读后续写人与动物--小狗Bailey治好了我对动物的恐惧讲义 高考英语作文专题复习

I must admit, I haven't always liked anim als. In fact, I distrusted them greatly whil e growing up, and I still fear the ones I don't know personally now. What set my beliefs in stone was being attacked-not on ce but many times, including the summer after second grade when I was bitten by a rabbit. Then, when I was nine and ridin g my dirt bike down the road, a large do g charged me and tried to bite my ankle. After all those negative experiences, ther e was one thing I knew for sure: all creat ures, great and small, were no friends of mine.我必须承认，我并不总是喜欢动物。事实上，在我成长的过程中，我非常不信任它们，直到现在我仍然害怕那些我不熟悉的动物。让我对动物产生坚定态度的是被攻击的经历--不止一次，在我二年级的暑假我曾经被一只兔子咬过。然后，当我九岁时骑我的越野车在路上，一只大狗向我冲过来试图咬我的脚踝。经历了所有这些负面的经历后，有一件事我可以肯定：所有的生物，无论大小，都不是我的朋友。

After college in California, I returned to l ive the single life in Las Vega. Then I m et Lisa. In no time at all, we fell in lov e, married and moved into a new house. Despite my avoidance of animals, Lisa ha d a dog called Bailey. Bailey didn't like me, but he tolerated my existence once he realized I wasn't going anywhere. 在加利福尼亚大学毕业后，我回到拉斯维加斯过单身生活。然后我遇到了Lisa。我们很快就相爱，结婚并搬进了新房子。尽管我避开了动物，但Lisa养了一只叫Bail ey的狗。Bailey不喜欢我，但当他意识到我不会离开之后，他就“忍受/接受”了存在。

Things changed as spring came. We welco当春天来临时，情况发生了

med a new member of our family: our so n Evan. I'd heard stories of animals' attac king babies before, so I always kept an e ye on them. One evening I noticed Evan grabbed hold of the dog's tail. The irritate d dog paused and turned to look at his st uck tail, but then he waited patiently until being released. I relaxed a little. Still th e stories I'd heard worries me. 变化。我们迎来了家庭的新成员：我们的儿子Evan。我曾听说过动物攻击婴儿的故事，所以我总是关注他们。一天晚上我注意到Evan抓住了狗的尾巴。狗有些恼火，停下来看着被抓住的尾巴，但是他耐心地等待着被释放。我稍微放松了一点。但是我听说的故事还是让我担忧。

Then my worst fear occurred when I sat on the sofa reading and my wife worked at the dining-room table paying the bills.

I saw Evan crawl across the family-room carpet as he made his way behind the sof a, then Bailey quietly entered the room a nd headed to where Evan stayed. I nearly jumped out of my skin when I heard the dog start a fearful barking behind me. 然后我最害怕的事情发生了，当我坐在沙发上阅读，我的妻子在餐厅桌子旁边工作计算账单时。我看到Evan 在家里沙发后面的地毯上爬行，然后Bailey悄悄进入了房间，走向Evan所在的地方。当我听到狗在我后面开始恐惧地叫时，我几乎吓跳了起来。

续写第一段：Throwing the book away, I r ushed around the sofa with great fear. 我立刻扔掉书，怀着极度恐惧的心情绕过沙发冲了过去。

续写第二段：Having witnessed our dog kil ling a scorpion and saving my son, I was 当我看到我们的狗杀死了一只蝎子，从而拯救了我的儿

speechless. 子时，那一刻我忽然间沉默

了。

故事梗概与发展：

这是一个关于人与动物之间关系(态度)转变的故事。主人公在小时候因为被动物攻击，对动物有着深深的恐惧和不信任。然而，当他与Lisa相遇并结婚后，他的生活中出现了一只名叫Bailey的狗。虽然他还是尽量避开Bailey，但Bailey渐渐地接受了他的存在。故事的转折点发生在一个晚上，Bailey 保护主人公的儿子Evan，不受一只蝎子的攻击。这一刻，主人公对Bailey 的态度有了翻天覆地的改变。这次事件使他对动物有了新的理解。

情节续写：

Para1由第一段第一句Throwing the book away, I rushed around the sofa with great fear.可知第一段续写重点在Bailey勇敢地与蝎子对峙，并成功击退了它。

Para2由第二段第一句Having witnessed our dog killing a scorpion and saving my son, I was speechless.可知重点描写Bailey带给我地震撼和改变，治好了我对动物的恐惧。

续写第一段：

Throwing the book away, I rushed around the sofa with great fear. The echoes of past encounters with animals rang loudly in my ears and my

heart pounded in my chest. But as I rounded the corner, what I saw stopped me in my tracks. Bailey, who I'd always seen as a potential threat, was standing over Evan. Although his growls were fearsome, they were not directed at my son, but rather at something on the floor next to him---a scorpion, whose tail