高考真题2021年6月浙江卷写作读后续写“我的工资”课件-高考英语作文复习专项
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He thought that a job’s a
big step to _g_r_o_w_i_n_g__ u__p_.
He started to work from age
_1_4__ and his money was spent to pay _f_a_m_i_l_y _e_x_p_e_n_s_e_s_.
从第一段首句和第二段首句预测：
1.Which words or phrases should be focused on in the given sentence? 2. How did I feel when I got payment from my work? 3. How did I plan the money at first? 4.What did his father say?
The key elements(要素) of a story
a story
who what wwhheenr
e why how
一、深度解读语篇
Who?
What?
When?
Where?
The key elements(要素) of a story
a story
who what when wher
being able to use my own __m__o_n__e_y_ and lost the __i_n_t_e_r_e_s_t__ in more work.
3. Climax
The pay day arrived at last. How would I cope with my depression caused by my dad’s words?
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
watched their m3.oth续er写in 部the分kit分che为n.两Th段ere，wa每s n段oth的ing开to头it.语Jen已na为an你d Je写ff 好kne；w exactly what to do.
He _d__id_n_’_t___u_n_d_e_r_s_t_a_n_d__
my world of school activities.
I spent my __s_u_m__m_e_r__v_a_c_a_t_i_o_n
before the eighth grade working in
my neighbor's __fi_e_l_d_ and looked forward to _t_h_e_p__a_y_.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
burPnearrtoagheraat puphth1e:frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
读后续写
(2021年6月浙江卷)“我”的工资
试题再现 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
试题再现
阅读注下意面：材1料. ，所根续据写其内短容文和的所词给数段落应开为头1语5续0 左写两右段；，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins w2er.e至fill少ed 使wit用h e5xc个ite短me文nt 中as t标hey有th下oug划ht线of的the关su键rpr词ise语the；y were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
happy
unhappy
didn’t understand
二框二首正能量
Para. 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
从第二段首句和正能量结局预测：
5.Which words or phrases should be focused on in the given sentence? 6.What did I see and understand? 7.What did I realize and decide to do? 8.What’s the end of the story?
cleaPnairt aupgrsoapthhey2co: uld continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
blaIckuans wdeellr.stood immediately what my parents were worried about. ___________________
注意：
1. 续__写_词_数__应_为__1_50_左__右_；_________________________________________________________
2. Build up
My dada_n_d__ each other.
1. Opening
My father praised me since I could work for
the family. Hearing that, I felt _u_n__fa_i_r_ not
My dad is a _q_u_i_et_ man and he only had an _e_i_g_h_t_h_ grade education.
He was glad that I could
earn money and c_o_n_t_r_i_b_u_t_e
to the household.
范文赏析
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. _________________
(一直误会爸爸的人是我。强调句), not the other way around. The next morning, I handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses, son. You are really growing up,” he said. After the talk, I went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work.
4. Resolution
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Would I understand my dad finally?
5. Ending
二、细读首句，构思框架
两段首句定一框
Para. 1: The pay day arrived at last. Para. 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
turned black within seconds.
theTfihreesopiat cyoodkaedyniacerlry.iv
Jenna
ed a
tthlraewstt.h_e _bu_rn_t_p_ie_ce_i_nt_o_th_e*_+si_3n_k
and put in the other slice of bread. This time,
e why how
My dad, I, a neighboring farmer work in the farm field
the summer before my eighth grade
a neighboring farmer's field, at home
It was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
__________________________
she turned
______
down
_
theT_fhi_eren_. J_Jee_fnfn_na_opt_iacn_eidc_ks_eted_a._mT_hsa_hno_kof_tuin_llgy_,o_Jue_tffo_fs_ttah_yee_dp_oct_aal_mnd_a_tnhd_e _tluid_rn_setda_r_otifn_fgt_ht_oe _gsha_ask_qe_u.i_Tckh_ley_.n_Bex_utt_mth_ien_us_ttoe_v, et_hw_e a_pso_arr_imd_ge_ses_bno_oil_we.d_J_oevn_en_raa_tno_dld_pJ_uetffoutot
understand
realize
support
范文赏析
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
The pay day arrived at last. _________________________________________ (虽然我口袋里
一 共 有 100 美 元 ， 我 还 是 带 着 沉 重 的 心 情 回 家 了 。 让 步 状 语 从 句 和 with 结 构 ). ______________________________________________ (我多希望用这些钱买一双自己想要很久的新 运动鞋。感叹句和省略that的定语从句). Not much was said over dinner. However, before I went to bed that night, _______________________ (然而，晚上睡觉前，我无意中听 到从父母房间传来的谈话。时间状语从句和非谓语动词作后置定语). “Sam can do without a personal football coach. Our budget is really tight this month,” said my mom. “Don’t worry. I just need to do some extra driving. A professional can help him make great progress in football. You know the boy’s future dream,” said my dad.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. 4T.he续y p写ut 完som成e 后rice，in请to 用a p下ot 划of w线at标er 出and你le所ft i使t to用bo的il w关hi键le 词the语y m。ade the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a
big step to _g_r_o_w_i_n_g__ u__p_.
He started to work from age
_1_4__ and his money was spent to pay _f_a_m_i_l_y _e_x_p_e_n_s_e_s_.
从第一段首句和第二段首句预测：
1.Which words or phrases should be focused on in the given sentence? 2. How did I feel when I got payment from my work? 3. How did I plan the money at first? 4.What did his father say?
The key elements(要素) of a story
a story
who what wwhheenr
e why how
一、深度解读语篇
Who?
What?
When?
Where?
The key elements(要素) of a story
a story
who what when wher
being able to use my own __m__o_n__e_y_ and lost the __i_n_t_e_r_e_s_t__ in more work.
3. Climax
The pay day arrived at last. How would I cope with my depression caused by my dad’s words?
Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had
watched their m3.oth续er写in 部the分kit分che为n.两Th段ere，wa每s n段oth的ing开to头it.语Jen已na为an你d Je写ff 好kne；w exactly what to do.
He _d__id_n_’_t___u_n_d_e_r_s_t_a_n_d__
my world of school activities.
I spent my __s_u_m__m_e_r__v_a_c_a_t_i_o_n
before the eighth grade working in
my neighbor's __fi_e_l_d_ and looked forward to _t_h_e_p__a_y_.
plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove
burPnearrtoagheraat puphth1e:frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread
读后续写
(2021年6月浙江卷)“我”的工资
试题再现 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
试题再现
阅读注下意面：材1料. ，所根续据写其内短容文和的所词给数段落应开为头1语5续0 左写两右段；，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins w2er.e至fill少ed 使wit用h e5xc个ite短me文nt 中as t标hey有th下oug划ht线of的the关su键rpr词ise语the；y were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud
happy
unhappy
didn’t understand
二框二首正能量
Para. 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
从第二段首句和正能量结局预测：
5.Which words or phrases should be focused on in the given sentence? 6.What did I see and understand? 7.What did I realize and decide to do? 8.What’s the end of the story?
cleaPnairt aupgrsoapthhey2co: uld continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.
Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned
blaIckuans wdeellr.stood immediately what my parents were worried about. ___________________
注意：
1. 续__写_词_数__应_为__1_50_左__右_；_________________________________________________________
2. Build up
My dada_n_d__ each other.
1. Opening
My father praised me since I could work for
the family. Hearing that, I felt _u_n__fa_i_r_ not
My dad is a _q_u_i_et_ man and he only had an _e_i_g_h_t_h_ grade education.
He was glad that I could
earn money and c_o_n_t_r_i_b_u_t_e
to the household.
范文赏析
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. _________________
(一直误会爸爸的人是我。强调句), not the other way around. The next morning, I handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses, son. You are really growing up,” he said. After the talk, I went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work.
4. Resolution
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Would I understand my dad finally?
5. Ending
二、细读首句，构思框架
两段首句定一框
Para. 1: The pay day arrived at last. Para. 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
turned black within seconds.
theTfihreesopiat cyoodkaedyniacerlry.iv
Jenna
ed a
tthlraewstt.h_e _bu_rn_t_p_ie_ce_i_nt_o_th_e*_+si_3n_k
and put in the other slice of bread. This time,
e why how
My dad, I, a neighboring farmer work in the farm field
the summer before my eighth grade
a neighboring farmer's field, at home
It was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
__________________________
she turned
______
down
_
theT_fhi_eren_. J_Jee_fnfn_na_opt_iacn_eidc_ks_eted_a._mT_hsa_hno_kof_tuin_llgy_,o_Jue_tffo_fs_ttah_yee_dp_oct_aal_mnd_a_tnhd_e _tluid_rn_setda_r_otifn_fgt_ht_oe _gsha_ask_qe_u.i_Tckh_ley_.n_Bex_utt_mth_ien_us_ttoe_v, et_hw_e a_pso_arr_imd_ge_ses_bno_oil_we.d_J_oevn_en_raa_tno_dld_pJ_uetffoutot
understand
realize
support
范文赏析
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
The pay day arrived at last. _________________________________________ (虽然我口袋里
一 共 有 100 美 元 ， 我 还 是 带 着 沉 重 的 心 情 回 家 了 。 让 步 状 语 从 句 和 with 结 构 ). ______________________________________________ (我多希望用这些钱买一双自己想要很久的新 运动鞋。感叹句和省略that的定语从句). Not much was said over dinner. However, before I went to bed that night, _______________________ (然而，晚上睡觉前，我无意中听 到从父母房间传来的谈话。时间状语从句和非谓语动词作后置定语). “Sam can do without a personal football coach. Our budget is really tight this month,” said my mom. “Don’t worry. I just need to do some extra driving. A professional can help him make great progress in football. You know the boy’s future dream,” said my dad.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the
porridge first. 4T.he续y p写ut 完som成e 后rice，in请to 用a p下ot 划of w线at标er 出and你le所ft i使t to用bo的il w关hi键le 词the语y m。ade the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a