【英语】中考英语书面表达试题(有答案和解析)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山东中考模拟）写作
现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多，为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。

请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。

提示：
1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；
2．多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方；
3．养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。

要求：
1．根据内容，可适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3．词数90左右。

（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.
First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it's helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don't read books or use a cell phone in bed.
In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，写作前要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。

写作的主题就是如何爱护眼睛。

我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，第一人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

用到的词组或短语有：try one’s best to do尽力做某事，be good for对……有益，such as例如, from time to time不时地，It’s + adj. to do sth.做某事怎么样；make sure to do sth.务必做某事； keep healthy保持健康。

2．（·全国中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。

作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（100字左右）
内容提示：
1、遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3、劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra –crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇有关交通安全的短文, 介绍作为中学生我们应该怎么做，结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了现在有很多交通问题，接下来介绍我们应遵守的交通规则，最后指出人人认为交通安全是自己的事，我们才能在路上安全行驶。

此处come into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．（·河北中考模拟）请以“Never Give Up”为题,写一篇短文,简要描述图中的三个画面,并谈谈自己的想法｡
要求:
1. 文中不得涉及真实的人名,校名和地名｡
2. 可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺｡
3. 词数:80个词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数｡
提示词:the long - distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practice
Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day.
Some__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】Never Give Up
The P.E. exam is coming. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do long-distance running. After school they run on the playground together. They compete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.
Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the P.E. exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，题目中有三张图片，展示了九年级的学生们在为体育测试做准备，我们应根据图片，以Never give up为题，写一篇文章，简要描述三个画面，并谈一谈自己的想法。

写作之前，应仔细观察图片，看清楚图片展示的内容，三张图片展示了三个体育项目，跑步、铅球和跳远，写作时，应使用形象、直观的语言，详细介绍图片中的内容，然后组织语言，串联成文。

文章可以分两段，第一段介绍图片内容，第二段谈论自己的想法。

题目中有词汇的提示，写作时应注意使用。

通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，根据表达的需要确定应使用的时态。

注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文的描述符合图片中的内容，叙述非常详细，并对图片展开了合理的想象，使文章的内容更加丰富。

第二段中发表了自己的感想，升华了文章的主题。

其次短文中句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范，语言得体。

短文以一般现在时为主，正确使用了谓语动词的形式。

句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，提升了文章档次和水平，整篇文章表达流畅。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They compete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before.等等。

4．（·湖南中考模拟）人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。

请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。

2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people
think___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。

注意文体、人称和时态。

文章要有层次、流畅。

可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．（·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟）当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。

请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。

要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。

Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。

而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86.假设你是李华，星期五早上在上学的路上目睹了一起交通事故。

根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

参考词汇：检查make an examination 对……负责 be responsible for sth.
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个.
（2）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

At seven o’clock on Friday morning there
was____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was coming. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident．
We should pay attention to safety when crossing the street.We also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】
【详解】
首先这是一篇以一般过去时为主的文章，所以要注意时态。

重点词汇短语：traffic accident交通事故；across the road过马路；suddenly突然地；At the same time同时；fell down摔倒；send sb to Sp把某人送到某地；make an examination检查； be responsible for sth. 对……负责；pay attention to注意；fortunately幸运地。

重点句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 当红灯变红的时候，一个骑自行车的女孩突然出现在街上。

关系代词who引导的定语从句。

（2） He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他试图停车，但为时已晚。

try to do sth努力做某事。

（3） I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等过马路的时候看到了这起事故。

状语从句。

7．（·山东中考模拟）“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。

你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。

2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。

100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。

而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

8．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）每个人在成长过程中，都会遇到很所不同的困惑，但为实现梦想我们应该克服困难，解决问题。

现阶段，你有什么困惑吗？请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What are your troubles at present?
（2）What will you do to solve these troubles?
要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

My troubles at present
During the process of my growth, I have met different
troubles.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________
【答案】My troubles at present
During the process of my growth, I have met different troubles.I am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I grow up?". This is something I really have no answer for myself.I am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like.Is there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

根据提示的内容，请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

例文点评：短文先列出自己的烦恼是什么，之后再写如何解决这些烦恼。

词汇、句式要丰富多样，为文章增色添彩。

高分亮点：短语：relate to ；grow up；be worried about ；would like to do sth；find out ；ask for help等。

句式：I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I grow up?". I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like. I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.用了宾语从句；I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. 用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

9．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
61.针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。

请你根据提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not）willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。

注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-100
3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

I _____ willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have
different ideas. ________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【答案】I am willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.
Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.
In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would l ike to do that.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。

文章分为三步走：第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。

本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很条理性和连贯性。

最后In a word, I think….对自己观点进行最后总结。

非常好的一篇文章。

10．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（A）话题作文：现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。

从小保护好眼睛很重要。

六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。

请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；
（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books
away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）
假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。

注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,
I’m very glad to know t hat you will come to our school.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.
My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。

而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

12．（·天津中考模拟）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。

请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

（1）5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

（2）早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

（3）上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

（4）第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

（5）我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway
王府井大街 Wangfujing Street
故宫 the Palace Museum
北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck
要求：
（1）词数:80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing
During the May Day Holiday，
I______________________________________________________________
【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.
First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.
During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.
【解析】
【详解】
以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。

用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。

在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

13．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假,
你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。

请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：
1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文Dear peter ,
Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.
Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school,。