上海市松江区高三英语质量抽查试卷解析版

高三英语质量抽查试卷
一、用单词的适当形式完成短文
1.Directions: After reading the passage below, fill in the blanks to make the passage coherent and grammatically correct. For the blanks with a given word, fill in each blank with the proper form of the given word; for the other blanks, use one word that best fits each blank.
How to Become a Morning Person?
You have grand ambitions: to start a business, to write a book. But chances are you work long hours, or household responsibilities consume your days. By the time you finish all you have to do, you will have had no energy ________anything you want to do beyond turning on the TV.
Yet some busy people do make time for their priorities. The secret is giving the most attention to ________at the very beginning of a day. They get up earlier than they have to. Morning by morning, they make progress on something ________matters.
It's not fun to force yourself out of bed, but these early hours are often the best time to do things for yourself. With a little schedule reorganization, ________(become) a morning person is more doable than you think.
I first learned that mornings ________be transformational years ago, when I was studying a busy lawyer's schedule. She wanted to spend more time with her son, but she had little control over when she left work. This state of affairs kept her sad ________she realized she and her son were both early risers and the morning time could be made full use of. After thinking it through, the lawyer decided to get up even earlier. Then, when the boy stepped into the dining room, she ________(finish) preparing a rich breakfast so they two could enjoy the meal to the fullest together.
Mornings are also great for focused thinking. Getup an hour earlier, and you can knock out your most important task of the day. Or you can spare some time for those creative desires ________(bury) deep in your heart and hard to nurture.
But many will argue：I'm not a morning person! The fact is that there are not so many true night owls. When most people take an honest look at ________they're spending the hours before bed, they'll find they have wasted much time on the TV programs they don't mean ________(watch). Also, they often browse through photos on social media of people they didn't like in high school anyway.
A better approach is to sleep earlier, rise earlier and turn unproductive evening hours into productive morning hours.
二、选用适当的单词或短语补全短文
2.Directions：Fill in each blank with a proper word chosen from the box. Each word can be used only once. Note that there is one word more than you need.
New York and New Tax
According to a Manhattan Institute survey, more than half of high-earning New Yorkers are working entirely from home and 44% are considering leaving the city. Ned Lamont, Connecticut's governor, has said "the old idea of the commuter(通勤者) going into New York City five days a week may be outdated." It does seem
________ that the tens of thousands commuting from Mr. Lamont's state will continue to do so. The region's governors have ________well together to deal with the pandemic(流行病), but the friendliness may soon end over taxes.
When people from ________states like New Jersey and Connecticut commute to New York to work for a New York-based employer, they must pay New York tax on the related earned income. Even those who work from home must pay New York taxes unless the employee is working outside New York by ________.
Taxpayers and those states are looking closely at this loophole(漏洞). In December, Connecticut and New Jersey applied to the Supreme Court to consider a case which ________a state's authority to tax non-residents' income while they are working remotely. They think this is definitely a(n) ________ to the city's finances. "Firms have considered leaving the city before, and employees are gradually accepting the idea. They have been working remotely for almost ten months and they've ________to that idea."
Companies are also watching the progression of the billionaire Mark to Market Tax Act, which would treat capital ________from billionaires' property as taxable income. New York's Democratic governor said he would reject any laws ________heavy taxes on the rich, because it would drive out wealthy, mobile residents. It would not take too many moving trucks for the city to feel the economic loss, says Michael Hendrix. A 5% ________of New Yorkers making about $10,000 would result in an annual loss of $933m—roughly the amount distributed to the city's health department.
三、完形填空
3.完形填空
Certainty：Over-rated and Over-rewarded
Type the words "kind of" or "perhaps" into an email in Microsoft Outlook and the program might well tell you to think again. If the Al-powered "Microsoft Editor" judges that you are not sounding 1 enough, it will soon give you a word of warning:" Words expressing uncertainty will 2 your impact."
To me, this suggestion precisely expresses something we've got wrong in society. We live in a world that
3 those who speak with confidence-even when that is misplaced-and gives very little opportunity to perform to those who
4 doubt. "We tend to listen to those experts who tell us a simple, clear and confident story. Why? Because that's
5 satisfying," says Dan Gardner, author of Future Babble, "That's saying let me sweep away the uncertainty for you'."
Research shows that the human brain is "programmed" to hate 6 : a 2021 study found that when volunteers were given electric shocks, their stress levels were highest when they had no idea whether they were going to be given a shock-higher even than subjects who were told they would 7 get one.
We should first know that while confident-sounding experts might be giving us what our brains desire, the
8 they are providing is probably false. Psychologist Philip Tetlock divided up forecasters into "foxes" and "hedgehogs". Foxes consider all sorts of different approaches sand perspectives, and combine those into distinct conclusions. 9 , hedgehogs tend to view the world through the lens of one single defining idea. That makes the hedgehogs 10 forecasters but more likely to get attention.
Perhaps we care less about the truth and more about enjoying some sense of 11 however short-lived that might be. But wouldn't it be better if we held experts to account? Mr. Gardner suggests tagging speakers with some kind of record of previous 12 much as we are given performance statistics for racehorses or baseball players.
Highly confident statements also 13 polarization (两极化), encouraging others to respond in the same kind of language when they disagree. "There's a natural tendency to push back with equal amounts of 14 says Daniel Drezner, a political scientist.
Is it time to give a bit more attention to the 15 ? Full of certainty on the need to stop paying so much attention to those expressing certainty, I say yes.
1. A. timid B. reasonable C. decisive D. mature
2. A. assess B. reverse C. enhance D. lessen
3. A. rewards B. relaxes C. confuses D. weakens
4. A. eliminate B. acknowledge C. emphasize D. conceal
5. A. physically B. psychologically C. politically D. professionally
6. A. uncertainty B. confidence C. dishonesty D. stress
7. A. readily B. fortunately C. definitely D. probably
8. A. desire B. depression C. shock D. relief
9. A. For instance B. In addition C. Even so D. In contrast
10. A. funnier B. worse C. less confident D. more reliable
11. A. achievement B. responsibility C. security D. justice
12. A. approaches B. attention C. predictions D. significance
13. A. prohibit B. promote C. sacrifice D. separate
14. A. firmness B. encouragement C. carefulness D. statement
D. scientists
15. A. foxes B. hedgehogs C. forecasters
四、阅读选择
4.阅读理解
Hazel Mayfield usually cooks the Thanksgiving meal for her extended family in Houston, Texas. She usually welcomes friends and neighbors who are eager to taste her fried turkey, green bean casserole, candied yams, homemade cornbread dressing, and dirty rice-just a few of her signature dishes. Known as Sugar Mama, because her grandchildren think she's so sweet, the 91-year-old typically likes to do her own shopping for the ingredients to make her special dishes.
"My mother is the head cook of the family," said Panulette Mouton, Mayfield's daughter. "Because of her reputation, you know, there're people in and out all day and every family comes through. They want to get some of Sugar Mama's cooking, and some of them would like to learn from her how to cook the food."
But Mayfield hasn't been to the grocery store since March. And there is little about Thanksgiving in 2021 that's usual. Because of Covid-19, the deadly virus that has killed millions in the U.S. and spoiled life around the world, everything is different. Since limiting close face-to-face contact with others is the best way to reduce its spread, hundreds of thousands of American families have re-imagined the holiday with virtual celebrations and canceled or delayed travel plans. There can only be small gatherings with people in their households in response to COVID-19.
This year, Mayfield's family members, without exception, are lamenting the absence of a big gathering. They've explained to their young children and grandchildren why this year's Thanksgiving is different. Mayfield's youngest daughter, Michelle Sanders, says it's tough to help her grandchildren understand why they can't see some of their other family members and why they have to stay at home, celebrating Thanksgiving all by themselves.
"It's really hard, trying to explain to them," Sanders said. "When-you're talking to them and they want to come over, you have to tell them no. They really don't know how to be careful." Sanders added, "And, they don't understand that, being three, four, and six, you know they don't really understand that. So, it's...it's really, really hard, and heartbreaking."
〔1〕According to the passage, Hazel Mayfield is ________.
A.helpful and kind-hearted
B.stubborn and enthusiastic
C.talented and instructive
D.grateful and sensitive
〔2〕The underlined word in paragraph 4 can be best replaced by ________.
A.fascinated by
B.upset about
C.ignorant of
D.embarrassed at
〔3〕What can we infer from what Sanders said in the last paragraph?
A.Children are too young to understand the situation.
B.Children are always careless on Thanksgiving Day.
C.It's tough to help children overcome their problems.
D.Adults should show patience when talking with kids.
〔4〕What do we know about the effect of COVID-19 according to the passage?
A.People are cutting down holiday celebration expenses.
B.People are trying hard to get together to have more fun.
C.People have to make changes in their lifestyle to stay safe.
D.People have put more emphasis on the traditional customs.
5.阅读理解
Here are four books recommended by one of the most respected editors from Reader's Digest. If you have time to dip yourselves into the books, they can surely offer much food for thought.
Face It
Debbie Harry
HARPERCOLLINS
Picture this: it's the late 1970s and the punk music scene is starting to take hold. The band releases the album ParallelLines, which becomes the greatest hit. Everyone wants to attend her concert and some teenage girls even dream to be her. Now 75, Harry bares all about herself in Face It, starting from her childhood. Part shocking, this book is as humorous, moving and vigorous as its subject.
Scatterbrain
Henning Beck
NEWSOUTHBOOKS
If there is no obvious connection among what we see, the brain will substitute in the rest of the information without you even noticing, Beck says in the chapter Memory. In this "user's guide for your brain", he argues that mistakes are the keys to success. He combines science with brain-boosting advice and real-life stories to take the reader on a fascinating adventure through human memory.
You're Not Listening
Kate Murphy
PENGUINERANDOM HOUSE
When was the last time you listened to someone? Really listened without thinking about what you wanted to say next? And when was the last time someone really listened to you? Compared with talking, listening isn't considered so important, argues journalist Kate Murphy, but she insists it is actually the more powerful position in communication. Her insights could transform your conversations, your relationships and your life.
The Right-Brain Work Out
Russel Howcroft with Alex Wadelton
PENGUIN
In 1968,1600 five-year-olds were given a creativity test. They were retested at ages 10 and 15 and their scores were compared against adults. While 98 per cent of five-year-olds were assessed in the "highly creative" range (genius level), only two per cent of adults could be considered "highly creative". In The Right-Brain Work Out, the authors promise to re-train your brain to be more creative, using 70 questions to challenge you.
〔1〕What can we learn from the passage?
A.Parallel Lines became a great success in the 1970s unexpectedly.
B.Face It mainly reveals things about the band to the general public.
C.Scatterbrain helps stimulate your brain to take more adventures.
D.Beck holds that the importance of mistakes shouldn't be ignored.
〔2〕In The Right-Brain Work Out, which of the following is true?
A.Two tests were given separately to the subjects.
B.The effect of the brain exercise is clearly proved.
C.Some questions are designed to enhance creativity.
D.Genius kids reserve their creativity into adulthood.
〔3〕You will recommend ________ to a colleague having difficulty in getting along well with others.
A.Face It
B.Scatterbrain
C.You're Not Listening
D.The Right-Brain Work Out
6.阅读理解
Every profession or trade, every art, and every science has its technical vocabulary, the function of which is partly to name things, or processes which have no names in ordinary English, and partly to secure greater exactness in terminology (术语). Such special dialects are necessary in technical discussion of any kind. Being universally understood by those engaged or interested in the particular science or art, they have the accurateness of a mathematical formula (公式〕. Besides，they save time in these kinds of discussions, for it is much more economical to name a process than to describe it. Thousands of these technical terms are very properly included in every large dictionary, yet, as a whole, they are rather in the suburbs of the English language.
Different occupations, however, differ widely in the character of their special vocabularies. In trades and handicrafts, and other professions, like farming and fishery, which have occupied great numbers of men from remote times, the technical vocabulary is very old. It consists largely of native words, or of borrowed words that have worked themselves into the very central part of our language. Thus, though highly technical in many particulars, these vocabularies are more familiar in sound, and more generally understood, than most other technical terms. In law, medicine, and philosophy, the special dialects have also become pretty familiar to cultivated persons and have contributed much to the popular vocabulary. Yet among these professions, each one still possesses a large body of technical terms that remain essentially foreign, even to educated speech. And the proportion has increased in the last fifty years, particularly in the various departments of natural and political science and in the mechanic arts. Here new terms are coined with the greatest freedom, and abandoned when they have served their turn. Most of the newly-invented terms are restricted to special discussions, and seldom get into general literature or conversation.
Yet no profession is nowadays, as all professions once were, a close combination. Lawyers, doctors and men of science all communicate freely with others, not in a merely professional way. Furthermore, what is called "popular science" makes everybody familiar with modem views and recent discoveries. Any important experiment, though made in a remote or provincial laboratory, is at once reported online, and everybody is soon talking about it-as in the case of AI.
〔1〕What does the underlined sentence in the first paragraph mean?
A.Technical terms which are not easy to use properly will not be welcome.
B.People who live in downtown don't have a preference for technical terms.
C.Technical terms are not widely employed though common in dictionaries.
D.Suburban people favor technical terms for they often appear in dictionaries.
〔2〕What can be inferred from the second paragraph?
A.There are more ancient words in trades and handicrafts than in philosophy.
B.Most newly invented terms are usually put into use in daily conversations.
C.Most new technical terms will be abandoned for few can understand them.
cated people are familiar with the special dialects in technological fields.
〔3〕Which of the following can best summarize the last paragraph?
A.Technical terms take on a rather different look as modem society develops quickly.
B.People can well comprehend technical terms without much professional knowledge.
C.Interchange among professions and faster spread of information popularize technical terms.
D.Advanced ways of communication give a helping hand to the rapid spread of technical terms.
〔4〕According to the passage, we can conclude that ________.
A.there were once closer relationships among different professions
ing technical vocabularies in daily discussions is trouble-saving
C.the main function of technical terms is to name newly-invented things
D.one reason why technical terms come into being is to ensure accuracy
五、任务型阅读
7.Directions：Complete the following passage by using the sentences in the box. Each sentence can only be used once. Note that there are two sentences more than you need.
Face up to Reality
Calls to stop the use of face recognition technology are growing louder, but it is already too late. Given its widespread use by tech companies and the police, a permanent roll back is impossible.
The European Commission is considering temporarily banning the use of the technology in public spaces, giving politicians in Europe time to develop measures to reduce the potential risks of face recognition systems. Some US cities, such as San Francisco, have already implemented bans.
________Public areas make up a small proportion of the physical spaces we inhabit. What about the many that are privately owned, such as shops, schools and museums, in which face recognition is steadily being rolled out, sometimes without our knowledge?
Most of us now associate face recognition with CCTV cameras〔闭路电视摄像机〕. ________ Facebook, for example, runs face recognition on users' photos to automatically identify them in other images on the site, which has been functioning for years. Russian search engine Yandex has a smart search function that, given one image of a face, can find pictures online of the same person even in different poses and lighting conditions.
Other concerns relate to the fact that the technology is imperfect. An independent analysis of a face recognition trial by London's Metropolitan Police found that 81 per cent of matches the system flagged to a watch list of suspects were incorrect. ________
So what is the possible solution? When we consider both the rate at which the technology is developing and its widespread use nowadays, it is crystal-clear that a ban on its use in public spaces would be too little, too late.
________A set of effective rules on when and how it can be used needs to be decided quickly. Face recognition technology is here to stay; implementing a temporary ban would be the regulatory equivalent of burying our faces in the sand.
A. This applies to face recognition, as is often the case.
B. As a matter of fact, it is advancing in the online field, too.
C. What face recognition needs is strict and urgent regulation.
D. But the prohibitions are so limited that they are hardly bans at all.
E. And it's even less accurate for some minorities, which risks worsening racial issues.
F. Companies cannot let market make a final decision on the future of new technology.
六、概要写作
8.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Wildlife Protection, Anything Wrong?
Some of the Earth's creatures die mainly because of humans' choices. These choices have nothing to do with food or shelter or anything else that helps humans survive. What kills millions of animals all over the world is that humans want to make money by doing so. People use parts of animals for everything from hats to handbags, from jewelry to ashtrays and to make powders that supposedly improve a person's life.
It is comforting to note that in the past decades, saving endangered animals has become a popular cause. Let's take saving elephants as an example. For a long while in the late 1980s, wildlife protection groups made sure everyone saw pictures or films of elephants with their faces cut off for their ivory. These groups also proved that certain populations of elephants are decreasing. As a result, most people stopped buying objects made of ivory. Laws against poaching (偷猎) were made stronger. Many countries made importing ivory illegal. Killing elephants for their ivory became more risky and less profitable.
However, deciding that a species is endangered and protecting it by law are not always enough, as concern for certain species will become weak after a while. In the late 1970s, people protested against the killing of seal babies. Everyone was shocked to see young seals being killed in their icy habitat. The cruel activity stopped. But ten years later, the number of seal babies killed was higher than ever.
Other animal protecting movements have come and gone, such as saving the whales and protecting dolphins. The whale population appears to have increased for now. And the laws are finally changed in America to protect the dolphins that swim with tuna fish in parts of the Pacific Ocean. In the years to come, people's focus will probably turn to some other endangered species. During this time, will the elephants be forgotten?
七、汉译英〔整句〕
9.该应用程序一上市就引发了热议。

〔arouse〕〔汉译英〕
10.这幅画栩栩如生，乍一看还以为是照片。

(So...) (汉译英)
11.我一直相信一个人睡眠充足了才能更好地抵御负面情绪。

〔convince〕〔汉译英〕
12.如今大家都逐步意识到健康饮食的重要性，过年时不像以前那样胡吃海喝了。

〔aware〕〔汉译英〕
八、提纲类作文
13.Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是张华，在市区读初中的表弟李峰下周末方案到松江游玩。

他在松江博物馆〔SongJiang Museum〕和辰山植物园〔Chenshan Botanical Garden〕两个景点间犹豫不决，想听听你的意见。

请你写一份邮件给他，推荐其中一个景点并说明理由。

答案解析局部
一、用单词的适当形式完成短文
1.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇夹叙夹议文，作者建议我们成为早起的人，把低效的晚上变成高效的早上。

【点评】考查语法填空，此题考点涉及介词，代词，定语从句，非谓语动词，情态动词，状语从句，时态，宾语从句等多个知识点的考查，是一篇人生感悟类阅读，要求考生在理解细节信息的根底上，进一步根据上下文的逻辑关系，并结合相关语法知识，进行分析推理，从而写出正确的单词形式。

二、选用适当的单词或短语补全短文
2.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇新闻报道，讲述了在疫情之下，纽约市对远程工作的非居民收入征税的一些看法以及征税所带来的影响。

【点评】考查选词填空，考查词汇在篇章中的运用能力,答题时首先要跳过空格通读文章掌握其大意，然后细读文章字斟句酌逐一作答，注意考虑句型、语法、搭配、语境等因素。

最后通读一遍检查验证。

三、完形填空
3.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇议论文，论述了表达不确定性的词会影响你的影响力，鼓励人们像狐狸一样考虑不同的方法和观点，并把它们结合成不同的结论。

【点评】考查完形填空，此题考点涉及动词，名词，形容词，副词，固定短语等多个知识点的考查，是一篇教育类阅读，要求考生在理解细节信息的根底上，进一步根据上下文的逻辑关系，进行分析推理，从而选出正确答案。

四、阅读选择
4.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇新闻报道，报道了疫情期间，美国人民过了与往常不一样的感恩节。

【点评】此题考点涉及词义猜想和推理判断两个题型的考查，是一篇新闻报道，考生需要准确捕捉细节信息，并根据上下文进行逻辑推理，从而选出正确答案。

5.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，介绍了?读者文摘?一位最受尊敬的编辑推荐的四本书。

【点评】此题考点涉及细节理解和推理判断两个题型的考查，是一篇介绍类阅读，考生需要准确捕捉细节信息，并根据上下文进行逻辑推理，从而选出正确答案。

6.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，介绍了特殊的方言在各行业的作用和开展以及专业术语产生的原因。

【点评】此题考点涉及细节理解，句义猜想和推理判断三个题型的考查，是一篇文化类阅读，考生需要准确捕捉细节信息，并根据上下文的逻辑关系，进行分析，推理，从而选出正确答案。

五、任务型阅读
7.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，介绍了人脸识别技术应用广泛但技术不完善以及管理措施的调整。

【点评】考查任务型阅读，本文是一篇科技类阅读，要求在理解细节信息的根底上，着重考查对上下文的理解和推理判断能力。

六、概要写作
8.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇概要写作。

写作步骤
1〕细读原文。

首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨。

人类对财富的贪婪是一些物种濒危的主要原因。

幸运的是，人们已经采取措施保护它们。

然而，随着人们对濒危动物关注的转移，这些努力还远远不够，必须不断努力保护它们。

2〕弄清结构，归纳段意。

概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一局部的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。

3〕列出原文要点。

分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。

在此根底上选出与文章主题密切相关的局部。

4〕在写作时要特别注意下面几点：
〔1〕概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。

〔2〕安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。

〔3〕注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯穿全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。

〔4〕不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。

〔5〕计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。

【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动饱满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，表达了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。

例如： Humans' greed for wealth is chiefly responsible for some species' being endangered. 运用了动名词的被动式作介词宾语；However, as people's attention to endangered animals shifts, the efforts are far from enough, and it is essential to do constant work to protect them.运用了并列句，it作形式主语。

七、汉译英〔整句〕
9.【解析】【分析】as soon as/the moment /the instant“ 一……就……〞，引导时间状语从句。

this application 该应用程序，在从句中作主语；be launched/released to the market上市、投放到市场，在从句中作谓语；
a heated discussion/debate热议〔主句主语〕，与arouse引发(主句谓语)之间为被动关系，所以用被动语态。

陈述过去事情，用一般过去时。

根据句意，故答案为As soon as/The moment /The instant this application was launched/released to the market, a heated discussion/debate was aroused.
【点评】考查汉译英，此题涉及考查时间状语从句，运用了一般过去时。

10.【解析】【分析】表示“栩栩如生〞应用形容词“realistic〞或“lifelike〞，或短语“true to life〞。

表示“乍一看〞应用短语“at first glance〞。

句子时态可以使用一般过去时或一般现在时，句型使用“so＋形容词＋that＋从句〞。

故答案为So realistic / lifelike / true to life is / was the painting that it is / was mistaken for a picture at first glance.
【点评】考查汉译英，此题涉及一般过去时或一般现在时，以及固定短语at first glance。

11.【解析】【分析】be convinced that相信，后接宾语从句；fight against 抵抗；抵御。

when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。

陈述客观事实，用一般现在时。

根据句意，故答案为I'm always convinced that one can better fight against negative emotions when he sleeps well /adequately.
【点评】考查汉译英，此题涉及一般现在时，宾语从句和状语从句，以及固定短语be convinced that和fight against。

12.【解析】【分析】此处主语为people；表示“意识到……〞短语为be aware of，由副词gradually修饰；表示“……的重要性〞短语为the importance of；表示“健康饮食〞短语为healthy eating；表示“胡吃海喝〞短语为eat and drink without control；表示“像以前那样〞短语为like before；此处为非谓语动词作时间状语，“庆祝〞与其逻辑主语“人们〞之间是主动关系，用现在分词，表示“庆祝〞应用动词celebrate；表示“过年〞短语为Chinese New Year。

句子应用一般现在时。

故答案为Now people are gradually aware of the importance of healthy eating and don't eat and drink without control like before when celebrating Chinese New Year.
【点评】考查汉译英，此题涉及一般现在时，固定短语the importance of，healthy eating以及eat and drink without control。

八、提纲类作文
13.【解析】【分析】此题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以张华的身份写一份邮件，推荐一个景点并说明理由写作背景：在市区读初中的表弟李峰下周末方案到松江游玩。

他在松江博物馆〔SongJiang Museum〕和辰山植物园〔Chenshan Botanical Garden〕两个景点间犹豫不决，想听听你的意见。

提示中的内容比拟泛泛，需要适当补充。

此题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。

需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。

写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。

例如：Nice to hear from you and I' m glad to hear that you are planning to visit SongJiang next weekend.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从
句；Here are my suggestions.运用了倒装句；Since you are interested in Chinese history, I think SongJiang Museum is an ideal destination for you.运用了原因状语从句，宾语从句；I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.运用了宾语从句；If you have any other questions, do let me know.运用了条件状语从句，祈使句和强调。