中考英语复习专题 写作指导课(共17张PPT)

Structure of a good composition
1.Beginning (点题 尽量做到引人入胜） 2.Body（详写 行文连贯 语言丰富） 3.Ending（扣题 要升华 有亮点）
一档文标准
12-15分 包含所有要点，能围绕内容 要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富； 应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、 表达清楚；没有或几乎没有语言错 误，具备较强的语言运用能力，达 到了预期的写作目的。
5.A: His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B: To his surprise, his dog was saved at last. 请思考上面这些句子运用的什么方法使句子 更生动？
1.结合语境，选择恰当的 词或短语 2.巧加修饰词，使句子更 加生动
中考英语复习专题 写作指导课
How to beautify the composition?
My Day off I had a bad day off. I studied for a math exam. I stayed up. So I slept late. I got up and went to school. But it was Sunday. That was too bad.
Compare two compositions. Which do you think is better? My Day off
How was my day off? It was terrible. I studied very hard for my math exam last week, so I slept late. Can you believe it? When I woke up, it was already 9 o’clock. I got up quickly and hurried to school without breakfast. But when I got to school, I found nobody was there. Suddenly I realized it was Sunday! You can’t imagine how embarrassed I was!
Please change the following sentences to make them more beautiful. The more, the better.
1.When he heard his mother was ill in hospital, he went to the hospital. __________________________________ 2. I loved the city of Beijing after I visited it. __________________________________ 3.Deng Yaping is a player. ___________________________________ 4.I passed the English exam. ___________________________________
3. 活用多种句型使句子 变得丰富高级
请欣赏这篇美文，划出文章中出现的关联词和过渡语。
Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other and help each other. I still remember when I was in Grade8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. They explained for me patiently. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How exited I was!
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip ________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
请同学们结合当时的情境细细体会下面两 个句子哪个更好，并说出理由。
1.They listened to the music on the beach. They enjoyed the music on the beach. 2.A: I had a school trip, it was fantastic. B: I had a school trip, it was fantastic, really fantastic. 3.A: I hope you can help me. B: I’m looking forward to your help. 4.A: They arrived early. B: They arrived as early as they could.