit time to pursue the infinite interests. It must be admitted that, on no account can we ignore the value of the vacation time, which can give us a good opportunity to do whatever we want to do. That is to say, it can benefit ourselves and our family members, even the society as a whole. For example, we can enjoy moives with our friends. Or we can travel abroad to appreciate the beautiful sceneries. In this way, people can relax and relieve pressure from work and study. As a result, they will work more efficently and effectively. In contrast, if a job occupiestoo much of our spare time, although it may offers us high salaries, we can not have opprtunites to enjoy our colorful lives.Another essential reason is that the salary is not the only thing we should pay attention to. On the one hand, there are many other things which we should take into consideration. For example, the work condition, the chances of promotion. On the other hand, according to a recent survey, 89% of people are beginning to realize that though the salary plays a great role in choosing jobs, we should also put emphasis on the vacation time, which is of particular significance to people in recent years. It can be given a concrete example. My friend John, used his vacation time to acuqire knowledge as much as possible, such as the computer skills and the marketing strateges. Because of his outstanding abilities, he became the manager of his company.Of course, as the proverb says, ’every coin has two sides’. We should give a comprehensive consideration to this issue. Then we may find that the job with high-paying and less vacation time also has advantages to some extent. For instance, people can possess enough money which can be used to buy many things. What’s more, they can be attracted to work harder.To sum up, if all those factors are contemplated, we may find that the advantages of the job with low-paying and more vacation time carry more weight than the one with high-paying and less vacation time. So, from what we have discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is advisable to choose a job with more vacation time, though it may offer lower salary.第九篇Young people should try several different jobs before they take their careers in a long termPerhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as jobs, because they affect everybody in their daily lifes. They have caused wide concern all over the world. There are various responses people have on this issue. Some people hold the opinion that young people should try several different jobs before they take careers in the long term. However, other people oppose to this statement. From my point of view, I think it is better for young people to try different jobs before they choose their careers, because I think it has many advantages. There are various reasons why I maintain this viewpoint. And among those reasons are two important ones.The first and foremost reason is that by trying several different jobs, people can get a lot of experience which is of particular importance to people , especilly to young people. According to a recent survey, 89% of people are beginning to realize that, with the development of science and technology, they should grasp many skills which can help them succeed in the future. For example, the computer skills, the communication skills, and the most important of all , the interpersonal skills. It must be admitted that, on no account can we ignore the value of all those experience and skills. As long as people get the experience and grasp those skills, believe it or not, they can find good jobs in the long term, which can benefit themselves, their family members, even the society as a whole.Another reason is that from those different jobs, young people can have a better understanding about themselves, such as their interests, their advantages and disadvantages. People from all walks of life, especially those who just graduate from universities, tend to think that it is of significant important to know themselves. If people realize their advantages, they can choose careers which can help them develop their merits. In contrast, if people do not try several defferent jobs before they choose their careers, they may find it hard to realize themselves deeply. As a result, they may choose career at random which can have bad effects on their development. It can be given a concrete example. My brother had tried several jobs before. Then he choosed a job which he was very interested in. And now he is a successful businessman. However,my friend Lucy, did not try some different jobs before, and she is facing several problems during her work.Of course, as the proverb says,’every coin has two sides’. We should give a comprehensive consideration to this issue. Then we may find that trying different jobs also has kinds of disadvantages to some extent. For instance, people may waste a lot of time to change their jobs. However, if they do some particular jobs, they may pay more attention to their job s. What’s more, people may not concentrate themselves on jobs. In other words, they may not be responsible for their jobs.To sum up, if all those factors are contemplated, we may find that the advantages of trying defferent jobs may carry more weight than its disadvantages. So, from what we have discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is advisible for young people to try several different jobs before they choose their careers.第十篇The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teacher’ssalariesWhen it comes the controversial issues that increase teacher’s treatment is the best to improve the quality of education in a country, owning to distinctive background and personal experience, divergent viewpoint will emerge. Some people think it is not sustainable ways to improve the quality of education. In my point of view, I strongly agree the statement that increases teacher’s salaries is the best way to elevate education quality.To begin with, the background of teacher is essential part when they teach students in the school. This is a denying the fact that teachers have to improve themselves in daily life, because they need to study new knowledge and skills. They should pay much money for books and tuition fee. For example, a computer programmer, they have to buy some books when they try to understand a new technology in this filed. To read books that it is a convenient way to assist them to learn it successfully.Moreover, there are need more and more teachers in the school by every year, and it is an effective way to improve the teacher salaries in order to attract many people to participate in the education career. For example, improving the teachers’ salaries to simulate them to work in the poor village or country, and teacher can make a better future if they will teach in a poor village. People cannot neglect that money can elevate the education quality.In contrast, there are some shortcomings that increase the teachers’ salaries in order to improve the education quality such as some teachers are not well-trained and high skilled, and it does not necessary to improve their salaries. They also do not have the capability to improve the education quality.To sum up, I agree with the statement that to raise salaries is the best way to improve education. It is of vital importance because it will motivate current professionals, encourage more potential talents to decide being teachers and show the sincerity of government to improve education.。
托福考试-万能独立写作模板(二)
托福考试万能独立写作模板一、开头：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目(排比结尾) ___________ has now caused wide public concern. People’s opinions are divergent on the complex and controversial issue based on their individual value systems.名言警句. Tempting and reasonable as it sounds, I assert that it is more sagacious to assert ___ Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones, ____, ______ and _______.With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))加上实例后表达观点（有实例）Confucian, one of the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers, has insightfully commented, “_________”. Therefore, I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment contributes to the quotation that ____.无实例：1)On account of ____, _____serves as a catalyst for______.2)People may be confronted with a dilemma between _____ and_____.二、正文：(因果+对比+举例)健康和安全、便利、经济、交流、幸福和情感、成功、环保、品格、科技、教育与培训、国家与文明正文开头句型：TS1: Initially, A plays an extraordinarily vital role in... Years of observing the human behavior enabled the public to conclude that ______ lies solely on _____.TS2: Equally, A further scrutiny of the issue would reveal that___TS3: Matching A and B is another essential factor, C.Further lending credence to my position is the fact that______其中TS3可从另一面论证：另一面也有优势或者这个方面有劣势However compelling these cases may sound, they cannot overshadow the significant role that __另一面_ plays in ________. ／cannot neglect the inferiorities.TS3的结尾：Therefore, too much emphasis on ____ is actually detrimental and may go contrary to the primary propose.1.段落开头(有关科技)：In spite of the extraordinary progress made in science and technology,problems remain in terms of _____.2.举例：I can think of no better illustration than the example of (典型例子)A case in point is that (不是很典型)________数据论证Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that __3.让步Agree or disagree:Admittedly, __赞成的观点___, to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ ____不赞成的____has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacksOn no account can we support the point that 我们绝不可能同意的观点是4.排比句句型✓Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________; only via (by/through /with/when/after) ___can we ________; and onlyvia(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we_______✓It is A that...; it is A that...; and it is A that……三、结尾Therefore, due to the mentioned reasons, all of these arguments relates to form the persuasive argument that加上分论点的概述各类句型：1.因果On account of/owing to/due to+ NFor the reason that/as/since+句子derive/arise/stem from 来源于ascribe A to B 归结于2.条件If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________3.让步Despite the fact that/regardless of4.倒装1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__3) So +adj+主谓倒装+that__4) Not only 主谓倒装but also...5) On no account 主谓倒装(决不....)5.强调It is/was.... that/who(m)....6.排比句句型1) Only via (by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________; only via (by/through /with/when/after) ___can we ________; and only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we_______2) It is A that...; it is A that...; and it is A that……7.十大副词Considerably Invariably Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly Increasingly exceedingly/exceptionally Insightfully Regrettably Effectively and efficiently Gradually and eventually Readily1.seems to be a propensity inherent in human nature2.the spirit of dissatisfaction constitutes the very force that haspropelled human civilization forward in the course of human history3.We would be able to hit the pinnacle of life.4.I cling to an unshakable belief that our literature and our history are arich quarry of moral literacy, and we should mine that quarry.w of jungle 强者生存1)选择配偶mate preference 2)选择老大dominant leader 3)食物分配resource distribution6.one sees further when standing upon the shoulders of past greatgiants7.No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.8.Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.9.There is a growing tendency10.In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority ofchildren seem to____11."The people who get on in this world are the people who get up andlook for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them." Writer12.to be absorb in 专心于13.to heap abuse on 辱骂谩骂14.to accommodate oneself to / to accustom oneself to 使某人适应15.to adjust/adapt oneself to 使自己适应于16.to be agitated about 对什么感到焦虑17.amuse oneself by 以什么自得其乐18.allure sb into 诱惑某人去19.be immersed in／be absorbed in 专注于重要vital/essential /indispensable (必不可少)有影响exert an extraordinarily positive/negative impact on促进facilitate, serve as a catalyst for 阻碍hamper, impede, hinder, serve as an obstacle for破坏削弱undermine追求be in pursuit of , pursue 努力做，endeavor to do, strive to do, strive for sth, spare no efforts to do 缺乏devoid of开拓视野broaden one’s view(s)/expand one’s horizon充满replete with沉浸在indulge themselves in培养cultivate/nourish/nurture/foster安静的Tranquil tranquility/solitude好处／弊端merit／demerit有争议的controversial／disputable／contentious有益的beneficial／conductive／instrumental趋势tendency／inclination去除eradicate／eliminate／remove灾难catastrophe／misfortune／disaster 危害jeopardize／endanger阻碍hinder／impede／obstruct欺骗deceive／defraud／cheat驱使prompt／spur／incite贪婪的acquisitive／materialistic自私的self-centered／inconsiderate冷漠的indifferent／apathetic过分的extravagant／excessive严厉的stringent／rigorous／rigid奇怪的eccentric／peculiar有抱负的aspirant／ambitious固有的inherent／innate恶化deteriorate／worsen／aggravate夸大exaggerate／overstate分辨distinguish／differentiate颁布enact／enforce不知足的insatiable许多numerous／countless优先give priority to / lay more stress on / attach great importance to 人口增长enjoy an upsurge of popularity平凡的mediocre。
托福写作备考仿写句子技巧2则实例分享讲解
托福写作备考仿写句子技巧2则实例分享讲解托福写作备考中仿写句子的练习技巧非常重要，许多同学本身的英语写作经验和积累都不足，今天给大家带来托福写作备考仿写句子技巧2则实例分享讲解,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
托福写作备考仿写句子技巧2则实例分享讲解托福写作仿写技巧作用简介托福写作备考中仿写技巧的重要性不用多说。
用一句话总结就是，通过仿写一些好的句式，考生可以在短时间内扩充自己独有的那套“写作模板”从而达到事半功倍的写作备考训练效果。
托福写作仿写技巧实例讲解实例1：It is inevitable for urbanization to bring us some sacrificelike the alienation of ourselves from nature.(伴随着城市化，我们不可避免的要做出一些牺牲，如忍受远离大自然之苦。
)仿写思路分析：1. 托福写作中必会出现“某某某事很重要”的句子，然而很多同学在描述时，却只能想到important，这肯定是不行的。
原句中“It is inevitable for .... to do sth. ”的形式主语句式真的再简单不过了，初中我们都学过，但却一定比你用important高大上了很多。
2. 这句话中的inevitable还可以换成如下形容词：significant，indispensable，crucial.... 它们都是用来表示重要性的常用形容词。
3. 给到大家两句仿写的句子，一个是关于环保的，一个是关于沟通的，这都是托福写作热门话题：A. It is crucial for people to take steps to keep theenvironment from deterioration, like taking public transportation instead ofdriving cars.(人们必然要采取些措施来防止环境恶化，如多乘坐公共交通工具而不是去开小汽车)B. It is inevitable for the old to havegeneration gap with their children.(对老年人来说，不可避免的会和他们的孩子之间有代沟。
托福独立写作主体段如何展开？摸清套路合理仿写高分模板
托福独立写作主体段如何展开?摸清套路合理仿写高分模板托福独立写作主体段写作最重要的是逻辑，要让我们的说理逻辑清晰，我们需要借鉴参考一些高分范文的写法，揣摩作者的写作思路和行文架构，尤其是主体段展开的方式。
来看看吧!托福独立写作主体段如何展开?摸清套路合理仿写高分模板题目：Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.立场：不同意理由：做作业的时候干别的很难集中精力，必定会影响效率【段落示例】[1] Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.[1] 主题句：It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.[2] 正面说理：This is because….[3] 反面说理：Conversely….[4] 引出例子：A good case in point is X’s experience.[5-6] 阐述例子： Content of the example【模板总结】It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. Thisis because A 对于 X 的重要性或者好处。
托福综合写作经典模板范例汇总
托福综合写作经典模板范例汇总在托福备考过程中，托福综合写作都是让备考学生一项非常头疼的难题，在这里店铺为大家搜集整理的一些新托福考考试写作的经典模板，希望大家能在灵活运用经典模板的基础上创作出具有个人特色的优秀托福作文。
托福综合写作经典模板范例(1)The lecture and the reading discuss ( ). The lecturer puts forward 3 pioints and effectively contradicts the opinions of the reading.First of all, the reading says that ( ). In contrast, the lecture claims that ( ). By this way, the lecture contradicts the first opinion of the reading.Second, the reading claims that ( ), while according to the lecture, this is not the case. The lecturer says that ( ). By casting doubt on an important peice of evidence of the reading, the lecture contradicts the second claim of the reading.Finally, the reading states that ( ), while the lecture claims that ( ). Thus the lecture refutes the last claim of the reading.托福综合写作经典模板范例(2)The lecture apparently refutes the points illustrated in the reading material. According to the professor, ________________.On the contrary, the reading contends an opposite stand that_____.The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that___________, which differs from the statement in the reading that_____.Another evidence the speaker adopts to contradict the passage is________. However, the reading states that_________.In the conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading. As the professor claims,________whereas the reading material holds that________.托福综合写作经典模板范例(3)The readi ng passage contends that… (详细的写) The listening material completely refutes the reading passage . It is pointed in the listening that ……(写出main idea 就行)First, the point, stated in the reading passage, is that … In contrast, the listening passage holds the opposite opinion and believes that ……Second, the reading passage contends that …… But the speaker in the listening says that …Third, the author, in the reading passage, believes that …… However, the lecturer in the listening argues that ……怎样合理使用托福写作模板第一，强大自己的英语基本功。
英语作文写作举例子的模板_托福满分英语作文5篇
英语作文写作举例子的模板_托福满分英语作文5篇关于”写作举例子“的英语作文模板5篇，作文题目：。
以下是关于写作举例子的托福英语模板，每篇作文均为满分模板带翻译。
高分英语作文1：中文翻译：万能作文模板2：中文翻译：满分英语范文3：写作举例子A mother may spend years raising her children, but she can't train young mothers to take care of them Their child a tyt may have been typing letters for ten years, but he may not be ableto type a minute by minute. A person who does a good job is the trainer I want to learn to fly an airplane from a pilot. He has encountered a lot of mechanical problems in the flight, and has never had an accident.I want to learn how to make money from talents, not everything It's the quality we pursue, not the general knowledge, or spent on a profession. I hope other people can learn the best from it, so that they can do the best.中文翻译：培训一个人去做一项工作是一项重要的任务，它需要良好的教育、工作经验和熟练的工作表现这三个要求，我认为最重要的是，一个潜在的职业培训师应该根据他或她以前的工作的质量来判断一个人可能受过良好的教育，但不能胜任一项工作知道如何治疗儿童疾病，但不能训练医学生进行外科手术会计师可以平衡公司的帐目，但不能帮助公司的管理人员投资他们的钱一个人可能有很多工作经验，但是不能把工作做好时间不是衡量质量的最好标准一个母亲可能会花上几年的时间来养育她的孩子，但不能训练年轻的母亲去照顾她们的孩子一个打字员可能已经打了2023年的信，但可能不会打字一分钟一分钟一个工作出色的人就是你想成为我想学习的培训师从一个飞行员那里驾驶飞机，他在飞行中遇到了很多机械问题，而且从未发生过事故，我想学习如何从人才那里赚钱，而不是在所有事情上形成一个带薪的投资经纪人，而是我们所追求的品质，而不是一般的知识，或者花在一个职业上，我希望其他人能从中学习到最好的东西，这样他们才能做到最好的也是。
新托福写作范文(热门4篇)
新托福写作范文第1篇Task：It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.托福写作模板范文参考：We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.新托福写作范文第2篇Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people saythat computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：Some universities require students to choose a variety of subjects; others only require students tospecialize in one subject. I deem the first one as the premier choice. Among countless factors,there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity that students should take classes in many subjects is that theycan make full use of the abundant resources that a university has to offer. A university has plentyof educational and research resources. It is a very good idea to make full use of these valuableassets while studying in the university. The best way to achieve this is to take a variety of subjectsas much as possible. Through learning these courses, a student can get access to knowledge andresources in different areas. On the contrary, if a student only specializes in one subject, he willnot have a chance to get access to other resources offered by the university.Another reason can be seen by every person is that by choosing many subjects students can broaden their knowledge and make a solid foundation for their future concentrated study. Whatever the student will concentrate on in his senior years in college, it is necessary that hechoose a wide range of subjects to build the knowledge foundation. Take the field of BusinessManagement for example, the student has to acquire knowledge in writing, accounting, economicsand human resource management before he can successfully start his major concentration argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because studentscan be more adaptable in their future career if they choose a variety of subjects during theiruniversity study. It is obvious that the development of modern society requires people with inter-disciplinary and comprehensive knowledge. If a student chooses a variety of subjects in hisuniversity study, and gained a breath and width of knowledge, he will be more adaptable to therequirement of the society, and be able to easily adjust to many kinds of jobs. This will benefit hisfuture career.In a word, taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that studentsshould take classes in many subjects in a university.新托福写作范文第3篇满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.新托福写作范文第4篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group ledby a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：There are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Differentpeople has different viewpoint. In my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. The argument for this view goes as follows:In the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. First, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. People can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. Second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. The people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. Third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.In the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. Thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. The traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. It will make the trip a little bit easy. Another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. With the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. I wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the Shanghai, China, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.In conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. Therefore, I stronglyagree that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.。
新托福写作-新托福考试
新托福写作-新托福考试新托福写作模板-新托福考试范文新托福的'写作不是很难的，多看一些写作的模板再加上自己多去练习练习，高分其实很容易的。
下面就是店铺给大家整理的新托福考试范文，希望对你有用!新托福写作模板篇1：演艺明星的高薪Nowadays, the annual incomes of many sports stars and film stars come to millions of dollars. Some people claim that their salaries are too high. Yet, in my opinion, such salaries are well deserved. They work hard to become famous, provide entertainment for us, and win honors for their countries.First, famous athletes and entertainers make painstaking efforts to achieve fame. Fame is a wonderful thing to have, but it seldom appears overnight. Famous people have worked hard for years to achieve their fame today and they have to continue their good work to maintain it. For their hard work, sports and entertaining stars deserve to be generously rewarded. Unfortunately, people tend to focus on the huge amounts of money made by them. They rarely appreciate the efforts that athletes and entertainers have to make in order to achieve the fame that they have today. For example, in order to win the first place in a 100-meter dash, an athlete has to cover hundreds of miles during training. Famous stars deserve their high salaries because they have worked hard.Second, sports and entertaining stars provide us with good entertainment. On weekends, many of us attend a football match that includes Beckham, see a movie that stars Julia Roberts, or go to a concert that features Celine Dion. These people help us make good use of our free time by entertaining us. As a result, we feelinspired as well as relaxed. In other words, we feel energetic again after attending the events. We even feel that we have more to enjoy in life and have new aspirations. For such reasons, these people are worth their high salaries.Third, athletes and entertainers win honors for their countries. For example, after four years’ hard work, many athletes win gold medals at the Olympics Games. They are able to make millions of dollars a year after the games. Such high salaries are justified, because these athletes have won honors for their countries in the most competitive arena and have made their people proud, something few people can even dream of. This is true for entertainers as well. Many actors and actresses receive high salaries after they have won Oscars or prizes at Cannes Films Festival. Those people also deserve high salaries, because they have made a name in films for their country and have made their country better known by people elsewhere in the world.All in all, famous athletes and entertainers merit their high salaries, for their hard work, entertainment they provide, and their contribution to their country. If I had a chance, I would be a famous star who can make millions of dollars a year.新托福写作模板篇2：电影比电视更有教育意义No matter who you are, you are definitely in a dire need for excitement and thrill. Then, a controversy might appear among the public whether citizens should only watch those movies that can teach something in real life. Some of you may only watch those movies that can help to expand one’s knowledge and reveal the life stories, however, I strongly disagree with the statement and I think there will be a variety of reasons to watch movies.Initially, entertainment is the principle reason for the entire world watching movies. Be it comedy, science-fiction, drama or action, movies are a medium of leisure and recreation for every single individual ranging from those on streets to the high and mighty residents in penthouses. Put it in another words, the greatest of all benefits of watching a movie is that it entertains you and calms your tumultuous heart down. Take me as an example. I feel very tired after the full devotion to my career in a week and there is no time for the gym and outdoor activities just because of the busy work schedules. Then, I will choose to lie on my couch and watch movies of many kinds with a bowl of munchies like popcorns and sodas during the weekends. By being engrossed in a comedy show that can evoke hearty laughs, I will encounter situations with a positive frame of mind. Besides, when watching the horror movies, I will feel excited, scared, and emotional during those two and a half hours, leading me to be transferred to a world far away from the reality. Obviously, no matter what kind of movies they are, they will be worth watching if they can entertain you.Another general concern about movies is that they can help fasten the bonds between families. More often than not, what audiences are more focused on, during the process of watching movies, is the time they spend with their families rather than the well-orchestrated plots or the life lessons they might disclose. Current citizens can afford to spend too much time having fun like traveling around the city or having a party because most of them are under huge pressure from the society and most of their time has to be occupied by a variety of professional tasks. However, watching movies won’t consume too much time, serving as a stress buster and lubricant to strengthen relationshipwith families. Almost at every weekend, I will hang out with my girlfriend to watch movies whatever the genre is and staying with each other at that moment can help shorten our mental distance and we can just hold hands of each other and feel so close between us. Accordingly, my personal experience can help explain how we spend with our families or lovers like watching movies matters more than what we can learn from the movies.In a word, I don’t think only those movies that tell us important life stories are worth watching. What I truly believe is those movies that can entertain audiences and provide viewers with a chance to stay with each other are more welcomed.新托福写作模板篇3：搬去新地方会失去老朋友吗As the technology of public transportation keeps advancing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, there occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sensible.Firstly, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends. To be more specific, the maintenance of friendship doesn’t lie in how far they l ive with each other and the development of technology has diversified the ways of interacting with friends. The invention of cellphones break the shackles caused by distance and overseas students can choose to communicate with their family members and friends through a variety of Apps like WeChat that makes video calls possible. Except for that, by looking at the pictures popping up all over the social media like Facebook, people can easily capture what is happening to their friends. For instance, my friend Selina took selfie in the Sydney Opera House a week ago and I would learnthat she was having fun in the Australia with her picture posted on the Instagram. Therefore, a wide range of advanced electronic gadgets can be used to sustain friendship.Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success. Restricted in a city for a long period, people may be trapped in a situation that would block their development and they can gain refreshing experience while immigrating to a new city. My friend of Mine named Michael served as a Market Analyst in a renewed company in Beijing. However, he couldn’t see any progress in recent years and then an opportunity comes out. Because of his five-year working experience, a foreign trade cooperation tried to recruit him as the Market Analyst because the firm was planning to start a new program. Then he grasped the chance and earn a challenging life that he likes even though he was required to work in Shanghai. Our relationship have not experienced any interruption and his strong ability of being adapted to the new environment helps him to make lots of new friends. Accordingly, moving to a new city can, occasionally, help to break the deadlock in our professions.Admittedly, it can be sensible that friends can be estranged owing to the long distance with each other. Specifically speaking, the chances to meet with each other will be limited a lot. However, as I just put, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-speed trains and airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is goodchoice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of living a different life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move.。
托福仿写 三篇仿写范文
范文一[Do you agree or disagree? People should take several different kinds of jobs before they tale a career in a long term.]Today’s economy is diverse and full of opportunities. While there are some people that are able to study a subject or skill and then upon graduation jump right into their career, more and more people are choosing a less traditional path to their careers. Before starting their careers, they try many different kinds of jobs. I believe having many different kinds of jobs helps establish a foundation for success in one’s future career.The most compelling reason that recent graduates nowadays are choosing to work many different kinds of jobs is because it helps them figure out what they truly want to do. People are realizing that if you find a career you love, you will not have to work a day in your life. In the long run, this is a very smart move. If people take the time to test out many different jobs, they will know which one is the job they want to do for the rest of their lives. I know many people in older generations that talk about how they did not have a choice in their career. They always explain how they started teaching or nursing simply because that was the best option. They are not happy with their careers and with regret that they could not choose the best career. Working many jobs helps young workers determine their future careers.In addition, gaining experience in many different kinds of jobs helps make people more competitive. When companies hire employees, they look for applicants with diverse backgrounds and a range of experiences. This is practical business sense, since a person with many different experiences can be expected to do many different kinds of jobs. For example, an information technology company cannot just hire employees who know about computers. They must hire people who are familiar with the content. If the company is responsible for creating an educational database for history teachers, having employees who have had prior experience in education and history are the most valuable. By holding many different jobs before starting a career, a person can be more competitive in thejob market.Once you start your career, having a diverse background will help you accomplish more with your job. For example, my father first worked as a waiter before he became a writer for an advertisement agency. One of his first accounts was for the restaurant T.G.I.F. My father used his experience as a waiter as inspiration for the advertisement campaign they ran. The restaurant was so pleased with my father’s work that they signed an exclusive contract with his company. Soon after that he was promoted and later went on to become the youngest manager of the creative department in the history of this advertising agency. Using knowledge from past jobs gives you the perspective to rise quickly in your career.Holding many different jobs before starting your career is a smart thing to do. Building your resume with a range of jobs helps you decide which career is best for you. The various experiences not only make you more competitive than other job applicants, but it also helps you be a more valuable and resourceful employee. (Anna, 529 words)范文二[Do you agree or disagree? College and universities should offer students job preparation before they start working.]Nowadays, how to get a better job is a popular topic among students and parents. Some people believe that colleges and universities should offer students better job preparation before they start working. Personally, I support the idea, because job support programs would benefit not only the student, but also the university and in turn society.First, better job preparation benefits students seeking better jobs. For example, thanks to the help of the training courses at my school, I now work as an editor for a multimedia production company. When I was sophomore, the office of employment guidance in my university offered a course called job preparationfor students. The course taught us how to choose our careers, how to plan our future and how to apply and interview for jobs. With the skills I learned in this course, I found a job before graduation.Second, better job preparation benefits the fame of the university. For instance, the competition of education has greatly increased in recent years. If universities can offer students better job preparation before they begin to work, more and more students will want to apply for these universities. Job preparation programs will also create more successful graduates, who will want to donate more money to their former university. More funding will allow the university to improve their facilities and hire better teachers. As a result, the whole level of university will rise, and the reputation of university will grow.Finally, better job preparation benefits society as a whole. For example, better job preparation will prepare students to enter the workforce with more ambition, inspiring them to create more advanced products. For example, when my cousin was a senior at the Shanghai Conservatory of Music, the school helped him to find a part-time job of composing piano music. He really liked this job, and he realized his passion for composing music for radio and television studios. If he had not done this internship, he would have never realized his potential. More inspired workers means a more productive economy, which in effect strengthens society. Therefore, better job preparation in universities is not only important to students and schools, but also to society.Considering the above analysis, it is clear that universities should offer students better job preparation before they start working, because it benefits the student, university and society. (389 words)范文三[Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teacher’s salaries.]The issue of how to improve the quality of education has attracted the public attention all over the world. Some may argue that raising teachers’ paycheck is the best way to achieve such goal. In my opinion, despite several benefits, this proposal is not the best solution.Admittedly, raising teachers’ salaries is a good way to boost better education performance. Since a high salary represents a highly valued and appreciated job, to give teachers a more decent paycheck may improve their self-esteem and propel them to optimize their syllabus. Besides, a higher salary makes the job market more competitive. In the past, the brightest intellectuals may pick more challenging and profitable jobs; however, with the salary-raising policy, teachers would become more desirable. Since quality of teachers largely determines that of the education, we could expect better education with the boom of highly qualified teachers. However, to say raising t eachers’ salaries is the best option is definitely an overstatement.In fact, teachers receiving higher paycheck means students having to afford more tuition fees. In this case, more families would have to face heavy financial burden, where kids can be easily affected. Some from poor families would even have to drop out. According to a recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science, after polling hundreds of teenage drop-outs, most respondents claimed that considering the increasingly high tuitions fees, working at an early age becomes a better way out. It seems to me that there must be other ways to improve the education without making it an unaffordable one.In addition, schools can provide trainings to teachers. This is a more direct and effective way to promote educational development. My college is a good case in point. Last year, among all the sophomores, only three in ten passed College English Band 4. But this year the number soared to seven in ten. The secret is that all the teachers received a one-month training. Trainers were several returned alumni majoring in TESOL. Not only did they impart theoretical knowledge, but they also shared experience on communicative and interaction skills. After those lectures and seminars, English classes became morestudent-centered. Obviously, offering teachers more teaching aid is more efficient than just handing out material reward.All in all, although raising teachers’ salaries can improve education level to some extent, it is by no means the most favorable way and other methods should also be taken into account. (409w)。
托福学术写作28道样题的满分范文
托福学术写作28道样题的满分范文## Argumentative Essay.Topic: The benefits of online learning outweigh the drawbacks.Instructions: Explain your views on the topic, supporting your position with reasons and examples.Response:Online learning has become increasingly popular in recent years, and for good reason. It offers a number of advantages over traditional face-to-face learning,including flexibility, convenience, and cost-effectiveness. While there are some drawbacks to online learning, such as the lack of face-to-face interaction and the need for self-discipline, the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.One of the biggest benefits of online learning is itsflexibility. Students can learn at their own pace and on their own schedule. This is ideal for students who have busy schedules or who live in remote areas. Online learning also allows students to access course materials anytime, anywhere. This is a major advantage for students who need to review material or who want to learn more about a particular topic.Another major benefit of online learning is its convenience. Students do not have to commute to a physical classroom, which can save them time and money. Online learning also allows students to participate in class from anywhere with an internet connection. This is ideal for students who travel frequently or who have other commitments that make it difficult to attend traditional classes.Online learning can also be more cost-effective than traditional face-to-face learning. This is because online courses often have lower tuition costs and do not require students to purchase textbooks or other materials. Additionally, online learning can save students money ontransportation and other expenses.While there are some drawbacks to online learning, such as the lack of face-to-face interaction and the need forself-discipline, the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks. Online learning is a flexible, convenient, and cost-effective way to learn. If you are considering taking an online course, I encourage you to do so. You may be surprised at how much you enjoy it.## 议论文。
托福写作例子
1.多才多艺成功的典范（Only through the mastery and integration of multiple skills can a person really have profound influence and acquire real success）Natalie Botman, who is a film actor, a play actor, an editor, and also phD in psychology in Harvard. Her adept acting skills and her mastery in psychology gained her a great advantage in casting the Oscar winning film the black swan, in this film, she play two characters of the same person and acquired great success, which push her to the throne of Oscar best leading actress.(娜塔莉伯曼多才多艺演好黑天鹅)2.给员工更多的自由时间，有更松散的时间表（loose schedule）20 percent time of google. The google company gives the employees 20 percent time to do the things they enjoys. They trust their employees and they can use the freetime to do anything they like. Many of the innovative products of google company comes from those free time. Two software engineers from google developed a search engine for survivors and their relatives in last year Japan’s great earthquake. Gmail and Google news also came from 20 percent time.3.yundong运动休息的重要性1.Children or students can get stronger and healthier through sports and other activities.Doing exercise at childhood will not only benefit the children immediately but also benefit them in their later life. “Exercise an hour every day and work efficiently for 50 years” is an activity promoting in China. Experts have found that the working efficiency has a great relationship with the average hours spent on sports every day. (运动可以锻炼身体，不仅锻炼当前的身体，还为以后的工作做准备)2.Exercise can help the students control their weight as overweight is a big problem inChina now. According China Statics bureau, 1/6 of the children in China has the problem of overweight, and among those who are overweight, 70% of them have less than 1 hour time of exercise a day.（运动能控制超重现象，在中国很多孩子超重都是因为缺乏运动）3.Sports can offer the students a chance to communicate and have social interaction withothers. As in many sports, like basketball and football, children need to cooperate with each other to achieve the victory, in this process not only the body condition of the students are improved but also students’ teamwork spirit and social skills are also cultivated, which are very crucial for their future adult life.（运动是交流和锻炼teamwork的绝佳机会）4.北欧国家（高度发达的社会制度才是人民幸福的关键）（high developed civilization is thetrue key of ）A characteristic of the Nordic welfare model is that everyone has the right to receivewelfare benefits. Everyone has the right to accommodation, employment, education and health care in the Nordic countries. The aim of the welfare model is to give everyone a minimum basis on which to live, and thus to provide security. However, there are factors that can create challenges for the Nordic welfare model in the next few years, both in relation to the cost and the legitimacy of the model. Examples of such factors are the increasing proportion of elderly people in the population, the increasing number of people of employable age who, for various reasons, are not in employment, early withdrawal from the labour market, increasing inequalities in society, and marginalization of high risk groups. These factors arecommon for all the Nordic countries. Kids received free education and family are awarded for having a baby, and they enjoy the best medical care in the world, my English teacher once went to Norway to have her second baby.5.现代科技的副作用More than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays an adverse role in learning information. We do acquire more information with theconvenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant and in the end procrastinating would lower our learning.modern technology gives students an illusion that information and real knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos.we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human experience that could be referred to.interpersonal alienation. With the development of communication technology,people in fact become alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so easily accessed via phone or email.the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human – we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices.。
托福作文全部范文模板
托福作文全部范文模板Introduction。
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Sample Essay:Title: The Importance of Learning a Second Language。
Introduction:Learning a second language has become increasingly important in today's globalized world. In my opinion, learning a second language not only enhances communication skills but also provides cognitive and cultural benefits.Body Paragraph 1:Firstly, learning a second language improves communication skills. Being able to speak and understand another language allows individuals to communicate with a wider range of people, both domestically and internationally. For example, a person who speaks English and Spanish can communicate with a larger number of people in the United States, as well as in Spanish-speaking countries.Body Paragraph 2:Secondly, learning a second language has cognitive benefits. Research has shown that bilingual individuals have better problem-solving skills and are more adept at multitasking. For instance, a study conducted by the University of Edinburgh found that bilingual individuals are better at focusing on relevant information and ignoring distractions.Body Paragraph 3:Furthermore, learning a second language provides cultural benefits. By learning a new language, individuals gain insight into the customs, traditions, and values of a different culture. This understanding fosters empathy and tolerance towards people from diverse backgrounds. For example, a person who learns Mandarin may develop a deeper appreciation for Chinese culture and traditions.Counterargument Paragraph:Some may argue that learning a second language is time-consuming and unnecessary. However, the benefits of learning a second language far outweigh the time and effort invested. In today's globalized economy, being bilingual or multilingual can provide a competitive edge in the job market and open up opportunities for international travel and business.Conclusion:In conclusion, learning a second language is crucial in today's interconnected world. It not only enhances communication skills, but also provides cognitive and cultural benefits. Therefore, I believe that learning a second language should be encouraged and prioritized in educational settings.。
托福范文(共15篇)
一、举实例思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。
下面是一些短语：相似的比较：in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比较：on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …托福范文第2篇托福tpo真题写作53作文范文，托福tpo53独立写作independentwriting范文+题目解析是托福考试官方指南（officialguide），tpo21-54 独立写作范文+独立写作批改服务，真题解析，解析，模版解析，文笔分析，写作技巧等，是托福考试官方给出的考试指南。
托福考生自创提供：写作范文22篇（一）3
155 Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.When it comes to the issue of an important plant to the people in my country, different people hold different views. If I were faced with this question, I would probably say tree is the important plant. In the following discussion, I would like to provide a few important reasons to support my viewpoint.The most important reason that we cannot neglect is that trees are economically valuable. Trees can be used for making furniture such as bed, desk and chair; trees can be used for paper production; trees can also be used for producing learning tools such as pencil. All these products are essential to our life. We not only need them as parts of our daily life, but also can get profit if we export them to other countries. As businessmen, just exporting timber to US alone every year could earn them a large amount of money. Don't you think the above example is very persuasive?Anther head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here is that trees can improve our environment. As we all know, photosynthesis cannot effect without trees. During daytime, trees inspire carbon dioxide from the air and change them into oxygen through a series of chemical reactions. When we go to the park where you can see a lot of trees, you generally feel the air is a lot fresher than downtown. This is because trees purify the air for us which is good for human health. If you can understand this, you can understand my viewpoint better.Admittedly, there are many other plants that are very important to people in my country as well. For example, flowers can make our cities look more beautiful; corns are the main food in my country. Nevertheless, advantages of trees carry more weight than that of other plants. Hence, the most striking conclusion is obvious.To sum up, given all the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that trees is a very important plant to the people in my country. I think we should plant more trees than any other plant in my country, because it is so beneficial in many ways.156 You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.I like to travel around the world. If I get the opportunity, I would like to visit every single country. But in the case where I can only choose to visit one foreign country for two weeks, I would definitely choose China. In the following discussion I would like to present a few important reasons to support my choice.The most important reason is that China has almost five thousand years history. I am always interested in old buildings and palaces, which were built in ancient time. These architectures tell us about the past and the culture of a country. I would like to visit The Summer Palace in Beijing, the Great Wall in Shenyang, the ancient village in Zhouzhuang. They can bring me back to five thousand years ago and let me experience the Chinese culture. Don't you think the history of a country is very attractive?Another head and chief reason why I would like to go to China is because it is a great place for shopping. Not only you can choose among hundreds of malls, but also you can get everything you want with a cheap price. In Toronto, you probably have to spend over 500 dollars for a suit. When you come to China, you can get the same suit with only half of the price. It is like a big fifty percent sale everyday. You will be leaving the mall with lots of good stuff and not paying as much. Don't you think this is fantastic?The last reason I would like to present is that you can eat yummy Chinese food there. In China, different provinces have its own way of cooking, which makes the food more diverse. You can eat the hot and spicy Sichuan food; you can taste the mild and sweet Hangzhou food. These are the kinds of food that you will never get from any other part of the world. Think about those mouth-watering foods, you will choose to visit China just for this reason.Admittedly, other countries may be very attractive as well. Nevertheless, you will definitely experience more if you choose to visit China. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is obvious.To sum up, given all the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that China is where I want to visit for these two weeks. If you have never been to China before, plan to visit for the next family vacation trip. You will get more than you expected for sure.。
XX托福写作优秀范文实例三篇
XX托福写作优秀范文实例三篇xx托福写作优秀范文实例三篇导语：多参考写作的优秀作文实例，对进步写作才能大有帮助，下面是搜集的三篇托福写作的优秀范文实例，希望对你有帮助!If I could visit any foreign country, I’d like tovisit Ireland. The scenery there is so beautiful . Ireland has a lot of rain and that makes everything very green and lush . It hasn’t bee a pletely industrialized country yet, so there are still areas where the countryside is unspoiled by pollution. Often ,you can drive for miles without seeing another car or ing to a big city. I’d like to take my set of paints and several canvases and try to capture some of the scenes there. It seems every way you turn, you’re looking at beautiful scenery. The area near the ocean is especially dramatic, with giant dark cliffs rising out of the water.I also think I’d enjoy the s lower pace of Ireland.It’s so different from the busy pace of my country . Of course, Ireland’s big cities are just as hectic as any big city anywhere. But many of the Irish live in smaller towns or on farms in rural areas. Visiting these places is veryr estful. People don’t feel the need to stick to a schedule . Things get done , but in a much more relaxed fashion. In my country ,there’s the feeling that you’realways late for something. In Ireland ,it feels likeyou’ve never late because no one stays on schedule.Most of all, it would be interesting for me to meet the cousins in my mother’s family. They live in Donegal . I could see the house where my grandmother grew up and where my cousins still live. This house is connected to a lighthouse. Visiting there would give me a clearer idea of what my grandmother ‘s childhood was like.Ireland would be a refreshing break from the life I lead in my own country. I wish I could go there.When I want to make a plaint about a defective product or poor service, I would rather make my plaint in writing. Writing a plaint allows me to organize my points of argument in a logical manner. If I’m really unhappy with the way I’m being treated, I want to present my reasons clearly. I don’t want there to be any confus ion about why I’m plaining. I like to list my plaints and then list supporting examples. That’s the best way of making sure everyone is clear about what I;m saying.Putting my plaint in writing also ensures it won’t seem too emotional. If you feel that you’re been treated badly or taken advantage of, it’s easy to lash out. Losing your temper, though, is a sure ways to lose your argument. Yelling is very satisfying at the moment, but it only makesthe person you’re yelling at mad at you. It doesn’t get them to agree with you or to offer help.There’s also the issue of the person you’re dealing with. If you plaint in person, you have to talk to whoever is there. Chances are that he or she isn’t the person responsible for the defective product or the poor service. Often the people who take plaints are not the people in change, unless you’re dealing with a very small business. Yelling at them isn’t fair, and doesn’t do anything to get a refund or satisfaction for you. You need to reach the person in charge. The best way to do that is in writing.Writing about your plaint and sending the letter registered mail also gives you written proof. It’s clear that you tried to settle the matter in a reasonable manner within a certain time period. This way, if you need to take further action, you have physical evidence of your actions.Writing a plaint has the advantages of organization, effectiveness, and fairness. That’s why I prefer to write rather than personally present my plaints.I think we remember spec ial gifts we’ve received because these gifts often are part of a special memory for us. It may be a memory of someone special we’ve cared deeply about. He or she may no longer be alive. Or it may be a memory of a special event in our lives. It may even bea memory of the person we once were at some particular moment in our lives.Gifts from other people can make us feel joy every time we look at them. A gift from our parents, or our husband or wife makes us feel loved each time we see or use it. If we have children, the first gift our child made for us in kindergarten is cherished long after the child has grown up.A family heirloom given to us by a grandparent makes usfeel connected to our past. A gift from a good friend is a reminder of all the good ti mes we’ve shared. A mementofrom a respected colleague of a reminder of a job we worked on suessfully together.Gift may also pinpoint special events in our lives.Gifts given to us as part of our religious heritage, suchas First Communion or Chanukkah gifts, remind us of those celebrations. The same is true for gifts given forbirthdays and graduations, and for the anniversaries of special days in our lives, like our wedding day.Gifts can also be a symbol of the person we were at a particular point in our lives. A gift received in childhood may remind us of a passionate hobby that’s now boxed inthe attic. A gift received when we left a job may bring to mind the first career we bad, now that we’re on our thirdor fourth.The gifts that are important to us are the ones that remind us of family, friends and happy times. They’re a way of surrounding ourselves with our past.。
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第一次课结束我们说好了三篇仿写，担心你可能还没有明白什么叫做“仿写”，没关系，通过三篇文章我都给你把步骤糅合在这里，你就跟着Step1,2,3跟着走就好。
Step2的原义输出我已经帮你翻译好了范文，你会发现中文翻译有些在句式结构和语序上（比如英文习惯把状语后置）很诡异，这是为了便于仿写时遵循英文的表达习惯，也为了便于培养好的英文写作思路和表达方式。
范文第1题Step 1:请对照学习范文。
记忆好的语言表达，词汇搭配。
Do you agree or disagree? People should take several different kinds of jobs before they take a career in a long term.【2009.1.23 NA】Today’s economy is diverse and full of opportunities. While there are some are able to study a subject or skill and then upon graduation jump right into their career, more and more people are choosing a less traditional path to their careers. Before starting their careers, they try many different kinds of jobs. I believe having many different kinds of jobs helps establish a foundation for success in one’s future career.当今的经济变化多样而且充满了机遇。
虽然（连词，表示前后的比较，也可用来指让步）有些人能够学一个科目或者技能然后一毕业（介词词组）就直接工作，但越来越多的人还是会选择一个不那么传统（比较级的否定）的职业道路。
业生涯中（状语习惯后置句末）。
The most compelling reason that recent graduates nowadays area career you love, you will not have to work a day in your life. In the long run, this is a very smart move. If people take the time to test out many different jobs, they will know which one is the job they want to do for the rest of their lives. I know many people in older generations that talk about how they did not have a choice in their career. They always explain how they started teaching or nursing simply because that was the best option. They are not happy with their careers and with regret that they could1 not choose the best career. Working many jobs helps young workers determine their future careers.原因是因明智的举措。
如果人们花点时间去尝试很多不同的工作，他们将知道哪个是他们人们他们（定语从句，后1讲义有错，could和did留一个即可。
置）谈论他们如何无法选择自己的职业生涯。
他们总是解释他们如何开始教书或憾的（介词短语做状语）他们不能够选择最好的职业。
多做不同的工作（动名词作主语）就能帮助年轻人决定他们的未来职业。
（本段多次用到疑问词引导的宾语从句，注意从句中语序应该是陈述句而非疑问句语序。
例如I don’t know what I should do.而不是I don’t know what should I do.）In addition, gaining experience in many different kinds of jobs helps make people more competitive. When companies hire employees, they look for applicants with diverse backgrounds and a range of experiences. This is practical business sense, since a person with many different experiences can be expected to do many different kinds of jobs. For example, an information technology company cannot just hire employees who know about computers. They must hire people who are familiar with the content. If the company is responsible for creating an educational database for history teachers, having employees who have had prior experience in education and history are the most valuable. By holding many different jobs before starting a career, a person can be more competitive in the job market.词短语表修饰，后置）申请者。
这是实际的商业常识，因为有很多不同经验的（介词短语表修饰，后置）一个人有很多不同经验的能被期待做很多不同的工工给历史老师的（介词短语表修饰，后置）教育，拥有（动名词做主语）具有在教育和历史方面有先前经验的（定语从句，后置）员工是最宝贵的。
通过做Once you start your career, having a diverse background will help you accomplish more with your job. For example, my father first worked as a waiter before he became a writer for an advertisement agency. One of his first accounts was for the restaurant T.G.I.F. My father used his experience as a waiter as inspiration for the advertisement campaign they ran. Th e restaurant was so pleased with my father’s work that they signed an exclusive contract with his company. Soon after that he was promoted and later went on to become the youngest manager of the creative department in the history of this advertising agency. Using knowledge from past jobs gives you the perspective to rise quickly in your career.一旦你开始了你的职业生涯，有（动名词做主语）多种多样背景能帮助你在工作上（状语习惯后置到句末）成就更多。
比方说，我的父亲在他成为广告公司作家之前（状语，后置）开始做的是服务员。
他最早期的描述之一是给一个T.G.I.F.活动同。
那之后很快就被提升了后来继续成为了他们广告公司历史上（状语习惯后置到句末）最年轻的创意部门的经理。
使用（动名词做主语）过去工作的知识给你Holding many different jobs before starting your career is a smart thing to do. Building your resume with a range of jobs helps you decide which career is best for you. The various experiences not only make you more competitive than other job applicants, but it also helps you be a more valuable and resourceful employee. (Anna, 529 words)Today's economy is diverse and laden with opportunities. Although some people who learn one subject or technique could get to work right after graduation, increasing number of people tend to make a less traditional option of their career. Before beginning their careers, they will try various jobs. It is believed that the experiences of numerous different jobs help to establish a foundation in one's future career.The most convincing reason why undergraduates choose to try many jobs is that it could give a help hand to figure out what they want from the bottom of their heart. People are aware that if one finds a job that he enjoys, he would spend no time working from then on. In the long term, it is a smart move. If people use some time to try various jobs, they will know which job is the one that they want to do in the rest of their life. I know many people in older generations who complain that they were unable to have a chance to choose a job when they were young. They always explain how they start teaching or nursing simply because it was the best choice then. They find their careers unpleasant and their life full of regret for they had little ability to select their most suitable jobs. So having experiences of different jobs would help the youngsters determine their future career.Moreover, gaining experience from numerous jobs will make one more competitive. When hiring employees, companies prefer to seek for candidates with a background of a range of job experiences. For example, an information technique company cannot only have employers who knows nothing but handling computers. It is necessary to employ the people who are familiar with some specific fields. If the company is responsible for building a database for history teachers, owning an employer who has a previous experience in education and history is beneficial. Through doing different jobs before the career starts, one could become more competitive in the job market.Once you start your career, having a diverse background would help you gaining more accomplishment in your career. For instance, my father was a waiter before he became a writer in an advertisement company. He helped a restaurant called T.G.I.F. My father used his experience as a waiter as the inspiration of the advertisement for it. The restaurant is quite satisfied with his work so they sign an individual contract with his company. Soon after that my father was promoted and became the youngest manager in the creative department in this company. Making use of previous knowledge widens one's horizon to offer you a greater promotion in your career.Before starting a career, it is a wise choice to get different job experience. Shaping your resume using various jobs help you decide which job fits you best. Abundant experiences not only make you more competitive but make you an employer with wisdom and value.要注意单复数和动词的人称时态。