2014深二模作文讲评

第二节：读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） Patti, at the age of 5, lost her speaking ability accidently. With the help and encouragement of her mother and a doctor, she overcame many difficulties and succeeded in learning languages. I think Patti and her mom’s attitudes towards illness and misfortune are positive. They tried every means to overcome difficulties, which led to her success at last. We should learn from their strong will and perseverance. As far as I am concerned, difficulties or misfortunes are an unavoidable part of our life. When facing them in real life, we should be brave and positive and determined to overcome them.
2014深二模作文讲评
一基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） I’m Liu Fang, a Senior Three student aged 18, and I’d like to share my social practice experience with you. To enrich my social life, gain more experience and inspire me to study harder, I participated in the activity, working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than 10 days during the winter vocation. There, I mainly did some cleaning, put the books in order and introduced books to customers and I also helped the salesmen sell books 8 hours a day. The work made me really tired, which helps me realize that it’s not easy for our parents to earn money. Meanwhile, I have also learned how to communicate with different customers, which has built up my confidence.
Once in a school speech contest on environment, I was so nervous that I forgot everything. I lost and felt very sad then. But I didn’t lose heart. Since then, I have read lots of books about speech skills, and found every chance I could to improve myself, so last month I got No 1 in the school speech contest, which has proved the power of positive attitude towards ailure.