最新九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案

最新九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
常州市政府发文，从年2月1日起，市区禁止燃放烟花爆竹。

你们班级的同学们就春节是否能燃放烟花进行了讨论。

请根据表格所提供的信息,给市长写一封信介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的想法。

注意： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 表达，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数不少于90。

文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Major,
We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas.
【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think
fire works produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some c hildren like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.
On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.
I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

常州市政府发文，从年2月1日起，市区禁止燃放烟花爆竹。

你们班级的同学们就春节是否能燃放烟花进行了讨论。

请根据表格所提供的信息,给市长写一封信介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的想法。

时态主要为一般现在时。

人称主要为第三人称和
第一人称。

仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题和所给要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

尽量使用高分句型。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
大多数学生不同意在春节放烟花。

他们认为烟花产生的烟太多，会造成严重的空气污染。

更重要的是，人们喜欢在午夜放假，外面总是那么吵，很多人睡不好觉。

另外，如果人们不够小心，可能会引起大火。

有些孩子喜欢玩烟花，这对他们的眼睛很危险。

如果我们不放烟花，清洁工就不需要到处清理那么多垃圾。

另一方面，有些学生不同意。

他们认为中国人几百年前就习惯放烟花了。

此外，中国传统文化也缺失了。

我们应该保护它。

如果没有烟花，人们会比以前更不感兴趣。

我认为我们应该遵守这条规则，因为良好的环境比其他任何东西都重要。

保护环境就是保护我们自己。

【点睛】
本文思路清晰，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，层次分明，所用句式句型比较高级，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。

书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和高分句式，语言要规范，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，下周你们学校将要组织学生开展“父亲节活动计划”分享活动，你打算先分享给你们班交换生Peter，希望听听他的看法。

请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的计划是什么，你为什么这么做，并表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

提示词语： gift, love, opinion
提示问题：● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
We will share the plan for Father’s Day next
week.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.
I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。

在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段写你为什么这么做；第三段表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述父亲节计划；时态采用的是一般现在时为主，描述具体建议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。

句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。

3．（·湖南中考模拟）现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________
【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a
smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。

文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．（·安徽中考模拟）李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。

假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。

内容须包含以下所有要点：
1. 中秋节的时间；
2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to
you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。

全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．（·北京中考模拟）题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。

”坚持是一种可贵的品格。

生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描
写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。

书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步
总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。

比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

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6．（·辽宁初三）生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。

白杨是我的同学。

她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmat es and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇人物介绍。

人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患
病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。

注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。

who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她仍然笑对生活。

No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

7．（·江西中考模拟）健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。

同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。

请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。

提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3. 对养成好的学习习惯的建议（至少提三条建议）。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it′s not
easy.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
【答案】How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we
develop good study habits?
First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren't feeling sleepy. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you'd better ask for help when having trouble studying.
Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。

【详解】
考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥。

在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议；在语言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，简洁无错；在规范方面，注意单词拼写，标点防护好的正确使用。

8．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it.
Please writ e a composition with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included:
1. How did you get the story?
2. When and where did it happen?
3. What happened exactly?
4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.
【答案】请参考范文：
The happy thing that I have ever experienced
This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.
I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple life.When I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.
Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice ter, I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano teacher.So I learned the piano from my teacher there.
Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for it.He advised my father to give up.But my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn't give up. I was moved by my father's encourgement.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是关于自己经历或看到的故事为话题的材料作文，要求根据内容要点来写作。

学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的中心。

在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。

写作时还要注
意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。

高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.这是一个关于我自己经历的故事，从这件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸对我的爱，温暖而深沉的爱。

Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice place.突然有一天，爸爸说带我去一个好地方。

But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn't matter.但是我爸爸说只要我高兴就行，没关系。

【点睛】
注意写作过程中，将要点展开并表达清楚，注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。

9．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）（B）《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们的一生，会经历很多的第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们的成长。

”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。

不少于80词。

（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）
【答案】The First Cooking
Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.
【解析】
【分析】
本文为材料作文，需要写出第一次做某事，人生中有许多第一次，可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻，并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写，这样的话，贴近生活实际，学生有话可说。

【详解】
本文写了我的第一次做饭，先交代背景知识，因为父母不在家，所以我不得不自己动手，动手做的过程中，由于没有经验，理所当然地失败了。

但是，我不能气馁，要从失败中找原因，从哪里跌倒，就从哪里起来，所以，第二周，我让妈妈教我做菜，获得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放弃，就能获得成功。

【点睛】
本篇作文贴近实际，每个人都有第一次，挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。

但是需要注意文章逻辑，语篇顺序，注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。

这样的话，文章符合英文造句习惯，更容易获得高分。

10．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to r ead eBooks.
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All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。

同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；
3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。

The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
class.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】
【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达。

根据下列图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文，要求叙述完整。

1 2
3 4
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【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 a.m. We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇看图作文，介绍我们在一次爬山过程中保护环境，捡拾垃圾。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我们决定去爬山，接下来介绍我们在山顶上发现垃圾，然后捡拾垃圾，最后表达我们的感受。

此处set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

13．（·湖北中考模拟）学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。

请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。

提示：1. never swim alone;
2. be careful to make friends;
3. call the police when you are in danger;
4. eat healthy food;
5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）.
要求：1. 句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

How Can We Protect Ourselves?
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【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How can we protect ourselves为题，谈一谈青少年在日常生活中应该如何保护自己。

这是一篇话题作文，文章中只给出了写作的题目，而未给出具体的内容，因此首先学生们应结合自己的日常生活，发挥想象力，先列出文章具体内容的提纲，然后根据题纲来组织语言，最后成文。

这样的题目是有点难度的，但也一定程度上放开了学生的思维，学生们可以根据自己所想来写作，而不用受到内容的限制。

写之前，要注意确定文章应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇作文应以第一人称we为主，一般现在时态来叙述。

注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，以主谓宾和主系表的结构为基础，写出正确的句子，然后为提升文章档次，使用几个较复杂的句型，如复合句、非谓语动词、被动结构等等。

还应注意语句之间的连接，使用一些短语、副词等，使整篇文章意思连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容符合题目要求，并且内容充实、完整，表达清楚、明了。

作者从三个方面讲述了自己的看法，这几个方面都非常符合实际，所提建议很合理。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第一人称为主，语法规范、准确，符合英语的表达习惯。

文章里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.两句话中使用了状语从句；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非谓语动词的使用。

文章各部分之间使用了较好的连接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，这些词汇和短语的使用让文章具有连贯性。

14．（·湖北中考模拟）为配合我市开展“创建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。

现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：
1. 保持环境卫生；。