人教版高中英语选择性必修第一册精品课件 Unit 3 FASCINATING PARKS 写作指导

【审题谋篇】 体裁 人称 时态 话题
框架
说明文 第三人称 一般现在时 香港海洋公园 开头:介绍香港海洋公园的位置 展开:介绍它的面积、历史、活动 结尾:进行总结
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) wonder
n.奇迹;惊讶
(2) adventurous adj.爱冒险的
(3) theme park
主题公园
(2)句式升级 ⑥将句②升级为含有现在分词的句子 It is one of the largest marine parks in the world,covering more than 900,000 square metres. ⑦将句④升级为含有定语从句的句子 It is Hong Kong’s favourite park,which attracts the most visitors.
covers an area of 1.16 square kilometres.Officially opened in June 2016,it is the sixth Disney theme park in the world.
Shanghai Disneyland consists of seven theme parks,two theme hotels and many of the world’s first rides,with the TRON Lightcycle Power Run being the first attraction of its kind in Disney theme parks around the globe.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you again.ຫໍສະໝຸດ Yours, Li Hua
Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear from you and I can’t wait to introduce Shanghai
Disneyland to you. Located in the Pudong New Area of Shanghai,Shanghai Disneyland
Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear from you and I can’t wait to introduce Shanghai
Disneyland to you.
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Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows,such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.Hong Kong Ocean Park will fill your day with wonder,pleasure and excitement,and reward you with satisfying memories.
(二)精彩句型 1.Located in Shanghai,it is the sixth Disney theme park in the world. 它位于上海,是世界第六个迪士尼主题公园。 2.It is the largest theme park of the kind,covering more than 2,000 square meters. 它是同类主题公园中最大的一个,占地2000多平方米。 3.It consists of seven theme parks,two theme hotels and many of the world’s first rides. 它由7个主题公园、2个主题酒店和许多世界首发的游乐设施组成。
9.be well worth a visit 非常值得一游 10.bring sb into a magical world 带某人进入一个梦幻世界 11.preserve the diversity of species 保护物种的多样性 12.protect the country’s natural beauty 保护国家的自然美景 13.a combination of ecological protection and reasonable development 生态保 护和合理开发的结合 14.a perfect mix of education and entertainment 教育与娱乐的完美结合
感知文体常识
介绍一个主题公园
主题公园的介绍属于说明文。一般要介绍主题公园的特点或功能、位置、
开放时间、占地面积、具有特色的景点或娱乐项目以及吸引游客的原因
等。对主题公园进行描述时,语言要简洁、准确、条理清楚,又要突出特色。 时态通常用一般现在时,人称主要用第二或第三人称。 介绍主题公园,可以用总—分—总的结构来写: 第一部分,引出话题(介绍主题公园的总体情况); 第二部分,具体介绍主题公园的特色; 第三部分,总结全文(总体评价)。
【妙笔成篇】
Hong Kong Ocean Park,a famous theme park,is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.It is one of the largest marine parks in the world,covering more than 900,000 square metres.With a history of over 40 years,it has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is Hong Kong’s favourite park,which attracts the most visitors.
③它有着四十多年的历史,现已成为亚洲主要的旅游景点之一。 With a history of over 40 years,it has become ___o_n_e_o_f_t_h_e_m__aj_o_r_t_o_u_ri_s_t___ ____a_tt_ra_c_t_io_n_s__in_A__s_ia______. ④它是香港最受欢迎的公园,吸引了最多的游客。 It is Hong Kong’s favourite park and ___a_t_tr_a_c_ts__th_e__m_o_s_t_v_i_si_to_r_s__. ⑤香港海洋公园将让你的一天充满惊奇、快乐和兴奋,并为你带来满意的 回忆。 Hong Kong Ocean Park will _fi_ll_y_o_u_r_d_a_y__w_it_h_w__o_n_d_e_r,_p_le_a_s_u_re__an_d__e_x_c_it_em__e_n_t , and reward you with satisfying memories.
8.I would recommend it for a family vacation or a nice romantic getaway for two. 我觉得这很适合家庭旅行或者两个人的浪漫之旅。
9.The construction of the theme park is characterized by traditional styles,which cover all the local nationalities living in the city. 这个主题公园的建筑具有传统民族风格的特色,涵盖了城市内所有当地的民 族。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇 1.fantasy n.幻想;想象 2.fascinating adj.极有吸引力的;迷人的 3.leisure n.闲暇;休闲 4.be located in...位于…… 5.cover an area of...覆盖……面积 6.consist of 由……组成 7.around the globe 在全球 8.officially open in...官方开放时间是……
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】 请根据以下要点,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍香港海洋公园。 1.香港海洋公园,位于香港的南部,是一个著名的主题公园; 2.面积超过90万平方米,是世界上最大的海洋公园之一; 3.有着40多年的历史,是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一,也是香港最受人们喜欢 的公园,每年吸引大量的游客; 4.游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演; 5.香港海洋公园还为其提供的教育项目而自豪。
4.It seems like a place full of fantasy. 这似乎是一个充满幻想的地方。 5.It will bring you into a splendid world and your childhood dreams will come true there. 它将带你进入一个精彩的世界,而且你童年的梦想将会在那里实现。 6.It is such an amazing place that I expect another chance to visit it. 这是一个如此神奇的地方,我期待着下次有机会去参观。 7.It will fill your day with pleasure and excitement,and reward you with satisfying memories. 它会让你的一天充满快乐和兴奋,给你带来令人满意的回忆。
(4) tourist attraction 旅游景点
(5) more than
多于
(6) a wide variety of 种类繁多的
2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①香港海洋公园是一个著名的主题公园,坐落在香港的南部。 Hong Kong Ocean Park,a famous theme park,_____is_s_i_tu_a_t_e_d_i_n__________ the southern side of Hong Kong. ②它是世界上最大的海洋公园之一,占地面积超过90万平方米。 It is one of the largest marine parks in the world,and it _c_o_v_e_rs__m_o_r_e_t_h_a_n_9_0_0_,_0_0_0_s_q_u_a_r_e_m__et_r_e_s ___.
针对训练 假定你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Tony得知你前段时间去了上海迪士尼乐园, 发来邮件询问你那里的相关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回一封电子邮 件,要点包括: 1.位于上海市浦东新区,占地面积约为1.16平方千米; 2.是世界上第六个迪士尼主题乐园,于2016 年6月正式开园; 3.拥有七大主题园区、两大主题酒店、一些全球首发的游乐项目,例如创 极速光轮(The TRON Lightcycle Power Run)。 注意: 1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数); 2.请在相应位置作答。
10.Covering more than 1,600 hectares,the park is home to over 380 varieties of birds,which account for more than 90% of the whole amount of bird kinds in Hebei Province. 该公园占地1600多公顷,拥有鸟类380多种,占河北省鸟类种类总量的90%以 上。