初中英语书面表达训练知识点总结含答案

初中英语书面表达训练知识点总结含答案一、中考英语书面表达训练1．假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。

提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。

目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。

倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua 【解析】【详解】本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。

文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。

时态主要为一般现在时。

提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。

写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。

本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。

并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。

2．写作某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time w hen I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。

2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。

短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。

在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

3．“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。

自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。

作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our acti ons can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。