太原市清徐县2016中考英语书面表达(二轮)选练(四)及答案

山西清徐县2016中考英语书面表达选练附参考范文
【中考先睹为快】
Passage A
2015中考作文训练---写人
My deskmate
I can’t forget one of my deskmates forever, his name is Wang Lei. He is tall but a little quiet. He is kind to everyone. So we all like him.
Wang Lei studies hard, so he does well in all the subjects. One day, we had a school basketball game. Wang Lei hurt his left leg and couldn’t walk. The doctor advised him to be in bed. But the next day, when we got to the classroom, Wang Lei had been in the classroom. He is
so hard-workin g. I’ll learn from him.
中考书面表达
【四川省南充市2014中考四月一模试题】写作（共1题，满分15分）
今年全国各地启动了“文明餐桌行动”，号召全体人民“文明用餐，节俭惜福”。

请结合图片，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save(节约) Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。

文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

waste too much eat up all the food eat junk food eat a balanced diet
Save Food And Eat Healthily
The government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we
【参考范文】写作（共1题，满分20分）
One possible version：
Our government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. We’d better eat at s chool or at home if we have time.
（二）评分说明：
1、评分原则
（1）评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

（2）评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

（3）拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

（4）如果书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

2、各档次的给分范围和要求
第一档（17—20分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。

覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。

完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第二挡（12—16分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。

虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务的要求；句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书写工整；字数基本符合要求。

达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档（8—11分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。

虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构单一；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多；书写不够工整，字数较少。

整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档（0—7分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；应用的语言结构单一且不规范；句子不通顺，行文不连贯；语言错误多；书写潦草，字数不足50。

信息未能清楚地传达给读者
Passage B
【2012山东聊城】七书面表达(共A、B两题；A题10分，B题15分，满分25分)
A
根据表格中所给内容，用正确的格式设计一张海报〔部分内容已给出)。

【参考范文】略。

Passage C
【2012山东聊城】七书面表达(共A、B两题；A题10分，B题15分，满分25分)
B
假如今年5月1日你和父母到聊城旅游。

你们的活动内容和经历如下：
请你根据以上表格提供的信息写一篇80词左右的短文，描述一下这次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感受
注竞:
1. 短文的开头己给出、不计入总词数。

2. 短文写作可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：光岳楼Cuangyue Tower铁塔the Iron Tower 山陕会馆Shanshan Guildhall
My patents and I went to Liaocheng on May 1_____________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】--B段
My parents and I went to Liaocheng on May. 1. liaocheng is famous its beautiful lake. In the morning we went boating on Dongchang Lake, where I had lot of fun. Then we visited Guangyue Tower. In the afternoon, we visited the Iron Tower and Shanshan Guidhall. At Shanshan Guildhall we met three foreigners. I tried to speak English with them and told them the way to Guangyue Tower. I was shy, but they were friendly to me.
I was very happy and excited that day because I could use English to help others and I really like the places of interest.
Passage D
中考书面表达
本周末，你班组织了一次活动，具体信息如下，请用英语写―篇日记。

活动时间：6月1日(星期六)
集合地点：学校大门口
出发时间：8：30 am. 到达时间：9：00 am.
活动地点：中山公园(the Zhongshan Park)
交通工具：自行车
活动内容：上午——做游戏；中午——野餐(picnic)；
下午——拍照片；参观动物园
返回时间：5：30 pm.
注意：1. 内容必须包括所有信息，可适当发挥。

(文中不得出现真实姓名或
校名)
2. 词数：80左右。

(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Saturday, June 1st Fine It was fine. I went for an outing with my classmates today.
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________
【参考范文】
Saturday, June 1st Fine It was fine. I went for an outing with my classmates today.
At 8: 30, we met at the school gate and then set off for the Zhongshan Park. The bicycle ride took us half an hour.
The sun was shining and there were many people in the park. In the morning, we played all kinds of games. After the picnic at noon, we took many pictures in the afternoon. Before we went back at 5: 30, we spent about one hour visiting the zoo. Although I was a little tired, I felt very happy.
中考书面表达（13）
假如你班长，你们学校要举行一次英语讲座，请根据下面的内容用英语草拟一份口头通知。

字数100左右。

时间：5月20日星期天晚上7:00---9:00。

地点：205教室。

主讲人：Mr. Wang.
讲座内容：如何学好英语。

可邀请自己的朋友或外班同学出席。

但不要迟到，听完后回班讨论。

【参考范文】2.
Announcement
Classmates:
Please be quiet. I have an announcement to make. I am very glad to tell you that an English talk will be held in our school. It is to be on Sunday evening of May 20, from seven to nine in the classroom No. 205. Mr. Wang will give us a talk about how to learn English well. You may invite your friends or the students in other classes to come to the talk. After the talk, we’ll have a discussion on the subject in our classroom. Please be there on time for the talk.
That’s all. Thank you!。