四六级写作：漫画类作文要点

四六级写作：漫画类作文要点
漫画类作文写法：
第一段：描述图片，引出中心思想。

第二段：正反议论型或现象解释型。

第三段：提出措施解决或得出自己的结论。

第一段：描述图片，引出中心思想
（1）开头句描述图片内容：
①The picture describes ...
②It can be clearly seen /concluded from the picture that ...
③What the drawing vividly depicts is that ...
④From the cartoon /picture , we can see that ...
⑤As shown/illustrated/can be seen/depicted/described in the picture, ...
⑥Let’s take a closer look at the drawing, ...
⑦This picture vividly describes that ...
（2）引出文章中心句
①How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning ...
②The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to ...
③The picture intends to inform us that ...
④It is safe to figure out that ...
⑤The picture illustrates that ...
⑥The cartoon describes a very common phenomenon in our society that ...
⑦What the cartoon conveys is ...
⑧The cartoon picture conveys the message that ...
⑨What the picture presents is that ...
第二段：正反议论型
①Opinions vary when it comes to ... Some people insist that ... On the contrary, some people claim that ...
②Attitudes towards ... vary from person to person.
= Different people hold different attitudes towards ...
③People’s views on ... vary from person to person. Some hold that ... However, others believe that ...
④Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: "..." Some people hold the view that ... Some people argue that ...
第二段：现象解释型
①There are two reasons for this phenomenon. For one thing, ... For another, ...
②What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, ... In addition, ...
③The phenomenon involves many factors, which can be listed as the follows. To begin with, ...What’s more, ...
④A multitude of reasons can account for the phenomenon. First of all, ... What’s more, ...
第三段：提出措施解决
①In a conclusion, ... It is high time we did/should do ...
②All in all, ... Only in this way can we ...
③There are some suggestions given to ... For one thing, ... For another, ...
④In view of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, ... For another, ...
第三段：得出自己的结论
①Every coin has two sides, ... is no exception. Admittedly, ...
②From my point of view, ...
③As far as I am concerned, ...
④In a word, in spite of the fact ... appears to have made life more complex and stressful,
I feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part of everyday life.
⑤To my knowledge, ...
⑥Through the above analysis on information technology, I believe that ...
【范文解析】
2015 年6 月四级真题范文：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.
本文思路：
第一段：描图
第二段：本文用正反议论型写法论证“技术是否能代替学校”
第三段：个人观点
Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cellphone in his hand is asking his mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school?
Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the public wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our development. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when children have questions, “baidu” instead of “teacher” will be the first to come to their minds.
To my knowledge, school learning should go hand in hand with technology. While cellphones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”, “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personality and allow us to adapt to the real world.
2015 年12 月六级真题范文：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 but no more than 200 words.
注：有人会认为FB 和朋友圈这类东西完全不是正真意义的“阅读”，但是也有认为，这才是当今时代有特色的阅读，其实，能说明白就好，观点没有正误。

本文思路：
第一段：描述漫画内容.强调网络阅读的趋势和现象
第二段：分析网络读书的原因第三段: 双面总结，得出结论
The picture describes a conversation between two people, one of them said: “I read about 3 hours a day. My favorite book is Facebook.” The picture intends to inform us that the Internet has exerted an important influence on reading for the modern citizens.
The phenomenon involves many factors, which can be listed as the follows. T o begin with, with the rapid development of scientific technology, The Internet has become
indispensable in our daily life. Undoubtedly, it provides people with many advantages and makes our life more comfortable and efficient, including the way of reading.
What’s more, it is a more advanced way to get information needed by people, and an efficient way to search for materials. “I have hardly ever bought any books since 2003. I have been reading online in recent years.” said professor Wang from Peking University. “With the click of the mouse, any stories or information that I want at any given time or place, is there.” she said. This may well explain why so many people now prefer to embrace the wonders of the Internet than read print copies of book or any other reading material.
Every coin has two sides, reading in social networking websites is no exception. Admittedly, there is false and useless information on the social networking websites, it is advisable that we read more critically and carefully.。