人教版英语九全Unit7SectionB(话题作文)优化设计方案

新目标九年级Unit7
Should teenagers be allowed to choose their clothes?
话题作文优化设计方案
一、本方案的背景分析
由于学生的英语水平因人而异，因此，为了避免学生对写作的恐
惧，本节课首先以复习本单元的单词、词组，找了一些有关本单
元话题一些活动的图片，希望可以通过图片的帮助来激发学生讲
英语的兴趣，并能让学生对学过的词组脱口而出。

然后慢慢引导
学生如构造文章的轮廓，每一段应如何去选词，选句。

在此过程
中，学生现学现用，让他们体会写作不是件困难的事。

二、本单元话题分析
本课时是让学生对学过的知识进行拓展写作，通过复习本单元学
过的词组、句型，引导学生如何勾勒文章的轮廓，进而选词、造
句，然后写出一篇好文章。

三、话题作文优化设计方案
主要围绕”Should students be allowed to do sth?”这个话题展开讨
论和总结。

首先，通过“脑袋风暴”讨论方式，让学生尽情讲出
单词、词组到句子的一个过渡，再从中进行选词，造句到篇章。

引导学生如何选词选句的写作技巧，使学生学习达到事半功倍的
效果。

Teaching procedures
Task1 Warming-up/ Revision
Step1. Free talk.
Step2. Review the phrases in unit7.
应该被允许做某
事
扎耳朵孔
代替
事
认真对待某
用正确的方式
集中精力于
对⋯有坏处
⋯的路，妨碍
挡
避免接近，远离
不同人有不同的看法
Step3. Talk about the school rules.
Task2. Pre-writing
Step1. Brainstorming. Have the students discuss and write down the words, phrases or sentences about the school rules. Four
students in a group.
Step2. Ask students to discuss “s hould students be allowed to bring the mobile phone to schoo”l .
Step3. Lead students to talk about their cons and pros about the topic.
Step4. Teach the students how to choose the words or phrases to make
sentences.
Step5. Lead the students to use the good words to write the passage Task3. While-writing
目前，手机在中学生中越来越受欢迎。

对于中学生能不能带手机
到学校，不同人对这个问题有不同的看法。

写一篇80 词的文章说说你的看法：
1. 你的观点（同意或不同意）
2. 理由（至少三点）
Should students be allowed to bring the mobile phone to school?
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Step1. Ask the students to check their compositions by themselves or with their partners.
Step2. Show some worksheets of different levels and circle some good words and sentences.
Task5. Summary
Task6. Homework
Should students be allowed
to bring the mobile phone to school?
As is known to all, the mobile phone is more and more popular among us. However, should we bring it to school? Different people have different opinions. In my opinion, I don ’t think we should be allowed to bring the mobile phone to school.
First of all, it will get in the way of
our schoolwork if we often pay attention to playing mobile phones. Secondly, while we are having a class, maybe we will concentrate more on the phone instead of listening to the teacher carefully. Thirdly, we will depend on the phone when we meet difficulties in study. What’s worse, using mobile phones too much can be harmful to our eyes.
In a word, there is no doubt that students shouldn’t be allowed to bring the mobile phone to school unless we use it in
a proper way.。