2017版高考英语一轮复习 专题三 怎样写出凝练的句子考点突破课件

would fall off the edge of the earth. ⑤The technique is expected to be used in the study and treatment of
nerve disorders such as Parkinson’s disease.
3. 请使用名词(短语)、动词、介词短语、with复合结构、同位语 等形式简化下列句子。 ①We left the farm and took the school bus back home. At that time the moon just appeared. ______________________________________________________ ②Having worked for almost ten hours in the hospital, he lay in the couch and he felt tired and hungry. ______________________________________________________ ③The English that he spoke was so fluent and beautiful that all of us took him for someone who comes from Britain or America. ______________________________________________________ ④At the party, there will be many programs. And singing, dancing and reading poems will be part of them. ______________________________________________________ ⑤What idea do you want to express when you frequently mention Mr. Blair, who directs our project? ______________________________________________________
专题三 怎样写出凝练的句子 在英语短文写作中，提倡使用并列句、复合句，因为使用并 列句、复合句能增强句子间的逻辑关系。但万事万物都不能走极 端，我们在使用并列句、复合句的同时，还要追求语言的简洁性。 这里的“凝练”并不等同于“简单、单调”，而是合理地使用一 些写作技巧将松散的简单句、并列句或过于复杂的复合句简化， 从而达到长短句结合紧凑，表达言简意赅的效果。 为避免句子冗长，通常可采用以下办法：
英语中比较重要的从属概念可用从句的形式表达，其他次要的 概念常用词或短语来表达，因为句子比短语显得更重要。过多地使
用从句会把主次概念相混淆，削句意的重点。
修改：He is an honest man, who always pays his just debts, and observes the golden rules in his dealings with others. 3. My hometown is a quiet, peaceful place. It is quiet and peaceful because of the small number of people living there. 有时为了构成平行的句子结构或达到强调的目的，会重复使用 某些词语。但是，无目的的重复会导致句子累赘。 修改：My hometown is a quiet, peaceful place because of the small
to report it to the police.
③He started his own enterprise of chicken raising with much borrowed money, hoping to gain good wealth.
④Believing the earth to be flat, many people feared that Columbus
2. 请使用非谓语动词简化下列复合句。 ①When she was asked why she was late for work this morning, Mary said that she wrongly set the alarm time last night before she went to bed. ____________________________________________________________ ②As she felt that things were getting more and more urgent, Batty decided to report it to the police. ____________________________________________________________ ③He started his own enterprise of chicken raising with much borrowed money, and he hoped to gain good wealth. ____________________________________________________________ ④Because people believed the earth to be flat, many of them feared that Columbus would fall off the edge of the earth. ____________________________________________________________ ⑤People expect that the technique will be used in the study and treatment of nerve disorders such as Parkinson’s disease. ____________________________________________________________
Key： 1. ①(When/On) hearing the children’s sad story in the war-stricken area, he devoted all he had to building a school for them. ②(When) getting back home, I saw a message pinned to the door, reading “Sorry to miss you, will call later.” ③Being badly injured in the right leg made it difficult for him to run or even to walk as usual. ④Starting at 7:00 last night, the lecture was followed by an observation of the moon with telescope./The lecture, starting at 7:00 last night, was followed by an observation of the moon with telescope. ⑤Walter offered us a lift when he was leaving the office, but our work not finished, we refused that.
Key：3. ①With the moon appearing, we left the farm and took the school bus back home. ②Having worked for almost ten hours in the hospital, he lay in the couch, tired and hungry. ③His spoken English was so fluent and beautiful that all of us took him for someone from Britain or America. ④At the party, there will be many programs, such as singing, dancing and reading poems.
number of people.
即时巩固 1. 请使用非谓语动词简化下列简单句或并列句。 ①He heard the children’s sad story in the war-stricken area and then he took out all he had to build a school for them. _______________________________________________________ ②I got back home and saw a message. It was pinned to the door and it read “Sorry to miss you, will call later.” _______________________________________________________ ③He was badly injured in the right leg and that made it difficult for him to run or even to walk as usual. _______________________________________________________ ④The lecture started at 7∶00 last night and it was followed by an observation of the moon with telescope. _______________________________________________________ ⑤Walter offered us a lift when he was leaving the office, but because our work was not finished, we refused the offer. _______________________________________________________