新版英语Part Ⅴ Writing——英语名信片-课件
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At the moment，I am staying at Sanya ________w_h_i_c_h_l_ie_s__in__th_e__so_u_t_h_o_f__C_h_in_a_______. 2.用can’t wait改写句3
After we got off the plane，we ______________c_o_u_ld_n_’_t_w_a_i_t_t_o_e_n_j_o_y______________ the beautiful scenery.
Unit 5 On the road
Part Ⅴ Writing——英语名信片
本单元的写作任务是写一篇英语名信片，是告知旅游状况的明信片。 内容主要包括旅游见闻，旅行感受，作者的行为，和作者下一步的行程。旅游 明信片介绍景点见闻用一般现在时，谈论过去的行程用一般过去时，介绍下一步的 行程用将来时。
谢 谢 观 赏 本节内容结束
You made my day!
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步：布局谋篇很关键 1.确定体裁：本文是一篇___应__用__文_____； 2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为__第__一__人__称____； 3.确定主体时态：以_____一__般__现__在__时_______为主。
第二步：核心词汇想周全 1.____b_e_o_n__a_t_r_ip____ 在旅游 2.__ca_n_’_t_w__ai_t_t_o_e_n_j_o_y 情不自禁地欣赏 3.___e_x_t_re_m__e_ly__c_le_a_r_ 非常清新 4._cs_ 成群的游客 5._b_e_m__o_re__th_a_n__h_a_p_p_y 非常开心
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 7 July Hi，Sam
I have been on a trip for less than seven days in Hainan with my family.At the moment， I’m at Sanya.We went there by plane.After we got off the plane，we couldn’t wait to enjoy the beautiful scenery.The weather is a little hot but the sky is extremely clear.You can see crowds of visitors—the young，the old...on the island.
【增分表达】 1.描述景色的形容词
splendid，grand，magnificent，charming 2.描述旅游者行为、心情的短语
be excited to see some special trees and plants，have a wonderful view 3.谈论景点的名词短语
4.When we _______w_e_r_e_h_a_v_i_n_g_l_u_n_ch______ at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I ____m_a_d_e_a__n_e_w__fr_i_en_d__w_i_th____ a young man from Africa.(make a new friend with) 当我们在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时，我与一个来自非洲的年轻人成为了新 朋友。
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1.I ___________h_a_v_e__b_e_e_n_o_n__a_tr_i_p_______________ for less than seven days in Hainan
with my family.(on a trip) 我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。 2.At the moment，I am staying at Sanya.It _______l_i_es__in__th_e__so_u_t_h__o_f _C_h_i_n_a______.(lie in) 目前，我住在三亚。它位于中国的南部。 3.After we _______________g_o_t_o_f_f_th_e__p_la_n_e_______________，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery.(get off) 下飞机后，我们欣赏美丽的景色。
tourist attraction，tourist destination，scenic spot，places of tourist attraction， natural splendor/attraction，summer resort，national park
假定你是李华，在海南旅游，收到朋友Sam的来信，询问你的旅游行程。请用明 信片的方式给他回信介绍情况。
It is definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance，I will be more than happy to visit the place again. Sincerely yours， Li Hua
• 不习惯读书进修的人，常会自满于现状，觉得没有什么事情需要学习，于是他们不进则退2022年4月30日星期六下午6时1分59秒18:01:5922.4.30 • 读书，永远不恨其晚。晚比永远不读强。2022年4月下午6时1分22.4.3018:01April 30, 2022 • 正确的略读可使人用很少的时间接触大量的文献，并挑选出有意义的部分。2022年4月30日星期六6时1分59秒18:01:5930 April 2022 • 书籍是屹立在时间的汪洋大海中的灯塔。
3.利用状语从句的省略改写句4 _____________W_h_e_n__h_a_v_in_g__lu_n_c_h__a_t _a_s_e_a_fo_o_d__re_s_t_a_u_ra_n_t_n_e_a_r_t_h_e_b_e_a_c_h___________， I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.
Some are surfing and others diving in the deeper part of the sea.We are excited to see some special trees and plants along the road.When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.He is attracted to Chinese culture and has travelled several places of interest.
5.He __is__at_t_ra_c_t_ed__t_o_ Chinese culture and has travelled several __p_l_a_c_es__o_f_in_t_e_r_es_t_.(attract， interest) 他着迷于中国文化，已经游览了很多风景名胜。
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1.用定语从句改写句2
4.用定语从句将句4和句5合并为定语从句 When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa _____________w_h_o_i_s_a_t_tr_a_c_te_d__to__C_h_i_n_e_se__c_u_lt_u_re_____________ and has travelled several places of interest.
After we got off the plane，we ______________c_o_u_ld_n_’_t_w_a_i_t_t_o_e_n_j_o_y______________ the beautiful scenery.
Unit 5 On the road
Part Ⅴ Writing——英语名信片
本单元的写作任务是写一篇英语名信片，是告知旅游状况的明信片。 内容主要包括旅游见闻，旅行感受，作者的行为，和作者下一步的行程。旅游 明信片介绍景点见闻用一般现在时，谈论过去的行程用一般过去时，介绍下一步的 行程用将来时。
谢 谢 观 赏 本节内容结束
You made my day!
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步：布局谋篇很关键 1.确定体裁：本文是一篇___应__用__文_____； 2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为__第__一__人__称____； 3.确定主体时态：以_____一__般__现__在__时_______为主。
第二步：核心词汇想周全 1.____b_e_o_n__a_t_r_ip____ 在旅游 2.__ca_n_’_t_w__ai_t_t_o_e_n_j_o_y 情不自禁地欣赏 3.___e_x_t_re_m__e_ly__c_le_a_r_ 非常清新 4._cs_ 成群的游客 5._b_e_m__o_re__th_a_n__h_a_p_p_y 非常开心
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 7 July Hi，Sam
I have been on a trip for less than seven days in Hainan with my family.At the moment， I’m at Sanya.We went there by plane.After we got off the plane，we couldn’t wait to enjoy the beautiful scenery.The weather is a little hot but the sky is extremely clear.You can see crowds of visitors—the young，the old...on the island.
【增分表达】 1.描述景色的形容词
splendid，grand，magnificent，charming 2.描述旅游者行为、心情的短语
be excited to see some special trees and plants，have a wonderful view 3.谈论景点的名词短语
4.When we _______w_e_r_e_h_a_v_i_n_g_l_u_n_ch______ at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I ____m_a_d_e_a__n_e_w__fr_i_en_d__w_i_th____ a young man from Africa.(make a new friend with) 当我们在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时，我与一个来自非洲的年轻人成为了新 朋友。
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1.I ___________h_a_v_e__b_e_e_n_o_n__a_tr_i_p_______________ for less than seven days in Hainan
with my family.(on a trip) 我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。 2.At the moment，I am staying at Sanya.It _______l_i_es__in__th_e__so_u_t_h__o_f _C_h_i_n_a______.(lie in) 目前，我住在三亚。它位于中国的南部。 3.After we _______________g_o_t_o_f_f_th_e__p_la_n_e_______________，we enjoyed the beautiful scenery.(get off) 下飞机后，我们欣赏美丽的景色。
tourist attraction，tourist destination，scenic spot，places of tourist attraction， natural splendor/attraction，summer resort，national park
假定你是李华，在海南旅游，收到朋友Sam的来信，询问你的旅游行程。请用明 信片的方式给他回信介绍情况。
It is definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance，I will be more than happy to visit the place again. Sincerely yours， Li Hua
• 不习惯读书进修的人，常会自满于现状，觉得没有什么事情需要学习，于是他们不进则退2022年4月30日星期六下午6时1分59秒18:01:5922.4.30 • 读书，永远不恨其晚。晚比永远不读强。2022年4月下午6时1分22.4.3018:01April 30, 2022 • 正确的略读可使人用很少的时间接触大量的文献，并挑选出有意义的部分。2022年4月30日星期六6时1分59秒18:01:5930 April 2022 • 书籍是屹立在时间的汪洋大海中的灯塔。
3.利用状语从句的省略改写句4 _____________W_h_e_n__h_a_v_in_g__lu_n_c_h__a_t _a_s_e_a_fo_o_d__re_s_t_a_u_ra_n_t_n_e_a_r_t_h_e_b_e_a_c_h___________， I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.
Some are surfing and others diving in the deeper part of the sea.We are excited to see some special trees and plants along the road.When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.He is attracted to Chinese culture and has travelled several places of interest.
5.He __is__at_t_ra_c_t_ed__t_o_ Chinese culture and has travelled several __p_l_a_c_es__o_f_in_t_e_r_es_t_.(attract， interest) 他着迷于中国文化，已经游览了很多风景名胜。
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1.用定语从句改写句2
4.用定语从句将句4和句5合并为定语从句 When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa _____________w_h_o_i_s_a_t_tr_a_c_te_d__to__C_h_i_n_e_se__c_u_lt_u_re_____________ and has travelled several places of interest.