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is about 21.8℃. ⑤ _A__s_w_e_a_l_l _k_n_o_w___, GuanItgzhou
Step4 :检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语
①Located in the middle of Guangdong Province,
Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province, covers an area of 7434.4 square kilometers with a
Sanya
Climate:
warm, plenty of sunshine
The average temperature: 25.5℃
Sanya in Hainan Province, has
_a_w_a_r_m__climate w__it_h__p_le_n_t_y_o_f_sunshine and _th_e__a_v_e_ra_g_e__t_em__p_e_r_a_t_u_r_e is 25.5℃.
on the Sea”.
③ 以“五羊”为象征，以岭南文化著称。
Guangzhou, _w__h_o_se__s_y_m_b_o_l__ is “Five Goats”, __i_s_f_a_m_o_u_s__fo_r___Lingnan Culture.
Step3 句子翻译 ④ 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛，
_W__i_th__a_h__is_t_o_ry__o_f__over 4,000 years, Guangzhou, _w__h_o_s_e_s_y_m_b__o_l _ is the “Five Goats”, _is__fa_m__o_u_s_f_o_r__ Lingnan Culture.
climate:
年平均气温为21.8℃
Guangzhou has a ___w_a_r_m____climate with__p_l_en_t_y__of__su_n_s_h_i_n_e_a_n_d__r_a_in_f_a_ll____ and _t_h_e_a_v_e_r_a_g_e_t_e_m_p_e_r_a_t_u_r_e__ is about 21.8℃.
increased/ decreased to… 3) The city, with a population of…, is…
Location: in the east of Asia Area: 9.6 million K㎡ Population: 1.3 billion
_L_o_c_a_t_e_d__in_ the east of Asia, China _c_o_v_e_r_s_a_n__a_r_ea__o_f_ 9.6 million square kilometers w__it_h__a_p_o_p_u__la_t_io_n__o_f_1.3 billion.
Step3 句子翻译
① 广州，广东省的省府，位于广东的中部，
面积是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。
_L_o_c_a_t_e_d_i_n_t_h_e_m__i_d_d_le__o_f Guangdong province, Guangzhou, __t_h_e_c_a_p_i_ta_l_c_i_ty____ of Guangdong Province, _c_o_v_e_r_s_a_n_a_r_e_a_o_f__ 7434.4 square kilometers ___w_i_th__a_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__o_f ___9.98 million.
在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：
1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正 确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的 句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。
2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5 项内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些 内容，不扣分。
3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一 篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。
2) Sp. lie in (on/to) the top/foot of …
Area:
1)The area of + Sp. is … 2) Sp. ＋covers/has an area of…. 3) with an area of…
Population:
1) Sp. has a population of… 2) The population has grown/
1) It is very/quite cold (hot…)all the year round. 2) Sp. has a warm/cold climate with plenty of… 3) The average temperature of …is … 4) It is neither too cold nor too hot.
symbol is …, is famous for …
气候特征 ① Sp. has a …climate with plenty of…
② The average temperature is …
名胜景观 Sp. has many places of interest,
particularly/such as ... and so on.
History + symbol + culture
With a history of …, Sp. , whose symbol is …, is famous for …
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
Guangzhou
History: over 4,000 years Symbol: Five Goats Culture: Lingnan Culture
添加适当过渡词语
假设你是广州亚运会一名志愿者，请你用5个句子写 一篇英语短文，向外宾介绍广州。【写作内容】
城市名称 广州，广东省的省府
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化 不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地;以“五羊” 为象征,以岭南文化著称.
⑤ 旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。
Guangzhou __h_a_s _m_a_n_y_p__la_c_e_s_o_f_in_t_e_r_es_t___for tourists to visit, __p_a_r_t_ic_u_l_a_r_ly___ the “Eight
Scenes of Guangzhou”.
scenery
1）Sp. has many famous/well-known places of interest, particularly/such as ... and so on.
2）Sp. be a famous summer resort.
Feisha Beach
hot springs
气候特征 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气
温为21.8℃ 。
风景名胜 旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
Step 1: 审题
审内容： 介绍广州 审时态： 地点简介属于说明文，
用一般现在时 审人称： 第三人称(Guangzhou)
Step2: 理清要点整理成5个句子
famous for Lingnan Culture. ④ _In__a_d_d_it_i_o_n_/B_e_s_i_d_e_s ,
GuanItgzhou has a warm climate with plenty of
sunshine and rainfall and the average temperature
Location + area + population
Located in (to/on)…, Sp. covers an area of …with a population of …
History:
1) …has/owns a long history of… 2) with a long history of…
为象征,以岭南文化著称。
气候特征④气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温
为21.8℃。
风景名胜⑤旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
◆ Exchange your composition with your deskmate
and help each other to improve your writing.
Step3 句子翻译
②不仅历史悠久，还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地
Guangzhou is _n_o_t_o_n_ly_a city w__it_h_a__lo_n_g__h_is_t_o_r_y, _b_u_t_a_ls_o_the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road
Taishan has many _p_l_a_c_e_s_o_f_i_n_te_r_e_s_t__, _s_u_c_h_a_s_ Feisha Beach in Shuangchuan Island, hot springs and _so__o_n_.
rice
Local products:
seafood
population of 9.98 million. ② GuanItgzhou is not only
a city with a long history, but also the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road on the Sea”. ③ W__h_a_t_’s_m__o_re_, Guangzhou, whose symbol is “Five Goats”, is
风景名胜⑤旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
Step3: 翻译句子 城市名称①广州，广东省的省府
10分钟
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化②不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地③;以“五羊”
说明文—地点简介
How to introduce a place?
文体特点 population
history & culture
climate
area
Place
Scenery
location local products
介绍地点常用的短语和句型：
Location:
1) Sp. be located in (on/to) the east/ north/center of…
城市名称①广州，广东省的省府
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化②不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地③;以“五羊”
为象征,以岭南文化著称。
气候特征④气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温
为21.8℃。
物产
① Sp. is rich in… ② Sp. is famous for…/ be home to
基础写作
The steps of Basic Writing
Step 1: 审题 （内容、时态、人称）
Step 2: 理清要点， 整理成5个句子
Step 3 :句子翻译 Step 4 : 检查、润饰,
Taishan __i_s__ri_c_h_i_n___ rice and seafood.
Local products:
1) Sp. is rich in… 2) …be famous/well-known for… 3) …be home to …
Useful Expressions
写作组合
建议运用句型
位置 + 面 积+人口
历史文化 或特色
Located in (to/on)…, Sp. covers an area of …with a population of …
① Sp. is a city with a long history. ② With a history of …, Sp. , whose
Step4 :检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语
①Located in the middle of Guangdong Province,
Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province, covers an area of 7434.4 square kilometers with a
Sanya
Climate:
warm, plenty of sunshine
The average temperature: 25.5℃
Sanya in Hainan Province, has
_a_w_a_r_m__climate w__it_h__p_le_n_t_y_o_f_sunshine and _th_e__a_v_e_ra_g_e__t_em__p_e_r_a_t_u_r_e is 25.5℃.
on the Sea”.
③ 以“五羊”为象征，以岭南文化著称。
Guangzhou, _w__h_o_se__s_y_m_b_o_l__ is “Five Goats”, __i_s_f_a_m_o_u_s__fo_r___Lingnan Culture.
Step3 句子翻译 ④ 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛，
_W__i_th__a_h__is_t_o_ry__o_f__over 4,000 years, Guangzhou, _w__h_o_s_e_s_y_m_b__o_l _ is the “Five Goats”, _is__fa_m__o_u_s_f_o_r__ Lingnan Culture.
climate:
年平均气温为21.8℃
Guangzhou has a ___w_a_r_m____climate with__p_l_en_t_y__of__su_n_s_h_i_n_e_a_n_d__r_a_in_f_a_ll____ and _t_h_e_a_v_e_r_a_g_e_t_e_m_p_e_r_a_t_u_r_e__ is about 21.8℃.
increased/ decreased to… 3) The city, with a population of…, is…
Location: in the east of Asia Area: 9.6 million K㎡ Population: 1.3 billion
_L_o_c_a_t_e_d__in_ the east of Asia, China _c_o_v_e_r_s_a_n__a_r_ea__o_f_ 9.6 million square kilometers w__it_h__a_p_o_p_u__la_t_io_n__o_f_1.3 billion.
Step3 句子翻译
① 广州，广东省的省府，位于广东的中部，
面积是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。
_L_o_c_a_t_e_d_i_n_t_h_e_m__i_d_d_le__o_f Guangdong province, Guangzhou, __t_h_e_c_a_p_i_ta_l_c_i_ty____ of Guangdong Province, _c_o_v_e_r_s_a_n_a_r_e_a_o_f__ 7434.4 square kilometers ___w_i_th__a_p_o_p_u_l_a_t_io_n__o_f ___9.98 million.
在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：
1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正 确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的 句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。
2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5 项内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些 内容，不扣分。
3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一 篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。
2) Sp. lie in (on/to) the top/foot of …
Area:
1)The area of + Sp. is … 2) Sp. ＋covers/has an area of…. 3) with an area of…
Population:
1) Sp. has a population of… 2) The population has grown/
1) It is very/quite cold (hot…)all the year round. 2) Sp. has a warm/cold climate with plenty of… 3) The average temperature of …is … 4) It is neither too cold nor too hot.
symbol is …, is famous for …
气候特征 ① Sp. has a …climate with plenty of…
② The average temperature is …
名胜景观 Sp. has many places of interest,
particularly/such as ... and so on.
History + symbol + culture
With a history of …, Sp. , whose symbol is …, is famous for …
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
Guangzhou
History: over 4,000 years Symbol: Five Goats Culture: Lingnan Culture
添加适当过渡词语
假设你是广州亚运会一名志愿者，请你用5个句子写 一篇英语短文，向外宾介绍广州。【写作内容】
城市名称 广州，广东省的省府
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化 不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地;以“五羊” 为象征,以岭南文化著称.
⑤ 旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。
Guangzhou __h_a_s _m_a_n_y_p__la_c_e_s_o_f_in_t_e_r_es_t___for tourists to visit, __p_a_r_t_ic_u_l_a_r_ly___ the “Eight
Scenes of Guangzhou”.
scenery
1）Sp. has many famous/well-known places of interest, particularly/such as ... and so on.
2）Sp. be a famous summer resort.
Feisha Beach
hot springs
气候特征 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气
温为21.8℃ 。
风景名胜 旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
Step 1: 审题
审内容： 介绍广州 审时态： 地点简介属于说明文，
用一般现在时 审人称： 第三人称(Guangzhou)
Step2: 理清要点整理成5个句子
famous for Lingnan Culture. ④ _In__a_d_d_it_i_o_n_/B_e_s_i_d_e_s ,
GuanItgzhou has a warm climate with plenty of
sunshine and rainfall and the average temperature
Location + area + population
Located in (to/on)…, Sp. covers an area of …with a population of …
History:
1) …has/owns a long history of… 2) with a long history of…
为象征,以岭南文化著称。
气候特征④气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温
为21.8℃。
风景名胜⑤旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
◆ Exchange your composition with your deskmate
and help each other to improve your writing.
Step3 句子翻译
②不仅历史悠久，还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地
Guangzhou is _n_o_t_o_n_ly_a city w__it_h_a__lo_n_g__h_is_t_o_r_y, _b_u_t_a_ls_o_the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road
Taishan has many _p_l_a_c_e_s_o_f_i_n_te_r_e_s_t__, _s_u_c_h_a_s_ Feisha Beach in Shuangchuan Island, hot springs and _so__o_n_.
rice
Local products:
seafood
population of 9.98 million. ② GuanItgzhou is not only
a city with a long history, but also the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road on the Sea”. ③ W__h_a_t_’s_m__o_re_, Guangzhou, whose symbol is “Five Goats”, is
风景名胜⑤旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。
(Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)
Step3: 翻译句子 城市名称①广州，广东省的省府
10分钟
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化②不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地③;以“五羊”
说明文—地点简介
How to introduce a place?
文体特点 population
history & culture
climate
area
Place
Scenery
location local products
介绍地点常用的短语和句型：
Location:
1) Sp. be located in (on/to) the east/ north/center of…
城市名称①广州，广东省的省府
地理位置 广东省中部
面积
7434.4平方公里
人口
9,980,000
历史文化②不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发祥地③;以“五羊”
为象征,以岭南文化著称。
气候特征④气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温
为21.8℃。
物产
① Sp. is rich in… ② Sp. is famous for…/ be home to
基础写作
The steps of Basic Writing
Step 1: 审题 （内容、时态、人称）
Step 2: 理清要点， 整理成5个句子
Step 3 :句子翻译 Step 4 : 检查、润饰,
Taishan __i_s__ri_c_h_i_n___ rice and seafood.
Local products:
1) Sp. is rich in… 2) …be famous/well-known for… 3) …be home to …
Useful Expressions
写作组合
建议运用句型
位置 + 面 积+人口
历史文化 或特色
Located in (to/on)…, Sp. covers an area of …with a population of …
① Sp. is a city with a long history. ② With a history of …, Sp. , whose