2019届高考英语一轮复习 写作技巧点拨系列八满分作文怎样得-四步作文法讲义 北师大版

第二步 要点要全
1．我是你的学生李华。
I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students. 2．我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传
统艺术形式之一，我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。
I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_paper-cutting_exhibition.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 11：00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will
perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
第四步 衔接要顺 One possible version： Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chin百度文库se traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua
现场阅卷·作文升格 学生答卷 Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to invite you to the paper
7．盼望着收到你的来信。 I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
第三步 句式要美 1．句4合并升级为定语从句 There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_c ut_paper_on_the_spot. 2．句5升级为过去分词作定语 Some_beautiful_paper-cutting_works,_collected_from_all_ove r_the_country,_will_be_on_show.
满分作文怎样得——四步作文法
书信邮件类 题目要求 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ) 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸 (paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．展览时间、地点； 2．展览内容。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
解题思路 四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁 邀请信 2．时态 一般现在时和将来时 3．人称 第三人称为主
00_am_to_11：00_am_next_Saturday.
4．有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。
There_are_some_famous_artists.
They
will
perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot.
5．从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。
cutting exhibition.Paper-cutting is one of chinese traditions and I'm sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next saturday some famous chinese artists will perform on that day.Meanwhile，some beautiful paper cutting works，collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there.If you like， you can also join in paper-cutting.I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
我来阅卷 该生习作为四档作文，得分为18分。作文语言准确，而且 使用了非谓语动词、复合句(包括主语从句、状语从句)等，总 体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是，文章没有分段，缺少框 架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，给阅卷老师判卷带来了困 难，从而影响了得分。
Paper-cutting
is
one
of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.
3．艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举
行。
The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8：
Some
beautiful
paper-cutting
works,
which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_will_be_on_sho
w.
6．如果你喜欢，你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将 是一个令人难忘的经历。
If you like, you_can_also_join_in_paper-cutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you.