句子平行结构ppt课件

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用句号分隔；用分号分隔；用并列连词连 接；用连接副词连接；使用从句。
• The girls scored higher in math. The boys scored higher in verbal skills.
• The girls scored higher in math; the boys scored higher in verbal skills.
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句子的基本特点：在语法和逻辑上是一个完 整的意义表达单位。有完整的主谓结构（至 少有一个主语和谓语）
• 1. Since there is a lack of interest. There is a great lack of information.
• 2. I look forward to holidays. For example, Thanksgiving and Christmas.
• 3. Jane is young, enthusiastic and she has talent.
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Sentence Structure Problems
• 1. Sentence Fragments 残缺句 • 2. Run-On Sentence 接排句 • 3. Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语 • 4. Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语
• He only suggested them, he didn’t insist on
them.
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Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语
要注意悬垂修饰语要与主语有逻辑关系
• Looking up at the sky, the sun went under a cloud.
• Education is an elusive word; indeed, it often means different things to different people.
• Education is an elusive word which often means different things to different people.
• NOT PARALLEL: At camp, we most enjoyed swimming, hiking, and how to play volleyball.
• PARALLEL: At camp, we most enjoyed swimming, hiking, and playing volleyball.
• NOT PARALLEL: Our dog Jolly is tiny, a rich brown coat, and a perky (自信的，得意洋洋的) disposition （性情）.
• PARALLEL: Our dog Jolly is tiny, wears a rich brown coat, and has a perky disposition.
• Please give the book to the boy with blue cover.
• The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.
• He only suggested three rules for us to follow.
• He suggested only three rules for us to follow.
• The girls scored higher in math, and/but the boys scored higher in verbal skills.
• The girls scored higher in math; however, the boys scored higher in verbal skills.
• 3. Having no money and being lonely in the big city.
• 4. The table was covered with fresh vegetables. Such as lettuce, carrots, and spinach.
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句子的基本特点：在语法和逻辑上是一个完 整的意义表达单位。有完整的主谓结构（至 少有一个主语和谓语）
• NOT PARALLEL: A good driver obeys the speed limit, is alert（警惕的）, and she takes no risks on the road.
• PARALLEL: A good driver obeys the speed limit, is alert, and takes no risks on the road.
• 2.a. The ideal dog is loyal, friendly, and is in good health.
• b. The ideal dog is loyal, friendly, and healthy.
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Writing Tip: 并列结构中的成分必 须结构相同
• Please revise the following sentences:
• 1. Since there is a lack of interest，there is a great lack of information.
• 2. I look forward to holidays, for example, Thanksgiving and Christmas.
• 3. Having no money and being lonely in the big city, the woman committed suicide.
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Parallel Structure 平行结构
• Be sure items are parallel. Ordinarily, ‘and’ and ‘but’ connect same grammatical elements, for example, two or more nouns, verbs, adjectives, phrases, or clauses.
• The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.
• He only suggested three rules for us to follow.
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Hale Waihona Puke Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语
• He sold the old car to the man with leather seats.
• The girls scored higher in math, while the boys scored higher in verbal skills.
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用句号分隔；用分号分隔；用并列连词连 接；用连接副词连接；使用从句。
• Education is an elusive word. It often means different things to different people.
• The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.
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Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语
• He sold the old car to the man with leather seats.
• Please give the book to the boy with blue cover.
• 4. The table was covered with fresh vegetables such as lettuce, carrots, and spinach.
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Run-On Sentence 接排句：没有标点符合， 也没有连接词；或者是用逗号连接两个完 整的句子。
• 1. The boys scored higher in maths the girls scored higher in verbal skills.
• Please give the book to the boy with blue cover.
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Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语
• He sold the old car to the man with leather seats.
• Please give the book to the boy with blue cover.
• Education is an elusive word; it often means different things to different people.
• Education is an elusive word, for it often means different things to different people.
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Parallel Structure
• It is important for engineers to think logically, to analyze carefully, and to make decisions realistically.
• If you want to get a satisfactory grade in the training program, you must be punctual, courteous, and conscientious.
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• 2. The girls scored higher in math, the boys scored higher in verbal skills.
• 3. Education is an elusive（令人困惑的） word, it often means different things to different people.
Parallel Structure 平行结构
• It is important for engineers to think logically, to analyze carefully, and to make decisions realistically.
• If you want to get a satisfactory grade in the training program, you must be punctual, courteous, and conscientious.
• 1. The duties of the job include baby-sitting, house-cleaning, and preparation of meals.
• 2.James is a man of great creativity and who is considerate.
• To write well, good books must be read. • While climbing the hill, the rain began to
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• 1.a. The path to the summit of Mt. Tai is rough, steep, and challenging.
• b. The path to the summit of Mt. Tai is rough, steep, and it is challenging.
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Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语
• He sold the old car to the man with leather seats.
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Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语
• He sold the old car to the man with leather seats.