人教高中必修UnitWriting求助信学习教案
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第四页，共20页。
2.简要交待(jiāo dài)自己所遇到的困难 时可用：
I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
4.展望获得帮助(bāngzhù)后和表 示感谢的表达：
I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can...
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第十五页，共20页。
Step 4 Assessment
Content: Are your ideas clear and to the point?
（观点是否清晰(qīngxī)？） Have you used linking words properly?
（有没有用连接词？） Have you written with proper topic sentence and
第六页，共20页。
4.展望获得帮助(bāngzhù)后和表示感谢 的表达：
I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
第十七页，共20页。
Dear Freddy, My name is Zhou Yufei.I'm beginning /starting a
band with my friends. Can you please give us some advice about practising?
Should we invite our friends to listen to us and give us suggestions? Should we find a quiet place where we will not bother others with noise? In your opinion, what's the best time to practice our music?
第2页/共19页
第三页，共20页。
熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常(jīngcháng)用到下面的一些句型：
1）说明写作目的时可用：
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. 2.简要交待自己(zìjǐ)所遇到的困难时可用：
2.简要交待自己所遇到(yùdào)的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
现在你想写一封信给写一封信给freddyfreddy向他求向他求助询问他的建议信的开助询问他的建议信的开头已经给出头已经给出p39p39请完成后请完成后部分的内容部分的内容nirngnirng
人教高中(gāozhōng)必修Unit Writing求助 信
第一页，共20页。
求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
did you and your friends decide what to play?
We hope you can give us some advice.
Yours hopefully, Li Hua
the problems
your name
第16页/共19页
the polite ending
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助，因 此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求助原 因和事情(shìqing)经过时应恰当使用 过去时态。
第1页/共19页
第二页，共20页。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用
first, besides, what's more等过度性 词语；请求对方提供一系列的帮助 (bāngzhù)时，可用in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写信 需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以使 行文连贯。
第12页/共19页
第十三页，共20页。
Structure of the letter
Dear Freddy, —————————polite greeting
Paragraph 1 —— the purpose and the situation
Paragraph 2 ——the problems in your band
Could you please give us some advice? I would like to
know what music to play and we cannot decide.
I like pop mthuespicurbpuotsme aonsdt othfemsyitufraiteionnds like rock ‘n’
I would be grateful if you could/ would...
5.表示期待对方回复时可用：
I would appreciate your reply offering some suggestions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
I'm looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance.
Dearxx,
My name is_____. I'm writing ____. I have much difficulty in _____.
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
第9页/共19页
第十页，共20页。
supporting sentences? Accuracy: Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?（是 否有拼写或语法错误？） Handwriting: Is your handwriting neat and easy to read? （书写是否工整？）
Look forward to your reply. yours______, XX
Signature
第11页/共19页
第十二页，共20页。
熟悉(shúxī)求助信常用句型
1.说明写作目的时可用： My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
第4页/共19页
第五页，共20页。
3.请求(qǐngqiú)对方做某事时可用： I really don’t want to bother yme some advice? Do you have some good advice on … Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think …? What if we …? What if we use th第e5页/共n19a页me “Moonlight”?
Paragraph 3 —— ending
Yours sincerely/hopefully, ————polite ending
Li Hua ————————————your name
第13页/共19页
第十四页，共20页。
Writing task
你和你的朋友想组建你们 自己的乐队，但你从来没有 在乐队里演奏过。现在你想 写一封信给Freddy ,向他求 助，询问他的建议，信的开 头已经给出(P39)，请完成后 部分的内容(nèiróng)。 提示：根据Freddy的回信，完 成求助信正文里问题的阐述, 可适当扩展。 字数：除了开头100字左右。
roll. Liu Mei likes rap. How are we to decide what to
play? Do you suggest we play a little of all of these types
of music? Or should we only play one kind of music? How
3.请求对方做某事时可用： I really don’t want to bother you, but I really.... Would you offer me some advice? Do you have some good advice on … Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think …? What if we …? What if we use the name “Moonlight”?
I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
第3页/共19页
Ask for help
第10页/共19页
第十一页，共20页。
I'm sure that I can ___ with your help.
It will be appreciated if you can help
me to __.
Predict the effect
and express
thanks
your advice letter and thank you in advance. 这些(zhèxiē)句型不但使用频率高，而且 语气委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
第7页/共19页
第八页，共20页。
The outline of the letter
第8页/共19页
第九页，共20页。
第15页/共19页
第十六页，共20页。
Sample letter
Dear Freddy: polite greeting
My name is Li Hua. I’m beginning a band with my
friends. However, we have never been in a band before.
第6页/共19页
第七页，共20页。
5.表示期待对方回复时可用： I would appreciate your reply offering
some suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving
2.简要交待(jiāo dài)自己所遇到的困难 时可用：
I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
4.展望获得帮助(bāngzhù)后和表 示感谢的表达：
I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can...
第14页/共19页
第十五页，共20页。
Step 4 Assessment
Content: Are your ideas clear and to the point?
（观点是否清晰(qīngxī)？） Have you used linking words properly?
（有没有用连接词？） Have you written with proper topic sentence and
第六页，共20页。
4.展望获得帮助(bāngzhù)后和表示感谢 的表达：
I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
第十七页，共20页。
Dear Freddy, My name is Zhou Yufei.I'm beginning /starting a
band with my friends. Can you please give us some advice about practising?
Should we invite our friends to listen to us and give us suggestions? Should we find a quiet place where we will not bother others with noise? In your opinion, what's the best time to practice our music?
第2页/共19页
第三页，共20页。
熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常(jīngcháng)用到下面的一些句型：
1）说明写作目的时可用：
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. 2.简要交待自己(zìjǐ)所遇到的困难时可用：
2.简要交待自己所遇到(yùdào)的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
现在你想写一封信给写一封信给freddyfreddy向他求向他求助询问他的建议信的开助询问他的建议信的开头已经给出头已经给出p39p39请完成后请完成后部分的内容部分的内容nirngnirng
人教高中(gāozhōng)必修Unit Writing求助 信
第一页，共20页。
求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
did you and your friends decide what to play?
We hope you can give us some advice.
Yours hopefully, Li Hua
the problems
your name
第16页/共19页
the polite ending
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助，因 此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求助原 因和事情(shìqing)经过时应恰当使用 过去时态。
第1页/共19页
第二页，共20页。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用
first, besides, what's more等过度性 词语；请求对方提供一系列的帮助 (bāngzhù)时，可用in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写信 需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以使 行文连贯。
第12页/共19页
第十三页，共20页。
Structure of the letter
Dear Freddy, —————————polite greeting
Paragraph 1 —— the purpose and the situation
Paragraph 2 ——the problems in your band
Could you please give us some advice? I would like to
know what music to play and we cannot decide.
I like pop mthuespicurbpuotsme aonsdt othfemsyitufraiteionnds like rock ‘n’
I would be grateful if you could/ would...
5.表示期待对方回复时可用：
I would appreciate your reply offering some suggestions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
I'm looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance.
Dearxx,
My name is_____. I'm writing ____. I have much difficulty in _____.
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
第9页/共19页
第十页，共20页。
supporting sentences? Accuracy: Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?（是 否有拼写或语法错误？） Handwriting: Is your handwriting neat and easy to read? （书写是否工整？）
Look forward to your reply. yours______, XX
Signature
第11页/共19页
第十二页，共20页。
熟悉(shúxī)求助信常用句型
1.说明写作目的时可用： My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
第4页/共19页
第五页，共20页。
3.请求(qǐngqiú)对方做某事时可用： I really don’t want to bother yme some advice? Do you have some good advice on … Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think …? What if we …? What if we use th第e5页/共n19a页me “Moonlight”?
Paragraph 3 —— ending
Yours sincerely/hopefully, ————polite ending
Li Hua ————————————your name
第13页/共19页
第十四页，共20页。
Writing task
你和你的朋友想组建你们 自己的乐队，但你从来没有 在乐队里演奏过。现在你想 写一封信给Freddy ,向他求 助，询问他的建议，信的开 头已经给出(P39)，请完成后 部分的内容(nèiróng)。 提示：根据Freddy的回信，完 成求助信正文里问题的阐述, 可适当扩展。 字数：除了开头100字左右。
roll. Liu Mei likes rap. How are we to decide what to
play? Do you suggest we play a little of all of these types
of music? Or should we only play one kind of music? How
3.请求对方做某事时可用： I really don’t want to bother you, but I really.... Would you offer me some advice? Do you have some good advice on … Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think …? What if we …? What if we use the name “Moonlight”?
I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
第3页/共19页
Ask for help
第10页/共19页
第十一页，共20页。
I'm sure that I can ___ with your help.
It will be appreciated if you can help
me to __.
Predict the effect
and express
thanks
your advice letter and thank you in advance. 这些(zhèxiē)句型不但使用频率高，而且 语气委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
第7页/共19页
第八页，共20页。
The outline of the letter
第8页/共19页
第九页，共20页。
第15页/共19页
第十六页，共20页。
Sample letter
Dear Freddy: polite greeting
My name is Li Hua. I’m beginning a band with my
friends. However, we have never been in a band before.
第6页/共19页
第七页，共20页。
5.表示期待对方回复时可用： I would appreciate your reply offering
some suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving