【英语备考】译林版中考书面表达15篇(带范文)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
（湖南衡阳）荣光学校九年级（2）班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。

许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。

请根据表格中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。

提示：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。

3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80.
参考词汇：optimistic adj.乐观的 government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.
【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic（乐观的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.
However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．
But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．
【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级2班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会
情况进行介绍。

这个班会的主题是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，对于未来的环境，很多同学吃乐观的态度，而其他同学感到很担心。

题目中用表格的形式给我们呈现了这些内容，我们需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来，首先我们应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句型、词汇和短语，以简单句的结构为主，如主谓宾、主系表等，点缀几个并列句或复合句，提升文章档次。

其次注意使用正确的时态和人称，本文应以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

最后应注意在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章的逻辑关系更加合理，文意流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并根据表达的需要，进行了合理的想象和补充，使文意更加的充实。

短文共分为三段，前两段各描述了不同的同学们的观点，最后一段用一句话点明了自己的看法，层次清晰，叙述条理、明了。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主，阐明了学生们的不同观点，以简单句为主，也用了一些复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感，更有表现力。

最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。

2．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）随着中考的临近，初三同学感到压力很大，有些人由于学习方法不当，盲目刷题或连续熬夜，导致上课时精力不足，考试成绩越发不理想。

结合上述情况，请以 How to improve our study 为题写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们提出建议。

写作要点：
1.课前预习，课堂认真听讲，做好笔记，课后按时完成作业。

2.制定学习计划，合理安排时间。

3. ……
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥。

3.文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等；
4.不少于 70 词，开头给出，但不计入总词数。

How to improve our study
Dear friends，
I’m very sorry to hear that most of us have great pressure in study and don’t perform well in the exams._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
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Here’s my advice. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】How to improve our study
As middle school students, it is important for us to improve our study. What should we do to improve our study?
First of all, we should get ready for new lessons before class. What’s more, we must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Besides, it is necessary for us to finish our homework on time after class. Last but not least, try to make study plans for ourselves and make good use of our time. Only by doing these simple things can we improve our study.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，要表达如何提高我们的学习。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is adj for sb to do, on time, make good use of以及first of all, what’s more, besides和last but not least。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。

某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为
主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待
他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

提示词语： important, help, happy
提示问题：● What do you think of being kind to others?
● What did you do?
● How do you feel?
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德）of Chinese people. ______
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【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the
English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,
when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.
Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,
he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.
【解析】
试题分析：
本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。

文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。

但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。

写作亮点：
短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。

有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; g ive up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。

4．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达（原创）
今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。

学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自
己的观点。

Grabbing red
packets on line
Agreement
（75%）
1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun
2.bring people closer, make more friends
Disagreement
（25%）
spend too much time.
not have enough communication with family members, feel
lonely
Your opinion
1.
2.
提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
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【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more frie nds .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have
enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。

题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。

最后还要加上自己的看法。

因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。

写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。

为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。

文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。

第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。

其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。

文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has bee n part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people
in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。

文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。

5．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。

假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请
你做个简要介绍。

请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁
等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。

Dear Jim,
I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you hav e a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

6．（·内蒙古中考模拟）书面表达
国家提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子的政策后,全社会展开了热议。

某校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查。

请你根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点。

问卷调查结果如下:
要求:1.词数90左右。

2.条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范。

3.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名。

文章开头已给出,不计入总数。

Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.
【答案】Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister.The opinions are different.
Here are the results. About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share happiness and sadness together. And they won't feel lonely anymore. What's more,they think they'll get freedom.
But others disagree. They think they won't get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before. Besides,they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.
In my opinion,it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents' choices. After all,they're the persons who will make the final decision.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·张家港市梁丰初级中学中考模拟）书面表达
假设你校英文社正在调查中学生在学习英语过程中会遇到的问题。

下面表格列举了最普遍的三个问题，请你根据这些问题及给出的合理建议，为报社写一份英文报告。

写作要求：
1. 报告须包含表格中所有信息，并适当增加细节，以使行文流畅、通顺；
2. 表格中省略号处请2-3句话作适当发挥,给出合理的建议；
3. 词数90左右，报告的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇：本土人（native speaker）
Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______
【答案】Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students are poor at reading skills. Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills. Reading can make you feel confident. Some other students feel difficult to remember new words. The best way to learn new words is through listening. You can listen to English radio programs or TV programs. At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Practice reading and listening as much as possible, and you can be a good learner.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have problem doing，be poor at，make you feel confident，some other students，the best way，listen to，at the same time，help sb. do，as much as possible等。

同时Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through listening.等非谓语动词结构和At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化。

而三句As a…的运用，使短文很有条理，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

8．（·海林市朝鲜族中学中考模拟）（B）如今，许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天，请根
据下列提示写一篇短文，针对这种现象谈谈你的看法与建议。

短文要包括所给要点，并补充第二点建议，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。

80～100词。

提示：原因：想放松一下，打发时间。

结果：对运动不感兴趣，不愿面对面交流。

建议：1. 禁止学生把手机带到学校；2. ……
参考词汇： chat v.聊天；kill the time打发时间；face to face面对面
【答案】Nowadays, many students love chatting on their mobile phones after class. They think it is a good way to relax themselves and kill the boring time. However, many of them show no interest in sports and some even dislike talking with their friends face to face. I think they should n’t be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Or they have to turn off their mobile phones when they are in the school. And they should spend more time on some sports, because playing sports is good for their body and mind.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天这一现象谈谈你的看法和建议。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如love doing, it作形式主语，however, face to face, be allowed to do, spend时间+on sth以及be good for。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·如皋市实验初中中考模拟）亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。

假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive yo ur letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。

表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。

平时注意多
多积累句型、短语。

细心检查避免疏漏。

以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读
懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要
明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then
等。

可以适当使用高分句子。

本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the
oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。

China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

10．（·广东中考模拟）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做
了一次问卷调查。

下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调
查结果及表达自己的观点。

赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占：43%
理由：
1. 强身健体，预防疾病
2. 训练求生技能
3. 休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：
1. 害怕水
2. 有危险性
3. 气温低时容易感冒
你的观点与理由？
要求：
1. 词数80左右。

（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）
2. 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.
【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.
About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up
our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.
However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.
（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给材料，阐明关于“把游泳纳入中考体育考试”的两种不同观点，而且最后还要表达出自己的观点，所以文章主要用一般现在时。

文章分为三个部分，第一部分，首先引出本文话题，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上启下的作用，引出调查结果；第二部分分别阐述两种不同观点About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的观点并进行总结In my opinion…。

注意阐明观点列举理由时，要注意条理性，比如用到表示次序先后的词first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文内容完整，写作条理清晰，语言表达准确，是一篇不错的文章。

11．（·广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。

假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。

要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整
洁。

3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。

近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。

为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。