短文改错

编制人：邹维薇审核人：王咏梅学号：_______ 姓名：_______

短文改错教学案----代词

【回顾练】高考链接：试着做以下高考题（主要查找代词运用是否正确）Exercise 1:每题只有一个错误（第一题只修改粗体部分）

1. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toys. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it.( 2012年课标卷)

2. Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. (2012年大纲卷II)

3. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. (2012年大纲卷II)

4. A little girl was hurt and his mother needed help. (2009年大纲卷II)

5. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon. (2009年课标卷)

小结：人称代词在短文改错中的考点

1.上下文的______不一致；

2.上下文的________不一致；

3.上下文的________不一致；

4._________的漏用；

5.人称代词、物主代词、反身代词、不定代词等的错用。

Exercise 2: 每题只有一个错误

1. Many rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. (2015年课标卷I)

2. After looking at the toy for some time, he found that his parents were missing…. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. ( 2015年课标卷II)

3.….both of them have similar ideas… Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship last long.（2014年）

4.Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said…(2010 年大纲卷II)

5.Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful weeks in Qingdao with them…(2007年)

【巩固练】单句改错：每题只有一个错误

1. Nang is a special kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. (2011年大纲卷I)

2. Many countries in the world find they don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to …..(2012年大纲卷II)

3. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toys. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke them. For a while, parents bought me new toys.(2012年课标卷)

4. You can send “e-mails” to your friends as long as we are on the Internet

5. My wife and I spent two weeks in London last year. He was very happy there.

【拓展练】: 单句改错：每题只有一个错误

Exercise 1:

1. What’s more, we can go to work by bike once or twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water….. (2012年大纲卷I)

2. It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around the city and providing us with the wonderful meals. (2011年大纲卷II)

3. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place. (2009大纲卷I)

4. Lost time will never come back. We must remember it in daily life and make full use of time.

5. Zhang Li, our monitor, works hard at his lessons and he’s always rea dy to help others. We like her very much.