2015年6月6日 雅思大作文解析

2015-6-6 Task 2 An

ask 2 Analysis

Some people p

ople prefer to provide help and support directly to loca

local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有⼈人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的⼈人。也有些⼈人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。讨论这两个观点并且表达你⾃自⼰己的想法。

1Topic 话题 Charity

2Question type 题型Discuss

3

5W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题

（WHO+what+when+where+why+how）

WHO: people

WHAT: do charity

How: direct support vs money donation

Where: local vs national & international

4identify key words and their synonyms

关键词理解

support directly=direct involvement

give money to=donate

charitable organizations=charities

5identify all the writing tasks

确定全部写作任务

1. some people prefer direct help

2. others donate to non-profit organizations

3. own opinion

Brainstorming and organ

d organizing ideas 写作思路

Direct support Donation to non-profit

6Necessary: 必要性

组织运作不当，造成损失: charity frauds

Benefits: 重要性

积极参与：direct involvement

及时⾼高效: concretely helping

⽴立竿⻅见影: make a significant difference Necessary: 必要性

有些问题单纯本地解决不了

not easy to tackle at the local level

Benefits: 重要性

资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars 减税福利：tax benefits for helping globally

Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to the local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people are faced with the dilemma in philanthropy that where their contributions will have the most impact. While some people have a preference for direct support to those in need, others believe that donating to non-profit charitable groups would be better.

On the one hand, most people prefer direct involvement with services provided directly to people in need, especially in their own communities, because they can immediately make a significant difference in someone’s life such as food for the hungry, shelter for the homeless, and doctors for sick children. By contrast, giving to national or international non-profits or institutions might not help the people who need the aid most. The money might end up paying for the non-profit's organizational marketing or costs of operations. In the worst case, the donation might end up contributing to corruption or bribery in countries that lack stable governments and effective relief distribution programs.

On the other hand, it is also believed that donating money to charitable groups with national or international focus is also essential, especially for those in developing countries. Indee d, a dollar contributed to international causes reaches much further when spent in developing countries. In some countries, 100 dollars can send a child to school for a whole year.Furthermore, some problems that charities confront are not easy to tackle at the local level. For example, some of the air pollution experienced in one area may be partly generated in another area and carried by prevailing winds, and to deal with such problems requires a regional or national approach.

In conclus ion, we are not arguing that one way of helping people is better than another. When it comes to giving, different preferences benefit certain groups of people, and donors should balance their contributions to support both local and international causes.

(299 words, band 9)

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