读后续写身残志坚类David'srun讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项(1)

2022年新高考全国卷I读后续写原题：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,”he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well -- he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as
a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer -- that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
本文讲述了一名残疾学生David克服心理障碍，毅然决定参加越野赛的故事。

1、解读给定材料，获取续写“已知”。

这篇读后续写题的给定材料概要是：David was a boy with a brain disease and could not run fast. His classmates thought of David as a regular kid for he always participated to the best of his ability in
everything. David was hesitant about attending the cross-country run he had worked so hard for, because his coach was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him. David had to make his own decision. Just at that moment, a special education teacher found David’s dilemma...
给定材料中信息句：
David:
①His usual big toothy smile was absent today.
②He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
③He had worked so hard for this event!
Coach:
①I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him.
②I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.
Special education teacher:
①I bit back my frustration.
②I knew the coach meant well.
③I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
Classmates:
①His classmates thought of him as a regular kid.
②None of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team.
David身体残疾，但面对任何挑战总是刻苦训练，受到同学们的尊重。

可面对准备已久的越野赛，教练的顾虑让他犹豫。

故事的平静被打破了。

2、挖掘材料传递的主题或价值观。

故事有主题。

这篇读后续写传递的主题：克服困难，达成目标( David made a tough decision and finished the run with strong determination)。

同时从老师关爱学生的角度，我们也看到了文本传递了“仁爱”的价值观。

主题犹如一种隐形的力量为“续写”指明方向。

3、根据主题、已知和段落开头语设计情节。

Para 1 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.
这是故事的发展阶段。

老师怎样打消David的顾虑？David为实现目标做出了怎样的决定？这也是故事的转折点。

Para 2 I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
这是故事的高潮部分。

David在赛场上如何历经磨难，最终实现目标？故事将达到新的平衡。

范文1
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I could feel his inner struggle. I patted him on the shoulder, “David, I know you have been expecting the run. Why let your coach’s worry get in your way? Achieving the aim is far more important than anything else. Think about the tremendous effort you’ve made.”David looked up at me, his eyes
shining brightly. I held his hands and told him the kids from other schools wouldn’t laugh at him, instead, they would cheer for his bravery and determination. David was not hesitant any more and decided to run.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The moment the starting gun rang, all the students rushed out. David tried his best as usual. But as he was obviously falling behind, people began to find he was different. Unluckily, he fell over a branch. Seeing him in great pain, we almost felt our blood frozen. But he rose to his feet and raced on. We shouted and cheered, firmly convinced that he was regular. Nothing could stop him. He finally made it, though still long after the other children. That big toothy smile appeared on his face.
范文2
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. Observing his frustrated face, I sighed and patted his head, whispering, “Want to have a try, will you?”David raised his head, glanced at me and said with a trembling voice, “Yes, but what if the others teased me?”Hearing what he said, I hugged him tightly and told him that nobody could discouraged a determined soul, even though the one was a coach. Nodding his head, he stood up, clenched his fist and stumbled to the starting line.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. As a bump announced the beginning of the big cross-country run,
the other runners ran like an arrow, with David left far behind. But he struggled to run as usual. I followed and encouraged him along the way. Approaching the finishing line, he was surprised to find the other runners were waiting for him and shouted, “Come on! Come on!”With tears rolling down, he continued limping. On his arrival at the finishing line, all the runners accompanied him to walk through the finishing line hand in hand, smiling.
范文3
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I gave him a soft pat on the shoulder, “Don’t be afraid someone would laugh at you, you are just trying your best. If you don’t want to run today, no one will have the chance to laugh at you, but you will also lose the chance to be applauded.”I continued, “Don’t let anyone stop you from being yourself! David, we will stand by you!”After weighing my words, David said in a low but determined voice, “I want to run!”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The run was beginning! David dashed, fell over and got up as he swung his feet forward. Then, he was left behind by other runners within a few minutes. I started to cheer and then many coaches and students joined me, “Come on! David...”With the encouragement ringing in the air, David attempted again and again with his unique running style. A wave of cheer and applause burst out when David succeeded in crossing
the finish line. He greeted me with his usual big toothy smile and said confidently “It was an amazing experience!”
范文4
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. Seeing this, I knew David was in a dilemma. I got closer to him, patting him on the head slightly and asked him in a soft voice, “Do you want to be a braver?”He nodded his head firmly. “The coach just wanted to give you the right to make your own choice. You participated in every practice. I’m sure you can make it! Please remember that in no case will you give up!”Encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face. He was no longer hesitant and got up to the starting line.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. I breathed a sigh of relief. Hearing a whistle, David dashed out like an arrow. But gradually, David was out of breath and it was obvious that his footsteps were heavier and heavier. All the people present screamed and cheered him up. David continued to run and didn’t give up. At last, David crossed the finishing line, still long after the other children. But all of us were proud of him and the smile on everyone’s face lit up the whole world!
范文5
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. With head down and shoulders trembling, obviously, he was trying hard to hide his disappointment. Gently putting my arms around him, I asked with care: “You still wanna try, don’t you?”He nodded, tears starting to roll down and wetting my shirt. A while later when he finally calmed down, I told him how I appreciated his determination confronted with challenges. “Everyone believes in you, and your efforts in practice won’t let you down, either.”Grinning his usual big toothy smile, David regained confidence and agreed to have a try.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. At that very moment, David’s small figure seemed tall and impressive in my eyes. The cross-country run was not easy for him, though, especially with so many ambitious runners competing. His unusual way of rocking from side to side made him unusual among the runners, yet nobody laughed at him. Instead, along the way, other kids passing by cast a smile and thumbed up at him. As expected, David finished his run as usual long after others, but he earned respect with every step of determination and proved he was as regular as everyone else.
范文6
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. He just looked down and sadness flashed his face.“Maybe my coach is right.”His
voice was so low that I scarcely heard it. “Never mind,my boy!”I snatched David’s hands, looking into his eyes,“As long as you have a strong will, you can do what you want to do! Don’t care what other people think of you.”“Really?”David murmured, his starry eyes glittering as the amber-like sunshine.“Definitely!”I cupped my mouth and exclaimed,“Come on! You will be the best!”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. It was at that moment that I saw David’s determination. The race began and all the children ran as fast as they could. David also tried his best but he was still the last one to arrive. However, when he came to the finishing line, the crowd burst into thunderous applause. Words failed to convey my feeling. I just congratulated him with a big hug.“I made it!”David’s usual toothy smile came back again, which left a deep impression on me. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.。