高考高考英语二轮点晴 专题训练 短文改错(7)

2015届高考高三英语二轮专题训练：短文改错（7）【英语卷(解析)·2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1.members---member 考查名词单复数。

句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。

因为前面有a,故用单数形式。

2.happens---happened 考查动词的时态。

我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。

事发生在过去，故用一般过去时。

3.waiting后面加for 考查固定搭配。

Wait for sth等待某事；4.knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。

Knock down sb 撞倒某人；5.it—which 考查定语从句连接词。

Which指代 a passing car6. a –the 考查冠词。

句意：一个男人立刻冲向那个女生给她急救；the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指；7.but---and 考查连词；句意：幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院。

两个句子是并列关系；paring---compared 考查非谓语动词。

句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我对我的所作所为感到很骄傲；9.aware of 去掉of 考查固定短语。

Be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。

10.that –what 考查表语从句。

句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。

【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201408）】 BOne day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。

【答案解析】76.invite→inviting。

现在分词作状语，故invite改为inviting。

77. families→family her修饰family，应用单数形式。

78.79. careless→carelessly 修饰written应用careless的副词形式。

80.help前the去掉。

ask sb for help向某人求助，help为不可数名词，故去掉the。

81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。

82.read前加to。

be able to do sth能做某事。

83.chemist’s前加a。

chemist在文中第一次出现，故应用不定冠词a。

84. but→and。

此处的前后分句是并列关系，不是转折关系，故用and。

85. will→would。

主句为过去时，从句也应用过去时，故will改为would。

短文改错A person’s age no lon ger tells you something about 76. _______his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer 77. ________ a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. ________ work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. ________ that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________ a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81.________It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________ president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _______ all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________ 【参考答案】76. something → anything 77. healthy → health 78. which → when（或 year∧ in）79. start → starts 80. when∧ to 81. was82．√ 83.or ∧a 84. What →As 85. public’s → public【重庆南开中学】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

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