2018高考短文改错必刷题
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高考短文改错必刷题
高考短文改错必刷题
Last Saturday, we organize a trip to the countryside. The countryside has taken on a new look everywhere. All around us, the hills are covering with green trees and colorful flower. Rivers are clean with bridges over them, that makes a beautiful picture. Farmers are living in nice houses which are equipped fine furniture. Nowadays the farmers there.is caring more about our life quality. With their life greatly improve, they have more time for a leisure. That may be why people look more energetic and young for their age.
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car, try to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor,” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say anything?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor,”the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat that what I often say. ”
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Henry sleeping in his room when suddenly he woke up and sensed that something unusual on last night. He looked out of the window and find a store nearby on the street was on the fire. He immediately shouted at the top of his voice “Fire! Fire! Help!” He phoned 119 at once and then went out to put out the fire. So it was so bigger a fire that he couldn't put it out by himself. Lucky enough, a lot of neighbor came out and soon firefighters arrived. The fire was finally put out and when the firefighters praised Henry for her quick action, he smiled, felt very pleased.
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There are many people who think that wealth is good than health. I used to thinking so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was American billionaire who got everything he wants.
Therefore, in the last twenty years of his life, his health became worse and she was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurse. But he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do that you want to do. So 1 would like to say, “Don’t hurt at yourself and try to make money. Instead, take good care of yourself and be happy at what you do. Healthy is more important. ”
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the language lab, please be here a little early. Change your shoes before enter the lab. Don’t bring anything here except your textbook. When you are in, please don’t touch these machines without permit. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders can be used to make a copy of the listening materials. When class over,make sure that your machines are turning off.
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I feel it is pity that you didn’t want to take part in the speech contest. In rhy view, the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways. Firstly, it makes you look for more informations about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, learns more about them. Secondly, it is a challenge to prepare for a speech contest. You not only have to write a good article and also have to perform them properly. What’s more, after the contest, you can find yourself with some newly good friends, or even a prize. I suggest you consider participating in the contest, that will really do good to you. If you change your mind, please let me know as sooner as possible.
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After a final examination,I got a letter from my best friend and his parents lived on a farm. They invited me stay with them for several weeks. I was so exciting that I couldn’t sleep all night. When I got to their home, I was warm received. I lived on a big and nice room. I enjoyed the life here very much. Every morning we got up early and walk on the farm where we could enjoy the fresh air or beautiful scenery. We gathered some flowers here and there, and I found it full of funs. In the afternoon we did our homework. I did have a good time.
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Failure is part of our life. Somebody has ever achieved great success without lots of failures. One experience left lasting impression on me. I’ve been fond of playing the piano since my childhood. Last year there was a piano competition for teenager in my city and I take part in it. I couldn’t wait to show off. The day finally came. However, when I was on the stage I was very nervous that I made several mistakes while playing. My performance was a completely failure!
It was only after the competition when I realized my failure resulted in from my lack
I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany.
This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, but I could never see anything through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything,M I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried that
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microscope known to man. With my pleasure,I saw something and drew it quickly on paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw,” I answered. “No, you don’t,,,he shouted, and he bent over and looked into microscope. “You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”
All Senior 2 students of Taizhou High School is going to visit Zhejiang University in two days. According to Mr Li, headmaster of this school, an activity had been held once a year since 2006.
Apart from the students, some of their teachers will also join in, but they will set off at about 7 o’clock and returning at about 4 pm. In the morning, we will visit the new campus of Zhejiang University. In the afternoon,they will have a directly and sincere conversation with some freshmen of the university who graduated Taizhou High School.
It is believed that this activity will help the students having a good knowledge of campus life in advance,and make them to work hard to achieve their dreams in the near future.
Mr Zhang is sixty years old and has retired. He taught ours biology when we were in Grade One. He taught very good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor at biology. He often helps me with my study patiently. Under his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher, he was respected or loved by all the students.
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I’d like to tell you how I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by heart, that helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English.
I listen a lot and talk with others in the English. In this way,I had improved both my listening and my spoken English great. I keep a diary in English every day but my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledges. By this means,I can express me in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope what I said is in use to you.
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Recently, our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends. Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of free time to review the lessons we had learned. Some others are against the opinion,saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays. The rest agree with neither of the opinion. They have the view keeping the balance between work and play are important
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is used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest.
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Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know that, smoking does harm to human.beings. More and more people have realized what serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion,but others think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes much illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer.
Meanwhile,smoking is waste of money. What’s worse,careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.
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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents, I searched Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I went to the train station. Although there were a long queue, I manage to buy two tickets for my grandparents. Before dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents needed them,such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning,I went to the station but saw them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a pleasant journey.
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We had a discussion about whether it is a only way out for senior students to go to college. Views vary from person to person. The majority of students considers it very necessary to go to college. They think it can widen our knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find good jobs after graduation. Very few students think it is no use go to university, because the tuition is too high for their family to afford it. What’s more,it’s rather hard for college graduates seek satisfactory jobs. Thirty percent of the students,therefore, believe “All roads lead to Rome.” It doesn’t make any different whether they go to college and not.
In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.
The student union hold a competition last week. The theme of it was to make the better of waste materials, aimed to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment. From Feb. 3rd to Mar. 15th, more than 900 students participated active and presented through the Internet over 1,000 pieces of work. About 200 participants got first, second and third prizes respectively. Li Ming, his work—“Protecting the forests, including you and me” was made
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More and more middle school students are having tutors at the weekend. There are two different viewpoint about it.
Some think it necessary. First of all,it’s too effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Besides, it can strengthen that is learned in class. Others think it unnecessary. For the one thing, students can easy form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time relax from time to time. What’s more,the purpose of some family teachers are to make money. *
On my opinion,whether a tutor is needed just depends. If you are really weak at or interesting in a certain subject,maybe it’s OK for you to have one. And be sure to choose a good and suitable teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.
€19 广My brother Jack disliked learn maths and didn’t do well. When the day of the exam came, Jack sat next to Brian, whom was always good at maths. Jack careful copied Brian’s answers. At the end of ihc exam,the teacher collected the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the studem who got the high grade. But making a decision was a bit of difficult, because Jack and Brian got same grade. The teacher thought about that and made up her minds to give the prize to Brian. Jack said it was unfair. “That’s true,,’ the teacher said. “Therefore,Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’. Yours was ‘So do 1’.”
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Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy that you are my English teacher. As the world is becoming global village,English is getting more and more important, so mastering English mean we can see the world through a new window.
My English is not bad,and I have two main problems in my study. First I feel it difficult to learn words with heart. Besides I often feel nervously when speaking English. I real hope that you can give me some good advices on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is that what you should give
us more chances to practice speak. I believe I can make many progress in English with your help.
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We participated in a voluntary activity organizing by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the square i passing leaflets to passer-by from which they can learn what an earthquake
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/\_ public speech, told people about the best place where they can hide when earthquake occurs.
We have learned many from the voluntary activity, what offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned of each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.
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Whatever one does,one should do it with confidence. Equipping with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.
When I entered Senior 3,I found myself faced to difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As the consequence I began to feel being frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment when my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, told me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progresses.
As the saying go,“Where there is a will,there is a way. ”If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, that is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and final achieve our goals.
Usually most divers don’t go very deep. Mainly they dive to a deep of about 20 meters. Then they swam around as they slowly return to the surface. Everyone who wants dive must first have diving lessons. There are the number of dangers that you have to learn about. For one thing,you might have problems with its air bottle. A diver must know however the equipment works and be able to recognize possible problem. There are also dangerous types of fish you must look out for. You must be familiar to the environment that you’ll be diving in. Before you go on a dive, make sure you know that what you are getting into. Diving may look easily, but if you don’t have the necessary training, it can be both difficult and dangerous.
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Dear Ma Yun,CEO of Ali Baba,
My name is Li Hua. I’m Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please to come to our school or give us a speech? The speech is scheduling to be given on May 30th in the school playground, the theme of it will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eagerly to hear you talk about your own experience and unique views.
I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate that very much if you could come. Thank you on advance and wish you all the best!
I am looking forward to receive your reply at your earliest convenience.
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Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt, we found the teachers here patient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make the best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were not helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which great increased my confidence and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.
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More and more senior three students are getting stressing in their studies. In order find out effective ways to release the stress, a survey is made last week in five schools. Altogether 500 students were interviewed, but some interesting results were as follows. About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by do sports. They play football, in instance. Meanwhile, another forty-five percent of them release our stress by listening to different kind of music. The rest twenty percent usual get help from their parents and teachers. When I am stressed, I usually do plenty of weightlifting to get me tired. Then I’ll have a good sleep. And then I feel being relaxed.
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I was at a party a few weeks before, which was more excited than I had expected. We were all having a good time then suddenly a fire broke in the kitchen. Someone shouted “Don’t panic!’’,and all the people started to run. There was smoke everywhere and we were all trying to find the way to out. Fortunately, my friend found a fire extinguisher(灭火器)and put a fire out. He was about to coming out of the house when the firefighters arrived. The fire chief praised my friend and tell us that we all had a luckily escape.
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Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much too attention to details. And sometimes it is the details that determines our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.
Since we have realized the important of details,what should we do? First, we should form a habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more, we should learn to keep the balance between quantity and quality. We may find that when face with lots of work, the faster we do it, the much mistakes we will make. Because when we work at high speed,the only thing we care about is quantity, in that case we are more likely to neglect the details.
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Nowadays we can find more and more people sit for too long,which has many side effect on health. According to health experts,too many screen time has kept many people sitting for too long. Beside, heavy work or study stress can also contribute to the present situation.
There is no doubt whether it has- led to serious health problems, such as backache, overweight, heart disease and even death. Well go the saying, “Prevention is better than cure.M Do remember to try our best to build up our leg power to cut the diseases of potential risk. Firstly, walking and cycling to school or work will be a good choice. Secondly, please take stairs instead elevators. Thirdly,it is recommended that we walk around for the while during the breaks. Last but not least, why not to take- regular exercise and have fun every day?
Come on and take action now!
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In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organize an activity to climb the mountain last week. Hundred of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of the mountain and set out for the top in high spirit. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, other would come and offer help. About two hours late,we all reached the top. Bathe in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited to us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature or give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What wonderful time!
I’m an Australian boy aging 17 and I’m crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bike. At home, there is a CD player in my room, but the music is on all the time.
I like rock music better of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which has produced
40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there had a live concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday.
I decided to go.
It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especial enjoy playing Beethoven when I’m doing my homework.
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General we prefer to do things the way we consider to be the best. Therefore, it is important to listen to those whom love us and want to give advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained more experiences and they know how to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. However, there are moments CD
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that our parents are right. Please turn to your parents when in trouble, for they are worth trust and ready to offer help ail time.
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What would we do without refrigerators? We take it for granted now,but what is it like before the refrigerator was invented? Have you ever left milk out of the fridge for a day on summer? In just that time it would go badly, so you can imagine what hard life was before. For a long time, people had been using ice to make food lasting longer.
The first refrigerators were sold in late 1880s and they soon became very popular. Nowadays, almost everyone have a fridge in their homes and modern refrigerators are much more safer. Some of the refrigerator are so modern that they can tell you what needs buying in advance!
My neighbour Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head,said it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all these habit. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy her example.
As is known to all that we students of today have to fix our attentions on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday was the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books or in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice,we can surely make a progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.
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Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself,and then began to sell her works for a few money. In 1993,a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma
Moses’ works hung in a shop. He liked them,bought them at once, and set out look for more.
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them any long, because we have run out of rooms to store them. The/re all around our apartment, and I even store them in boxes under my bed. The first one I ever got was a birthday cake snow globe
on my seventh birthday. I particular love globes with cute animals. I have a big one with bears in it
and other one with penguins. If you know anyone else who collect them, please tell me. I’d like start
a snow globe collection club. In the way, what’s your hobby?
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The British love sending text message. And most people now understood the language of text,
with its numbers and missing letters. In fact, when the student wrote the whole article “in txt’’,his
teacher gave him “C+ 4 6f4t”(“C+ for effort”). Although texting is a cheap way of stay in touch
with your friends, but it can also bring problems. In 2005,a British teenager became the first person
receive treatment for an addiction to text messaging. In one year, the nineteen-year-old teenager
spent about £4,500 on texts. For some people, text messaging have changed their lives. James texts
faster in the world and recently he has set a new world record. He texted a message what took him 67
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festival in China, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar.
The festival dates back in the Southern Song Dynasty. In the Southern Song Dynasty, people send round mooncakes to their relatives as gifts to express their best wishes. This day was also being considered as a harvest festival since fruits, vegetables and grain had been harvested by this time and food was abundantly.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a family celebration when family members gather together eat mooncakes and enjoy the round moon. They can look back on the past but look forward to the future
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1 •第一句:organize改为organized。
由时间状语last Saturday可知,应用一般过去时。
2.第三句:covering改为covered。
hills和cover是被动关系,应用被动语态。
3.第三句:flower改为flowers。
f丨ower是可数名词,此处表示泛指,应用复数形式。
4.第四句:that改为which。
此句是非限制性定语从句,引导词在从句中作主语,先行词是前面的整个
句子,应用which。
5.第五句:equipped后加with。
be equipped with“装有,配备”,是固定短语。
6.第六句:is改为are。
主语是the farmers,be动词应用are。
7.第六句:our改为their。
此处指的是“农民的生活”,应用their。
8.第七句:improve改为improved。
their life和improve是被动关系,应用过去分词。
9.第七句:去掉a。
leisure是不可数名词,其前不用不定冠词。
10.第八句:young改为younger。
由前面的more energetic可知,应用比较级younger。
1.第二句:cars改为car。
由下文He got out of the car...可知应用单数形式。
2.第三句:try改为trying。
''句子已有谓语动词,try应用非谓语动词;he和try是主动关系,故应
用现在分词。
3.第四句:第二个the改为a。
泛指“一个声音”,应用不定冠词。
4.第五句:surprising改为surprised。
此处作表语的形容词表示人的感受“惊讶的”,应用suqjrised。
5.第八句:yours改为your。
此处作motor的定语,应用形容词性物主代词。
6.第十句:With改为In。
表示“用……的嗓音”,应用介词in。
7.第十句:had前加what。
farmer后是宾语从句,从句中缺少主语,指事物,应用what。
8.第十一句:therefore改为however。
由“然而,那位农民没有表现出任何的兴奋”可知,前后句是转
折关系,故用however“然而”。
9.第十二句:didn’t改为doesn’t。
此处是直接引语,应用一般现在时;主语是he,故用doesn’t。
10.第十三句:去掉that。
repeat后是宾语从句,引导词在从句中作宾语,用what,that多余。
1.第一句:sleeping前加was。
be doing...when“正在做这时 ... ”,是固定用法。
由全文时态可
知,应用was。
2.第一句:去掉on。
时间状语last night前不用介词。
3.第二句:find改为found。
and连接两个并列的谓语,由前面的looked可知,应用found。
4.第二句:去掉第三个the。
此处表示“商店着火了”,on fire“着火”,是固定短语。
5.第五句:So改为But。
上下文存在转折关系,表示“但是火太大了”,连词应用but。
6.第五句:bigger改为big。
此处表示“如此大的一场火灾”,无比较意义,应用big。
7.第六句:Lucky改为Luckily。
作状语应用副词。
8.第六句:neighbor改为neighbors。
neighbor是可数名词,前面有a lot of修饰,应用复数形式。
9.第七句:her改为his。
此处的代词与Henry—致,作定语,应用his。
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10.第七句:felt改为feeling。
句子的谓语是smiled,he和feel是主动关系,故用现在分词作状语。
1.第一句:good改为better。
由后边的than可知用比较级。
2.第二句:thinking 改为think。
used to do sth. “过去常常做某事”,为固定用法。
be used to doing...
“习惯做……”不符合此处句意。
3.第三句:American前加an。
泛指“一名美国的亿万富翁”,American以元音音素开头,故加上不定冠
词an。
4.第三句:wants改为wanted。
根据前边主从句的时态可知,want是过去的动作,应用一般过去时。
5.第四句:Therefore改为However。
句意为“然而,在他生命的最后二十年 ..... ”,表示转折关系,
故
用 however。
6.第四句:she改为he。
此处指代上文提到的Howard Hughes,故用he。
7.第五句:nurse改为nurses。
此处表示泛指,与前边的doctors并列,故用复数。
8.第八句:that改为what。
宾语从句的引导词在从句中作do的宾语,表示“事情”意义,用what。
that
在宾语从句中不作任何成分,且无意义。
9.第九句:去掉at。
hurt作“弄伤;伤害”讲时为及物动词,可直接接宾语。
10.第十一句:Healthy改为Health。
此处应用名词health作主语,healthy为形容词,不能作主语。
1.第一句:you改为your。
作定语,修饰attention,应用your。
2.第二句:little改为few。
thing是可数名词,应用a few修饰。
3.第三句:early改为earlier。
此处暗含比较意义,意为“早点来”,应用比较级。
4.第四句:enter改为entering。
before在此作介词用,位于介词后的动词应用动名词形式。
5.第五句:textbook改为textbooks。
textbook是可数名词,此处表示泛指,应用复数形式。
6.第六句:permit改为permission。
此处表示“未经同意,不要碰这些机器”,without permission“未
经
同意”。
permit作名词用意为“许可证”。
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7.第七句:tell改为tells。
主语是the teacher,句子用一般现在时,谓语动词应用第三人称单数。
8.第八句:去掉the。
表示语言的名词前不用任何冠词。
9.第十句:class后加is。
时间状语从句缺少谓语,主语是class,故加上is构成系表结构。
10.第十句:turning改为turned。
your machines和turn off是被动关系,应用被动语态。
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1.第一句:pity前加a。
It is a pity that…“……真可惜”,为固定用法。
2.第一句:didn’t改为don’t。
“不想参加演讲比赛”是现在的情况,用一般现在时。
3.第二句:去掉from。
此处benefit作“有益于”讲,为及物动词,可直接接宾语。
benefit from意为“从……
中获益”。
4.第三句:informations改为information。
information为不可数名词,无复数形式。
5.第三句:learns改为learning。
句子的谓语是makes,learn应用非谓语动词;you和learn是主动关系,
应用现在分词。
6.第五句:and改为but或去掉and。
not only... (but) also... “不但而且.. ”,为固定用法。
7.第五句:them改为it。
此处指代上文提到a good article,故用it。
8.第六句:newly改为new。
与good并列修饰名词friends,应用形容词。