(英语)初三英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·海南中考模拟）“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。

自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。

作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
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Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there ar e many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a differ ence and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。

这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。

题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。

通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。

根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。

整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。

写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。

首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。

文章条理清晰，有层次。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

2．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。

1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。

2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。

价格较便宜。

3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。

4.网络支付不安全。

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【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.
It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods
and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.
Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You ca n’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.
We should be careful when we shop on the internet.
【解析】
写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。

具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。

写作亮点：
首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。

第二段开始描述优势，这里用到
了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“...是开放的”也很准确，用了“be open”。

比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。

连词的使用也是亮点，besides 意为“除此之外”。

在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”，是个亮点。

“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。

总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。

3．（·全国中考模拟）年春晚节目中相声演员为大家讲述姥姥的故事，展现家风家教的传承，温暖了每一个中国人的心。

假如你叫Jack，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据下表提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。

要求：
1. 推荐信的内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数100字左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Dear Sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.
【答案】Dear Sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.
In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.
In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.
What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.
Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours Faithfully
Jack
【解析】这是一篇图表，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb与某人相处融洽；volunteer to help people in need.自愿帮助需要的人
4．（·北京中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的中华传统节日”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的传统节日是什么，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢这个节日。

提示词语:festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time
提示问题: What's your favorite traditional festival?
What do you usually do during the festival?
Why do you like it?
There are many traditional festivals in
China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Mid-autumn Festival and it usually comes on August 15 of the lunar year.
On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. After dinner, we often eat moon cakes, watch the full moon and talk with each other happily.
I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，根据话题要求来介绍一下中国的传统节日。

根据所提供的提示词语可知，要求介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节。

可以从你最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，节日里你通常都做什么，以及你为什么喜欢中秋节三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意在给报社的投稿中必须包含提示词语中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语把所给的提示问题回答清楚就行。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
On the festival we usually go back home from other cities or places and have a big dinner with the whole family. 在节日里，我们会从不同的地方回家，和全家团聚，一起吃大餐。

由and 连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】
I like Mid-autumn Festival best not only because I like the delicious moon cakes but also because it’s a family get-together time and I really enjoy the love among the family members. 我最喜欢中秋节，不仅因为我喜欢美味的月饼，而且因为它是一个家庭聚会时间，我真的很享受家庭成员之间的爱。

句子中运用了not only…… but also……，还有because引导的原因状语从句。

5．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

要求完整叙述故事内容。

提示词：plate 盘子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩笔， color 给…上色，
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【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, "Why not turn them into paintings?" Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画叙述一个故事。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的应用，使短文内容表达丰富。

此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

切忌堆砌词语和句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子连贯流畅。

6．（·黑龙江中考模拟）Writing
现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。

从小保护好眼睛很重要。

六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。

请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；
（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

要求：（1）词数在80〜100词之间。

2）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

It’s important to protect our eyes
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【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice a nd form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据题目要求可知，本文说的时态是一般现在时。

人称是第一和第二人称
英语作文一般是三段式
第一段：开篇点题，交代写作目的——保护眼睛的重要性，以及提建议
第二段：文章主体部分——保护眼睛的措施：
①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

第三部分：再次点题，并提出号召——现在开始养成保护眼睛的好习惯。

7．（·山东中考模拟）如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。

请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。

写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

8．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。

6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。

要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。

3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,
This letter is a g ift for the Father’s Day.
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Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【答案】Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.
Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours,
Tom 【解析】
【详解】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。

因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。

时态为一般现在时态。

要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

要求语句通顺、意思连贯。

文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

9．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing
It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.
This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。

本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，Howev er,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。

最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。

文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】
认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。

必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。

写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。

10．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。

请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求：1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；
2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。

主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。

在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。

注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景，而是无数晃动的头。

句子What you see at the seaside做主语。

【高分句型二】
In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。

该句话运用了not only…but also…。

11．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。

假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。

通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。

请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的
信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。

注意事项：
1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。

【答案】How to get along well with parents
More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.
CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.
As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。

写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。

然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。

短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。

写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。

合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。

句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式。

同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。

短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。

短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。

这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。

句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。

行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。

短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。

12．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：
1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；
3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4. 你的建议……
参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。

在写
作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

13．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,
I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
➢ recommend two traditional Chinese things
➢ show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they ar e quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】
【详解】
本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。

第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。

例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。

理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are qui te different from the ones in the。