作文被批评时200字

作文被批评时200字
英文回答：
When my essay is criticized, I feel a bit disappointed, but I also see it as an opportunity to improve. It's like they say, "Every cloud has a silver lining." I take the feedback as constructive criticism and use it to make my writing better. I remember one time when my teacher pointed out that my arguments were not well-supported. Instead of feeling discouraged, I took her advice and worked on providing more evidence and examples in my essay. In the end, my writing improved, and I learned a valuable lesson about the importance of backing up my points.
中文回答：
当我的作文受到批评时，我会感到有些失望，但我也把它看作是一个提高的机会。

就像他们说的，“每朵云都有银边”。

我把反馈当作建设性的批评，并用它来改善我的写作。

我记得有一次我的老师指出我的论点没有得到很好的支持。

我没有感到泄气，而是接
受了她的建议，在我的作文中提供了更多的证据和例子。

最后，我的写作得到了改善，我也学到了一个关于支持观点重要性的宝贵教训。