李笑来ibt高分作文
作文范文之托福作文185题
托福作文185题【篇一:托福官方作文185题库范文【全】】目录toefl.ibt 高分作文思路+范文完美重排版 (3)本部分填补了目前网络ibt 备考资料的空白。
根据李笑来老师提供的作文思路与《ibt 高分作文》原书范文重排。
本部分对ibt 考试的独立写作部分与口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。
范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。
附录一 185 题库按关键词分类 (184)照录原书附录附录二李笑来作文笔记(独立部分) (185)根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成附录三句法多样性专题 (193)附录四例证表达法 (199)时间匆忙,欢迎指出错误,将在后面的版本中修正。
感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料,一切版权归笑来老师所有。
仅供广大ibt 考生备考参考,建议购买原版以更好使用。
lost lawyer2006 年11 月10 日page 2 of 201toefl.ibt 高分作文思路+范文完美重排版1. why people attend college?people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university?use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个):增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如,周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了,所以自己也选择读书找不到工作(无知,总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。
李笑来TOEFL高分英语作文-002
Are parents the best teachers?Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.显而易见,很多时候人们最早的老师是他们的父母,父母通常是最关心孩子的发展的。
然而,说父母是最好的老师并不完全正确。
First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including the bad ones from their parents. Another decificiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instruction, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.首先,并不是所有的父母都是好老师。
组合拳听力
[推荐]活用“组合拳”练习听力,兼练作文和口语 --《IBT备考导航》之二十三新托福的推出,强化了听力的份量,加入了口语,作文也和阅读、听力平起平坐,记入托福考试总分内。
在此推荐一个可以同时练习听说写的“组合拳”,具体的“拳法”分别是四位新东方老师创造的,在此要感谢上海新东方的邱政政老师,林燕老师,加拿大新东方的汉客老师,以及北京新东方的李笑来老师。
首先,推荐用比较经典的旧托福听力partC来训练。
就是把邱政政老师推荐的20篇旧托福长段子(编号IL05)深度利用(严格来说partC只有19篇,有一篇是partB,即长对话,不过那篇长对话也非常有代表性)。
P.S 当然,虽然旧托福partC的段子长度都比新托福段子短很多,但是邱政政20篇属于其中较难的段子,基础不佳的朋友可以用较为简单的另一个partC段子集合(编号IL02)来练习。
基础较好,或备考时间少于2个月的朋友们,可以跳过这些材料(或者仅用3、4篇partC文章做热身练习),直接用新托福听力材料练习(比如OG、Delta),但练习方法仍旧采用下面提到的“听写十五段”和“听力大醉拳”。
练习的方法么,先用听写,具体办法可用上海新东方另一听力大牛人,林燕老师的“听写十五段”。
/post.678289.html“一. 十五段听写(训练Part B, Part C)1. 做过的5段,听一句写一句(力争和原文差不多),一句话最多听3遍,听写完一个段子后,核对原文。
2. 做过的5段,2~3句听写,写下main idea,看写下的句子是否逻辑意思一致,在核对原文。
3. 做过的5段,听全文,写key points,核对原文,看写下的key points是否涵盖了所有的问题。
”这个办法我自己试过,效果挺好的。
林燕的听写办法本来对文章选择并不做具体的要求,不过如果配合邱政政精选20篇较难的且有代表性的文章,效果应该更好。
听写其实具体大致可以分两种,一种是狭义上的听写,或者叫地毯式听写,一字不漏,但一般只能一句一句听写,多则两三句。
李笑来ibt高分作文
李笑来ibt高分作文TOEFL.iBT 高分作文思路+范文完美重排版目录1. Why people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个):增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如,周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了,所以自己也选择读书找不到工作("无知",总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。
上大学如是[1],去博物馆如是[12],从事危险运动亦如是[43]。
) 相关题目:[168] 『范文』After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific collegedegree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared forany job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still placea higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.2. Are parents the best teachers?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』因观点绝对而不能同意。
李笑来作文笔记
1have the option to directly enter the work forceBefore attending collegehave a limited opportunity to specializeWith a larger range of potential jobs to choose frompay a premium fordesire employees who are competent in more than one languageplace a higher value onpossesses credential s fromin a given fieldcollege graduatesin addition to doing sth. …also do sth.除了做什么,还做…offer access to sth. with a clear path towards …Both of these avenue s would be unavailable without2Obviously, in most cases …are generally most concerned about …it is not completely true to say that …As normal individuals 对于普通人而言more or less have some bad habitsthe outcome might turn out to befor all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parentsanother deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact [that …]All too often 时常,经常we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their childrenin a prearranged directionbe regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebelliousit is A rather than B that virtually do sth.be qualified asthe situation will not last longpreliminary school 学前班in a certain fieldNo parent is able to …, though …in one or more fieldsrelease their childrenThey are aware of the possibilityParents may, nevertheless, do A much more than do Bbe virtually beyond one’s reachesthe nature of sb. is distortedit is rather superficial to simply say that3provident housewiveswork for hoursbuy home [dirty vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth] Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming taskthings are entirely differenteven haveneed onlyto be made intoindeed greatly improved the way people liveIn a sense在某种意义上a tedious taska higher pay job or a more respectful one.这种写法要会用。
李笑来:所有学习上的成功,都只靠两件事:策略和坚持,而坚持本身就是最重要的策略
李笑来:所有学习上的成功,都只靠两件事:策略和坚持,而坚持本身就是最重要的策略欣赏书摘之前,先看一看分享者萨萨的阅读故事~其实,这是我第二次尝试阅读这本书,第一次把这本书给读完了。
是的,第一次大概是四五年前,也有一个朋友向我推荐了这本书,是出于什么样的原因推荐的我已经不记得了,可能也是我道出了自己对于时间管理的迷茫之类的感慨吧,但是当时收到电子档的书之后,因为每天忙着工作,很多次我打开这本书,到最后都是下班的时候一次次关掉了,最终也就不了了之。
这次是读书群里的另一个朋友推荐,我坚持读完了这本书,可以说是获益良多。
另一方面,我也是在想,是不是有些时候有些文章,电影,书籍,音乐和人,最终还是会遇到的,比如高二觉得难听,高三惊为天人的蔡健雅,比如到大学之后才喜欢上的张学友,又比如如今才读完的这本书。
书中作者叙述了所有人在面对时间时所遇到的困境,以及如何摆脱困境:开启心智,提高心智,和时间做朋友,以及如何开拓心智,还有一些需要克服的不良习惯和建议。
在看的过程中,常常一边阅读,一边在内心哀嚎,这说的不就是我么?原来我就是这个样子一步步把自己逼到了如今的这种尴尬的境地。
这个时候,似乎就有必要说说自己的尴尬境地了。
是的,目前本人正是一枚大龄单身失业女青年,为什么这么称呼自己,因为常常感觉现在这个阶段似乎是20多年来最黯淡的一段时间了,你知道就是那种没有钱没有对象没有工作的人,好像哪个方面都是失败的,常常怀疑人生,感觉自己的一生似乎就要这么凄惨地过完了。
好吧,其实真的也并没有这么惨,毕竟这个时候我还是知道,在你困难失意,没有头绪的时候,就读书吧。
所以,我开始静下来读书,学习英语,还有练字,是的,坚持每天至少完成这三件事。
也许你会问,你的这些事跟这本书有什么关系吗?还真有,在书里,李笑来老师给人们提出的建议当中就有,学习和掌握一些技能。
学习的方法有很多种,读书大概是其中最简单,也最省力的一种了吧,是的,它并不省时,相反,它可能需要你花费大量的时间,你要去和你的书做朋友,和书的作者交朋友,去了解他的思想,逻辑和想说的话,最终看看能否从中找出一些对你自己有用的东西。
李笑来《新托福iBT词汇分类突破》word版
智课网TOEFL备考资料李笑来《新托福iBT词汇分类突破》word版摘要:李笑来《新托福iBT词汇分类突破》word版!新托福考试要求的词汇量比较高,很多同学们在面对大量的托福词汇不知道怎么,都想求一份好的词汇书帮助自己快速掌握托福词汇,小编特为大家整理出了李笑来《新托福iBT词汇分类突破》word版,同学们快来看看吧!李笑来《新托福 iBT词汇分类突破》word版!新托福考试要求的词汇量比较高,很多同学们在面对大量的托福词汇不知道怎么,都想求一份好的词汇书帮助自己快速掌握托福词汇,小编特为大家整理出了李笑来《新托福 iBT词汇分类突破》word版,同学们快来看看吧!李笑来《新托福iBT词汇分类突破》word版内容具体如下:如何使用本书1. 第一件事:“快速通读”这个阶段建议在三天之内完成。
这个阶段中,最主要的任务并不是记忆单词,而是熟悉话题。
一定要在最快的时间里了解托福考试所涉及的话题。
因为一直以来,国内的种种英语教学材料的文本中——无论是体制内的教科书,还是体制外的“教辅书籍”,以及各种学习杂志,都有意无意地把话题更多地定位在“社科类”领域中——或许是因为很多人都觉得外语属于“文科”罢。
最终,很多中国学生(哪怕是“理科生”)平时尽力读的英文内容也很少涉及自然科学。
然而,在 TOEFL 这个衡量考生英语实用能力的考试中,英语被定义为一个必要工具——用来到英语国家学习任何学科都必须使用的工具。
所以,在托福考试中,自然科学和人文科学的话题几乎是平分天下,各占一半。
于是在托福的考试内容中至少有一半会让很多考生“感觉”非常不适应,比如,关于地理地质(冰河、火山)的话题,或者关于微生物(浮游生物)古生物(恐龙)的话题。
就算是一些在我们眼里常常被划分到“文科”的话题,实际上也不是中国学生经常阅读的,比如,关于考古学(化石)、人类学(古碑文)的话题。
所以,建议读者在最快的时间完成第一遍的“通读”。
在通读的过程中,留意一下那些“一看就头晕”的话题,做出记号;在下一步制定计划的过程中,有意为这些话题多留一点时间。
作文范文之toeflibt高分作文
toeflibt高分作文【篇一:李笑来ibt高分作文】toefl.ibt 高分作文完美重排版 edited by lost lawyertoefl.ibt 高分作文思路+范文完美重排版目录1. why people attend college?people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个):增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如,周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了,所以自己也选择读书找不到工作(无知,总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。
上大学如是[1],去博物馆如是[12],从事危险运动亦如是[43]。
) 相关题目:[168]『范文』after graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. moststudents who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (they attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. after obtaining a specific collegedegree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. for instance, applicants with computer science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. with a larger range ofpotential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likelyto find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. for example, manycompanies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still placetoefl.ibt 高分作文完美重排版 edited by lost lawyera higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. a b.s. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. the same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step ofan undergraduate degree in biology.2. are parents the best teachers?do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』因观点绝对而不能同意。
李笑来、吴伯凡、xdite帮你揭秘学习的本质,助你高效学习
李笑来、吴伯凡、xdite帮你揭秘学习的本质,助你高效学习如何建立一个底层的学习架构?然后学习成瘾,在认知升级的道上一路狂飙,这事到底有没有可行性方法。
因为认知遮蔽,以前没有想过这个问题。
直到跟着李笑来的专栏听下来,接触到xdite老师的极速阅读,看了北大博士后核聚老师的一些文章,了解到他高考逆袭进入北大的学习方法,到这两天听吴伯凡的专栏讲到学习,又恰巧读了《学习的本质》这本书,所有的信息碰撞到一起。
发现:噢,原来牛人的底层学习架构,很多是建立在这本书上的。
这些牛人提到的学习方法,和他们的个人经验,丰富了《学习的本质》理论。
我试着将这些老师的经验,和书里所阐述的内容,结合我自己的理解,有序的组合下,搭建出一个底层的学习框架图。
主要围绕两个概念,学习需要具备的条件,以及高效学习的方法进行。
先有概念李笑来讲过一个故事:以前在新东方教书时,有学生问,老师,我英语是零基础,可以学好英语吗?李笑来说,你不是零基础,你是负基础。
追溯这句话,就要提到《学习的本质》这本书的一个重要知识:先有概念。
先有概念是存在于自身的元概念,作为一个过滤器对现实进行编码,使人得以行动,进行预测或是做出决定,是一种适应策略。
直白点就是,人们基于自己已有的知识建构新知识。
只能用已知解释未知,不能用未知解释未知。
这给人们带来创造性机遇,通过跟先有概念建立联系,快速学习新知识;同时,伴随着危险,让人们自以为是,固步自封。
刚开始学习CSS 时,完全小白。
老师用一个手机的类比来解释margin``border``padding 的关系,很好理解。
他说,大家给手机套的外壳接触到的边缘距离,可以理解成margin,边框和屏幕的距离就是border,屏幕到图标的距离就是padding啦。
现在想想,真是非常形象的一个类比,可以帮助大家快速学习未知知识。
上面是好的案例,下面这个故事,存在认知局限造成的遮蔽。
有个鱼和小蝌蚪的故事。
鱼很想了解陆地上的世界,等小蝌蚪长大变成了青蛙,鱼就让青蛙给自己讲讲陆地上的见闻。
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关于李笑来托福iBT作文范文Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It’s a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than to live in a small town, or vice versus.Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there’re more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in a small town. Furthermore, not merely there are more job positions in big cities, the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in a small town. For families, children’s education is always put in the first place. Finally, living in a big city has a superior overall living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; there are even much moretelevision channels in big cities.However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them are immune from suffering of high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually more inexpensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and no body drive so fast in a small town as to cause accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with.According to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in big cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my country --- Beijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay.I think I would prefer living a small town when I get retired one day.[392 Words]。
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李笑来托福作文范文(1)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Obviously, the earliest teachers we have in our lives in most cases are our parents, and they are generally the most involved in the development and education of their children. Yet neither are all parents good teachers nor are those good parents the best teachers.First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the oute might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy every thing from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of mon senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, if theirchildren did not follow the instructions, the children would be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey mon senses.Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is aumulated by multiplying and at the same time bees more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than ever before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education arevirtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albert Einstein's mother and Forest Gump's mother are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.[404 words]模板,内容仅供参考。
新东方托福强化班讲义之写作部分(李笑来)
今天是作文,最令我意外的就是作文老师居然是传说中的李笑来.他首先提醒我们,没有经过充分准备的考生千万别进考场,如果参加了考试的,确定自己肯定拿不到自己理想的分数的.请在考试最后记得cancel 掉自己的考试成绩,因为ETS的评分是按照平均水平来的,如果你confirm了你的成绩,在无形中就提高了别人的成绩.一. 1,评分标准要one by one的仔细研读.这个我也觉得很重要,他花了好长时间分析了评分标准,我觉得这个直接影响你的写作思路和方向.大家要抓住评分标准里面的关键词.更重要的是,在评分过程中,是一个找宝的过程,他给我们看了一篇1分—2分的作文.这篇作文貌似组织良好,但是里面隐藏着许多逻辑错误.2,Sample response from ETS and the readers comments.后者更加重要,要抓住comments里关键词3,关于展开论点.OG,P259—260 要很好的展开论点,运用恰当清晰的解释,例证和细节.评分人员会评估考生的作文是否切题,文章中的细节,事例,理由在多大程度上支持论点.不要光为了增加文章字数而死记硬背一些冗长的首,末段.二. 1,在综合写作部分,要快速阅读给出段子的首句,第一段要读前两句,尽量笔记下关键词.2,关注名词概念.主要靠平时积累三.在阅读部分如何作笔记:1,用缩写代替名词概念2,用符号代替逻辑关系四.不要在以下四方面浪费时间:1,不要在意美英之间的差异.2,不要在意口语和书面语之间的差异3,不必在意任何文化差异. ,例如同性恋问题,185中不涉及文化问题.4,不必在意语言是否地道,只写acceptable writing English. 他的意思就是,以我们大家现在的水平是不可能写的出地道的英文,写出能让人接受的正规格式的英文就足够了.五.Step by step1,列大纲,落实具体细节.根据心理学,人类思考并不一定依赖语言,所以列大纲并不一定要用美国人思维方式,记得一定要用中文列大纲.并且大纲内容一定要平实朴素无修饰.(在写作过程中如果遇到不会写的专有名词时,可用拼音代替,在后面用一句话来解释一下即可)2,永不轻言放弃.在遇到不会表达的地方可用同位语解释.3,具体具体再具体.这一点在口语中也有提到.一定要具体到具体的时间地点.可把大纲扩充成分,也可变强调句.老美就爱这个,没办法.所以一定要具体具体再具体.六.排比句的技巧:1,公整对照.2,句法大同,词汇小异3,遵循二分法七.3A1,Start anyway 好的文字是改出来的,而不是倒出来的.所以一定要逼自己动手写下去.2,Continu anyway 直到最后,不管用多长时间一定要坚持写到底.3,Close anyway 给自己一个期限.不能无限制的写下去而又写不完.在思想上给自己一个约束.TIPS:1,IBT的写作是要求说明性,说理性文字,而非散文和诗歌2,特定的文章用特定的阅读方法.3,快速阅读并不是快速移动你的眼睛.4,考前至少背5篇有代表性的范文.5,在平时练习的时候遇到生词一定要记录到自己的笔记本上.定期反复复习6,要具有清楚的,恰当的举例说明能力.平时可以用中文练习.在语言上尽量简洁,朴素,有效.7,第一次练习写作的时候借助一切可以借助的手段,用心写,不必限时.长此以往,写作文的时间会越来越短的.8,关注李笑来的个人网站9,郑渊洁的Blog.5th Feb Writing独立测试部分一简单说明文第一部分1段 Background information**Thesis statement第二部分2-3段 Supporting例平均寿命1段上世纪本世纪增长了20岁主题句Among various factors that have made people live long are A,B,C.2 段 A 食物条件改善A is very important factor……(what / why /how)粗粮-细粮肥肉-精肉牛奶Water from river of well…..now from tap water……Mineral water such as soft drink…..利用googleB 医疗技术Equally important is B(形容词提前体现句法的多样性并且equally 是上下文紧密连接)C 社会稳定Match A and B is another essential factor C.**写主题句的建议1 尽量不要使用只抽象名词主题句好结论句没必要写2 尽量暗示文章将来结构3 主题句应该值得解释,值得证明4 使用绝对词应该慎重(经常问Is this always true?)但不是段首句时,可放宽标准二对比对照第一部分1段Background information第二部分2段Compare and contrast第三部分1段Thesis statement (A>B)例P.7 (4) 说服重于表达列出A,B的缺点和优点然后A>B第一部分Some people assert that B is better than A. However, I want to reason that A is in fact better than B.第二部分第一种方法第二种方法A的优点1,2,3,A缺点1 A的优点1,2,3,B优点1B的缺点1,2,3, B优点1 B的缺点1,2,3, A 缺点1第三部分A>B**说服的原则1 不要站在人家对立面上2 不要告诉他结论,你要让他想结论3 不要盲目追求标新立异三立论文第一部分1段Background information第二部分2段-3段Supporting第三部分1段Rebuttal—驳证(可放在任何地方)第四部分1段Thesis statement例保护濒临灭绝动物很多人的立场是反对保护濒临灭绝动物我的立场是反对盲目地保护濒临灭绝的动物。
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26. Do you like a new movie theater being built in your neighborhood?It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.参见:[5]『范文』Many people consider our town a small provincial[prə'vinʃəl]地方的backwater回水河汊, lacking both culture and the amenities设施of modern life. Building the recently proposed movie theater would be a step in the right direction, away from our backwards past, and towards participation参加in the larger world. It will create jobs, spark economic activity, and provide entertainment and culture for our young people.Movie theaters are necessarily large-scale affairs, attract a large amount of customers, and accordingly因此need to employ a fairly large number of people as ushers招待员, concession[kən'seʃən] stand chefs特许展位负责人andattendants, ticket sellers, and janitorial['dʒænitə]门警staff, as well asprojection计划technicians, managers, accountants会计师, and other higher-level professionals. The employees would be drawn选拔出from the local population, and considering the tight job market紧张的就业市场in the area, the movie theatre would provide much needed full or supplement incomes for at leastthirty families in the area.Going to the movies is usually an evening experience that either precedes在...之前or comes directly after eating dinner. For this reason many restaurants, cafes, bars, music shops, and other leisure['leʒə; 'li:ʒə]空闲and entertainment venues spring up涌现around movie theatres. People who are going to the movies have disposable[dis'pəuzəbl]可任意使用的incomes and have already left their houses in search of a good time. This is an ideal market, and local entrepreneurs[ˌɔntrəprə'nə:]企业家are certain to capitalize[kə'pitəlaiz] on利用the opportunity to open up new business ventures商业计划and develop the lucrative['lu:krətiv, lju:-] 有利益的area around the movie theater, further invigorating(赋予精神)进一步促进the local economy.In addition to providing jobs and developing the local economy, a movie theater will bring us a little bit closer to the outside world. We will be able to participate in popular culture. A movie theater is one step in this direction, and if we can successfully transform our sleepy little hamlet小村into a regional地方的cultural hot spot, we will be able to keep our young people from migrating迁移to larger cities that they consider more developed and sophisticated高度发展的.Our young people are our most precious resource and we should do everything to keep them here.27. Should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』这个statement里面的限定词是sometimes。
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李笑来老师185作文最新的编排(word)内容速览文件大小:189 KB (193,817 字节)文件类型:word李笑来老师185作文最新的编排:Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』总体上,“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步[37],所以自然会带来improvement。
使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化:好的:节省时间,越来越方便,一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来也有不好的变化:准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动,可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少了,比如“速冻饺子”[quick-frozen dumpling]快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是,人们普遍变胖了,尤其是孩子相关题目:[13]『范文』People today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner, provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty vegetables which had Page 5 of 201TOEFL .iBT 高分作文完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyerto wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeedgreatly improved the way people live.In a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand, more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, it's not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a day's hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! Children can more easily become independent—at least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are occasionally not present.But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their responsibility. The reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: "I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day?" And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: "I can take care of myself, at least I don't really need someone prepare me dinner!"Anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of people's life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of opportunity it is.李笑来老师185作文最新的编排的内容我们就介绍到这里,有关李笑来老师的精华资料我们之前也介绍了不少,如果以上内容满足不了你的需求,你也可以点击一下按钮,查看更多李笑来老师精华资料集》》点击查看李笑来老师精华资料集》》。
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托福范文(共10篇)托福范文(一): 新托福李笑来《TOEFL.iBT高分作文》里的范文是满分作文吗每一题里举得例子是满分作文吗不是的,它只是作为一个范文,样本,你在写作的时候可以适当的模仿它的词汇语句,它只是达到了参考的作用,不是真正的满分作文,事实上你在真正考试的时候很难遇到题目和185里完全一样的,所以学习高分作文是帮你拓宽思路和提高遣词造句的水平,而并不是照搬.托福范文(二): 求托福作文183篇的范文和各个类型的题目对应的范文! 不能发的话给个地址也行啊已发,注意查收.托福范文(三): 托福作文的格式是怎样的能不能给篇范文.到底是写一方面把另一方面完全否决,还是两方面都要提谢谢!题目Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the futureUse specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.范文The Advantages of Saving MoneyEveryone must work to live,but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need.What should they do with this extra incomeWhile it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire,I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.By saving money,people give themselves more security.They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless.At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time.In addition,saving money allows people to build up a larger sum.They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away.For example,they may be able to buy a house with their savings.Finally,the practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future.In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately.Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants.However,if we learn to save our money,we can gain more advantages in the future.We will lead more secure and,thus,happier lives.We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.小马过河国际教育帮你回答!还准备了更多满分托福作文范例.托福范文(四): 求一个托福作文例子就是范文86,89,90,91结合起来写回到过去问一个演员或者运动员一个问题见谁呢问什么呢具体写什么观点【托福范文】1.ABRAHAM LINCOLN你先用wikipedia 搜一下他的事迹.可以写一些比较著名的.比如abolitionist.在civil war中林肯展现的品质.In this temple as in people"s heart abraham lincoln who saved the union will be enshined forever这是写林肯纪念堂上的一句话.可以作为结尾.你可以搜一下准确版本.我也记不太清.2.Helen kellerher persistence and fortitude你可以写你深深的感动于当她遇到困难时坚定的信念等等.要写一些美国历史上的名人.而且是需要自己比较熟悉.能够举出丰富的例子的.想到人.但是不知道例子.可是用wiki或者百度百科搜一下.看一遍介绍以后.自己总结一下.写出来.还有.这种题目出道的几率基本为0.一般不需要准备这样的题目.托福范文(五): 托福写作一定要写个例子吗【托福范文】不一定!论据一般有三段.例子只是一种论证方法,你可以整段采用推论式,也可以反面论证.总之各种方法都行,只要说出来令人信服托福范文(六): 各位大大,关于托福OG上独立写作范文的问题,我怎么感觉那篇5分范文很垃圾,结构感觉不清晰很多语言感觉很啰嗦的,用词错误的地方就不说了.不知道是不是我的水平不够,还是我习惯了用XDF那套写作套路,还请各位指点,让我认识自己的缺点呀 DISHONESTY KILLS RELIABILITYThere are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyonewould more or less wish that the person s/he isdealing with, has some of these virtues above.Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.When someone asks him/herself the question “What do Iconsider to be the most important thing in my relationship”the answerdepends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were.After stating that everyone’s opinioncan be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling thetruth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of thisis inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hidingsomething or is afraid of telling me something.In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks thats/he didsomething wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and notlie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someoneelse, that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe ortrust that person again How can I ever believe that this person has enoughconfidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship fromthere. So if I cannot trust a person any more, if the person doesn’t think Ican handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship.Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviorswould not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possiblebehaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about aperson’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and themost important consideration in a relationship.在国外时间长了你就会发现,中国人和他们的思维方式的确存在差异.写作时习惯的表述方法,描述事物的角度方式都有所不同.尤其高中之后出国的人可能一辈子都改不过来.随便看个英语原版的教材就能发现,一个事反反复复的说来说去,就是你所说的“啰嗦”.就托福来讲写好新东方的或者任何一种八股文的写法都足以拿高分了.目标应该是总分100+ 口语23+ 其他单项别太低就成托福范文(七): 托福TPO 1的小写作,有范文,想问一下大概自己的分数:The lecture and the listening have different ideOffering employees the option of a four-day workweek won’t affect the company profits,economic conditions or the lives of employees in the ways the reading suggests.First,offering a four-day workweek will probably force companies to spend more,possibly a lot more.Adding new workers means putting much more money into providing training and medical benefits.Remember the costs of things like health benefits can be the same whether an employee works four days or five.And having more employees also requires more office space and more computers.These additional costs would quickly cut into company profits.Second,with respect to overall employment,it doesn’t follow that once some employees choose a four-day workweek,many more jobs will become available.Hiring new workers is costly,as I argued a moment ago.And companies have other options.They might just choose to ask their employees to work overtime to make up thedifference.Worse,companies might raise expectations.They might start to expect that their four-day employees can do the same amount of work they used to do in five days.If this happens,then no additional jobs will be created and current jobs will become more unpleasant. Finally,while a four-day workweek offers employees more free time to invest in their personal lives,it also presents some risks that could end up reducing their quality of life.Working a shorter week can decrease employees’ job stability and harm their chances for advancing their careers.Four-day employees are likely to be the first to lose their jobs during an economic downturn.They may also be passed over for promotions because companies might prefer to havefive-day employees in management positions to ensure continuous coverage and consistent supervision for the entire workweek.这是听力原文,希望各位对比一下听力论述的要点看一下我能得的分数评分原则:三点都写出,语法错误不少是4分.三点都写出,基本没有语法错误是5分.漏一点3分托福范文(八): 写托福作文能用SAT的例子吗望高手指点!我现在发现SAT的一些例子可以套到托福作文题目中,我能不能用SAT的结构来写托福作文啊有没有人用过SAT的例子写托福,最后得分怎么样望高手指点!许多经典的例子可以通用的.比如罗斯福,达尔文,马丁路德金.但是sat作文和tofel作文的结构是不同的.sat更自由些,对于一个话题,你可以议论(举例论证),也可以写小故事来说明你的立场(许多美国学生都用这个).我上过北...托福范文(九): 给下这个托福作文的思路和例子啊,重点是例子.有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或者家人的帮助,解决important problems.因此,人们不需要政府的帮助.这道题可以从两个方面写,即靠自己和靠政府解决问题;也可以只写靠自己成功,这个更好些一些.我有几个SAT常用的例子,比如靠自己努力成功的例子:Michael Jordan,Steven Jobs,Beethoven.这些例子看完他们的事迹然后拿自己的话再写一遍就行,不一定要写多好,托福要求也没那么高;靠政府的话可以写气候变暖,政府对此的应对措施比如限制co2排放量之类的.托福范文(十): 求长的托福写作模板想要长的写作模板.两篇最好都有~最好有200-300字的.之前有人问过,下面信息供你参考.Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile othersprefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A isthat___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________Another reason can be seen by every one isthat____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in aposition of advantage because_____________________________Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Suchas________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.托福作文模板推荐之二A or B将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deemthat______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________isthat___________________The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we considerthat_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.托福作文模板推荐之三单一命题式The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________isthat____________.Another reason can be seen by every person isthat________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.托福作文模板推荐之四agree or disagreeSome people argue as if it is a general truth that a_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that Ibelieve that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, _Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, isthat_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we considerthat______________.(exmaples:___________).From the above you might got idea that Iagree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to_______________.托福作文模板推荐之六Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagreethat_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________. Examples___________General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that_______________should drive us to conclude that______________.托福作文模板推荐之七A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to thepublic because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B. 托福作文模板推荐之八A or BWhen faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claimthat A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice andthat is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.Also, ________________________.This isarbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we considerthat________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.一, “点对点”的结构“点对点”的结构指的是把综合写作中的阅读材料和听力材料的每一个对应点都单独提炼出来用一个段落加以阐述.这种结构的优点是可以把阅读文章和听力材料的对应关系更细致地进行说明,使文章层次感强,同时反映出考生提炼信息和对比信息的能力更高.比如下面的一篇范文就是ETS给出的满分作文,是一篇典型的“点对点”型的结构安排方式.Introduction-Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was verydifferent and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened in reality.First Point of Contrast First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who hard were not given recognition they should have gotten. In other words, weren’t given the opportunity to “shine”. This directly contradicts what th e passage indicates.Second Point of Contrast Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of the number of people involved and aggregated resources. However,the speaker talks about how the firm found that groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed time for meetings, which are necessary procedures in decision making. This is another place where experience contradicted theory.Third Point of Contrast Third, influential people might emerge and lead the group towards glory If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might become less inits thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed. 二, “面对面”的结构“点对点”的结构指是最理想的结构安排模式,但有时候考生并不能准确地寻找到阅读和听力材料之间的对应点.这有可能是因为阅读和听力材料之间的对应点本身就不是很明显,或者由于考生自身的能力问题,没有完全听懂或看懂,则要写成“点对点”的结构安排模式,难度会比较大.遇到这种情况,朗阁海外考试研究中心则建议考生可以尝试使用“面对面”的结构安排模式.它与“点对点”的结构安排模式的区别在于,“面对面”作文的结构并不是逐条阐述对应点,而是在总得阐明听力和阅读文章之间的关系后,分别总结听力材料或阅读材料的要点,从“面”上阐述听力和阅读材料之间的联系.以下一篇范文也是根据ETS提供的一套模考题所写的范文,由于此题很难“点对点”地分析听力和阅读之间的关系,因此采取了“面对面”的写法.Introduction-Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about the natural process of crystallization and how the speed of cooling can influence such process, which is proved by Bowen’scrystallization experiment explained in the reading passage.Points in the lecture Natural crystallization happens when magma,which is extremely hot in its molten form deep in the earth,gradually cools off when it moves towards the surface of the earth. During the cooling process, the energy from heat is lost, and the atoms which compose the magma begin to move more slowly, forming into an orderly pattern, which turns the magma into a solid crystal structure. However, if the cooling process takes place too rapidly, then there is not enough time for the atoms to be arranged into such an orderly pattern. Therefore, crystallization can’t take place. Instead, a brittle, glass-like material will form.Points in the Reading Norman Bowen’s experiment in the 1920sproved this theory. By collecting and melting elements in rocks, Norman created artificial magma in his laboratory. He first cooledthe magma slowly, as in the natural crystallization process, and got mineral crystals. But then he suddenly replaced this normal cooling with rapid freezing, and found frozen glass materials surrounding the solid crystal structure.可以看出,“点对点”和“面对面”的结构有各自的特点,但总得来说“点对点”的结构在“对比型”的新托福综合写作中要更适用一些,因为它能把矛盾点逐一呈现,更细致地体现了听力和阅读材料之间的关系.但掌握“面对面”的结构也很有必要,因为它可以适用一些听力和阅读材料之间的关系是一致、延伸或解释型的考题.此外,在考生无法寻找到所有的对应点时,用“面对面”的结构也算是一种补救措施.附:新托福综合写作sample answer 两篇,针对的是同一个考题,第一篇用的是“点对点”结构,第二篇用的是“面对面”的结构._______________________________________________________祝你成功啦!小站托福范文侃哥托福范文。
新托福(iBT)写作满分详解及作文模板
新托福(internet based TOEFL简称iBT TOEFL)自去年2005年9月在北美开考以来,很多考生谈此色变。
有的考生把新托福戏称为“我变态”(iBT亦是我变态的谐音)。
不少同学纷纷转考其他类型的考试,一试不爽,又转回iBT,这么几个回合下来时间就被浪费掉了。
纵观新托福考试的4大块,中国考生要在短期内(2-4个月)迅速取得新托福高分(100分以上),考生必须有相当的应考策略。
笔者对考生的新托福成绩作了大量统计和分析后发现考生考分相对高的2个部分是听力和写作。
考分相对低的是阅读和口语。
今天,作者着重和大家聊聊如何在极短的时间内(3天的时间)迅速取得作文27分以上,并给出作者参加新托福考试取得满分的作文部分模块,供各位考生参考。
作文考试作为新托福的第4部分,共有2篇作文。
一、Integrated writing(结合写作)第一篇作文叫做Integrated writing(结合写作),给考生3分钟读一篇文章(大概200字左右),然后听一段关于对此文章的评论,结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文(只能打字),典型的问法是:Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading.听力结束后,阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分,考生便可以开始写作。
此文的评分标准有2条: 1.要点分 2.语言分要写好此篇作文关键有以下几点:1. 考生必须从根本上掌握英语八股文的结构。
阅读时,考生必须按照八股文结构,记下这些points和support points的details.2. 听力时,考生要记下说话者是如何反对这些Points的。
注意的是说话者的反对顺序不一定按照阅读文章的演进顺序进行。
3. 如果points没有漏掉,接下来的关键就是考生如何表达说话者和阅读内容的关系了。
李笑来
语法一很多人用对待初等数学的方式对待英语,这是一种过分简单化的看法,或者说是一种不切实际的想法和做法。
初等数学其实没什么意思,因为太简单。
一切都是确定的,无懈可击的。
了解一些无须理解争论的‚公理‛,然后再推演或者干脆记忆一堆‚定理‛和‚公式‛,而后就可以做到‚无懈可击‛的证明,或者‚正确无误‛的结果。
英语语法(事实上所有语言的语法都如此)则很复杂。
语法里面很少有公理、定理,更多的是带有众多例外的‚规则‛。
从这个意义上来说,学好语法显然要比学好初等数学难出许多,干脆不是同一个层面上的事情。
我读高中的时候按照我们国家的习惯被分到所谓的‚理科班‛。
仅凭直觉就知道大多‚理科生‛的所谓优越感是自以为是的幻觉而已。
到了微积分和概率统计,数学才真正妙趣横生。
因为这个时候,数学已经开始处理复杂性与不确定性——生活的关键本质就在于其复杂性与不确定性。
然而那些当初‚充满优越感幻觉的理科生‛早就不再对数学‚感兴趣‛了。
数学也好,英语也罢(或者说任何其他一种语言),其实各自都是描述这个世界的众多方式之一。
初等数学(例如算术、代数、几何等等)只是被用来描述这个世界的某一部分,而语言则担负着‚尽量描述整个世界‛的任务,所以显然要比初等数学复杂得多,并且无法做到‚完美‛或者‚相对完美‛。
要了解语法的本质。
本质上来看,语法并不是‚规定你应该怎么说‛,而是‚尽量‛‚系统地‛解释‚人们为什么普遍这么说‛。
所以,不能把语法规则当作数学公式,语法规则并不保证按照它拼凑出来的句子一定有意义并且正确。
‚I saw blue and red snowflakes flying in the river.‛这样的句子,其实没有什么语法规则上的错误,但通常会被认为是明显荒谬的并且毫无意义的。
任何自然语言的语法总是由许多的充满例外的规则构成。
这个事实是造成许多第二语言习得者对语法憎恨或者厌恶的重要原因之一。
但是,这种憎恨和厌恶,实际上是‚头脑简单‛、‚思考粗暴‛、‚天真幼稚‛的表现。
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TOEFL.iBT 高分作文思路+范文完美重排版目录1. Why people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个):增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如,周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了,所以自己也选择读书找不到工作("无知",总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。
上大学如是[1],去博物馆如是[12],从事危险运动亦如是[43]。
) 相关题目:[168]『范文』After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still placea higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a jobin a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.2. Are parents the best teachers?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』因观点绝对而不能同意。
不是所有的父母都是好老师最好的老师不仅仅是父母有些父母尽管善良,但对教育孩子一无所知有些父母不配做孩子的老师,对孩子有不良影响『范文』Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』总体上,“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步[37],所以自然会带来improvement。