四级作文实战题

作文评分标准：为了提高大学生的写作能力，考试中心制订了作文最低分：6/15；如果考生达不到最低分，就要扣分，扣分原则是：作文得1分，从总分中扣5分；得2分，扣3分；以此类推。

如果作文得0分，不管总分是多少，一律算作不及格。

Scoring of writingRange Finder14分: 1) Very close to the topic2) Wide range of vocabulary and sentence patterns3) Good organizations of ideas4) Good coherence and logic connection5) With minor errors and mistakes in vocabulary and grammar 11分: 1) Close to the topic2) Good flexibility of vocabulary and sentence patterns3) Lack coherence and logic connectors4) With a few spelling and grammar mistakes8分: 1) Close to the topic2) Basically clear3) Narrow range of vocabulary and sentence patterns4) With some spelling and grammar mistakes5分: 1) Not very close to the topic2) Some ideas but poor organization of ideas3) Some incomplete sentence and spelling mistakes2分: 1) A few complete sentences2) Some ideas0分: 1) Go stray from the topic2) No clear ideas3) Too many incomplete sentences句与句之间的逻辑关系表示因果关系的连接词：Therefore, so, hence; thus; on account of this; for this reason, for this purpose, with this in mind, as a result, in consequence; because of , consequently.表示后置原因和条件、因果关系的英语词汇有：Because, for, on this basis, it follows; to this end, otherwise, then, under the circumstances, in that case.表示转折功能的词汇有：But, only, however, yet, on the other hand, rather, at the same time, actually, despite of, in spite the fact that, instead, in any case, anywhere.表示时空关系：Hence, meantime, then, next, first, secondly, thirdly, finally, previously, so, hitherto, briefly.表示语篇连接添加作用的词：Namely, thus, likewise, similarly, and, or, nor, besides, alternatively, furthermore, incidentally, further, again, also, moreover, additionally.1．投诉信要求：你买了一个短波收音机，打算提高英语听力和口语，回校后，发现质量有问题，你曾给该商店打电话，要求退还，但没有结果，你写封信给该店老板，要求退还，否则，你要向消协投诉。

2005-3-17Dear manager,I am a student of Northwestern Polytechnical University. I bought a four-band radio set in your department store last Friday, which cost me RMB58.88, aiming at （intending to, hoping to, in the hope that, so as to, in order to, in order that ）improving my English by listening to English broadcasting. But when I came back to the campus, I found that when I tuned to short-wave band the English broadcasting is not clear no matter what radio stations I tuned to. At First I thought that my battery had something wrong, but when I replaced the battery with a pair of new one, the sound is still not clear. And when I contrasted it with the radio of my classmates, I believe that mine has inferior quality. I called the salesman in your store, requesting to change my radio set. And he asked me, in a very impolite way, that if I was sure that I bought it in your store and I told him that I had the receipt to show it was really bought in your store, but he gave no response. That’s why I wrote to you to give me a definite answer. I hope you willoffer me a new radio set which is in good quality, or you can return my money assoon as possible. Otherwise I will complain in the Consumer Association and maybe they will give you a severe penalty, but that is not my intention.Best wishes,Li Ming16. 投诉信Dear Sirs,I am a regular listener on the BBC and have enjoyed very much the various programs you offer to Asian listeners. I am particularly interested in the program on Business English which you started recently, broadcasting in the BBC World Service at 00: 00 Greenwich Mean Time. As a student specializing in international trade, I find the contents of the program very enlightening. However, I have some difficulty following the exercises as I have no written scripts to refer. I am, therefore, writing to ask whether you could send me the texts and exercises. I believe I will be doubly benefited if I have the written materials as a supplement.Could you please also enclose the latest timetable of the BBC program for Southeast Asian listeners?Thank you very much indeed.Yours faithfully20．投诉信Sept. 28, 2004Dear Manager,I am a senior student of Northwestern Polytechnical University and majoredin computer science. At the beginning of July, I signed a contract with your company which offered me an opportunity of working in your company as a computer programmer for 2 months. One of the clauses in the contract says thatmy pay is 1500 Yuan a month, which does not include pay for extra work on weekend. And for extra work on weekend, if necessary, I should be paid 150 Yuaneach day. In the end of the first month when I received my pay, that was 2,000 Yuan, including 4 days extra work, and 100 Yuan for income tax, and I believed everything was Okay. But when I received my pay for the second month, I found itwas only 1500 Yuan and the pay for 4 days extra work was not included. I calledyour secretary in the office and asked for why and she asked if I worked for 4extra days and I told her the director in my office had my record. She said shewould consult both director and the manager, but after one month passed, therewas no response. I talked about my problem with one of my friends who woks fora newspaper and she encourages me either to talk about it with a lawyer or write aletter about it to the editor in her newspaper, but I don’t think that is a good idea, because the reputation of your company is likely to be ruined. That’s why I write aletter to you for help. I request my money for 4 days extra work will be paid assoon as possible.Yours Sincerely,Jiao Le根据图表写作文2．Writing: Men endure more hardship and stress男女婴儿在出生时，在正常情况下，每出生100个女婴，就会出生108个男婴。