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雅思大作文Task2 心得笔记

雅思大作文Task2 心得笔记

雅思大作文Task2 心得笔记具体问题具体分析的能力是很多官方作文有所体现的一种思维素养。

1.Refer to… =can be defined as/…is regarded as 这个词组在高分作文中经常用来在主体段对某一概念下定义2.It is suggested that 是一种不指明观点持有人的提问看法的形式,在论文中极为常见。

类似的有: It is argued that…;It is advised that…; It is believed that…3.Tend to是雅思作文中一个极为常用的动词短语:倾向于怎样做= be inclined to4.Accordingly 相应地,经常用于议论文的句首5.In terms of 在官方范文中常用,意为“就…….而言,在……方面”,经常用在句首引出状语提前句式=with regard to e.g. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today.e.g. To conclude, growing up in poor families may be in fact anchildren’s development because it helps to cultivate some qualities that adult success requires.e.g.In terms of their career, these teachers and doctors may think of themselves as complete failures because they may beunable to keep up with their colleagues after spending some time in the countryside.5. (1) Regardless of 后面除了跟从句外还可以跟名词或者名词短语, “无论……,不管……”e.g. Others think the true function of a university should be give access to knowledge for its one sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to employersIt is true that space missions satisfy human curiosity about other planets and the rocks brought back by astronauts may serve useful experimental purposes, regardless of how odd-shaped they are.(2) For the sake of = for the purpose of improvinge.g. Today, numerous/a host of/ a vast number of(修饰可数名词) elderly people prefer to live in the countryside for the sake of their health.6. I would be hard-pressed to imagine…(后面跟观点相反的情况)e.g. I would be hard-pressed to think of any traditional games that can hone such a mixed variety of abilities within such a short period of time.Specifically/More precisely 具体来说7.Require, 当句子主语是事物而不是人称时经常用来代替need8.Rather than, instead of是雅思作文中极为关键的一个连词词组,表示是前面一种情况而非后面一种情况的取舍关系。

IELTS写作task2--9分范文(26篇)

IELTS写作task2--9分范文(26篇)

001Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.001People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.002Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?002Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.003Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?003Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.004Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.004It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage.005Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.005When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduateshave access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.006Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give you own opinion.006People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.007Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?007In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Studentnumbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.008Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.To what extent do you agree or disagree?008Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater.In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.009Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?009It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects.Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships.In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.010We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?010Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbors and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money tosupport these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.011In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.011It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.012Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?012Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.013Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree?013Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of workahead of them when they finish their studies.At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.014Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.014People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some people disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources.Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many works of art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example, there are several new statues and sculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without their funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for art. The main reason for this view is that governments have more important concerns. For example, state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security, among other areas. These public services are vital for a country to function properly, whereas the work of creative artists, even in public places, is a luxury. Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like any other professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling their work.In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.015Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits tohumanity.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.015It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.016When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?016Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important.On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family.Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs.。

雅思作文task2考官simon技巧及范文整理

雅思作文task2考官simon技巧及范文整理

雅思作文task2考官simon技巧及范文整理目录IELTS Advice: the "Firstly, Secondly, Finally" structure (6) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'traffic' topic (6)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'vegetarianism' topic (7)IELTS Writing Task 2: public/private healthcare (7) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'children' topic (8)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'immigration' topic (8)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'genetic engineering' topic (9) IELTS Writing Task 2: how to write an introduction (9) IELTS Writing Task 2: main body paragraphs (10) IELTS Writing Task 2: full essay—环境范文 (10)IELTS Writing Task 2: studying abroad (11)"Band 7 Vocabulary" for study aboard (12)IELTS Writing Task 2: crime topic (13)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'zoo' topic (13)IELTS Writing Task 2: education / practical skills (14) IELTS Writing Task 2: globalisation (15)IELTS Writing Task 2: advertising topic (15)IELTS Writing Task 2: tourism (16)IELTS Writing Task 2: global language argument (17) IELTS Writing Task 2: technology (17)Students' Questions: 'climate' topic (18)IELTS Writing Task 2: city problems (19)IELTS Writing Task 2: governments (19)IELTS writing Task 2: health topic (20)IELTS Writing Task 2: government spending (20) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'bottled water' topic (21)IELTS Writing Task 2: money and c onsumerism (21)IELTS Writing Task 2: fixed punishments (22)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'online shopping' topic (22)IELTS Writing Task 2: using the ebook (23)IELTS Writing: to what extent do you agree? (23)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'marriages' topic (24)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'road safety' topic (24)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'academic ability' topic (25)IELTS Writing Task 2: introductions (25)IELTS Advice: essay introductions (26)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'robots' topic (26)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'women and work' topic (27)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'minority languages' essay 范文 (28) IELTS Writing Advice: correcting yourself (28)IELTS Writing Task 2: the 'two-part' question (29)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'dependence' question (29)IELTS Writing Task 2: how to write introductions (30) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'job satisfaction' topic (30)IELTS Writing Task 2: sample discussion essay 范文 (31) IELTS Writing Task 2: how to write a paragraph (32) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'museums' essay 范文 (32)IELTS Writing Task 2: use related words (33)IELTS Writing Task 2: idea, explain, example (34)IELTS Writing Task 2: band 9 paragraph (34)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'sports salaries' topic (34)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'helping poor countries' topic (35) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'gender and university' topic (36) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'gender and university' essay 范文 (36) IELTS Writing Task 2: how to answer any question (37) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'technology' topic (38)IELTS Writing Task 2: the '2 part' question (38)IELTS Writing Task 2: recent question (39)IELTS Writing Task 2: globalisation of culture (39)IELTS Writing Task 2: advertising (40)IELTS Writing Task 2: method (41)IELTS Writing Task 2: different introductions (41)IELTS Writing Task 2: one view or both views? (41) IELTS Writing Task 2: problem and solution (42)IELTS Writing Task 2: balanced opinion (42)IELTS Writing Task 2: do the advantages outweigh...? .. (43) IELTS Writing Task 2: problem and solution (obesity) (43) IELTS Writing: 5 sentence paragraphs (44)IELTS Writing Task 2: example paragraph (45)IELTS Writing Task 2: higher education (45)IELTS Writing Task 2: difficult questions (46)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'equality' topic 范文 (46)IELTS Writing Task 2: plan your main paragraphs (47) IELTS Writing Task 2: discussion without opinion (48) IELTS Writing Task 2: conclusions (49)IELTS Writing Task 2: who should we help? (49)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'help' essay 范文 (50)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'global warming' topic 范文 (51) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'nuclear power' topic (51)IELTS Writing Task 2: using the word "I" (52)IELTS Writing Task 2: rules for introductions (52)IELTS Writing Task 2: main body paragraphs 范文 (53) IELTS Writing Task 2: full essay (53)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'media' topic (54)IELTS Writing Task 2: books, radio, TV (55)IELTS Writing Task 2: introductions and conclusions (56) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'art and science' topic (56)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'technology' essay 范文 (57)IELTS Writing Task 2: firstly, secondly, finally (58)IELTS Writing Task 2: agree, disagree, or both? (58) IELTS Writing Task 2: topic sentences (59)IELTS Writing Task 2: four question types (59)IELTS Writing Task 2: question types (60)IELTS Writing Task 2: examples give you ideas (60) IELTS Writing Task 2: 'hobbies' essay plan (61)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'hobbies' essay 范文 (61)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'university' topic (62)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'prisons' topic (62)IELTS Writing Task 2: both sides or one side? 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(120)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'happiness' question (120)IELTS Writing Task 2: two-part question (121)IELTS Writing Task 2: two-part question (121)IELTS Writing Task 2: 'happiness' essay 范文 (122)IELTS Writing Task 2: five ideas, five sentences (122)IELTS Writing Task 2: five-sentence paragraph (123)IELTS Writing Task 2: CCTV topic (123)IELTS Writing Task 2: CCTV introduction (124)New video lesson (124)IELTS Writing Task 2: which part to answer (124)IELTS Writing Task 2: which part to answer (125)IELTS Writing Task 2: main ideas, supporting points (125)IELTS Writing Task 2: paraphrasing practice (126)IELTS Advice: the "Firstly, Secondly, Finally" structureI've had some great responses about the video lesson, but some students were surprised that you can get a band 9 usi ng "Firstly, Secondly, F inally".Is the phrase "First and foremost" better than "Firstly"?The answer is NO.Using simple organising language like "Firstly, Secondly" makes you focus on the REAL CONTENT of what you are writing - topic vocabulary, collocations, examples. This is what the examiner wants to see.Spend your time preparing ideas, opinions and examples forIELTS topics, not learning alternative ways to write "Firstly".IELTS Writing Task 2: 'traffic' topicToday I'd like to show you a good essay by one of my students. This is the essay question:Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.I gave the student's essay a band 7, mainly because it contains some really good topic vocabulary. Open the file below to see the full essay, grammar corrections and my comments.IELTS Writing Task 2: 'vegetarianism' topicToday I asked my students about the vegetarianism topic. They found it quite difficult to give both sides of the argument. It's important to be able to discuss both sides of an issue, even if there are points that you don't agree with.Here is a summary of the arguments in favour of a vegetarian diet, according to the speaker in yesterday's video:A vegetarian diet is healthier.Eating a hamburger a day can increase your risk of dying by a third.Raising animals in factory farm conditions is cruel.Meat production causes more emissions than transportation.Beef production uses 100 times the amount of water that vegetable production requires.A vegetarian diet is cheaper.So, basically he is sayi n g that a vegetarian diet is healthier, kinder to animals, better for the environment and cheaper.Now you need to think about the opposite argument. Feel free to discuss your ideas in the "comments" area.IELTS Writing Task 2: public/private healthcareA recent IELTS Writing Task 2 question was about the advantages and disadvantages of private healthcare. Here are some ideas from my ebook:State Health Systems: AdvantagesGood healthcare should be available to everyone for free.State healthcare is paid by the government using money from taxes.Everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment.Private healthcare is unfair because only wealthy people can afford it.The National Health Service in the UK provides free healthcare for every resident. (use this as an example) Private Healthcare: AdvantagesState hospitals are often very large and difficult to run.Private hospitals have shorter waiting lists for operations and appointments.Patients can benefit from faster treatment.Many people prefer to pay for a more personal service.Patients have their own room and more comfortable facilities.Note:You can use the advantages of state healthcare when discussing the disadvantages of private healthcare.IELTS Writing Task 2: 'children' topicWhat problems do children face in today's world? What should we do to address or solve these problems?Here are some ideas from my ebook to get you thinking about this topic: ?The lack of closeness in families can have a negative effect on children.Many parents have no idea how their children spend their time.Friends, television and the Internet have become the main influences on children’s behaviour.Teenagers are influenced by peer pressure.Juvenile delinquency is on the increase.Parents should be more involved with their children’s upbringing.Young people need positi ve role models.Can you think of any more problems that children face, or suggest other solutions? Is it the responsibility of parents, schools or governments to tackle these problems?IELTS Writing Task 2: 'immigration' topic。

雅思英语作文task2模板

雅思英语作文task2模板

雅思英语作文task2模板
段落一,开门见山。

哎呀,说到[主题],我得说,这事儿真的挺有意思的。

你瞧,
有人觉得[观点1],但也有人坚持[观点2]。

我个人呢,觉得这事儿没那么简单,得好好琢磨琢磨。

段落二,正方观点。

先说说那些支持[观点1]的人吧。

他们认为[理由1],就好像...嗯...比如说[例子1]。

听起来好像有点道理,对吧?他们还说[额
外理由],这一点我也得承认,确实有那么回事儿。

段落三,反方观点。

不过呢,也有人不这么看。

他们认为[观点2]才对。

他们的理
由是[理由2],就好像...那个...比如[例子2]。

这么一说,好像也有那么回事儿。

他们还说[额外理由],这一点也挺有说服力的。

段落四,两边都不完全对?
话说回来,其实两边都有道理,但也都不是完美的。

有人觉得[观点2]也有问题,因为[反驳理由]。

而[观点1]呢,虽然听起来不错,但仔细想想也有漏洞,比如[反驳理由]。

所以啊,这事儿还真
得看个人怎么想了。

段落五,总结一下。

总的来说,这事儿就是萝卜白菜,各有所爱。

有人觉得[观点1]好,有人觉得[观点2]对。

其实嘛,这事儿没有绝对的对错,关键
看你怎么想。

所以,大家还是根据自己的情况,选择最适合自己的
观点吧。

IELTS雅思作文WritingTask2

IELTS雅思作文WritingTask2

IELTS雅思作文WritingTask2In this contemporary world, one of the most severe issue- obesity has an impact on society. Some people confirmthat only providinghealthy food and participation in sports beingcompulsory can solve this problem effectively. Whereas, other individuals believe that there are still other strategies to tackle this issue which include enhancement of health education and closing fast-food outlets. On the one hand, only providing healthy food is a beneficial way to solve the problem which people are being overweight. To start with, healthy food contains more nutrients, such as fibre, which can help the digestive system and vitamin C, which can prevent people from catching colds. A well-known saying, ‘an apple a day, keep the doctors away’ is the best example. In addition, makingsports compulsory in schools is another good idea. Recent surveys say that teenagers have become a large proportion of obese population. As well as, doing sports or exercises is the best way to lose weight and to keep fit, compared to being on a diet.On the other hand, a large number of people consider that there are several other methods which can reduce the increasing number of obese population. First of all, the guidance from governments and institutes about how to promote good eating habits needs to be implemented due to lack of knowledge about health. Thus, governments are necessary to educate public on what is health food and how to select suitable balanced everyday meals by advertising. Last but not the least, shutting down the fast-food outlets is another drastic opinion. Along with the swift lifestyle, people choose to eat fast-food which contains high calories and fat which people cannot fully consume, for instance,KFC, Burger king and Pizzas. Hence, these outlets should be shut down for public health to improve. In conclusion, thesolutions of people being obese are obviously varied, including providing onlyhealthy food and making sports compulsory in schools. However, other ideas need to be taken under consideration, such as enhancement of health education and shutting down fast-food outlets. Nevertheless, people have various means and strategies to solve the problem of obesity.。

雅思作文Task-2真题思路1

雅思作文Task-2真题思路1

雅思作文Task 2真题思路(1)--教育教育 1 - 学点啥?060318 061014 070707 070113 071208 080522 0806051.Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right andwrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (060318)翻译:学做人vs 学做事有些人认为老师应当负责教给学生如何判断对错和如何行为得体;有些人说老师应当只教给学生学术科目,讨论两个观点给出你的意见。

抛砖:(题目比较抽象,论证时要具体化)有些人觉得老师应当只关注(focus on)学术科目,这是老师的基本职责(fundamental responsibility),比如幼儿园(nursery school)和小学的识字、算术、美术、音乐、体育;中学的外语、物理、化学、自然、生物、历史、地理;大学的各种专业知识(specialist knowledge)。

但学生和老师相处时间长,除了学习学术科目,在为人处世方面也会潜移默化(unconsciously)地受老师影响(influence)。

所以,我认为老师也有责任教学生如何判断对错和行为得体,比如守时(punctual)是好习惯,而浪费是坏习惯;应当重视家庭,尊重长辈;应当相信工作,相信人,相信神(believe the God,西方人常见世界观之一)。

这些做人方面的内容(How to be a qualified citizen)对学生在未来职业的帮助甚至超过专业知识。

雅思大作文Task2考官

雅思大作文Task2考官

雅思大作文Task2考官雅思作文范文【1】Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?Model Answer:Every year, millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a result of scientific research into the effects of drugs, food additives, cosmetics and other chemical products. While most peoplethink animal testing is necessary, others are upset by what they see as needless suffering. This essay looks at some of the positive andnegative aspects of animal testing.Many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals. Since animals share many features with humans, scientists use animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small groups of patients.Medical teams practice new operating techniques such as transplants on animals. Without animal testing, many procedures or new drugs would be extremely unsafe.However, many people are concerned that animals are suffering unnecessarily and cruelly. They do not believe that every new drug needs to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. They also are worried that many animal tests are ineffective, pointing out that any drugs have had to be withdrawn from the market despite extensive testing. They particularly feel that animal testing should not be used for non-essential products such as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps, and cleaning products. Furthermore, some campaigners would like to see certain tests replaced and more humane methods used.We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are usedfor testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity.雅思作文范文【2】Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a thirdworld problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase.Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society.Model Answer:It is true that illiteracy is becoming a serious problem in industrialised nations. This is surprising as most people think thatthis is a problem only in under-developed nations such as in parts of Africa and India. Illiteracy is related to many other problems such as poverty, over-population and governmental corruption. Let us take a more detailed look at the causes of this growing problem in many Western nations.One of the most obvious reasons for the increase in illiteracyis the advent of television. Children no longer have to read to obtain information. Neither do they have to read to relax. Today children get home from school and go straight to “the box” to watch their favorite program. Watching television is much easier and more exciting than reading.Another reason for the increase in illiteracy is the fact thatso many women work. This means that children are often alone at home and so they are unsupervised. When parents get home they are often too tired to spend quality time whit their children.It is also true that many people blame schools for the declinein illiteracy. In many countries there has been a move away fromteaching basic skills such as reading and writing.There are many effects of this growing illiteracy rate. The most obvious is unemployment. This may in turn lead to alcohol and drug abuse. Ultimately the economy of the country begins to suffer and there is a drop in living standards.To address this problem, parents need to become more aware of their responsibilities and schools need to consider a change in their teaching methods. If this worsening trend is not reversed, the problemof illiteracy will become very serious.雅思作文范文【3】Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans.Which do you prefer - planning or not planning for your leisure time?Model Answer:Nowadays people have so many things to do that they almostalways do not have enough time for it. When we go to bed we carefully think and plan our next day and it continues day in and day out. We wake up, recollect our checklist with things to do and in a few minutes weare already in a car on our way to the office. Often people do not have time for themselves. So, when people have some spare time they want to use it wisely. Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. However, others prefer not to make any plans. In this essay I will analyze both cases and present my view in favor of planning free-time activities.From the one side, not making any plans and just letting thetime pass by for some time have some benefits. First of all, a personcan just relax, enjoy the beautiful moments, spend his or her time with loved ones, watch a movie, listen to relaxing music, observe the flowers in bloom from the window, contemplate about his or her life and justslow down the pace of life. I think it is a very good way to eliminate one's stress and tension and just leave all troubles and worries behind.From the other side, careful planning can bring many benefits too. First of all, one can travel. However, traveling requires some planning to be made. For example, one most likely will need a hotel room. So, the reservation should be made beforehand. Also, it is wise to check one's car to avoid breakdowns and have an uninterrupted worry-free trip. Second of all, planning one's activities allows to spend one's free time the way he/she likes. For instance, if I want to play tennis on incoming week-end I will certainly make a reservation for a court because in this case I will not be disappointed with the waste of my time. Personally, I prefer to make plans for my free time because it allows me to spend my vacation or week-ends the way I want it.To sum up, I think careful planning allows people to derive maximum benefits from their free time. However, I must confess sometimesI allow my self just to stay at home with my friends and family and not make any plans.。

雅思9 test 2小作文

雅思9 test 2小作文

雅思9 test 2小作文英文回答:The topic of the IELTS Writing Task 2 is about the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. Studying abroad has become increasingly popular in recent years, and it offers many advantages. Firstly, studying abroad allows students to experience a new culture and broaden their horizons. Living in a foreign country exposes students to different customs, traditions, and ways of thinking, which can help them develop a global perspective and become more open-minded individuals. Secondly, studying abroad provides students with the opportunity to improve their language skills. Immersion in a foreign language environment forces students to communicate in the target language on a daily basis, which can significantly enhance their language proficiency. Lastly, studying abroad can also enhance career prospects. Employers often value candidates who have international experience, as it demonstrates adaptability, cultural awareness, and independence.However, there are also some drawbacks to studying abroad. Firstly, homesickness can be a major issue for many students. Being away from family and friends can be emotionally challenging, especially in the beginning. Students may feel lonely and isolated, and this can affect their overall well-being and academic performance. Secondly, studying abroad can be financially burdensome. Tuition fees, accommodation, and living expenses in a foreign country can be expensive, and not all students have the financial means to support themselves. Lastly, studying abroad may also create a sense of disconnection from one's own culture and identity. Students may struggle with the clash of valuesand norms between their home country and the host country, which can lead to a sense of identity crisis.中文回答:关于留学的好处和坏处是雅思写作任务2的主题。

IELTS-writingtask2-handout2雅思作文

IELTS-writingtask2-handout2雅思作文

IELTS-writingtask2-handout2雅思作⽂IELTS Writing Task 2Handout 2I.6种题型(1)What is your opinion?(2)Discuss both views and give your own ideas(3)Questions(4)Advantages & disadvantages(5)Do you agree or disagree?(6)Discuss the reasons or effects, and give solutions.II.11种话题Education; Society; Tourism; Government; Environment;Culture; Technology; Media; Animals; Crimes; GlobalizationIII.例题分析1.What is your opinion?E.g. 1: Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why theyhave the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view.E.g. 2: Nowadays international tourism is more and more common. What’s your opinion aboutthis trend?E.g. 3: Recently, representatives of 192 countries held talks in Copenhagen, the developedcountries think that the developing and the least-developed countries should be responsible for the environmental degradation. What’s your opinion?E.g. 4: Police in some countries like England don’t carry guns. Some people don’t approve ofthis because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion?写作要点:与下⼀个题型的写法区别开来,若错误得按照题型⼆来写的话就必然是严重跑题。

雅思考试TASK2作文简要分析(洛基英语内部资料)

雅思考试TASK2作文简要分析(洛基英语内部资料)

最牛英语口语培训模式:躺在家里练口语,全程外教一对一,三个月畅谈无阻!洛基英语,免费体验全部在线一对一课程:/(报名网址)雅思考试TASK2作文简要分析1月8日We can get kno1月8日We can get knowledge from news, but some people think wecan’ttrust journalists. What do you think? Should we believe them?Whatqualities should a good journalist have?简要分析:曾经考过的关于老师应该有的素质似乎可以为这篇文章起一点参考作用。

这篇文章应该在引言段里阐明一个观点,即记者担负着重要的社会责任,要让人们完全信任,记者必洛基英语是中国英语培训市场上的一朵奇葩,是全球已被验证的东方人英语学习的最佳模式。

洛基英须具有以下几个素质。

在主体段里,可以对三个素质分别进行阐述并且说明为什么这些素质是记者必须要有的。

可以从责任感,抵制诱惑,坚定的立场,实事求是的精神,关于实质性内容而不是浮华或者八卦的内容仅仅为了创造经济效益而忽视社会效益等层面议论。

建议可以着重论证实事求是的精神或者报道内容的侧重点这两个方面,因为对于一个记者来说,这些是赢得信任的不可缺少的品质。

1月15日Some teachers say that students should be organized into groupstostudy. Others argue that students should be made to studyalone.What is your opinion?简要分析:这是一个老题和新题的结合。

原来考过的是要不要将好学生和差学生分班教授。

这篇文章的论证角度也可以借鉴分班不分班的文章,分别论述理由。

集体学习的好处:更有趣,有竞争才更有可能发展,互相帮助,精神上互相支持等等。

【第83期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键句型

【第83期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键句型

【第83期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键语句汇总本期Topic1.随着科技的发展,远程办公变得越来越普遍。

有人认为这对个人和企业都有好处,而另一些人则认为存在一些问题。

你对这个观点有何看法?请讨论并提供例证支持你的观点。

With the advancement of technology, remote work has become increasingly common. Some people believe it is beneficial for individuals and businesses, while others see potential issues. What is your opinion on this perspective? Discuss and provide examples to support your views.2.越来越多的人在社交媒体上分享个人生活,这引发了一些关于隐私和安全的问题。

你认为个人应该在社交媒体上分享多少个人信息?请提供你的观点和理由。

More and more people share their personal lives on social media, raising concerns about privacy and security. How much personal information do you think individuals should share on social media? Provide your opinion and reasons.3.城市垃圾处理问题一直是一个严重的挑战。

你认为个人和社会应该采取哪些措施来改善城市垃圾处理状况?请提供具体建议。

Urban waste disposal has been a serious challenge. What measures do you think individuals and society should take to improve the situation of urban waste disposal? Provide specific recommendations.范文1.随着科技的发展,远程办公变得越来越普遍。

雅思task2作文(精选五篇)

雅思task2作文(精选五篇)

雅思task2作文(精选五篇)第一篇:雅思task2作文雅思作文模板作文文套一A or BDepending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious.Such as________________.In a word, ______________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.作文文套二A or B将原题复述________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence-A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.作文文套三单一命题式The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style.In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books.So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Furthermore,______________.Inshort,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.作文文套四agree or disagreeSome people argue as if it is a general truth that a ____________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would exploreonly a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that_________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.作文文套五A or BSome people prefer to A.others believe B.When faced withthe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_______.Take________as example, ________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.Such as ________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(examples:___________).From the above you might got idea that I agree_______.(repeat the above three reason________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to ___________.作文文套六Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________.MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a further more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________.Examples___________General speaking, Recognizing the fact that should drive us to conclude that作文文套七A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B.So it is sagacious to choose A.Among count less factors which influence A.there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered.For exmaple,___________________Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B.For instance,_______________It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important.B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.作文文套八A or BWhen faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deemB as the premier choice and that is also my point.This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ___________.For example, ___________.Also, ________________________.This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.Admittedly, ________A也有好的地方______.By he same token, however, _________B更好_______.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.作文文套九A or BWhen it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate theargument of _______is that.Obviously __________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that _________.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,___ _____此处论述B的1-2优点_______.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.作文文套十______改写并复述题目______.There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________;however, I believe that there are far more advantages.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________.Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________.For example, ____________.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them.The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.For example_____________.Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.For example, _________________.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.作文文套十二A or B_______改写并复述题目______.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A.There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary cause isthat_______________________.What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.Furthermore,________________________.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious________._______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.作文文套十三A or B_______改写并复述题目_______.When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.In a word, ___________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ________.作文文套十四A or BFrom my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, ___________.While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.作文文套十五agree or disagreeNowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________.But others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________.My arguments for thispoint are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.In a word, ______________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.第二篇:雅思写作Task2:女性参军最权威的国际教育服务平台雅思写作Task2范文:女性参军有人认为女性应该被允许加入陆军、海军、空军。

针对雅思作文Task 2审题深度剖析

针对雅思作文Task 2审题深度剖析

针对雅思作文Task 2审题深度剖析朗阁海外考试研究中心雅思写作的Task 2部分出题范围相当广泛,写作主题的重复率也相当高,解题的方法同样需要掌握技巧,接下来朗阁名师对于雅思作文TASK2的解题进行分析。

在官方给出的Band descriptors的Band 7和Band 6评分标准中,明确提出了关于LR 的要求:Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of styles and collocation. (7) / Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. Attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. (6) 和GRA的相关要求:Uses a variety of complex sentences. (7) / Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. (6) 但是学生始终有个理解的误区:在书写段落时再注意语法和词汇。

其实不然,当学生看到题目的瞬间就要先做好以下几项工作:关键词(一)找到需要同义转换的单词:形容词、动词...请看这个题目:Some people believe governments should spend money on measures of languages with few people from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinions.考生们可以把题目中的类似于这样的单词划出来并同义改写它们,因为在接下来的开头段或段落中心句或结尾段将用到单词的同义改写:spend—fund/ finance/ launch somewhat sum of fund/ investdying out—be endangered/ be likely to vanish/ tend to disappeara waste of financial resources—it is no use doing/ meaningless/ make no sense/ uselessness关键词(二)变换句式备考雅思的过程中,相信绝大多数学生仅仅一味地备素材而忽视了语法的重要性。

【第92期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键句型

【第92期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键句型

【第92期】IELTS雅思考试Task 2大作文8分范文中英对照及关键语句汇总本期Topic1.有人认为,现代科技带来了人类生活的便利,而另一些人认为科技发展会对自然环境产生负面影响。

你更倾向于哪种观点?为什么?Some people believe that modern technology has brought convenience to human life, while others think technological development will have negative impacts on the natural environment. Which perspective do you tend to support? Why?2.社会上存在一些关于教育不平等的问题,如富人能够获得更好的教育资源。

你认为个人和社会应该采取哪些措施来解决教育不平等问题?请提供具体建议。

There are issues of educational inequality in society, such as wealthy individuals having access to better educational resources. What measures do you think individuals and society should take to address the problem of educational inequality? Provide specific recommendations.3.有人认为,电子书取代了传统纸质书籍,对读者带来了便利,而另一些人认为纸质书籍的消失会导致文化传承的丧失。

你对这个问题有何看法?请讨论并提供例证支持你的观点。

Some people believe that e-books replacing traditional paper books bring convenience to readers, while others argue that the disappearance of paper books may lead to a loss of cultural heritage. What is your opinion on this issue? Discuss and provide examples to support your views.范文1.有人认为,现代科技带来了人类生活的便利,而另一些人认为科技发展会对自然环境产生负面影响。

雅思写作task2「」

雅思写作task2「」

雅思写作task2「」雅思写作task2范⽂「推荐」 ⼀些⼈认为⼤学⽣应该学习他们喜欢的科⽬,另⼀些⼈认为⼤学⽣应该学习对社会有⽤的科⽬,⽐如相关的科学技术。

你对这两种观点有什么看法?你的.观点是什么?⾯是⼩编整理的雅思英语作⽂,⼤家可以参考参考。

雅思作⽂范⽂【1】 题⽬:Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 范⽂: People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice. There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level, by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity. In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this were the case, perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology. In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like. 雅思作⽂范⽂【2】 题⽬:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范⽂: It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law. In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keento hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact. The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions. In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.【雅思写作task2范⽂「推荐」】相关⽂章:1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.。

雅思写作task2参考

雅思写作task2参考

雅思写作task2参考雅思写作task2参考范文在一些国家,现在越来越多的.人选择独居。

你认为这个现象是好的还是坏的?面是店铺整理的雅思英语作文,大家可以参考参考。

雅思作文范文【1】题目:In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?范文:In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who livealone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.雅思作文范文【2】题目:Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.范文:People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more jobopportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level, by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this were the case, perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology.In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like.【雅思写作task2参考范文】。

IELTS 雅思高分技巧 - 写作技巧第7篇 Task 2

IELTS 雅思高分技巧 - 写作技巧第7篇 Task 2

You should write at least 250 words答案範例第二步: 在答案範例的文章段落裡有一些資訊列於下面的表格中,但是這些資訊的順序不對。

把每個段落看過,然後把段落的字母(A, B, C…) 填進表格的第二欄。

先不要管每個段落裡的空格。

Paragraph content Task 2:Paragraph Task 3: Signposting languageBackground informationArguments against educationArguments in favour of helping some criminalsFurther arguments in favour, with examples of differentcountriesSummary of main pointsModel Answer 2A. _______________, many people would disagree with the idea that prisons should play no educational role at all. It may be true that serious criminals, such as murderers, deserve little sympathy, but that does not mean that people who have committed less serious crimes should be given no help to re-enter society. By giving petty criminals, such as burglars or shoplifters an alternative trade, education programmes can also help to make society safer in the future, as these criminals will not be forced to re-offend to make a living.B. _______________, many countries offer training and educational courses which provide practical skills, such as plumbing or carpentry. While doing this has clear benefits for the prisoners, who will have new skills when they leave prison, does spending money in this way really benefit society as a whole?C. _______________, I think that, while it is clear prison does need to deter people from committing crime, in the long run, re-training programmes are better for society as a whole as they help criminals move away from a life of crime.D. _______________ that offering any kind of training to prisoners is an inappropriate use of public funds. They think that, although training courses benefit the inmate, time spent in prison should be used by prisoners to think about the damage they have done to society. Furthermore, if prisons provide too many benefits, they may be seen as holiday camps, and thus fail to deter people from committing crime.E. _______________ in favour of education is that using prison simply as a deterrent does not seem to work. It is well known, for example, that the United States has by far the largest number of people behind bars in the world. However, the crime rate in the US remains much higher than in countries, such as Sweden, where the focus is on helping people re-enter society.第三步:指示性語言以指示性表達方式來介紹段落是很重要的。

雅思学术写作task2易错盲点解析

雅思学术写作task2易错盲点解析

雅思学术写作Task2易错盲点解析翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析,大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开:内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。

同时,据笔者的长期观察,高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。

“好的作文大当盲点2击破:词以类记原则此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇,如在写肥胖问题时,考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。

)盲点3:标新立异这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好,力求与众不同。

盲点3击破:自圆其说原则雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试,词汇,语法和句式才是测试重点。

况且,考官阅卷数载,见多识广,你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点,所以我们讲究论点论据言之有理,能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4:真情流露这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似,唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无Therefore , I believe ….(合)盲点2 :单句游离这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词,有时就算有,逻辑连词也使用错误。

或者是标点不注意。

最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand.它连接的是转折,却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破:行云流水原则考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词,力求做到行云流水,常见的逻辑连词有:因果关系:因:As since due to owning to果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result表目的:thereby举例关系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast.让步关系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though, Provided that , if3. 词汇(vocabulary):同义改写,百花齐放很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多,得分就越高。

雅思14task2大作文

雅思14task2大作文

雅思14task2大作文英文回答:In today's globalized world, learning a foreign language has become increasingly important. It not only enhances communication skills but also opens up a wide range of opportunities for personal growth and career advancement. Therefore, I believe that learning a foreign language is essential.Firstly, learning a foreign language improves our communication skills. Language is the key to effective communication, and by learning a new language, we canbetter understand and connect with people from different cultures and backgrounds. Being able to communicate in a foreign language allows us to build relationships,establish connections, and foster understanding.Secondly, learning a foreign language provides us with a competitive edge in the job market. In today's globalizedeconomy, companies are expanding their operations internationally, and the ability to speak a second language is highly valued. It demonstrates adaptability, cultural awareness, and the ability to work with diverse teams. Moreover, bilingual individuals often have more job opportunities and higher earning potential.Furthermore, learning a foreign language broadens our horizons and exposes us to new cultures and perspectives. It allows us to explore different ways of thinking and understanding the world. By immersing ourselves in a foreign language, we gain a deeper appreciation for other cultures and develop a more global mindset. This not only enriches our personal lives but also enhances our ability to navigate the complexities of our interconnected world.中文回答:在当今全球化的世界中,学习一门外语变得越来越重要。

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雅思学术写作Task2面面观
翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析,大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开:内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。

同时,据笔者的长期观察,高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。

“好的作文大都是相似的,而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。

”下面,笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。

一.内容(content):切中主题,自圆其说
盲点1 :无话可说
这类考生在看到题目时,最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。

雅思作文题材广泛,包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。

而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故,日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题,更不用说对它有什么想法了。

盲点1击破:四多原则
多看范文;多关注时事,观察生活;多与人交流;多记录自己的想法。

比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中,分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。

当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时,关上书,写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点,如果某个领域发生短路,翻开书重新阅读,直至能够写出来为止。

盲点2:千言万语
这类考生往往见多识广,看到话题时感到倚马千言。

可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。

往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。

盲点2击破:词以类记原则
此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇,如在写肥胖问题时,考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。


盲点3:标新立异
这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好,力求与众不同。

盲点3击破:自圆其说原则
雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试,词汇,语法和句式才是测试重点。

况且,考官阅卷数载,见多识广,你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点,所以我们讲究论点论据言之有理,能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4:真情流露
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似,唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻,写作时有“黄河之水,延绵不绝”之势。

但兴奋之时,有些忘乎所以,与主题渐行渐远。

盲点4击破:切中主题原则
这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架,并严格执行。

如在写argumentation类题型时,全文四段:“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段;第二段为己方观点论证段;第三段为让步段;第四段总结段。

切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。

二.组织结构(organization):起承转合,行云流水
盲点1 :天马行空
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似,写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。

有时,尽管有全文框架,段落框架又缺失,通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或
冲突。

盲点1击破:起承转合原则
除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段;第二段(承)为己方观点论证段;第三段(转)为让步段;第四段(合)总结段。

”的逻辑框架之外,段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束,如让步段中:“some people may argue that …(起);because they maintain that ….(承) ;However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact …..(转); Therefore , I believe ….(合)
盲点2 :单句游离
这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词,有时就算有,逻辑连词也使用错误。

或者是标点不注意。

最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand.它连接的是转折,却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破:行云流水原则
考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词,力求做到行云流水,常见的逻辑连词有:因果关系:
因:As since due to owning to
果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的:thereby
举例关系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration , 对比关系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast.
让步关系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though, Provided that , if
三词汇(vocabulary):同义改写,百花齐放
盲点1 :遭遇生词
大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此,写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。

盲点1击破:同义改写原则
其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase ,如望子成龙,望女成凤完全可以写成:All parents expect their children to have a promising future.
注意:对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则,毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。

如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”! 这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。

盲点2 :同义重现
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet 时,有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages .这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳,分数自然不高。

盲点2击破:百花齐放原则
其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词,反义词,衍生词的积累,并不断练习。

如上面的advantages 的同义词为benefits gains merits pros 等;disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks ,cons 等。

盲点3 :大词连篇
很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多,得分就越高。

盲点3击破:整体协调原则
看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现,考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数,真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。

试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻
词汇来堆砌文章,这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击,最后只能适得其反。

所以,用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构与整体相协调的原则。

三.句式(sentence structure):长短结合,错落有致
盲点1 :长篇累牍
和用词上的大词连篇一样,部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。

盲点1 击破:长短结合原则
事实上,如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话,会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。

通常的情况是长短句结合使用,而且论点通常用短句,而论据则长句居多。

盲点2 :短小精悍
和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,为了保险起见,这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are 的主系表和主谓宾句型。

盲点2击破:灵活多变原则
这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive 一些,他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。

如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability 这个简单句为例,通过强调句型的包装我们得到:
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications.
通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到:
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability .
通过插入语的包装我们可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents.
通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability .
………
通过如此灵活的加工和包装,你会发现,简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人,这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。

总之,掌握了如上原则,再加上持之以恒的练习,考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。

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