高考英语一轮复习应用文写作精讲精练：应用文技巧3：表达的多样与扩充

5.恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力 【典型例句】 ①It was you who taught me how to learn English well.(是你教我如何学好英语的。) ②It was on Friday that our activity began.(我们的活动是在星期五开始的。)
8.巧用副词, 充分表情达意 【典型例句】 ①I am extremely delighted(非常高兴) to hear that you have been admitted into a key university. ②I genuinely hope (真心希望)that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.
7.with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言 【典型例句】 ①With so many different forms of poetry to choose from(有这么多不同形式的诗 可供选择), students may eventually want to write poems of their own. ②Without any hesitation(毫不延迟), we began to work.
【拓展训练】 ①Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,___fr_o_m__w__h_ic_h__y_o_u _c_a_n__h_a_v_e_a__c_le_a_r_e_r_p_i_c_t_u_r_e_o_f_C__h_in_e_s_e_c_u_l_t_u_r_e(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰 的认识). ②I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor with three rooms,__o_n_e__o_f _w_h_i_c_h_i_s_b_e_d_r_o_o_m_(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.
表达的多样与扩充
1.句子形式多样化: 根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能 避免形式单一 【典型例句】 ①They were so heavy that (如此沉重以至于)we couldn’t lift them at first. ②There is no doubt that(毫无疑问) it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.
【拓展训练】 ①As an old saying goes, living __w__it_h_o_u_t_a__c_le_a_r_a_n_d__a_c_h_i_e_v_a_b_le__a_im_(没有清晰可达 到的目标) is like sailing without a compass. ②I can’t thank you enoLeabharlann Baidugh for your generous help,___w_i_th_o_u_t__w_h_i_c_h_I_c_o_u_l_d_n_’_t_h_a_v_e __m__a_d_e_s_u_c_h__g_r_ea_t__p_r_o_g_re_s_s_(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).
9.变主动为被动, 凸显英语思维 【典型例句】 ①My father gave me a new book on my birthday. →I was given a new book (by my father) on my birthday.(间接宾语作主语) →A new book was given to me (by my father) on my birthday.(直接宾语作主语) ②And some world-famous players will be invited (将会被邀请)to give lessons.
【拓展训练】 ①She _p__a_ti_e_n_tl_y_(耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them. ②We were _p__er_f_e_c_tl_y_(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.
【拓展训练】 ①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. →__W__ea_k__a_s_/t_h_o_u_g_h__I_a_m__, I’ll make the effort.(倒装) ②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. →__N__o_s_o_o_n_e_r_h_a_d__h_e_c_o_m__e_b__a_ck__f_r_o_m__B_e_ij_i_n_g_than he was sent abroad.(倒装)
4.巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力 【典型例句】 ①Not only will our club’s works be displayed(不仅我们俱乐部的作品会被展出), but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. ②Not only did you help improve my English(你不但帮我提升了英语), but you also gave me more confidence in learning. ③Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.(接下来,我 让他们自己试一试。)
【拓展训练】 ①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. →She walked out of the lab, __f_o_ll_o_w_e_d__b_y_m__a_n_y__st_u_d_e_n_t_s.(非谓语动词) ②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. →They went back to school,__s_in_g_i_n_g__a_n_d_l_a_u_g_h_i_n_g.(非谓语动词)
6.自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈 【典型例句】 ①If you are interested in what I have stated above(如果你对我上面所说的感兴趣), sign up on our school website before September 1st. ②That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.(那就是 我认为沿长江旅行将是一个更好的选择的原因。)
【拓展训练】 ①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. →__It__w_a_s_n_o_t__u_n_t_il_he had read the news in the newspaper __t_h_a_the knew what had happened.(强调句) ②_I_t_i_s_working in teams instead of on my own __t_h_a_t has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.(强调句)
2.使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端 【典型例句】 ① After learning the course( 学 过 这 门 课 程 后 ), I’m sure I’ll have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture and Western culture. ②On arriving at the tea house(一到达茶室), the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.
【拓展训练】 ①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. →__W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_is_e_s_h_i_m__is that the little girl knows so many things.(主语从句) ②I have just found __t_h_a_t_I__h_a_v_e_t_o_a_t_t_en__d_a_n__im__p_o_r_t_a_n_t_m__e_et_i_n_g_t_h_a_t_a_f_t_er_n_o_o_n_ (我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).
3.运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容 【典型例句】 ①Material collecting took us a whole week,during which (在此期间)we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. ②I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which (在活动 中)you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with more friends with the same interest.
【拓展训练】 ①In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful. →__I_n_r_e_c_e_n_t_y_e_a_r_s_, _w_i_th__m__o_r_e_a_n_d__m_o_r_e__p_e_o_p_le__st_a_r_t_in_g__to__p_r_o_t_ec_t__o_u_r _e_n_v_i_r_o_n_m_e_n_t_, our environment is becoming more and more colorful.(with复合 结构) →In recent years,__t_h_e_re__a_r_e_s_o_m__a_n_y__p_e_o_p_le_ who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful.(there be 句式) ②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. →__S_t_u_d_y_h__a_rd__a_n_d__y_o_u_w__il_l_m__a_k_e_r_a_p_i_d_p_r_o_g_r_e_s_s_. (并列句)