英语作文重点文章

Ⅰ下面两幅画是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内容。

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I left China for the USA before the People’s Republic of China was founded（第一段第一句承担引导全文与首段的两项职能，交代人物身份）. In the old days, women were looked down upon（被歧视）. They had to stay at home, taking care of their kids, doing laundry（洗衣服）and cooking meals.
By contrast（平行对照，强调重心在后半程）, women’s social status （社会地位）has been raised greatly nowadays. They enjoy equal opportunity （享受平等的权利）to attend school to even receive higher education. Not only are they good mothers and wives at home, but also they can go out of their homes to do whatever jobs in which they are interested, such as doctors, professors（教授） and even political leaders（政治领袖）. They have made great achievements in every field and contributed greatly to the development of the society.
What a great change it is!
Ⅱ美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。

假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：
1．信的开头已为你写好；
2．词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,
I'm Li Hua from
Beijing Hongxing middle
school. I'm very happy to
learn that you're going to stay with my family while you're in Beijing.
During your stay here（与文章所写的开头进行有效呼应）, we will provide you with a room of your own with a desk, a bed, a couple of chairs, a TV set as well as a separate bathroom. Our school is pretty close，with only 10 minutes’ ride from home by bike. We may have lunch at campus dining hall, where you will have a chance to enjoy a variety of delicious Chinese food and pleasant conversations with native students. After classes are
over in the afternoon,you will have yourself fully relaxed, playing ball games,swimming and taking part in club activities（动作主次关系的区分）.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to offer you an enjoyable experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua 可能存在的缺点：
1、衔接性、连贯性不够——图片间的过渡；
2、用词欠准确—— table（会议用桌，餐桌）/desk（书桌）
problem（需要解决的问题）/question（需要回答的问题）
3、句子整合不够，稍显啰嗦；
4、语言结构简单而单一——单一的主谓宾结构、主系表结构；
5、重点不够突出——四幅图片在字数上应有所偏重——根据合理的生活逻辑可
得，图三、图四内容应超过图一、图二；
6、缺乏合理的想象和补充——为内容、结构服务。

改正方向：
1、与已给出的开头、结尾形成有效的呼应——句式变化；
2、多实用链接结构——多句合一，结构紧凑；
3、多使用复句；
4、添加有关文章主旨的合理想象和补充；
5、通过事件的发展、时间的流动串联图片；
6、区分动作的主次——动作+现在分词作伴随状语——主次结构+平行结构；
7、记叙文中要多使用动态动词。

看图写作记叙文题
考察核心：合理想象+连缀语言——把割裂的图片变成完整的故事。

写作步骤：
1、认真观察，梳理要点——用简洁且富于变化的中文讲述故事，想象任务的心
情、感受，注意时间、场景的转换；
2、草稿纸上，核心词汇——重难点词汇的中英转化，交代应用难点；
3、写下句子，组织成文——句型变化，内容连接
4、检查誊写，答完收工。

Ⅲ请根据下面四幅图话内容，写一篇短
文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。

注意：1、词数不少于60。

2、词汇：吊销驾照：revoke a
driving license
My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
Towards evening（towards强调从一点到另一点的定向运动，有动态感）, my uncle was invited to a restaurant. They had great fun, drinking（现在分词作伴随状语，突出动作的主次） a lot of beer till late at night. My
uncle was not a great drinker and got very drunk（喝醉，get强调动作概念）. He insisted on driving home after the meal, although（让步状语从句）his friends tried to persuade him not to（尝试劝阻，表示不成功）.
A moment later（时间过渡）, he began to lose control and was winding his way（蜿蜒前行 wind-wound-wound，进行时态强调场景的描写）on the street. And then（时间过渡）, his car ran into a big tree.
A passer-by witnessed the accident and reported it to the police. My uncle was sent to hospital. Fortunately, he was still alive, though seriously injured（省略主谓）. As a result（逻辑过渡）, he had to stay in hospital for several days. Even worse, his driving license was revoked.
How he regretted what he had done!
夹叙夹议类文章
结构：
第一段：thesis（论点）——交代话题，亮明观点；
第二段：body（主体段落）——解读观点：分论点、论据；
第三段：conclusion（结论）——适当总结，与上文呼应。

Ⅳ最近，社会上关于Should High School Students Bring Cell Phones to School？（高中生是否应该带手机到学校？）这一问题展开了热烈的讨论，基本意见如下：
支持观点：
1、能更快速、更便捷地联系到父母，特别是在紧急情况下；
2、随时获得各种各样的学习和娱乐信息。

反对观点：
1、上课收发短信打乱了正常的教学；
2、学生经济不独立，给父母增添了额外的费用。

请你写一篇文章，反映这一讨论情况，词数不少于60。

※ Recently（表示时间，引出话题）, there has been/appeared / sprung up （跃出，spring-sprang-sprung） a heated（热烈的）discussion as to（关于）+宾语从句（陈述句）——引出观点的万能句型
※分论点一、二——要覆盖题目给定的论据，不要重复出现advantage / disadvantage（避免语义和逻辑的重复），要形象化地解释抽象名词。

Recently, there has sprung up a heated discussion as to whether high school students should bring cell phones to school. In our opinion, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
Cell phones are bringing great convenience to people’s daily life （分论点一）.Using cell phones, not only can the students reach their parents more easily and quickly, especially in time of emergency（出现紧急情况时）, but they can have handy access to all kinds of information.
By contrast / On the other hand（平行对照）, cell phones may also cause some problems / troubles if not used properly（手机做主语，相邻主语的
一致性原则，省略主谓）.It interrupts（打乱）the teaching and learning work to send and receive messages in class. Besides / furthermore / moreover / in addition（此外），most students are not financially（财务上，economic 表示宏观经济概念）independent, so the extra cell phone expenses finally go to（由…支付）their parents.
In conclusion / To be brief / In short, we have to treat the cell phone in a right way（以正确的方式）to make it a helpful tool rather than a heavy burden（负担）.
对比式文章、对比式人物写作
写作要点：
1、要注意人物描述的词语及其呈现方式；
2、要注意行文结构（对比法）：
①横向对比：优点：主流，容易突出两者差异；
缺点：容易割裂人物，缺乏整体性；
②纵向对比：优点：文章具有整体感；
缺点：不易突出差异；
3、要注意句式变化；
4、要注意合理想象。

Nick and Joe differ from each other so much that you can never / hardly imagine they are both my brothers.
Nick seems rather careless（不修边幅），with long curly hair and a beard（一把大胡子）.Often wearing jeans and T-shirts, he works in a small restaurant as a cook. Nick thinks sports do good to one’s health, so he rides his bike to work every day. He is the most carefree member（最无忧无虑的人）in my family,who thinks nothing of going out for a football game on a heavily raining afternoon or riding 20 miles to see an old movie he really likes. Living in a mid-sized（中等大小的）apartment located in downtown（坐落在市中心），he’s enjoying a simple but pleasant life.
Joe, on the other hand, looks quite gentleman. He wears shorter, straighter hair, and no beard. Often in a suit and tie, he looks clean and tidy, just like a lawyer could be. In his leisure（空闲的）time, he
always drive his wife and kids to the nearby club to dance or play pool （打台球）.Meanwhile, he has to work hard to support his large house in the suburbs（郊外）and a big family.
Both of them are brilliant（聪明的）and generous are both the apples of my eyes（最亲爱的人）.
看图表作文（难度最高）——科学文章
考察核心：分析、比较数字——得出结论；
写作要点：
1、必须保证读者在未看到图表时能再现图表；
2、不要罗列数据，仔细分析，比较数据；
Ⅵ题目：请根据该表格，描述并解释美国一些主要城市的住房开支情况，词数不少于60。

1、解读图表，理解题意（要注意城市的地位、特征与价格的对应关系）；
2、确定结构：第一段：简论图表反映的总情况；
第二段：对数字进行仔细的分析比较：①最高或最低；
②排序和变化趋势；
③接近性或共同特征；
第三段：做出结论或推断：①发现疑问，提出问题；
②做出简短结论；
3、结构性语言：如图所示：The table（表格）/ chart（图表）shows that… The table / chart unfolds（打开） that…
As we can see from the table,
As can be seen from the table that…
It can be seen clearly from the table that…
The table shows the monthly housing expenses of some major American cities.
It can be seen clearly from the table that the monthly housing expenses of San Francisco reaches as high as（高达）$614, which is t he highest of all the cities mentioned in the table（图表中提到的最高的）.
Washington and Los Angeles are the next two cities i n line（按直线排列下一个）, with expenses of $567 and $578 each. They are 36 dollars
and 47 dollars less than the top expenses, but still much higher than the other three cities（过渡句）.
The housing expenses of New York, Houston and Chicago are all under $500（以整数作为分界概念）. Among them, New York is relatively the highest. The expenses of Houston and Chicago are close to each other（彼此接近）, but that of Chicago is the lowest of all.
As we all know, New York is the trade and financial center of the global economy, so it seems strange that the housing expense of New York is relatively low.
开放式作文（小作文）
写作要求：
1、内容的完整性；
2、内容的连贯性；
3、内容的层次性；
4、语言的丰富性——句型的变化；
题目：Suppose we are having a free talk in an English class. The topic is which the best way of transportation in Beijing is when we are out getting around. To take a bus, the City rail, a taxi or to ride a bike? Please tell us your choice (at least two or three) and why you prefer them.
Transportation choices in fact depend on the actual situations（总括句）.
If I were a new comer/a stranger, who has little knowledge about the city of Beijing, taking a taxi is an advisable/reasonable choice（明智的选择）.It is convenient and fast, on condition that（假设）the traffic is good, for me to reach the destination directly.
As for such local commuters/residents/inhabitants/people as high school students or office clerks, taking a cab/taxi everyday is obviously beyond our reach（超出负担的能力）.Therefore, I prefer to ride a bike, since my school is within half an hour’s ride. Besides the low cost （成本低）, a bike is also easy to park. Furthermore/In addition/Moreover, it virtually acts as a great form of exercise and relaxation away from the heavy study routine（繁重的学业）.
题目：You are thinking about where to study after you graduate from high school. Your parents suggest that you stay in Beijing for your advanced education. Do you agree with them? Explain your reasons.
Although my parents would like me to stay in Beijing for college education, I personally prefer to leave for another city, the farther the better, to make myself physically more independent and culturally richer.
As the only child, I have long been the focus of my family（我家的核心）. Dad and mum are always having everything settled for me, driving me to school, cooking the meals and even making the bed. I do appreciate all their love and care, but I never want myself spoiled（被宠坏）. Only by getting out of this comfortable environment is it possible for me to learn how to grow up, even though it might be tough at the beginning.
In addition, Beijing born and Beijing raised（北京生，北京长）, I am already quite familiar with the local culture. Living a culturally distinct/different place will for sure broaden the horizon of（拓宽…的地平线）my life and open up a new doorway to my future.。