高中英语Unit5HumansandNature写作指导课件北师大版必修第二册

妙笔成篇
How to Survive in an Earthquake On April 20,2013 a big earthquake hit Lushan County of Ya’an City, Sichuan Province.The earthquake has caused significant damage.So how to keep safe during an earthquake has become an important issue.Here are some guidelines. Firstly,don’t be nervous and keep calm.Try to get into an open area away from trees,buildings,walls,signs,power lines and anything else that might fall on you if outdoors.Secondly,if you are indoors,stay there.Quickly move to a safe place such as under a strong desk.Cover your head and neck with your arms to protect yourself from falling objects.Thirdly,never go to the lift.
Though we can’t stop earthquakes,we can reduce the damage that earthquakes bring us if we take right measures.
针对训练
上周日下午,你和你的朋友在河边散步时,听到河中有人在喊救命。于是你 们迅速地救起了他,并对他实施了必要的急救。请你就此事写一篇80词左 右的短文,投递到学校英文报Youth,主要内容包括: 1.描述事故发生的过程; 2.实施急救的过程(让他平躺;实施口对口人工呼吸;联系救护车和他的家 人); 3.简要表达你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的想法。
2.高级句式 (1)在2013年4月20日,四川省雅安市庐山县发生了大地震。(when,where and what) On April 20,2013 a big earthquake hit Lushan County of Ya’an City,Sichuan Province. (2)地震造成了很大的损失。(高级词汇significant;新学词汇damage) The earthquake has caused significant damage. (3)因此,如何在地震中保持安全已成为一个重要的问题。(“疑问词+不定 式”作主语;高级词汇issue) So how to keep safe during an earthquake has become an important issue.
内容要点: 1.地震来临时请不要惊慌,如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、高压线等物; 2.如果在室内,要尽量躲在床、柜等坚固家具下面以及房屋内侧的墙角,并 且注意保护好头部; 3.逃生时千万不要选择乘坐电梯。 注意: 1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 2.请在相应位置作答。
审题谋篇
一、审题定调 1.确定体裁:本单元的写作任务是写灾难求生的文章,属于说明文。所以写 作的关键是语言要简明易懂条理,还要清晰地表达遇到危险时该怎么做,达 到指导的效果。因为本文属于说明文,所以提倡使用祈使句。 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第二人称。 3.确定时态:由于本文是说明文,记叙的事情是现在随时有可能发生的事情, 所以以一般现在时为主。
Through this accident,we realized that a knowledge of first aid could make a real difference.
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
Last Sunday afternoon,my friend and I were walking along the river when we heard someone screaming for help in the river.Seeing a drowning person,we jumped into the river at once and lifted him out.
二、谋篇布局 为使文章能够连贯通顺,写作内容应包括以下三个方面: 1.描述题目要求中所提到的事件,引出话题; 2.主体部分,说明在地震发生时如何保护自己; 3.最后总结概括全文。
三、组织语言 1.核心短语 cause significant damage 造成重大损失 keep safe 保持安全 keep calm 保持冷静 get into an open area进入开阔地带 stay away from 远离 move to a safe place 转移到安全的地方 cover...with...用……护住…… protect...from...保护……免受…… reduce the damage 减少损失 take right measures 采取合理的措施
(4)这里有一些指导方针。(指导建议类文章的常用句型) Here are some guidelines. (5)首先,不要紧张,保持冷静。(祈使句的肯定和否定形式) Firstly,don’t be nervous and keep calm. (6)如果在户外,尽量去远离树木、建筑物、墙壁、标志、电线以及可能坠 落物体的开阔地带。(if引导条件状语从句;定语从句) Try to get into an open area away from trees,buildings,walls,signs,power lines and anything else that might fall on you if outdoors. (7)其次,如果你在室内,待在那里。(条件状语从句) Secondly,if you are indoors,stay there.
(8)迅速转移到安全的地方,比如在一张结实的桌子下面。(such as) Quickly move to a safe place such as under a strong desk. (9)用胳膊护住你的头和脖子,保护你自己不受落物的伤害。(cover...with...) Cover your head and neck with your arms to protect yourself from falling objects. (10)尽管我们无法阻止地震,如果我们采取正确的措施,就能减少地震给我 们带来的损失。(though引导让步状语从句;if引导条件 状语从句;定语从句) Though we can’t stop earthquakes,we can reduce the damage that earthquakes bring us if we take right measures.
写作要求
如何写灾难求生的文章 北京时间2013年4月20日8时02分,四川省雅安市庐山县发生了7.0级地震, 地震造成了包括房屋倒塌、人员伤亡等在内的一系列的不良后果。地震 发生后,四川省立刻启动一级应急程序。近几年全球地震频发,所以在地震 发生时如何保护自己便成了一个重要的话题。请你以“How to Survive in an Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。
We gave first aid to him right away.We put him in place and applied the mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing over and over again.Meanwhile,my friend called an ambulance.He came to himself before the doctors arrived,who praised us for our timely help.