2021届高考英语二轮复习好题专题06书面表达_读后续写或概要写作第03期含解析

书面表达
—读后续写或概要写作
1.【2021届湖北省六校第一次联考】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly, a crow rested on their window.
The father asked his son, “What’s this?”The son replied, “It is a crow.”
After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What’s this?”The son said, “Father, I have just now told you, it is a crow!”
After a little while, the old father again asked his son the third time, “What’s this?”
At this time, some expression of anger was felt in his son’s tone when he said to his father with a firm reply. “It is a crow, a crow.”A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What’s this?”
This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’. Are you not able to understand this?”
A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old diary, which he had kept since his son was born.
On opening a page, he asked his son to read the page.
When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:
“Today, my little son aged 3 was sitting with me on the sofa, when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.
I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel angry but I rather felt love for my innocent son.”
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After reading the diary, the son burst into tears, feeling sorry for what he had done to his father.
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Feeling ashamed, the son got down to his knees before his father.
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【答案】After reading the diary, the son burst into tears, feeling sorry for what he had done to his father. He lost his patience with his father when he was asked the same question for the fourth time. However, compared with him, his father was patient even though he asked even 23 times. By comparison, the son began to reflect on his own behavior, admitting his own mistake.
Feeling ashamed, the son got down to his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him. The father gave him a hug and all old memories came crowding in. It was his father that showed great concern about him. Never would he forget the days when his father used to attend to him with great care and love. How lucky he was to be blessed with such a great father! He promised that he would take care of his father the way he was treated by his father.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了父亲问了儿子四次“这是什么”，儿子回答是乌鸦后开始厌烦。

父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。

根据提示内容可知，续写第一段要写儿子读完日记后的感受，可以描述儿子看完日记后对自己之前的态度感到了后悔和自责。

第二段写读完日记后的做法，可以描述儿子感到惭愧后向父亲道歉，恳求父亲的原谅，以后会像父亲对待自己那样孝敬尊敬父亲。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】
续写内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。

另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇，如：be filled with tears，used to do，without feeling irritation，made an apology to，afford to 等。

强调句：It was his father that showed great concern about him.宾语从句：He promised that he would take care of his father the way he was treated by his father.
2.【2021届湖南省教育联合体高三7月联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I would like to share an act of kindness, which I practice regularly and which gives me great joy.
I always carry at least $ 10 in my car and also in my pocket. I save it for the first person who asks if I can “spare some change. Smiling at the person, I always respond very cheerfully with a comment like, “Yes, I would love to.”or “It would be my pleasure. “And I give them the money. Then I replace it with my next $ 10 for the next person. I never spend this money myself. I think that it is the possession of the next person who asks for it. Ten dollars is a small amount, yet it means a lot to the person who expects it, especially when delivered with joy and respect to them.
I also have taken to carrying things in my car, such as hats, socks, gloves and umbrellas, just in
case someone needs them. Recently I put together some care packages for the homeless. It occurred to me that things like band-aids, toothpaste, aspirin, combs, as well as food and bottled water would be of use. I imagined that they would need things that are non - breakable, so I chose plastic or paper containers. The folks who received them were delighted. But I feel it’s not just that I give them things that matters. I always remember it is they who bless me with an opportunity to be kind. What a joy!
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The idea of helping others this way came to me when I got similar help from a woman.
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The idea of helping others this way came to me when I got similar help from a woman. One day, I was shopping at a grocery store and when I went to pay for my groceries I discovered my wallet was gone. You can imagine how embarrassed I was then. Luckily, a woman, overhearing my problem, offered to pay my bill. I was so thankful and asked for her phone number so that I could pay back the money. “Don’t pay it back. Pay it forward,”the woman replied with a smile. That
was when I decided to do something nice for whoever needs help.
Interestingly enough, I often get something in return from the person I help. The other day, a young lady to whom I gave some change, asked if I could use a spare pair of gloves she had. So I accepted them for the next person who needs them. I was touched to see she wanted to give me something. In fact, she gave me more. She gave me a feeling of happiness that only those who are happy to show kindness to others can understand.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要为作者分享自己经常做的一件善事，它给了作者莫大的快乐。

作者总是在车里和口袋里至少带10美元，会把它留给第一个问“能不能给点零钱”的人。

对着别人微笑，作者总是非常愉快地回答说：“是的，我很乐意。

”或者“这是我的荣幸。

”然后我给他们钱。

作者还习惯在车里放一些东西，比如帽子、袜子、手套和雨伞，以防有人需要。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当我从一位女士那里得到类似的帮助时，我产生了用这种方式帮助别人的想法。

所以后文应该是讲述让作者有了这种善举的原因是，作者从一个女士那里得到了类似的帮助，记叙故事发生的经过；第二段开头是：有趣的是，我经常从我帮助的人那里得到一些回报。

本段应该写作者是如何从自己帮助的人那里得到回报的。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：grocery store，pay for，ask for，in fact等高级词汇；One day, I was shopping at a grocery store and when I went to pay for my groceries I discovered my wallet was gone.运用时间状语从句；She gave me a feeling of happiness that only those who are happy to show kindness to others can understand.运用定语从句等高级句式。

3.【2021届江苏省徐州市第一中学新高考全国卷第一次适应性考试】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

I had been swimming competitively for five years and was ready to quit because I felt I was horrible at it. I was often the only African American at a swimming competition. I kept receiving “Honourable Mentions”. Any athlete knows that you don’t want to have a bookshelf full of “Honourable Mentions”, which you get just because you showed up.
One summer day, the day before a big swim meet, I decided to break the news to my grandma that I was quitting the swim team. When I told her of my desire to quit swimming, she looked me into my face, saying firmly but warmly, “Baby, remember these words ‘Quitters never win and winners never quit.’Your grandmother didn’t raise losers or quitters. You go to that meet tomorrow, and you swim like you are a grandchild of mine, you hear?”I was too afraid to say anything but “Yes, ma’am.”
The next day we arrived at the swim meet late, missing my group of swimmers in the 15/16 age group. My coach insisted I be allowed to swim with the older group. I knew she was including me in the race so our long drive would not be wasted, and she had no expectations whatsoever that I would come in anything but eighth place and only that because there were not nine lanes.
As I was mounting the board, all the other girls looked at me. I quickly noticed that these girls were here to do one thing—beat me! All of a sudden my grandma’s words rang in my head：“Quitters never win and winners never quit. You swim like you are a grandchild of mine. Quitters never win and winners never quit...”“Yes, grandma, I will swim like I am a grandchild of yours, ”
I said to myself.
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SPLASH! I was swimming harder than I’d ever swum before.
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Just then, cheers and claps overwhelmed me.
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【答案】One Possible Version：
SPLASH(扑通一声)! I was swimming harder than I’d ever swum before. As I drew my right arm back, I noticed I was tied with one person. I assumed we were battling for eighth place and I refused to finish dead last, so I added more kick on the last 200 yards. I hit the wall and looked to the left and to the right for the swimmers who had beat me, but no one was there. They must have gotten out of the water already.
Just then, cheers and claps overwhelmed me. I raised my head to see my coach screaming hysterically. My eyes followed her pointing finger and I couldn’t believe what I saw. The other swimmers had just reached the halfway point of the pool! That day, at age 15, I broke the national 17/18­year­old 400­freestyle record. I hung up my honourable mentions and replaced them with a huge trophy. “Yes, grandma, you’re right. Quitters never win and winners never quit.”
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲述了作者已经参加了五年的游泳比赛，准备退出，因为觉得自己很糟糕。

一个夏天的一天，在一个大型游泳比赛的前一天，作者把决定退出游泳队的消息告诉了奶奶，结果奶奶让作者坚持下去。

第二天作者和奶奶来到比赛地点，没有赶上作者15/16岁年龄组的游泳选手。

教练坚持允许作者和年龄大一些的人一起游泳。

当作者登上跳板时，其他所有的女孩都看着自己。

作者很快注意到这些女孩是来做一件事的——打败自己！突然，奶奶的话在作者的脑海里回响：“放弃者永不成功，胜利者永不放弃。

”
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：扑通一声！我游得比以前任何时候都努力。

所以后文应该是讲述作者比赛的经过和心理活动；第二段开头是：就在那时，欢呼声和掌声淹没了我。

本段应该写作者打破了17/18 400自由泳的全国纪录，以及作者获胜后的感想。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：add on，hysterically，honourable等高级词汇；As I drew my right arm back, I noticed I was tied with one person.运用时间状语从句；My eyes followed her pointing finger and I couldn’t believe what I saw.运用宾语从句等高级句式。

4. 【2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟（13）】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150 左右。

Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her a baby duckling in a yellow basket.
“Mom said later that she bought the little duck because she felt sorry for it,”recalled Sara. The people at the pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.
Sara’s mother really didn’t think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise, Pinky grew and got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a healthy, hungry duck
with white feathers.
“We fed Pinky oatmeal, cooked and uncooked, and small pieces of vegetables,”said Sara. Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara. Everyone treated Pinky as a family member.
But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk”came. Sara’s Mom and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with other ducks. It was not natural for ducks to live indoors with a family, her father told her. He added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all the same things that ducks in the wild do.
Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara’s parents decided to take Pinky to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would have the chance to live a natural life and Sara could still visit her.
The big day came, Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said that Pinky did not look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.
注意:
所续写短文的词数应为l50 左右;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father.
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The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!
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【答案】Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father. But he tried to convince Sara that Pinky was fine. Walking towards the car, Sara looked over her shoulder and saw Pinky standing alone. The other ducks were swimming around in circles, looking at Pinky. To Sara, it seemed that they were trying to identify the strange animal. They didn’t recognize Pinky as a duck. Worried about Pinky, Sara dreamed of Pinky being bullied by other ducks the whole night.
The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes! There was Pinky, happily walking around on the grass. Thrilled at what she saw, she kept asking herself,”How did she make it?”After all, it was two miles away and he managed to walk back through the city street. Incredible! But her parents drove Pinky back to the pond again regardless of her request. The following morning, there was Pinky again on the grass! Seeing Pinky again, her father, waving his arms about wildly, moved his lips without saying anything. Meanwhile, Sarah, overjoyed, hugged Pinky tightly, tears streaming down her cheeks.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。

Sara Savick九岁时的复活节，父母送给她一只小鸭子Pinky，在他们的精心照顾下Pinky渐渐长大，有一天父母告诉Sara，Pinky必须回到野外和其他鸭子过一样的生活，他们决定把Pinky带到附近公园的一个池塘，那一天到来了。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当他们把Pinky放到池塘离开时，每个人都很难过……所以应该写Pinky 第一天到池塘发生的事情，即他们依依不舍里离开池塘，其他鸭子看到Pinky后的反应及Sara对Pinky的担心等内容。

第二段开头是：第二天早上，当向厨房窗户外面看时，Sara不敢相信自己的眼睛……本段应该写Sara看到的情况，即Pinky回到了家里，Sara不知道它是怎么做到的，父母看到后把Pinky放回池
塘，但是Pinky再次回到家里，Sara激动得紧紧抱着Pinky。

续写时注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：looked over，recognize …as，regardless of等高级词汇；Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond中when引导的时间状语从句；Thrilled at what she saw, she kept asking herself,中what引导的宾语从句等高级句式。

5. 【2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷6】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150 左右。

Last year at Christmas time, my wife, three children and I were on our way from Paris to Nice. Somehow everything went wrong. Our hotels were “tourist traps”and our rented car broke down. On Christmas Eve, when we checked into a dirty hotel in Nice, there was no Christmas spirit in our hearts.
It was raining and cold when we went out to eat. We found a small restaurant poorly decorated for the holiday. Only five tables in the restaurant were taken. There were two German couples, two French families, and an American sailor, by himself. They were eating in stony silence except the sailor. He was writing a letter, and a half-smile lighted his face. In the corner a piano player was listlessly (无精打采地) playing Christmas music.
All of us were interrupted by an old French flower woman through the front door. She had a worn overcoat and her old shoes were wet. Carrying her basket of flowers, she went from one table to another. No one bought any. Exhausted and frustrated, she sat down at a table.
The sailor finished his meal and got up to leave. Putting on his coat, he walked over to the flower woman’s table.
“Merry Christmas,”he said, smiling and picking out a handful of flowers. “How much are they?”“Two francs, sir.”
The sailor put a twenty franc note in the woman’s hand.
“I don’t have change, sir,”she said. “I'll get some from the waiter.”
“No, ma’am,”said the sailor, leaning over and kissing the ancient cheek. “This is my Christmas present for you.”
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand.
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The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand. He picked out a red flower and placed it on our table. “Merry Christmas!”he greeted us in a cheerful voice. Before we could say “Thank you”, he went to other tables. In an instant, everyone in the room was presented with
flowers, including the waiter and the piano player. In the bright light, the flowers were glowing in full bloom. These magical flowers melted our frustrated hearts and blew away all the unpleasant moods.
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The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room. A festival atmosphere drowned all of us. We merrily danced to the joyful music, singing, laughing and wishing each other good luck. The old flower woman also joined us, unable to conceal her excitement and gratitude. The spirit of Christmas came back to us again. It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land. All this was due to a young American sailor, who, through his kindness and generosity, brightened our paths.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，去年圣诞节期间作者一家从巴黎前往尼斯，但是包括旅馆、汽车在内的一切都出现状况，令大家没了圣诞精神。

出去吃饭的时候，又找了一家装修得很差的小餐馆。

餐厅里除了水手以外，其他人都沉默不语，连钢琴师都没有精神。

这时水手去买了卖花老太婆的花。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，那个水手手里拿着花朝我们的桌子走来，所以应该写水手把一朵花给了我们桌，也给了其他桌的客人，包括钢琴师和侍者。

这些花发挥了强大的作用，驱散了大家不愉快的心情等。

第二段开头是：钢琴演奏者活跃起来，整个房间充满了美妙的音乐。

本段应该写餐厅里的人都恢复了愉快的心情庆祝圣诞节，大家跟着欢快的音乐跳舞，唱歌，大笑，互相祝福好运。

是水手的善良感染了大家。

续写时要求所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：be presented with，blow away，come back to 等高级词汇；In an instant, everyone in the room was presented with flowers, including the waiter and the piano player.使用了现在分词作状语；All this was due to a young American sailor, who, through his kindness and generosity, brightened our paths.使用了非限制性定语从句等高级句式。

6. 【2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷11】Mr. Plumbean lived on a street where all the houses were the same. He liked it that way. So did everybody else on Mr. Plumbean's street. Then one day a seagull flew over Mr. Plumbean's house and made a big orange splot(斑块) on Mr. Plumbean's house.
“Oh! Too bad!”everybody said. “Mr. Plumbean will have to paint his house again.”
So Mr. Plumbean got some blue paint and some white paint, and that night he got busy. He painted at night because it was cooler. When the paint was gone, the roof was blue. The walls were white. And the big orange splot was still there. Then he got some more paint. He got red paint, yellow paint, green paint, and purple paint.
In the morning the other people on the street came out of their houses. Their houses were all the same. But Mr. Plumbean's house was like a rainbow. It was like a jungle. It was like an explosion. There was the big orange splot. And there were little orange splots. There were stripes. There were pictures of elephants and lions and pretty girls and steam-shovels. That day Mr. Plumbean bought carpenter's tools. That night he built a tower on top of his roof, and he painted a clock on the tower.
At night the next day Mr. Plumbean got a truck full of green things. He planted palm trees, baobabs , bushes, and onions. When the other people came out of their houses, they saw Mr. Plumbean swinging between two palm trees and Mr. Plumbean was drinking lemonade.
Plumbean has gone too far! “Plumbean, what have you done to your house?”the people shouted.
“My house is me and I am it. My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,”Mr. Plumbean said.
The people went away. They asked the man who lived next door to Mr. Plumbean to go and have a talk with him. "Tell him that we all liked it here before he changed his house. T ell him that his house has to be the same as ours so we can have a neat street."
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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The man went to see Mr. Plumbean that evening.
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Then, one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night.
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【答案】读后续写
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The man went to see Mr. Plumbean that evening. They sat under the palm trees drinking lemonade and talking all night long. Early the next morning the man went out to get rope and
nails and paint. When the people came out of their houses they saw a red and yellow ship next door to the house of Mr. Plumbean. “What have you done to your house?”they shouted at the man. “My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,”said the man, who had always loved ships.
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Then, one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. They would talk about their dreams. Whenever anybody visited Mr. Plumbean's house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. Whenever a stranger came to the street, the stranger would say, “This is not a neat street.”Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street is where we like to be, and it looks like all our dreams.”
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，这篇文章主要讲了Plumbean先生按照自己的想法设计和改造房子，使得街道看起来很不整洁，人们让Plumbean先生的邻居去劝说他。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天晚上，这个人去见了Plumbean先生，所以后文应该是讲述这个人见到了Plumbean先生后，发生的事情，并且第二天这个人对自己的房子进行了改变。

第二段开头是：然后，他们一个接一个地在深夜去见Plumbean先生。

本段应该写同样的故事继续上演着，所有人都对自己的房子进行了改变。

当有陌生人问起时，所有的人都会异口同声地回答Plumbean先生经常说的话。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：“My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,”said the man, who had always loved ships.表语从句和非限制性定语从句的运用；
Whenever anybody visited Mr. Plumbean's house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams.时间状语从句的运用。

7. 【2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷12】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

I lay on my bed, legs leaning against the wall, desperately wishing my mother would call. But I remembered the last time I'd seen her, right before the train for Providence pulled out of the station, “You know how expensive it is to call,”she said, then hugged me tight and said good- bye.
This was my first birthday away from home. I missed my mom, missed my sister, and most certainly missed the special pound cake my mother always made for my birthday. Since getting to college that year, I would watch jealously as the other freshmen received care packages from their parents on their birthdays--and even on ordinary days. Big boxes containing summer slacks and blouses, packages of M&M's and Snickers , things they needed and things they didn't. Instead of feeling thrilled about my upcoming eighteenth birthday, I felt empty. I wished my mom would send me something, too, but I knew that she couldn’t afford presents or the postage. She had done her best with my sister and me--raising us by herself. The simple truth was there just was never enough money.
But that didn’t stop her from filling us with dreams. “You can be anything you want to be,”she would tell us. “Politicians, dancers, writers -- you just have to work for it; you have to get an education.”
Thanks to my mom's sacrifices and big dreams, I’d made it to the Ivy League: Brown University in Providence, Rhode Island.
As I was recalling these things, my roommate joined me on the bed. “Hey. After we study, let's buy ice cream and cake.”I nodded, closed my eyes, and imagined the cake Mom would have made. Mmm. I could see the golden yellow of each of the twelve eggs, and I could almost smell the vanilla(香草) filling the house while the cake baked.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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As I daydreamed, there was a knock on the
door.__________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2
How had she managed to afford it?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】读后续写
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As I daydreamed, there was a knock on the door. My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me. He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed. “Open it”. I did, and inside was a vanilla cake with chocolate frosting. In icing were the words: “Happy Birthday, Sande! Love, Mom.”I was filled with excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close.
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How had she managed to afford it? I felt as if I were back at home with her, safe and secure while she sang and told me how much she loved having me in her life. I ran out to the hall and knocked on my dormmates’doors. “Birthday cake,”I called. I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate, because I didn't need to eat to feel both full and rich inside.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求续写两段内容（我收到妈妈送我的生日蛋糕和我的感受以及我和室友们一起分享的情节），注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；deliveryman（送货员），carefully（小心翼翼地），excitement （兴奋），secure（安全），hug（拥抱）及gather（聚集）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。

作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be filled with （充满），run out（跑出去），as if (仿佛、好像)，ask for sb（找某人）以及knock on（敲门），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed.”，状语从句“I was filled with excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close.”以及“I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate,
because I didn't need to eat to feel both full and rich inside.”，非谓语动词“My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

8.【2021届山东省潍坊市高三英语三轮冲刺拉练八】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Rescue in a Bottle
Curtis Whitson had rafted (v.乘筏) down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before.
This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip.
But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, Whitson’s companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon(峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to get down the rocks as planned.
“The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,”recalls Whitson, 45.
They had no smart phone service, and they hadn’t seen a single person in the past three days. And Whitson knew that they’d be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions.
As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck---he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.
“We have to get these people a message,”Whitson thought.。