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原题呈现 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 ( 浙 江 高 考 样 题 )Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing.However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
3．细节信息不需要过于详细 细节性的信息如列举数字，举例，过渡句等信息不必一 一列出。
4．核心词不必替换 核心词是文章的心脏，一般不宜换成其他词。
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5．写作时句式多样化 概要写作书面化程度比较高，因此可以酌情选择使用从句、非谓语等结构，但句子 结构不可过长，也不要使用太过复杂的句子结构。
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一、解题思路点拨 1．读懂原文是关键
在写概要之前，一定要对文章认真阅读，确保理解文章的主旨、文章的结构、 各段的段意。在阅读文章的时候，要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概 要写作的基础和核心。
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2．以自然段为概括的基础 以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信息，也能帮助判断主要信息。当然，以自 然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点。有时几个自然段说明一个要 点。有时也有一个自然段包含数个要点。
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Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speakingto health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
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原题呈现 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 ( 浙 江 高 考 样 题 )Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing.However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
3．细节信息不需要过于详细 细节性的信息如列举数字，举例，过渡句等信息不必一 一列出。
4．核心词不必替换 核心词是文章的心脏，一般不宜换成其他词。
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5．写作时句式多样化 概要写作书面化程度比较高，因此可以酌情选择使用从句、非谓语等结构，但句子 结构不可过长，也不要使用太过复杂的句子结构。
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一、解题思路点拨 1．读懂原文是关键
在写概要之前，一定要对文章认真阅读，确保理解文章的主旨、文章的结构、 各段的段意。在阅读文章的时候，要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概 要写作的基础和核心。
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2．以自然段为概括的基础 以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信息，也能帮助判断主要信息。当然，以自 然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点。有时几个自然段说明一个要 点。有时也有一个自然段包含数个要点。
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Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speakingto health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
最新高考英语写作专题概要写作PPT课件
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I went on to another grocery store, staying for
about five minutes while shopping for tomatoes,
onions and other vegetables. During that time,
the man managed to sit up and wave to passing
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第二步：阅读材料，回答以下两个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.
(2) 结果如何？He got sick. He was angry with his parents and felt lonely.
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［例2］ (2011年广州一模) 阅读下面短文, 然后按要求写一篇150词左右 的英语短文。—内容略
［写作内容］ 1. 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感, 说明“诚 信的重要性”。
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[解题过程] 第一步, 根据[写作内容2] , 快速获取大
意。[写作内容2]说明“诚信的重要性”， 扫读原文可以发现该文章是夹叙夹议的记 叙文, 那么我们可以形成概要框架: 作者讲 述了一个故事来说明诚信的重要性。这样, 就有了方向和思路了。
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第二步：阅读材料, 回答以下三个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？The writer tells a story of an overseas Chinese student. The student had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times.
高考英语之概要写作(精选课件)
高考英语之概要写作概要写作(Ｓummaｒy ｗriting），被称为“小作文".概要写作分值占据１5分，考查的是考生阅读和写作的综合能力。
概要写作所给定的语篇一般在2００—25０字，内容丰富多样，包含故事、时政、科普等，体裁以记叙文、说明文为主，字数一般要求在50—60字,答案尽量符合“Key pｏiｎｔs oｆ a sｕmmａrｙ”的要求。
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当然, 不一定每篇记叙文都包含这六个 要素,但“某人做了某事, 结果如何”是应当 包括的。因此, 要写好概要, 须找到以下两 个问题的答案：
(1) 谁做了什么？(who did what) (2) 结果如何？(what was the result)
如果是夹叙夹议的文章, 还要加上这个 故事给人们的启示或教育。
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作业1：阅读下面短文, 然后以约30个词概 括该文的主要内容。
On a recent Sunday, I was buying groceries in a supermarket when I heard the sound of a car accident. It was close but not very close, so I continued shopping.
范文2：In the passage, the writer talks about Sam’s experience of homesickness. He suffered a lot and t dissatisfied with his parents after being left in a boarding school.
weekend. When he was told he would not,
he started crying because the thought of not
seeing his parents was driving him crazy.
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He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick(想家)and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.
高中英语概要写作PPT幻灯片课件
solutions(解决办法), the conclusion(结论)
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概要怎么写？
二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段，找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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概要怎么写？
概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
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概要怎么写？
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
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概要怎么写？
二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段，找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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概要怎么写？
概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
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概要怎么写？
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
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新高考高中英语概要写作文章(共22张PPT)
Summary Writing
高中英语-概要写作
Do Sports Stars Deserve High Pay?
As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous basketball star, for instance,
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[01] Reading for outline [02] Reading for information [03] Reading for writing [04] Writing for summary
[01] Reading for outline Identify the writing style of the passage Argumentation
Claim/Argument
Reason1
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evidence
evidence
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[02] Reading for information
What's more, sports stars usually are at the top of level in their fields. In this world, you have to pay if you want the best. It is the same with sports. Skills in sports are like the skills in works of art. People will not say that Davinci's painting Mona Lisa was bought for too much money. Most stars are skilled in their own field not only because of their talents but also because of their hard training. They have to keep performing at their peak to earn that good income.
高中英语-概要写作
Do Sports Stars Deserve High Pay?
As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous basketball star, for instance,
https:///v_show/id_XMzc2NTQyNTMxMg==.html
[01] Reading for outline [02] Reading for information [03] Reading for writing [04] Writing for summary
[01] Reading for outline Identify the writing style of the passage Argumentation
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evidence
evidence
[02] Reading for information
What's more, sports stars usually are at the top of level in their fields. In this world, you have to pay if you want the best. It is the same with sports. Skills in sports are like the skills in works of art. People will not say that Davinci's painting Mona Lisa was bought for too much money. Most stars are skilled in their own field not only because of their talents but also because of their hard training. They have to keep performing at their peak to earn that good income.
概要写作篇ppt课件
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习作A的问题分析：(从要点提取。独立表达等方面 分析习作A中存在的问题)
1. 未能涵盖文章的全部要点，尤其是未包括文章的 主题句(There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.) 文章围绕主题句呈现不同时期，不同人对 待污垢的不同观点，主题句是概要中最为重要的 内容，不可或缺。
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高中英语概要写作：概要写作ppt
Para.2
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why?
A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their
companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them
dressed in certain types of clothes.
Para.4
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude
respectable clothes under the doctor’s white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear
suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on
patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require
【正式版】高中英语概要写作PPT文档
Suggestion: suggest, recommend Criticism(批判): criticize ( 批评)
提醒:
1. 不能加入自己的观点
2. 原句不能直接抄入概要, 可做适当改动后 用进自己的概要. Write the summary with your own words.
Towards the decision, public opinions vary: some people support it, thinking that Human Flesh Search violate people’s right, while other people are against it. Go back and read it again for full understanding
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
• Para1. Human Flesh Search will be ruled Para2…. Para3…
• Para4. opinions vary towards the decision Para 5… Para 6…
The article announces that after years of arguments, Human Flesh Search will be ruled because it is
What is a summary?
Writing a summary involves putting the main idea into your own words and include only the main points.
How to write a summary?
1. Skim the text to look for the thesis(论点), topic sentence and key words.
提醒:
1. 不能加入自己的观点
2. 原句不能直接抄入概要, 可做适当改动后 用进自己的概要. Write the summary with your own words.
Towards the decision, public opinions vary: some people support it, thinking that Human Flesh Search violate people’s right, while other people are against it. Go back and read it again for full understanding
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
• Para1. Human Flesh Search will be ruled Para2…. Para3…
• Para4. opinions vary towards the decision Para 5… Para 6…
The article announces that after years of arguments, Human Flesh Search will be ruled because it is
What is a summary?
Writing a summary involves putting the main idea into your own words and include only the main points.
How to write a summary?
1. Skim the text to look for the thesis(论点), topic sentence and key words.