宝钢英语等级作文大全

作文的展开—按照三步走：
1)题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述，在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制，如果第一段落字数单薄，可以适当使描述具体化)。

2)在第一步的基础上给出观点，观点视文章主旨可以分为：个人观点(包括方法、途径)，和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述；在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。

3)个人观点总结点题，简要指出方法途径，如果找不到具体的解决方法，则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突，则可以融合)。

1 选择类
第一段普通写三句
第一句：It is widely believed that…
第二句：One reason they think is that...
第三句：The other reason they hold is that...
第二段普通写三句
第一句：While others argue that ...
第二句：They maintain that...
第三句：They also claim that...
第三段写四句(your own opinion)
第一句：From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that ...
第二句：On one hand, ...
第三句：On the other hand, ...
第四句：Only in this way can we ...
2022年六级Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;
1 、对这种做法有人表示支持，2、有人并不赞成;
3、我认为…
2022年6月23日大学英语六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 有人做好事期望得到回报；
2. 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；
3. 我的观点。

2022年6月21日大学英语六
级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will
E-books Replace Traditional Books?. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；
2. 有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书，理由是…
3. 我的看法。

2 图表作文
第一段写三句
第一句：As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in …from …to …
第二句：The first … years saw …
第三句：The last …years witnessed …
第二段写四句
第一句：What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.
第二句：Firstly, …
第三句：Secondly,…
第四句：Finally,…
第三段写四句
第一句：How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二句：For one thing, …
第三句：For another, …
第四句：Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.
2022年6月17日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words based on the chart and outline give below:
Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005
近十年来X 市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游浮现这种现象的原因这种现象可能产生的影响
2003年9月六级
Part V Writing (30 minutes)
图表作文，关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art 等)，给出他们的流动比例对照，说明原因，并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。

2003年6月21日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Changes in the Ownership of Houses. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below.
1. 根据上图描述该市住房产权的变化
2. 分析产生这些变化的原因
3. 说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响
Changes in the Ownership of Houses
2002年6月六级
Part V Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:
1. 上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；
2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或者社会发展等方面加以说明)；
3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么艰难或者问题。

Student Use of Computers
3 现象作文
第一段写两句
第一句：In recent years, there has been…
第二句：How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二段写四句
第一句：What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.
第二句：Firstly, …
第三句：Secondly,…
第四句：Finally,…
第三段写四句
第一句：How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二句：For one thing, …
第三句：For another, …
第四句：Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.
2022年12月23日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Celebration of Western Festivals. You should write at least 150 words following outline given below.
1. 现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日
2. 产生这种现象的原因
3. 这种现象可能带来的影响
2005年6月18日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害
3. 我们应该怎么做?
盗版piracy (n.)
盗版产品pirated products
知识产权intellectual property rights
侵犯版权infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement
2003年12月六级
Directions: In this section you are required to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1. 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重；
2. 浪费的危害；
3. 从我做起，杜绝浪费。

4 书信作文(辞职，倡议书，建议书… )
第一段写两句
第一句：I am writing this letter today to …
第二句：My name is … and I am …
第二段按照题目要求写：
第三段写三句
第一句：I sincerely hope you can take my letter seriously.
第二句：Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.
第三句：Thanks a lot for your time and consideration.
2004年6月六级
Part V Writing (30 minutes)
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the guidelines given below in Chinese.
设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。

信中必须包括以下内容：
1. 事情的起因
2. 与书店交涉的经过
3. 呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量
2005年12月24日六级
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. A Letter Declining a Job Offer
1. 对公司提供职位表示感谢
2. 解释为何不能接受所提供的职位
3. 希翼给与谅解，并表达对公司的良好祝愿
2005年1月8日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: (Your Help Needed)
1. 对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况
2. 目前的艰难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理
3. 希翼捐助，联系方式
2002年1月12日六级
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

Argumentation 型
1 ) some, others, I 型
(1)模版一
There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A 的例子).
On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ ( 支持观点B 的
例子).
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.
(2)模版二
___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to ______________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点 A 的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点 A 的例子).
However, others argue that ________________________ (观点B). They point out that _______________________ (重申观点B) for the reason that _______________ ( 支持观点B 的原因).
As far as I am concerned, I will choose to __________________ (你的观点) because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.
2) My View 型
(1)模版一
When asked about ______________ ( 主题), some people hold the idea that _________________________ ( 观点A). As far as they are concerned, _________________________ (展开观点A). But I could not agree with them in several points. In my opinion, ______________________________ (观点B). The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.
In the first place, ___________________________ (支持观点 B 的理由1). In the second place, ______________________________ (支持观点 B 的理由2). In the third place, _______________________________ (支持观点B 的理由3).
For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe ____________ (重申观点B).
(2)模版二
Some people believe that ________ ___________________ ( 观点A). For instance, they hold the idea that ______________________________ ( 支持观点A 的例子). And it may bring them _____________________________ (A 带给他们的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, _____________________________ ( 我不同意的理由1). For another, _____________________________ (我不允许的理由2).
As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, I agree to the thought that ______________________________ (重申自己的观点).
3)利弊型
(1)模版一
Nowadays many people prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________ (主题的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ ( 主题的优点2).
But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make
matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ ( 主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.
(2)模版二
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life,but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ___________ ( 主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one.
There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, __________________ ( 原因1). Furthermore, ______________________ (原因2). Eventually, ________________________________ (原因3).
Good as ____________ ( 主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that ______________ ( 缺点例子1). In addition, _____________________ (缺点例子).
On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and make our life more comfortable.
一)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of … .
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus…
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic… .
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among … .
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over …
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular… .
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that … ...
8) According to a recent survey, … .
9) With the rapid development of .......
1 ．表示原因
1 ) There are three reasons for this．
2) The reasons for this are as follows．
3) The reason for this is obvious．
4) The reason for this is not far to seek．
5) The reason for this is that．．．
6) We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life ．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid ，and they can afford what they need or like ．Last but not least ，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。

如：Great changes have taken place in our life ．There are three reasons for this．
2．表示好处
1 ) It has the following advantages．
2) It does us a lot of good．
3) It benefits us quite a lot．
4) It is beneficial to us．
5) It is of great benefit to us．
例如：Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1 ) It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2) It does us much harm．
3) It is harmful to us．
例如：However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、艰难、方便、可能
1 ) It is important (necessary，difficult，convenient，possible) for sb ．to do sth．
2) We think it necessary to do sth．
3) It plays an important role in our life．
例如：Computers are now being used everywhere ，whether in the government ，in schools or in business．Soon，computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
1 ) We should take some effective measures．
2) We should try our best to overcome (conquer) the difficulties．
3) We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4) We should solve the problems that we are confronted (faced) with．
例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious ．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it．
6．表示变化
1 ) Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2) A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．
3) The computer has brought about many changes in education．
例如：Some changes have taken place in people ’s diet in the past five years ．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．
三)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that .。

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2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop .。

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3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to .。

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4) In conclusion, it is imperative that .。

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5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help。

6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must … .
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up。

二、审题和构思：
根据下题写一篇不少于150词的作文：
my view on job-hopping
1)有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为……
2)有些人喜欢时常换工作，因为……
3)我的看法
显而易见，这是一道提纲式的作文题。

可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文：
1 ．分析题目和提纲可知，应该写一篇说明文，固然其中可以夹有议论。

要写出“不换工作”和“换工作”的原因，然后给出自己的看法，重点是原因和看法。

2．根据提纲，文章可分3段，第1段是“喜欢从事一种工作”的原因；第2段写出“喜欢经常换工作”的原因；第3段是“我的”看法。

3 ．根据以上分析，可以把提纲转换为主题句如下：
★some people tend to stick to their position all the time．
★some people are different．they are in the habit of job-hopping．
★i am not in favour of constant job-hopping．
4．以材料支持各段主题句。

第1段的材料可以是：喜欢那份工作的各种原因：有发展前途、工资高等；第2段时常“跳槽”的原因：不能施展自己的才干，谋求更高的收入等。

第3 段也要说明原因，并总结归纳，圆满结尾。

三、参考范文：
my view on job-hopping
some people tend tostick to their positions all the time ，as they think the longer one works in a particular field，the more skillful one will be at it．some have been teachers all their lives．some devote all their energy to scientific research．such people love their work and turn out to be specialists in their own fields．they are usually high achievers．some are different．they are in the habit of job-hopping，for they always purpose what is new and stimulating．they never seem content with their present situations．they like to meetmore people ，make more money and new acquaintances ，so they hop from job to job．
as far as i am concerned ，i am not in favour of constant job-hopping ．i believe in a famous proverb，“a rolling stone gather no moss．”i want to be professionally strong．and i respect those who devote themselves to their affectionate jobs throughout
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Self help Traveling of College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)大学生出去旅行时常会选择“自助游”
2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因
3)你的看法
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。

提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单说明何谓“自助游”，描述大学生热中于“自助游”的现象；分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因；阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。

【参考范文】
Self-help Traveling of College Students
So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group。

Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling?Above all,self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space.College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish.Moreover,self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal。

As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it.For one thing,I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better.。