2010高考英语开放作文各档样文

2010年高考北京卷英语开放作文----各档次样文
【Writing 1】
In the picture, a tree is placed between two strangely-shaped buildings. Despite the fact the two buildings are blocking the tree’s growth, the tree is still growing around the edge of the buildings in order to reach the open sky and sunlight.
I think that a lot can be learnt from the strong-willed tree in the picture. Not only does the tree not give up in face of difficulty, but also manages to handle the annoying situation skillfully. We are all abound to meet with problems and challenges in our daily lives. Some give up while some choose to adapt a positive attitude and come up with the best solution. They are the ones sure to succeed.
If any difficulties tries to get our way, we ought to shout: Hell we won’t give up! and do our best to solve it. Only in this way can we taste the sweet air and sunshine, just like the tree in the picture.
【专家给分：14分】专家评语：不仅在图画的描述与阐述之间逻辑联系清楚，而且语言运用非常流畅自然，较好的完成了任务。

【Writing 2】
As is shown in the picture, there is a tree with a winding trunk standing in the surrounding of two buildings. As the two buildings block the way of growing of the tree, it can only twist its body and try its best to meet the sun. Then it succeed! The unfortunate tree get rid of the block of the two buildings and is growing in the sun happily and healthily. The picture conveys the message that success comes from trying his bet. The growth of the tree is full of setbacks and there are two buildings blocking its way of growing. When it comes to our life, there are also lots of stones in the path of our success. The only thing we can do it to try our best to remove the stones. Without effort, nothing can be achieved, without effort, no success can we gain. Remember that success comes from sweat. We should learn from the tough tree：meet the challenge and try our best.
【专家给分：13分】专家评语：对图画的描述与阐述之间逻辑清楚，紧紧围绕图画展开，没有偏离；论述层次清晰，语言表达中的词汇和句式变化都比较贴切；较好完成任务。

【Writing 3】
As the picture shows, a tree is growing tall under the sunlight between two buildings. Though the building’s shape manage to prevent the tree from growing tall, but the tree just follows the narrow space between the building, growing tall and strong.
The tree in the picture taught us a philosophy in our daily life. When we come across some difficulties which seems to prevent us from being success, we can’t just stop our steps. Instead of giving up, we should learn to be flexible ---- that is , we
should learn to overcome the difficulties and find the possible way that can lead us to success, just like the tree in the picture. Once we can be flexible enough, nothing can prevent us from reaching our goal.
【专家给分：12分】专家评语：对图画的描述为下文的阐述和讨论打下较好的基础，阐述部分能和图画有机呼应，论述有一定的层次，思路清楚，语言有一定的句式变换，但语言表达上还存在一些问题。

【Writing 4】
As can be seen growing the picture, there’s a tree growing between two tall buildings. Because of the two buildings the tree can’t grow straight but bend. The Sun in the sky is very bright!
The picture reflects a common solid problem vividly: many times, we can’t reach our goals in a direct way. There are many difficulties on our way to succeed. So we should adopt to the environment. In my opinion we want to achieve our goals just like the tree want to see the sunshine, but before we reach to the top, we should face many difficulties. If we can’t change the environment, we should change ourselves to adapt to the environment. Only in this way, can we be succeed.
Change ourselves, overcome the difficult then, we’ll reach the top!
【专家给分：11分】专家评语：对图画的描述和阐述之间联系比较自然，论述比较清楚，但存在一些明显的语法错误。

【Writing 5】
From this picture, we can see a tall tree in the middle of the two buildings. The two buildings are not in good shapes. While the tree is still growing. Although the tree’s body is bend, it also looks very health and active towards the shinning Sun.
The buildings are just like the limits in our life. Sometimes, it is hard to overcome, but if we hold the optimistic attitude like the tree, we can also overcome it. We should learn from the tree, when it meet the difficulties, it doesn’t choose to give up. The tree finds a way to past the difficulties, and still hold an optimistic attitude. It must be the reason that it can grow so tall.
In my opinion, when we meet difficulties, the most important thing we should do is to be optimistic. Only in the way can we succeed like the tall tree.
【专家给分：10分】专家评语：对图画的描述与阐述之间有有机联系，逻辑思路比较清晰，但阐述分层次简单，有一些明显的语法错误。

【Writing 6】
From the picture, we can see that a tree is growing between two high buildings. What surprised me was that the tree is tall but not straight. It seems as if it can’t grow well.
What the picture wants to convey is that we should pay more attention to our environment. Nowadays, we can see more and more tall buildings around us, but it is difficult for us to see the green grass and tall trees. It’s likely that buildings will eventually take the place of the trees. For the sake of our health, we’d better leave some place for the tree, which is good for our lives. Only in this way, can we have a
rich life.
【专家给分：9分】专家评语：上下文逻辑关系基本清楚，语言比较通顺，但阐述部分思维比较简单流于平面。

基本完成任务。

【Writing 7】
As we can see in the picture, there is a tall but bend tree growing between the two bend buildings. And there is a sun shinning them strongly. There is something we should give more thought to.
What the picture wants to convey to us is that many parents give too much care and protection to their children. They don’t want their children to face press or challenge. But they don’t realize that if children live in the “comfortable”environment, they won’t grow healthily and smoothly, just like the tree in the picture.
As far as I’m concerned, parents should give more free space to children to grow and let them face more challenge. Only in this way can children make greater progress and grow healthily.
【专家给分：7分】专家评语：虽然篇幅长，但上下文逻辑较混乱，描图与阐述之间看不出逻辑联系，语言错误较多。

【Writing 8】
From the picture we can see, there is a tree growing among the two buildings. But the tree is very tall. It is trying to tell us that when we face the difficulty we should be brave. We must try to find solution about the difficulty.
In my opinion, only in this way can we reach our goal and have a more beautiful life.
【专家给分：6分】专家评语：图画描述与阐述之间逻辑关系不够清楚，过于简单，未恰当完成任务。

【Writing 9】
As we can see in the picture, it was a sun in the picture, and a tree between two buildings. I think the picture leave a message for us, impossible is nothing. If we want to do something, we can do it successfully. When we get into trouble, we need face the trouble, not to give up.
【专家给分：3分】专家评语：描述与阐述之间看不出逻辑联系；语言能传达一些基本意思，但几乎形不成连贯的语篇。

【Writing 10】
In the picture, we can see two build in it. There is a high tree, grow up between in the two build. The sky have a big sun.
In my opinion, at the hard government also have grow up. We must hard work and study. We can grow up like tree. We should learn the high tree, don’t afraid the bad government.
【专家给分：2分】专家评语：语言表达几乎难以成句，但能看出一些相关信息。